[Fanfiction] Lost and found
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Posted 4/19/09
My first fanfic.
Basically this fanfic is about a guy (Ikuto) and a girl (Amu) who have lost themselves.The arent sure who they are and why their living. So when they meet each other they help discover each other and why they were put on Earth.
errrmmm what im putting up is a prologue and if i get a good review ill continue.
so here it is
Lost and Found
Her honey golden coloured eyes captured me and I knew I couldn't escape.
They were a soft, clear and sad yet magnetic. Her eyes bore through me, I tried to look away but like I said she was magnetic. Her eyes seemed lifeless, gone astray. Her stare followed me. I followed hers. But where will we meet?

At first I though I was dreaming but realised I was staring into beautiful glimmering eyes...
They were blue.... a dark blue that glittered and shimmered and reminded me of sapphires. They seemed lost but still searching. For what? I wondered. I was curious. I was wondering through his eyes, questioning his lost self and questions he tried to hide but were shown clearly in his eyes. Has he found his answer? But does he know what he’s looking for?
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Posted 4/19/09
Ooh...This has a pretty interesting story line =]
I look forward to see yur chapters in yur first fanfic!
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Posted 4/19/09
thanxx
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Posted 4/19/09
=P No Problem!
Good luck~
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Posted 4/19/09
This is good so far! ^__^
Just when you switch point of views, to avoid confusion you might want to put: (Amu's POV) or (Ikuto's POV) before the passage.
Good luck~!
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Posted 4/19/09
kk thnxx
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Posted 4/19/09
I like the plot.

It's good and mysterious~♥

Please continue~

Oh yeah..you should write if it's amu, ikuto, or normal P.O.V, okay?

Good luck~! I'm looking forward to it~.
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thank you!!
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