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What happens when you fall in love with a family member? and not just a family member its your brother!!! is it wrong for you to love your brother as a man instead of your sibling? Can things work out or will society separate the two lovers? Can they surpass this?

~through my eyes~

when i first became aware of him, he was 14 and i was 9. he was nothing special nothing unusual other than his grades nothing was outstanding. he was average height, with average looks, he had brown eyes with chocolate brown hair, and he was tan. i guess i looked past that and i loved his personality. we were inseparable. he didn't care about the 5 year difference and he actually listened. i mean how many boys actually listen?!? that was some thing i loved.

Jake what does it mean when a guy won't leave you alone?

well maybe he likes you.........

you think so?

maybe. at that time i didn't understand why he got mad. i remember that when i noticed he was mad i poke him and called him a grumpy pants.

come on Jake turn that frown upside down, i said nonchalantly.

Alana cut it out!!

I'm sorry. i broke down crying but Jake apologized with out the need to. he came over to where i was and opened up his arms i looked up at him and jumped into his open arms. i cried and punched and he sat there and took it all.

I'm sorry, i finally said.

there is nothing to be sorry about.

it was around 10pm a Saturday and i was sleeping over at his house.

so do you want to go to sleep or stay up and watch movies, i asked.

what do you want to watch?

i want to watch the "Six Sense."

OK, but you do know that you aren't supposed to watch that.

why i think i can handle it. i cowered in his arms through the entire movie, and every now and then i felt him cower into my hair. who could blame him, me, us? we didn't know what would happen. out fate was already in motion. i fell asleep in his chest, some one covered us or maybe he already had a blanket, I'm not sure. when i woke up he was staring at me and suddenly i became very selfconscious. he was smiling and every now and then he would kiss the top of my head.

am i heavy? i think i startled him.

no, not at all, why?

well i have been on top of you the entire night.

well at least you don't move a lot.

really?

yes and you don't snore either.

well that's good.

you hungry? he asked giving me my favorite smile.

can we stay like this a little while longer?

if you really want to. i could see a smile come across his face and there it stayed for the rest of the day. i didn't know why he was different than the other boys in school or my friends. i could not find the similarity between boys and Jake. he was special no one could compare to him. a year or so later i found out he was moving. Jake and i had the same father but our mothers were different our dad didn't choose either his mom or mine, and he never showed his face again we just got his child support. there was no one nothing to keep him with me. we could no longer be together. that's what pained me.

no!!! he can't leave!!!!

sweet heart there is nothing we can do. i looked at my mom and pleaded with my eyes. i ran up to his mother and begged her to let him stay with me after all he was my brother, my Jake.

you need to understand that your father is the only thing that links you two. I'm sorry. i had never hated someone so much.

no!!! i won't let you. i ran out to find Jake i knew he was at his house but he lived four or five blocks away and i had never been out by my self. the next thing i knew a light was rushing towards me. the light was indescribable it gave me a sense of peace, but after a while the light became blinding i lifted my hand to cover my eyes when some one grabbed my hand. i peered up to see a boy about 11 maybe 12. he was gorgeous silver eyes and black hair his skin tone was tan just like mine. he was probably from the same heritage meaning Mexican, native American, and white but our skin tone wasn't very dark but it wasn't white eather. oddly enough he looked shocked.

who are you? he asked.

who are you? what am i doing here? what is here? what happened? i was blabbering but i didn't care. i looked up and he locked eyes with me. i knew what would happen already it always did. his eyes were normal mine weren't.

I'm Erin Night, i don't know, paradise, I'm not sure, and whats wrong with your eyes?

oh I'm Alana Camilla Aphrodite Dalila Ella Athena Solar Eclipse, and i got my fathers eyes. they're weird aren't they you know being golden and the catlike slash you don't have to look at me if you don't want to.


~through Erin's eyes~

i could tell that by the way she was talking she was terrified like i was when i first got here.
look Alana im not sure where this place is i just no there is no way out. maybe i was being to harsh.
there has to be a way out, she pleded
none that i know of now calm down if you waste too much energy the darkness will comesume you faster.
what darkness? what are you talking about?
now listen to me i've been here a while don-. thats all i had the chance to say before she gave a shilling cry. i had warned her but did she listen nooo. whel its not my problem, she's not my problem. what was it about this girl that drove me crazy? why couldn't i take my eyes away from her face?
her body layed limp there wasn't anything i could do but sit here and watch time pass everyone but me. lets watch a guy make a fool of himself by losing the girl he loves
some guy was crying patheticaly leaning over some chick with long blond hair...........i looked at the girl that was laying next to me...........long blond hair..............it wasn't possible.......that was until the boy said
Alana wake up..i won't leave.....i promise.....just wake up ok?
it was all very simple realy he was probably some one she knew now how to brake it to her?i didn't even need to brake it to her it wasn't my problem.......nothing as going to change my mind...............come on a little voice in the back of my head wispered.........no..........maybe.........forget it............i can't............
what am i gonna do, hey i was watching some guy beg you to wake up, or do you know a brown haired tan guy?, or maybe even i think i saw your boyfriend beggin you to wake up.........that would put a smile on her face..............what did i care anyways...............stop it you don't know her if she knew what happened when i got angry she'd run for the hills...........there's no hope for acceptance.........but she is abstract as well...........no ,the voice wispered, she can cover her abnormalities but you can't.............i'll tell her when she finds out............
i should realy close this before she wakes up..........should i tell her?.......................[/blue].......................there is nothing i can do..........you are lying to your self the voice wispered...........
i decided to keep quiet for now atleast....................what good will that do the voice wispered.......................i dont know but i know its better than telling her now and having her adore that guy, but why was that thought so repulsive?
she began to stir and i shut the looking glass........why?..... im not sure i answered my own question.

good morning, she said in this voice that made you want to listen for ever.

hi, i responded......... that was so lame why couldn't i think of some thing better to say?!?!?!

~through my eyes~

there was no way to mark time in this world you could only tell when time passed when our bodies began to grow. my hair was past my knees now, i was taller, and my body had grown a figure but those were the only changes i recognised in my self. Erin in the other hand had gotten taller, his chest had grown wide and facial hair had began apearing around his chin......... he was... how could i put it ...... handsome..... i liked him alot.... but some times i would remember Jake...... that and only that was what prevented me from attempting to persue Eri (that was my nickname for him)..... i realy wanted him but what if he wasn't real? what would i do then? lord, god, the universe, mother earth, ancient gods, what ever force is out there i beg of you to let me wake up from this dream with Eri by my side, please i beg of you take merci on this soul!!!! how i hope that what ever is out there hears my plead.




Posted 4/20/09
O_O.. thanxs for makin a new storyyy >=D
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Posted 4/20/09
thank you for reading!!!!!!!!!
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Posted 4/20/09
Aww, that's kinda cute .^^.
She's 9 in this right?

I think a nine year old loving her brother is innocent enough ^^
Posted 4/21/09
yeshhh..i agree wit embie. >W<
coooooooooool~
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Posted 4/21/09
This reminds of the anime series known as Da Capo.
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Posted 4/21/09
^^'
Angelo, you could just say, "This reminds me of Da Capo"
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We know it's an anime O.o
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Posted 4/21/09
In that case, yay!
There is one thing that I just don't get with Da Capo though.
Why is Nemu acting funny when she's with her brother Junichi?
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Posted 4/21/09
i added more to "forever"
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Posted 4/21/09
I dunno Angelo, I've never watched Da Capo...

Ohh, I'll read Forever later, kay??
I love that story ^^
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Posted 4/23/09
i actually got the idea from a real life kind of thing.
Posted 4/23/09
realllyyyyyyyyy...?
:D
TATS AWESOMEEE<33
yew noe wat else is awesome !?
meh new stowi >w<
-yew should read it~ its pretty awesome (:
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Posted 4/26/09
good story i just hate when family members fall in love just makes me feel sick not saying the story's bad or any thing
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Posted 5/28/09

ay_bay_bay wrote:

realllyyyyyyyyy...?
:D
TATS AWESOMEEE<33
yew noe wat else is awesome !?
meh new stowi >w<
-yew should read it~ its pretty awesome (:


i wanna read it whats it called?

Posted 5/28/09

whitekagome88 wrote:


ay_bay_bay wrote:

realllyyyyyyyyy...?
:D
TATS AWESOMEEE<33
yew noe wat else is awesome !?
meh new stowi >w<
-yew should read it~ its pretty awesome (:


i wanna read it whats it called?



that post was from april 23 kagome O_o;
uhmm?
andd i think teh newest story ...well for meh is tha one i REAAALLY liiiike >w<
"Memories Of A Tomorrow, Memories Are With You, Memories Of Snowfall"
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