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Okay (Fanfiction) The war between us.
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Okay the first chapter will not come out until I write the summary. Regardless of how many people like it I will always keep writing even if it is only for 1 person!

So enjoy!

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Hi, my name is Amu not Amu + a last name. JUST Amu . I am the princess of the light elves. For centuries my tribe has fought with the light elves. Our Tribes have been at war since recorded history. The disputes over boundaries,riches,hunting,and crops never seem to end. Actually it is QUITE the headache. But that is what Aspirin is for back to what I was saying. About Myself. I wasn't born into the royal family I was chosen. When I was born I was found with a silver leaf in my hand and a lock graced upon a gold chain laying around my neck. ( Yes, the humpty lock)
I was the " Fated Princess." I have long, soft, curly,cherry blossom pink hair. It reaches gracefully behind me in a train that ends at my waist. Yes, no one could deny that i was stunningly beautiful, but that didn't matter to me in the least. I had bigger things on my mind...................... That right I am a classic girl in love. Except I have one problem with my love. I can't remember who he is or where to find him.


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Yo, I am the prince of the dark elves. Woop de doo! Lets get this one straight. I may be the prince, I may act concerned about the tribe,and I may be the " Fated Prince" but I didn't care not one bit! I have short messy midnight blue hair that covers one of my piercing sapphire blue eyes. Yah, the kingdoms have been at war yadda yadda yadda.,....... Not much exciting there no killing for the past 5 years nothing to worry about. Uhg, Damn all these high collar shirts, why would ANYONE wear these torture devices? I wounder if I could cut it off with out any one noticing? Yeah didn't think so either. Damn oh well. Any way, Ugh, damn to I have to go to ANOTHER matchmaking session.............. damn, they treat me like a display. I sigh as I look in the mirror. I am soo going to make her pay................. just wait till I find her............. that Damn.................. girl. I t would really help If I could remember her name huh? Uhg, it was SUCH a long time ago I don't remember what I wan even mad at her about anymore. But i new something the burning in my heart wasn't gonna give up so neither could I. Haha *falls on floor laughing! Wow, it has been along time since I have seen myself that serious. ( Knock on the Door) *Sigh Coming momentairly.
Damn match making! I think wryly.
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nice starting....^^
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Okay I know this has spelling errors and such but I REALLY don't care cause I suck at those. You either like it or hate it, I would rather you like it but.............. everyone gets their opinion.

ENJOY!
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^ nah, i dun mind bout those kinds of stuffs, so long i understand wat u mean...^^
Posted 4/20/09
i like your starting
please continue
and its an amuto story??????
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Yes this is an amuto story~! but .. well i can't give it away lets just say I can make this story long or short I wan't people to tell me. I will release chapters fairly quickly cause I write/ type like crazy. So whoever reads this let me know.

10-13 chapter
20-25 chapter
30-37 chapter (Believe me I can have em all out with a month! Not short ones either!)

Also I know how it is going right now it appears like a story but It will have dialogue in it. Like in chapter 4 or 5.

So I want peoples votes please!
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Chapter 2 Fated Meeting
Amu


I sat there on my chair as the hair dresser did my hair, make up and nails. Ugh, let me tell you high heels are NOTHING compared to these scratch traps. Anyway I am attending a royal match making. Guess what…………. Yeah you guessed it. THE TRIBES ARE TRYING TO GET ME TO MARRY THE PRINCE OF THE DARK ELVES! Yeah him, Ikuto, I HATE him and I haven’t ever even met him! EVER! Now you are probably wondering how I hate and why right? Well on my 5th Birthday he sent A DAMN STINK BOMB! It took forever to get the stench out of the palace. Ugh, annoying boy he wasn’t even there when it went off. Although I owe him one okay not just one I owe him a bunch!!! He let me meet the love of MY LIFE! Okay I will tell you how it happened.

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Want more…………………………………..

YAY I AM HAPPY PEOPLE LIKE IT

After the bomb I ran out into the forest. I ran a lot and I tripped and fell too. My dress was torn my hair was a mess. Of course I was also crying my eyes out. The all of a sudden a hand came down and patted my head. I looked up and there was my prince charming. He has a tanned body almost black hair and almost black eyes. But his eyes unsettled my they were full of concern and amusement and embarrassment. Trust me I didn’t no whether to slap the boy or hug him. His eyes although I don’t remember quite right because the light was playing tricks I know they were gorgeous. He was really kind he treated the cut on my knee and asked, “Didn’t have too much fun playing at the princess’s party, huh?” No I replied worst party EVER! “That stink bomb sure caused trouble huh?” he asked bemused. Yeah I said and now I look horrible. For some reason though, I felt like laughing about the bomb now. “No,” he stated evenly, “I can make you look twice as pretty as before.” He promised with such a challenging grin how could I refuse? Alright I said as I looked down blushing. I trusted him; he helped me and must have been about 8 but acted very mature for his age. He pulled all the leaves and twigs out of my hair. He pulled out all the pins and twists and let my hair cascade down my back and shoulders in a wave of curls. He pulled out a pocket knife and started trimming and cutting and tailoring the dress where he saw fit. (Ever since then, that kind of gothic Lolita, cool and spicy look has ALWAYS been my style.) “There,” he comment looking at me satisfied. He led me over to the lake in the cove and I saw my reflection. He was right. I was cute! On top of my head he placed a very gossamer crown woven of ferns and thornless roses. It was beautiful. That when I fell in love. Although I hated to admit it I owed Ikuto a huge one because of that. I even had the crown dipped in silver dew so it would never wilt or lose its shape. That was my crown and I was wearing it today. I wore a black and blue silk dress with cut off cap sleeves. Black rose lace gloves adorned my slim pale peach arms, complimented by a fern bracelet. I wore black rose lace stockings with fern lace ribbons accessorized with mini combat boots. I was ready. Although my parents constantly comment on my style, they could not argue with the fact that it made me look hugely becoming. It accented every graceful and elegant angle, so they gave the argument up after the first dozen outfits I modeled. I walked slowly down the stair and through the door and stopped short on the next flight of stairs. I was frozen and I couldn’t believe my eyes.


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okay That was chapter 2 and I am typing chapter 3 right after this. But I have a way with cliff hanger. WHAT DOES AMU SEE! WHAT COULD HAVE CAUSED THIS REACTION?

Okay........... anyway I hope u guys Enjoy and Feed back and comment are welcome unless you are comment about my spelling and such because you can give that up cause it is a hopeless cause!

This is an Amuto story just to let readers know!
Also to explain about the chapters, the first few chapters will be Ikuto and Amu separate and will be like stories but then after we examine everything from both of thier points of view it will switch to dialogue between character!

Enjoy! REMEMBER I DON'T OWN SHUGO CHARA!!!!
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Okay Chapter 3 Will come out sometime Tomorrow because I got caught typing instead of home work............... I KNOW I WANT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS TOO! Wait? Don't I know what happens.......................... Should we tell them about the fights?

Nana: Yeah how Amu slaps the
Lulu: And then Ikuto kicks
Yuuki ( me) : YOU GUYS!
Nana & Lulu: lets just say it get VERY interesting.
Nana: I still put 20 on Amu though
Lulu: No way ikuto is sooo gonna.............
*they turn to see angry Yuuki
Yuuki: I still haven't decided how that ends and who knows there could be a death. *Looks directly at them
Nana: Rember................
Lulu: Amu doesn't
Nana: Own Shugo Chara
Nana & Lulu: *gulp

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Posted 4/20/09
Alright~!
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Posted 4/20/09
that was A W E S O M E yuuki-chan! good job =] i like this fanfiction, keep on writing yuuki-chan!
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pretty good.... so far at least....
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THAT WAS AMAZING, I LOVE IT, thanku, thanku...
PWEASE KEEP ON WRITTING MORE, I WANT TO KNOW WHAT SHE SAW, ahhhh, *going crazy*...., love when Ikuto goes yadda yadda yadda, HAHA...
lololol!!!!!1 ^_^
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You're pretty good.

Continue, okay?

Because some of the fanfics in this forum don't cotinue anymore. T-T

Goodluck~!!
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Posted 4/20/09
Darn cliffhanger..you're really good at cliffies..haha
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Posted 4/20/09
that was awesome!



but i don't think i can read it every day =(

but i will check it out as often as i can ^_^
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