Okay (Fanfiction) The war between us.

9 1/2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOL why does the video scare you, Are you starting a count down? lol, I am glad you like it (fanfic), I am turning you into an AMuto fan?
You were an amuto fan b4? what were you?

OKAY EVERYONE, I AM HOLDING A COMPETETION
I AM GOING TO POST 5 QUESTIONS, WHOEVER TELLS ME THE ANSWERS WILL GET A PREVIEW OR SPOILER OF THE ENDING~
I WILL WRITE ALL THE NAMES DOWN AND DRAW ONE
1) What are the 2 exsisting couples in the fanfic
2) how many stones do they need to get home
3) how many do hey have?
4) What does Ikuto hate most?
FINAL QUESTION!
WHAT TRIBE IS AMU FROM?
IKUTO?
TADASE?
UTAU?

good to know that!!!!and that 1/2 chapt was good too!!!! by the way can u give me a few basic pointers to writing a story??

lolz
1) lolz the vid scares me because it has a lot of "adult" stuff in, and Amu is only 13 lol
And I was on a sugar rush when I typed that lol

2)Yes I am starting a countdown! (let me know if you want me to stop)

3) You're welcome!

4) I was a Tadamuto fan (but more of a tadamu fan, please don't kill me lol) but this fanfic is making me like Amuto A LOT MORE!

Okay first there are alot of things you need to decide,
1) Who is in it
2)Background of characters
3)What you want to happen
4)What is your story about?
5)Flow, the most important thing in a story is that everything flows, like one minute Amu is in the forest, I can't then say she is in a cave
You have to tell how she got there
6) The most important thing is detail, those little details add lots of pictures in the readers minds, and those little details sometimes help you think of new ideas and add surprises for readers.
If you message me i will be happy to tell you more, I can even help you come up with an idea if you like



LOL, okay (I get to count alot in this iduuno comment section!)

1)I didn't think about it that way!
2)YAY A COUNT DOWN! NO DON'T STOP
3) I JUST WANNA SAY THANKS FOR BEING AN AWESOME READER!
4)ANY COUPLE YOU LIKE IS OKAY! (Although I would be lying if I said I wasn't happy your enjoying the amuto side and my story!
5) WEEEEEEE I CAN COUNT TO 5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
6)No one replied to my contest!
(PS SUGAR RUSHES RULE!)

lolz
1) I don't think that way either! My friend realised it and pointed it out *facepalms*

2) Okies!

3) yay!

4)Woohoo! (lolz I like all the couples to be honest!)

5) lolz me too!

6) Give me a sec and I will! (sorry )

(PS yes. Yes they do)

1) What are the 2 exsisting couples in the fanfic?
- well of course AMUTO and KUTAU

2) how many stones do they need to get home?
- I have no idea!

3) how many do hey have??
- At least 2 or 3?

4) What does Ikuto hate most?
- Umm...annoying stuff?

FINAL QUESTION!

WHAT TRIBE IS AMU FROM?
- Light elves!

IKUTO?
- Dark elves!

TADASE?
- Light elves
UTAU?

- Dark elves

lol
you got most of them lol,
Hey everyone I am on Vacation so I won't be updating for another week or so, probaly I will get bored and update in like 4 days, so look for it then!

hey, i luuuuuuv ur story. it is really good.

OMG NEW FAN! YAY I AM SOOO HAPPY!

anyway,lol I am back from vacation and will be posting tomorrow, or tonight if I can't sleep.
Look at what IchigoSakura made me!!!


She makes people thier own charas, you only get one by joining Your Own Chara group!

omg so kawaii!

I know right? Her name is

Luna Yume <- Moon Dream

I am about to type the next 1 1/2 chapters! so Enjoy?!

Amu slowly wakes up,
She sits up ans suddenly feels dizzy, when a strong hand supports her from the back.
Ikuto: Be careful
Amu:*blushes cause his face is so close, Thanks
Ikuto: How do you feel?
Amu:really weird I feel like I am missing something something, plus a little dizzy
Ikuto: Do remember what happened last night
Amu: not really
Ikuto: Amu that is so cold especially after what you did to me *wraps arms around himself in a sexy way
Amu: What did I do?
Ikuto:No I guess It doesn't matter I guess
Amu: fine you don't have to tell me
Ikuto: I won't it isn't that important to me
Amu: (she has an Idea)
Ikuto: Well lets get moving
Amu:*puts her hand on his shoulder
Ikuto:*quickly turns again to look at her
Amu:*puppy dog crying face Was it that horrible, I am sorry what did I do? Can you tell me?
Ikuto: *blush
Amu: Please ikuto? *with the face
*Suddenly Ikuto gets one of those smiles on
(Slightly dark, extremly sexy and hot, perverted, teasing smiles)
Ikuto: I have a better I dea how about I show
*he pulls Amu up and close to him, puts his hands on either sides of her face
And Amu closes her eyes as Ikuto leans in and, They share thier first, sweetest and purest kiss as a couple.
Ikuto then pulls her very close against his chest and whispers In her ear
Ikuto: Amu, I love you more than anyone, though sometimes I might get on your nerves can you put up with me?
*Ikuto gives Amu one of those irresistible sexy and you know I am about to do something smiles
Amu: .. *in a very confident voicE, I love you too Ikuto, More than anyone
*Amu pushes Ikuto away, then puts her arms around his neck and pulls him close
closes her eyes and kisses him
Ikuto very happy with this kisses her back intently, putting his hand in his pocket then putting both of his hands on her waist
Amu blushes lightly and gasp for breath
Ikuto then separates (to both of thier disappointment) and slides down on to one knee
Amu then blushes madly: Ikuto do you honestly?
Ikuto glances at her with pleading and sexy eyes
Amu: fine.....
Ikuto looks at Amu with sincere eyes: Amu, would you please stay by my side forever?
Amu: ...... I will think about it *turns away and starts to walk away
Ikuto: .......................................
Amu turns around and winks at him and blows him a kiss
Amu: Love to, now come cause at your pace you will be late for your own wedding
Ikuto smiles slightly and then sighs
Ikuto she is going to be a handful Ikuto thinks wryly
He glances down as he is standing up, and He notices a beautiful gleaming yellow diamond Jewel
Ikuto: Hey Amu...
Amu turns around quickly Amu: Yeah?
Ikuto glances hesitantly at the jewel: Nothing love your ring
Amu glances down to her hand: OMG IKUTO WHEN DID YOU PUT THIS ON HERE???
Ikuto: *whistles I dunno (as he slips the jewel into his pocket
Amu hold her hand which gracefully and proudly displays a silver ring with a dark purple and black cross on it
Amu hold her hand closely to her heart
Ikuto thinks, I have my reasons for not telling her
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Ahhhhh, Wacha think, I was trying to through in some cute romance, also what age are the readers here? cause it could influence what I put in here
Did you like it PLEASE TELL ME?
This finishes 10th chapter, I g2g but will update tomorrow (hopefully)
Kiri -k to you with the countdown

Nana: Yuuki
Lulu:Doesn't
Nana: own
Lulu: Shugo
Nana: Chara!
Lulu: Doki!

YAY! COUNTDOWN!!!
9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(btw I'm 13)
(and awesome rest of chapter lol)