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Okay (Fanfiction) The war between us.
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Of course I won't stop this fanfiction utill I finsih it. I am glad people like it and that makes me want to write quicker. I wrote 4 chapters today in school. No wonder I got sooo much HW! Any way I am finishing chapter 3 I will give you the title though probaly posting it withing the next 20 mins or so.

(Amu)sing Encounter LOL i thought the title fit and then I saw that and started laughing my head of because of what happens in the chapter!


Lol be back soon!

Nana: Amu doesn't own Shugo Chara~!
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THis is a teaser while I finish typing!

Okay, I thought match making was horrible. Okay I will take it back ROYAL MATCH MAKING IS (@^&@$@#%@#%@) ………….. Annoying. I had to get in ANOTHER DAMN HIGH COLLAR SHIRT! AGAIN! I swear this is such a pain! WORSE! They are trying to get me to MARRY HER! Okay I don’t have anything against the chic, I mean I head she has a super rockin body, but COME ON! I swear the chic hates me, okay well any normal girl might but, JUST cause I gave her a stink bomb for her birthday! Okay THAT was Awesome! I mean it was kinda mean but give me a break! I WAS 8! Like you’ve never given a 5 year old Elvin princess a stink bomb for her birth day? ……………… okay dumb question. Okay so I will tell you what happened.
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(Amu)sing encounter


Okay, I thought match making was horrible. Okay I will take it back ROYAL MATCH MAKING IS (@^&@$@#%@#%@) ………….. Annoying. I had to get in ANOTHER DAMN HIGH COLLAR SHIRT! AGAIN! I swear this is such a pain! WORSE! They are trying to get me to MARRY HER! Okay I don’t have anything against the chic, I mean I head she has a super rockin body, but COME ON! I swear the chic hates me, okay well any normal girl might but, JUST cause I gave her a stink bomb for her birthday! Okay THAT was Awesome! I mean it was kinda mean but give me a break! I WAS 8! Like you’ve never given a 5 year old Elvin princess a stink bomb for her birth day? ……………… okay dumb question. Okay so I will tell you what happened

After I planted the present I ran off towards the trees laughing my head off. After I had gone far enough I climbed up into a tree and sat there waiting. Then after a while I heard the screams. I waited in anticipation something told me something big was about to happen!
Then I almost fell right off the branch.
(Okay you caught me I lied I remember everything that happened that day. But honestly it is more likely for it to be shocking if you find me telling the truth!)
This little chic came into the clearing. She was cute I almost blushed. Then I noticed she was crying. Okay I had found a new victim to pick on! I climbed down the tree will think of ways to torment her. Then when I got closer I saw her face and froze! SHE WAS CUTE! I instantly rushed over when I saw her stumble. (Damn brother genes. I got those from taking care of Utau the King and Queen’s blood daughter. Except this didn’t feel like when I was with her. These felt different VERY DIFFERENT! OH MAN!) I knew what this was this is what people called a crush! I wasn’t gonna fall for a chic I might not ever see again. The she scraped her knee I rushed over. I patted her head trying to console her. While I bandaged up her knee I asked her about the party. She mutter something like worst party ever. I offered to help her straighten up after she said something like yeah and now I look awful. After I straightened her hair and curled it some in places I worked on her dress. I took the tiara I had made as the real present for the princess. I put it on her head. I had woven it myself out of roses and ferns and decorated it with sparkling mist so when it was in the sun it shimmered. I led her over to the pond in the clearing to show her how cute she looked. Good thing she couldn’t see how much I was blushing. I don’t think I had ever blushed in my life. She marveled at her reflection and that whispered a thank you that was completely heart felt. Then she jumped up and gave me a quick hug and a kiss on the cheek. Then she handed me a silver leaf she said she had in her pocket. She said it was her blessing and that I would always be able to find her with it. Now I was blushing but when I looked over I saw she was blushing head to toe too. So I figured to be a gentleman I had to kiss her back. So I took her tiny hand and kissed it. Okay by now I wasn’t surprised I was cherry red. But then we heard the shouts getting closer and we both flew off in different directions. I ran fast and then got in the carriage and almost slapped myself. I hadn’t even asked her name! I clutched the leaf tightly. What would she think if she new I was a prince and had set off that stink bomb that had ruined her fun. We drove home.

Now back to the match making I am now sitting in the very room that the party had been held in. I sniffed amused I was glad they had gotten the stench out. Then I heard doors opening and turned around and looked up straight. She came down the stair graceful as a swan and lightly as a cloud. I looked at her starting at her feet. Damn even I could see I had never seen a chic so beautiful or hot. Then I nearly fell over when I reached her head. She stared at me like I was crazy. But all I had eyes for was the tiara on her head shimmering in the sunlight.


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Chapter 4: Believing and Deceiving.


Amu stared disbelieved at the guy standing in the center of the room.

Ikuto’s mind was racing at the limited possibilities.

Amu: (Composed now) Welcome to the light elves palace. *bows

Ikuto: Thank you for inviting me. *bows

Amu: Should we proceed with the meeting?

Ikuto: *Smiling amusingly Yes enles you would rather do something else.

Amu: *coldly actually there are quite a few other things I would rather be doing.

Guard: Now princess please consider…………

Amu stares at him giving him cold ice daggers.

Ikuto thought: Damn this girl is hot, and if looks could kill he would either be frozen or dead. *He smiles amused involuntarily.

Ikuto composing himself: What would you rather do?

Amu: Finding someone

Ikuto: Who?

Amu sees a glowing in his pocket.
Amu points and asks: What is that?

Ikuto realizing which pocket it is and what is in there replies: Nothing

Amu hurries down the steps and stops gracefully and assertively in front of Ikuto.

Amu giving Ikuto the dagger eyes: You better show me NOW!

Ikuto : Damn…………..

Ikuto pulls out a tiny silver leaf. Amu Gasped along with Ikuto as the leaf transformed into a key. (Yes the dumpty key)

The lock around Amu’s neck began to glow and drift towards the lock at the same moment.

Then……………….
Amu Sreams!: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
As Ikuto looks around in panic.


Sorry it is soo short BUT! I know again with the cliff hangers!
Enjoy! Rate and Comment please!
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UGH!! you're too damn good when it comes to cliffies!! xd

Too good that i'm falling off at the edge of my chair!! XD

Suspense is killing me dammit!! XD
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kairi_20 wrote:

UGH!! you're too damn good when it comes to cliffies!! xd

Too good that i'm falling off at the edge of my chair!! XD

Suspense is killing me dammit!! XD


LoL I am glad you like it! I wanted to do something original. Although don't get me wrong the thought of a vampire Ikuto is just as amazing. But cliff hangers are fun! Cause I know what happens. But if you like it please tell you friends!


~~~Yuuki!
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please keep writing!
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kairi_20 wrote:

UGH!! you're too damn good when it comes to cliffies!! xd

Too good that i'm falling off at the edge of my chair!! XD

Suspense is killing me dammit!! XD


LoL I am glad you like it! I wanted to do something original. Although don't get me wrong the thought of a vampire Ikuto is just as amazing. But cliff hangers are fun! Cause I know what happens. But if you like it please tell you friends!


~~~Yuuki!


I would if they had crunchy accounts. *sob*

Unfortunately i tried convincing them, but they said it'd be a pain. lol

Gambatte ne yuuki-chan~! n_n
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........I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT OMG PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE IT AHAH AND WHERES CH 1.............I DONT SEE IT...??? LOOOOL AHAHHA PLZ CONTINUE IT AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LOOOOL lulu: PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ SIS IS RIGHT PLZZZZZZZZ......oh yeah on the one dat says ch 3 will come out and u put lulu do u mean meh or someone else??? .....meh: loooooooooooool ahah yeah who did u mean?? lool ahhah its goos tho haha lol
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hi!!! Still remember me...?enma-chan desu~~~
so u want to knw wht is my favo. anime & Manga....
Anime:
1)Fushigi Yuugi
2)Kuroshitsuji
3)Tsubasa Chronicle
4)Vampired Knight
5)Touka Gettan Momotsuki
6)Mamotte shugogetten Shaorin
7)Flame of Recca
8)Code Geass
9)Trinity Blood
10)The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
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overall, nice...^^
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Okay since I had some message claiming this was horrible and that i should delete it I am taking that advice. Bye bye!








Got you didn't I? I had to pull an Ikuot JUST once uh oh angry fans any way I actually had alot of request to continue! They just don't comment!!

Here it goes.This chapter will be released tomorrow. I am just giving a sneak peek. I have an editor because of my spelling!

Chapter 5
time,clues,questions,and of course................. no answers.


There were screams and shouts from the gaurds and Ikuto and amu were either scream or panicking as they were sucked into the light.


Amu: *groans ........... uggggh what happened ?
She sits up and looks around.
Amu:...................................... WHERE THE HELL AM I?!!?!?!?!?
Ikuto: *jumps of the limb of the tree. Okay that was worth watching *grining amused
Amu* Blushing ahh what ever.
Amu: What is going on.
Ikuto:I thought you would tell me, Miss giving me a cursed leaf.
Amu: *stares at him like he is crazy
Amu: listen I don't know if you hit your head or what but I haven't met you before Mr. give a stink bomb and leave.
Ikuto: Then were did you get that tiara 8points to her head
Amu:*bewildered and confused............ I don't remember probably a gift or something
Ikuto* Ohhh great *slumps against the tree
Amu:What ikuto hey..... common respond don't be like that.............. you FREAKING ME EVEN MORE OUT!
Ikuto: Nothing just my childhood crush has lost her early memory of me I am in a DAMN high collier shirt AND WE HAVE BEEN SENT BACK THROUGH TIME 2000 YEARS!
Amu: 0_0 ............... yeap he definitely hit his head.
Ikuto*grabs Amu and.............................................................................


Sorry end of sneak peek!

Yah know ........ if I don't stop these sliff hangers people might start to hate me!

DONT HATE ME!!!!




Lulu: Member
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Lulu: Own
Nana and Lulu: SHUGO CHARA!

Yuuki: also I want to give a shout out to some of my AWSOMEST FRIENDS!! (or sybling type friends!)

Angelfoxblue- CR member also a bff and is the owner of lulu
and Vincent or V LOVE YAH! V is one of my bff on youtube and makes AWSOME shugo chara videos people! He is really talented!
I am Hayatesgirl4ever or amutofangirl4ever. I forgot how to spell V acc but you can find him through my friend pagey his name is like Malicaprico16 something like that anywayz! But V AND ALL MY AWSOME COMMENTTERS HAVE BEEN SUPPORTIVE! Love yah all!
IchigoSakura! Id one of my new friends but is already being extremly AWSOME1 Guess what people she agreed to make a cover for the manga! Like the picture! SHE IS REALLY TALENTED AND SWOME!
I also want to give a shout out to Char Char! And my best guy friend Sho Sho (not Jesse char chara) He is really cvool peps. He has natural silky silver hair almost white, AND HER GOT BLACK HIGH LIGHTS! Om love the new hair sho sho!

~Yuuki (your sometimes annoying writer)
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I love your story~!

OMG..ikuto and amuu are just so stupid! haha lolz XD

When i read the part where ikuto pulled amu and saw nothing after that i almost destroyed my mouse. XD

lolz..anyway..don't worry i don't hate you~

I just hate cliffies, but it's what makes the story somewhat better and exciting and makes you want to read more~! XD

Nice preview~ i can't wait for the whole chapter~! XD XD
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...............................OMG LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL OMG I CANT BELIEVE IT HHHHAHAHHAHAHA.....WELL after u put ikuto grabs amu i was yaaaaaay then when i saw the dots i wwas like a stone just staring t it AHHAHAHAHHHH ,LOOOOL AND I WILL NEVER HATE U AND THX FOR PUTTING MEH IN DA THINGY UR A BFF TOOO EHEH^^KEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP IT UP I RELLY LIKE IT OH YEAH and da one dat says ur deleting it i was like WTH OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ahahahahah lol oh welll eheh^^continue it plzzzzzzzz hha lol
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........I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT OMG PLZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE IT AHAH AND WHERES CH 1.............I DONT SEE IT...??? LOOOOL AHAHHA PLZ CONTINUE IT AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH LOOOOL lulu: PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ SIS IS RIGHT PLZZZZZZZZ......oh yeah on the one dat says ch 3 will come out and u put lulu do u mean meh or someone else??? .....meh: loooooooooooool ahah yeah who did u mean?? lool ahhah its goos tho haha lol

Yeap I am talking about your lulu and My Nana!
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