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kairi_20 wrote:

yeah..angel fox has a point~ n_n

we can wait...i think..just don't take too long~

lol XD


OMG REALLY YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY>>TOTALLY HAPPY DAT U SAID DAT<<<loooool i know i know~~crazy~~right ahah oh wellz hehe^^


haha..lol

i don't think you're crazy..just a little too energetic n_n

it's nice to know i actually made someone happy..lol XD
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kairi_20 wrote:


angelfoxblue wrote:


kairi_20 wrote:

yeah..angel fox has a point~ n_n

we can wait...i think..just don't take too long~

lol XD


OMG REALLY YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY>>TOTALLY HAPPY DAT U SAID DAT<<<loooool i know i know~~crazy~~right ahah oh wellz hehe^^


haha..lol

i don't think you're crazy..just a little too energetic n_n

it's nice to know i actually made someone happy..lol XD


hhe^^ lol ok.......hha yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep hehe^^
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yah know half of these post are us talking angel and Kairi chan! lol

Yes next chapter will be amuto and I want a vote I can make Kukatu in this (I have a way) but I just don't know ho to pair tadase with.

Who wants a sneak peek?




Thought sooo
I will post it next!

Stay tuned to find out
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Chapter??????/ I dunno here is the title

Memories.... GONE?!?!?!?!?!

Amu: hey could you let go of my face?
Ikuto: damn she really doesn't remember
Amu: *ouch touches her head
* sticks out her hand
Amu: Hey ikuto I am bleeding........
Ikuto:
Amu: *faints
Ikuto: *Catches Amu
Amu mumbles, Ouch
Ikuto: aww come on, are your trying to test me?
Ikuto leans in to kiss her on the lips and stops, *sigh kisses her on the forehead
Ikuto: Damn this girl is a trial
Ikuto lays Amu down on a make shift bed and goes to get some water
Ikuto goes to the spring and gets some water in his hands
Damn he comments
The sun is glaring down on him telling him to move along
So he pulls a cup out of no where

You know I am will ing to Believe ANYTHING at this point
Ikuto carries the water back to Amu
Ikuto: How am I suppose to get her to drink it? She is gonna be dehydrated soon.
Come on God that's not funny are TRYING to get me to go over board?
*Sigh *Ikuto picks up the cup and takes a sip and slowly goes to put it in AMu's mouth
Just as AMu opens her eyes

Got caught by parents ............... SOOOOO close!

Enjoy (Cliffy WASN'T my fault this time!!!!!)

~Yuuki your annoying writer.

(Angel don't smash your mouse this time okay?)
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i swear i might go crazy with all of your cliffies..lol..just kidding n_n

it's a really nice chap..but uh-oh..ikuto's dead..haha

lol..don't worry..we can wait :)

oh..and i vote kutau..

why don't you try tadase and..lulu?..i can't think of anyone else because i like rimahiko.hehe..but i'm not the only one voting..so there will be more suggestions
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LOL!!! poor ikuto!!! And I wasnt expecting Utau and Tadase! Seriously i fell of the back of my chair....................it actually REALLY hurt!!!! (hit my head on corner of cabinet). But this is awsome!!!!!! You are a seriously good writer!(and good at torturing us with the cliffies!)
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animefangirl4ever wrote:

yah know half of these post are us talking angel and Kairi chan! lol

Yes next chapter will be amuto and I want a vote I can make Kukatu in this (I have a way) but I just don't know ho to pair tadase with.

Who wants a sneak peek?




Thought sooo
I will post it next!

Stay tuned to find out


lol..that's true n_n

people read..but they don't comment..lol
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yeah I mean I have had 455 views by diffrent people but now ones wants to comment.

Welcome to the group kiri - k

The group are the few of us who actually comment.


You know I am actually starting to get depressed cause all the views but no comment, So I don't know if people like it or not1
I also thought this was original so I was happy I mean no offense, but vampires OVER AND OVER get old people!

But kukai will be brought into the story, and mabey lulu BUT i won't bring many other characters in. I will bring in Rima and Nadeshiko/ Neghiko, but I dunno bout yaya unless I still her with tadase. Or Kairi!



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Amu : WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???
Ikuto; *laughs soo hard the water spews out. trying to get you to drink something.
Amu: sure?
Ikuto: Positive
Amu: Fine
Amu grabs the water and chugs it down.
Ikuto: Come on we have to keep moving
Amu: ugh my head hurts.
Amu points: What is that?
Ikuto walks over and picks up a red crystal.
Ikuto: I dunno
Amu: can I have it? I think it is pretty.
Ikuto : Sure let my put it in you crown.
Ikuto puts it on all the way to the left.
then he realizes something.
Ikuto: Take off your lock amu
Amu: Fumbles with the clasp but the succeeds in taking off the lock.
Ikuto grabs the lock and places it in the center.
it transform into a small black crystal heart with a key hole.
Amu and ikuto gasp.
Amu: So does this mean?
Ikuto: Yes we have to find all the crystals and return home.
Amu: that could be hard
Ikuto: Got any other ideas.?
Amu: Not really
Ikuto then gets up and brushes off and offers Amu his hand
Ikuto: Shall we go milady? he ask bemused
Amu gives ikuto her hand and pulls herself up
Amu: Yes unless there is something else you would rather be doing
Ikuto: Nope we are going to find something
Amu and Ikuto burst out laughing because of the De ja fu
Amu think silently: Now if he wasn't so teasing I might be able to fall for him
Amu grabs Ikuto's hand and begins to run
Ikuto is a little shock but then picks up his pace too
Ikuto thinks silently: So maybe it wasn't just a childhood crush, but I could start with this.
_________________________________________________________________________

Tadase: Who are you
Utau: your fiancee
Tadase: aww great
Utau: YOU should be thrilled of marrying me!
Tadase: No I already like someone!
Utau: WELL I do too!
Tadase and Utau glare at each other neither relenting when suddenly they burt out laughing together.
Utua: We should get moving as she tries to suppress her giggles
Tadase stops in mid laugh: What do you mean?
Utau: Well you are searching for Amu and I am searching for Ikuto and I figured it might be safer to look together.
Tadase: Yeah I guess we should travel together
Utau: Yah know I wonder why they went disappearing I just know if we don't find them soon then both sides are going to blame each other and a full out war will break out.
Tadase: Or the tribes could work together to find them
Utau: Optimistic much?
Tadase: Pessimistic much?
Fine they say together.
Tadase: How should we search for them?
Utau: Well if they were still here then it would be easy
Tadase: Then where do you think they went to?
Utau: They are either in the past future or another dimension
Tadase: so I am guessing we are going to have to bargain with the time witch?
Utau: Most likely
Tadase: Can you summon the doors of dimensions yet?
Utau: yes but not for long
Tadase: good cause I can only to attacks
Utau: I specialize in healing and white magic
Tadase: Then I guess we make a good team
Utau: I guess I don't have to hate you we could be friends
Tadase: Friends might be better than trying to ill each other
Utau: Yeah...... wait did you hear that?
Tadase: already alert
Utau: no this isn't normal it is magic can't you sense it?
Tadase: yeah but where?
Utau closes her eyes and concentrates : ABOVE
She shouts just in time and they roll out of the way.
And a beautiful woman with pale skin and long purple black hair and violet eyes decends in a long purple dress
Utau: You are the witch of time
Witch: Yes but I prefer the name Ushio
Utau: What do you want? A private visit isn't exactly a present to be thrilled about
Ushio: Ahh on Alert already? Well see I have a problem daughter, (all magic uses are called daughters or sons because she created the worlds and dimensions), See your magic is quite strong, actually I gave you my blessings but You and my son are too smart, you see you figured out not only it wasn't an accident but also eliminated it down to 3 possiblitlites.
Tadase: Where have to taken them. Since you obviously just told us you were responsible I demand an explanation
Ushio: Son don't be soo assertive
Tadase steps in front of Utau
Ushio: aww protecting your fiancee?
Tadase and Utau scream at the same time : we ARE JUST FRIENDS!
Ushio: *shruggs her shoulders : too bad it has been a long time since I have had 2 tragic love stories at once.
Tadase and Utau: LOVE STORIES????
Utau then realizes something: Two? Do you mean there is another in the progress Ushio - san?
Ushio: *smiles amused, yes actually your siblings have quite a journey planned out
Utau: you won't hurt Ikuto
Ushio: *her eyes begin to glower: How do you know?
Tadase realizes what she is about to do draws out a pouch containing silver dew and black rain
Utau: Because, I declare under The law of peace, I sign an Alliance between the two tribes, marked her between he and I that we declare protection under the 13th article of the dimension proclamation. We Declare PROTECTION!
tadase blows the dew and rain and they circle around the three of them
Utau: Under that act it agrees if two enemy clans or tribes join to establish an alliance all unaware members shall be protected and not harmed, therfore the only ones you can harm are Tadase and I
Ushio laughs: I guess you and he have studied too well I came here with the intent to kill you but, you courage and knowledge intrigue me. I , Witch of times and Dimensions, grant you permission to enter my realm
Utau and Tadase scream as they are sucked into a black twirling hole under their feet
Ushio whispers: be careful your quest is what you decided and you are no longer under my protection but if you succeed you will save many more than those two
TADASE AND UTAU: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
Okay that gave you plenty to read
and not that big of a cliffy, I realize this may seem confusing now but it will all tie together. I hope you enjoyed and PLEASE COMMENT@ even if you hated it.
I think I like where this is going and I have rewritten the story many times but figured this out pretty well.
Hope you enjoy and if you don't understand something ask on this forum and I will answer it!!!!!!!

Yuuki ~ your amazing writer (jk)

Nana: Remember you fans
Lulu: Yuuki doesn't
Nana: Own Shugo Chara!
Lulu: hey yah know I could have sworn angel and yuuki were following us
Nana: but then they walked in with these EXTREMLY HOT GUYS!
Lulu: and Yuuki Start!#@#$!
Yuuki: ENOUGH!!!!!!


Yuuki: enjoy the fanfiction
ANGEL HELP ME CONTROL THEM PLEASE?????



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wow LONG CHAPTER AND I DIDN'T GIVE IT A TITLE

Here it is

Doors,gems,love,time and all that other damn stuff thrown at us!



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yeah I mean I have had 455 views by diffrent people but now ones wants to comment.

Welcome to the group kiri - k

The group are the few of us who actually comment.


You know I am actually starting to get depressed cause all the views but no comment, So I don't know if people like it or not1
I also thought this was original so I was happy I mean no offense, but vampires OVER AND OVER get old people!

But kukai will be brought into the story, and mabey lulu BUT i won't bring many other characters in. I will bring in Rima and Nadeshiko/ Neghiko, but I dunno bout yaya unless I still her with tadase. Or Kairi!



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lol..don't worry..you don't have to add so many characters ..it depends if you want to though

but in my opinion..i like yaya and kairi..hehe

nice chapter~! :D

so utau is some sort of mage? and tadase is a warrior? i'm not sure

good luck with the rest of your story~!!

and like yuuki-chan said..PLEASE COMMENT SO SHE KNOWS WHAT YOU THINK
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Yeah the tribes are elves but magic Only the royal families can cast magic, or uses it all others are forbbiden because.............................

Oh wait that a spoiler! lol
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Yeah the tribes are elves but magic Only the royal families can cast magic, or uses it all others are forbbiden because.............................

Oh wait that a spoiler! lol


aww..she almost gave a spoiler

so close!

lol..i'll just wait for the next chap then~
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wwwwwwooooooooooooow really good hh lol
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KK

Amu : WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING???
Ikuto; *laughs soo hard the water spews out. trying to get you to drink something.
Amu: sure?
Ikuto: Positive
Amu: Fine
Amu grabs the water and chugs it down.
Ikuto: Come on we have to keep moving
Amu: ugh my head hurts.
Amu points: What is that?
Ikuto walks over and picks up a red crystal.
Ikuto: I dunno
Amu: can I have it? I think it is pretty.
Ikuto : Sure let my put it in you crown.
Ikuto puts it on all the way to the left.
then he realizes something.
Ikuto: Take off your lock amu
Amu: Fumbles with the clasp but the succeeds in taking off the lock.
Ikuto grabs the lock and places it in the center.
it transform into a small black crystal heart with a key hole.
Amu and ikuto gasp.
Amu: So does this mean?
Ikuto: Yes we have to find all the crystals and return home.
Amu: that could be hard
Ikuto: Got any other ideas.?
Amu: Not really
Ikuto then gets up and brushes off and offers Amu his hand
Ikuto: Shall we go milady? he ask bemused
Amu gives ikuto her hand and pulls herself up
Amu: Yes unless there is something else you would rather be doing
Ikuto: Nope we are going to find something
Amu and Ikuto burst out laughing because of the De ja fu
Amu think silently: Now if he wasn't so teasing I might be able to fall for him
Amu grabs Ikuto's hand and begins to run
Ikuto is a little shock but then picks up his pace too
Ikuto thinks silently: So maybe it wasn't just a childhood crush, but I could start with this.
_________________________________________________________________________

Tadase: Who are you
Utau: your fiancee
Tadase: aww great
Utau: YOU should be thrilled of marrying me!
Tadase: No I already like someone!
Utau: WELL I do too!
Tadase and Utau glare at each other neither relenting when suddenly they burt out laughing together.
Utua: We should get moving as she tries to suppress her giggles
Tadase stops in mid laugh: What do you mean?
Utau: Well you are searching for Amu and I am searching for Ikuto and I figured it might be safer to look together.
Tadase: Yeah I guess we should travel together
Utau: Yah know I wonder why they went disappearing I just know if we don't find them soon then both sides are going to blame each other and a full out war will break out.
Tadase: Or the tribes could work together to find them
Utau: Optimistic much?
Tadase: Pessimistic much?
Fine they say together.
Tadase: How should we search for them?
Utau: Well if they were still here then it would be easy
Tadase: Then where do you think they went to?
Utau: They are either in the past future or another dimension
Tadase: so I am guessing we are going to have to bargain with the time witch?
Utau: Most likely
Tadase: Can you summon the doors of dimensions yet?
Utau: yes but not for long
Tadase: good cause I can only to attacks
Utau: I specialize in healing and white magic
Tadase: Then I guess we make a good team
Utau: I guess I don't have to hate you we could be friends
Tadase: Friends might be better than trying to ill each other
Utau: Yeah...... wait did you hear that?
Tadase: already alert
Utau: no this isn't normal it is magic can't you sense it?
Tadase: yeah but where?
Utau closes her eyes and concentrates : ABOVE
She shouts just in time and they roll out of the way.
And a beautiful woman with pale skin and long purple black hair and violet eyes decends in a long purple dress
Utau: You are the witch of time
Witch: Yes but I prefer the name Ushio
Utau: What do you want? A private visit isn't exactly a present to be thrilled about
Ushio: Ahh on Alert already? Well see I have a problem daughter, (all magic uses are called daughters or sons because she created the worlds and dimensions), See your magic is quite strong, actually I gave you my blessings but You and my son are too smart, you see you figured out not only it wasn't an accident but also eliminated it down to 3 possiblitlites.
Tadase: Where have to taken them. Since you obviously just told us you were responsible I demand an explanation
Ushio: Son don't be soo assertive
Tadase steps in front of Utau
Ushio: aww protecting your fiancee?
Tadase and Utau scream at the same time : we ARE JUST FRIENDS!
Ushio: *shruggs her shoulders : too bad it has been a long time since I have had 2 tragic love stories at once.
Tadase and Utau: LOVE STORIES????
Utau then realizes something: Two? Do you mean there is another in the progress Ushio - san?
Ushio: *smiles amused, yes actually your siblings have quite a journey planned out
Utau: you won't hurt Ikuto
Ushio: *her eyes begin to glower: How do you know?
Tadase realizes what she is about to do draws out a pouch containing silver dew and black rain
Utau: Because, I declare under The law of peace, I sign an Alliance between the two tribes, marked her between he and I that we declare protection under the 13th article of the dimension proclamation. We Declare PROTECTION!
tadase blows the dew and rain and they circle around the three of them
Utau: Under that act it agrees if two enemy clans or tribes join to establish an alliance all unaware members shall be protected and not harmed, therfore the only ones you can harm are Tadase and I
Ushio laughs: I guess you and he have studied too well I came here with the intent to kill you but, you courage and knowledge intrigue me. I , Witch of times and Dimensions, grant you permission to enter my realm
Utau and Tadase scream as they are sucked into a black twirling hole under their feet
Ushio whispers: be careful your quest is what you decided and you are no longer under my protection but if you succeed you will save many more than those two
TADASE AND UTAU: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
Okay that gave you plenty to read
and not that big of a cliffy, I realize this may seem confusing now but it will all tie together. I hope you enjoyed and PLEASE COMMENT@ even if you hated it.
I think I like where this is going and I have rewritten the story many times but figured this out pretty well.
Hope you enjoy and if you don't understand something ask on this forum and I will answer it!!!!!!!

Yuuki ~ your amazing writer (jk)

Nana: Remember you fans
Lulu: Yuuki doesn't
Nana: Own Shugo Chara!
Lulu: hey yah know I could have sworn angel and yuuki were following us
Nana: but then they walked in with these EXTREMLY HOT GUYS!
Lulu: and Yuuki Start!#@#$!
Yuuki: ENOUGH!!!!!!


Yuuki: enjoy the fanfiction
ANGEL HELP ME CONTROL THEM PLEASE?????








meh:~ frozen ~.......... ......hehe^^.......wht am i helping u with.....hsha ...lol......^^ oh yeh since meh sis is dosent want to come on anymore i am letting lulu be meh chara ok ehhe^^ so it will be even more fun ahahha lol.....
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