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Okay (Fanfiction) The war between us.
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lol omg even more time to find cute guys right?
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lol omg even more time to find cute guys right?


suuuuuure ahaha lol
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Yuuki-chan? Are you still there?

It's been over a week..I'm worried

Update soon 'kay?
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YO GOOD CHAPTER....LOL ..... BUT I PREFER KUKAI AND UTAU .... (no offends) but it still depends on the author
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Yuuki-chan? Are you still there?

It's been over a week..I'm worried

Update soon 'kay?


yeh i agree with her......
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heyy! yuuki-chan~ i'll be waiting for your update okay? don't worry about the viewing with no comment thing, if they don't like it, it's their frikkin loss.. UPDATE KAY?
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Okay I will update tonight! I was in the hospital for a week............ hehe
I swear passing out 4 times in 1 day IS NOT A BIG DEAL.
okay mabey a little one...................................
But the next chapter will be up and THANK U COMMENTORS! AND SORRY IF I SCARED YOU!

BUT I GOT A NEW SKIRT! my bf sent me one cause she felt bad about me being stuck in the hospitall!!!!
Here is a pic! me in it! (I am wearing a top people!)
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Tadase and Utau: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
*WAM!
Tadase is rubbing his head while Utau is brushing off her skirt
Utau: who.. what?
Tadase: what are you talking about ? *then he looks around him
Tadase: Are all these doors to different dimensions?
Utau: I think so
Tadase: lets get started
?????: You have to pay the toll first
Utau snaps her head around and is about to glare at him but stops, wait her heart was only supposed to thump like this for IKUTO!

Amu: Geez you can put me down *blushing a bit
Ikuto: *teasingly maybe but then if u tripped I would have to kiss it to make it better
Amu: 0_0 on second thought please carry me, I honestly don’t understand why you would go through this for some one who u have just met
Ikuto: That someone also happens to be my fiancé
Amu: Ouch, I mean yeah
Ikuto: What?
Amu: nothing my head just hurts a little
Ikuto we are almost to the waterfall, and then you can rest.
Amu: *sigh I am starving
Ikuto: I know while you are resting I will be hunting
Amu: fine
Ikuto here we are
Amu looks out to see a beautiful, clear water fall, with cat tails and lilies, the water sparkling revealing a mirror of the sun.
Amu: wow it is so pretty
Ikuto yes now you rest while I go hunt.
Amu: okay with her eyes sparkling.
Ikuto’s thoughts

Damn how am I supposed to say anything with that gaze? DID YOU SEE HER EYES???? Ugh stupid vines *pushes them aside. Whoa, jackpot. Ikuto sees a banana tree and some grapes. He quickly grabs the fruit and heads back having a worried feeling.
Amu’s thoughts

Ahhhh, I don’t want to rest now, the water might make me feel better, and since Ikuto that damn pervert won’t be back for awhile I don’t have anything to worry about. Ugh bras are annoying I though as I slipped my clothes off and jumped in the water. I let my hair down and floated. This feels great I thought. I started diving and swimming I was so enchanted by the fish I lost track of time. I was half way out of the water when I heard a noise. I whipped my head around and then blushed head to toe. And Sreached: IKUTO U PERVERT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hehe I thought this might be better than the shower scene! ^_^
Any guesses on who ??????? is?, first one to get it right gets a prize!
But once again cliffies!

~Nana: yuuki doesn’t own shugo chara
~Lulu: what happened to my lines?
~Nana: I don’t like sharing
~Lulu: you should share!
~Nana: then could u share that black sparkely top you wore yesterday.

Yuuki: pfttt LOL
Angel: hahaha omg LOL hehe
Yuuki: ahh man maybe we should share too
Angel: sounds awesome, speaking of sharing wanan go back to the café?
Yuuki: sure
Angel: then can I drive?
Yuuki: I would share almost anything with you, but my life and life insurance is a no no
Angel: it was ur fault for no giving directions
Yuuki: *mumbles lowly or mabey urs for going 30 over the speed limit
Angel: Say something?
Yuuki: Nothin!
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Posted 5/20/09
OOOHH!! LET ME GUESS~~~ XD XD

IT'S KUUKAI, RIGHT?!!? PLEASE TELL ME IT~~!! XD XD

I'M VERY HYPER RIGHT NOW~!! SORRY!! XD XD

IT WAS SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER THAT IT MADE ME HYPER!! XD XD

LOOOOOL XD XD
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Okay I will update tonight! I was in the hospital for a week............ hehe
I swear passing out 4 times in 1 day IS NOT A BIG DEAL.
okay mabey a little one...................................
But the next chapter will be up and THANK U COMMENTORS! AND SORRY IF I SCARED YOU!

BUT I GOT A NEW SKIRT! my bf sent me one cause she felt bad about me being stuck in the hospitall!!!!
Here is a pic! me in it! (I am wearing a top people!)


waaah?!?! I hope you're ok now!!

you made me worried

take care of yourself~

P.S. Very nice skirt!!

P.P.S. You better hide it. I might go there and steal it. (just kidding)
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animefangirl4ever wrote:

Okay I will update tonight! I was in the hospital for a week............ hehe
I swear passing out 4 times in 1 day IS NOT A BIG DEAL.
okay mabey a little one...................................
But the next chapter will be up and THANK U COMMENTORS! AND SORRY IF I SCARED YOU!

BUT I GOT A NEW SKIRT! my bf sent me one cause she felt bad about me being stuck in the hospitall!!!!
Here is a pic! me in it! (I am wearing a top people!)


oh WEALLLY I HOPE U OOOOKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK LOL hehe^^
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I SAY ITS...........................................I DONT KNOW AHAHA LOL...WAIT....HB UTAU OR YAYA AHHAHAH LOOOOOL U GOTTA TELL MEH AND LOL UR coping on what i am saying i da thingy like LOL hehe but u missed da ^^ lol,,...,, ok i am driving wooooohooooooooo ~gets in da car and drives 10000000000 if there even is ahahhaha lol~wooooohoooooo dis is fun hahah lol
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Oh My God! Why did you pass out 4 times in one day! I can't blame them for taking you to the hospital! Take better care of yourself from now on kay! Anyway, rant over. I loved that new chapter!(reminded me of a naruto episode! (Hinata was dancing in the waterfall and naruto came along ) ) And GOD DANG IT! That's a good cliffhanger *bows* I am not worthy! I am not worthy!

P.S. That- skirt- is- AWSOME!!!!
hehehe sorry sugar rush! *bounces of the walls*
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And I am so sorry that I didnt comment for a LONG time! Homework, Birthday, Family stuff, Tests , My fanfic, Being banned from the computer, Crunchyroll was not working for me for about a week and lots of other stuff kinda got in the way! But I will comment more.....but I have the memory of a goldfish.......a DUMB goldfish..................so if I do forget then please forgive me!
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Okay peoplez I hope to upload tomorrow!
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