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{fanfiction} a continued story...
Posted 4/28/09 , edited 5/6/09
hi all!!

ok im kinda nervous cuz this is the first time im updating anything....well whatever, i was really disappointed with the ending of the anime, so i continued my own story!! THIS IS PURELY FANFICTION, AND ALL ORIGINAL!!

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for some reason none of my options seem to be working and i cant open a spoiler. so im going t post the first chap insted of the summary.


CHAPTER 1
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Posted 4/28/09
Someday soon... you're gonna be a successor to Matsuri Hino. I believe you should update your very interesting story.
Posted 4/28/09
whoa thats one BIG compliment!! u should read my story before u decide, (though i am known to be dramatic!)

ill update saturday morning if the hw load is light!!
Posted 5/4/09 , edited 5/7/09
sorry!! i was gonna update by saturday!! but my icons arent working!!! i dunno why!!

ill try to sort it out ASAP

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chap 1 is up!! PLEASE comment!!
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Posted 5/8/09
Wow! The beginning of your story is amazing! I'm looking forward the next! Plz, continue...
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Posted 5/9/09
Your storyline is okay...
Posted 5/10/09
As a fanfiction, it needed to be more descriptive, but well done with the ideas and plot, I kinda find the switching point of view part interesting, but people can get confused easily if they didn't know notice that.

Practice makes perfect, keep it up!
Posted 5/10/09
thank you everyone for your views!!
i will try to update as sooon as i can......also from next time the fanfic might have a slightly more refined writing style( i was hasty when i wrote chapter 1!!)

see u soon!
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Posted 5/19/09
this is great!!!
i love your plot!!! its definitely one of a kind!!!
Posted 5/27/09
yo people!!! me again!! and im bringing u the next bit of the story ^_^

chapter 2


hope you enjoyed the new chapter!! please comment with your views!! the more readers there are, the more incentive i have to update sooner!!

see you soon! ^_^
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Posted 5/27/09
4 stars for you, flame. Great job on your story.
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Posted 5/30/09
Wow! This cap is great!!!!! I love it! I'm looking forward the next!!! =)
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Posted 5/31/09
all i can say is.....get this story published and you'll give matsuri hino a run for her money!!!!
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Posted 6/12/09
awesome story!!!it's really good!!looking forward for more!!!.......continue the good work!!
Posted 6/18/09
hiya!! 149 views and only 13 comments?? *tsk tsk*

well dont worry about it! even if my readers are few, ill still update!! (because thats the kind of person i am!)
right, where were we??ah...

CHAPTER 3



thats all for now!! the excitment begins in the next chapter!! ill try to make it longer!!
read and comment!!
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