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Posted 6/24/09 , edited 6/24/09

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Oh I love number five. That would be awesome. That wouold also be a huge weakness of Lelouch if his enemy had that type of power. Like someone acting as his mom. He probably can't imagine killing his own mom. Or if he had alies who had the power to be as the dead, that would more than likely be a big advantage for him cause he can kill his future most powerful enemy's then have one of his own fill in as him and kill the other enemies. Or use him to get the goods on what the other enemies are planning so Lelouch can find a way to counter it and kill him. ooooooooooo I really hope one of his own has that type of ablity and not the enemy. That would be so awesome!!!! But more than likely the bad guys would have that ability.

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OOOOOOOOOOOO Wat happens next?????? This sounds really good. You even have a number episode on it lol. I told you that you should create the new sequel


Woah.... Even I didn't think that far for number five. But, yeah, its probably within the ranks of the enemy. It doesn't seem like a skill a gd guy who would wanna live with this 'curse', unless of course, Lelouch becomes the unwilling antagonist like he was last time... So total Awesome..

Ermmm... the next part is supposed to be episode 10( I only gave you the last part of episode 9), but I haven't written it yet... Still thinking of better ideas. For now, its up to you to come up with your own interesting twist and tale... thats the fun of story making. It lets you play wif your imagination (While saying the word, imagine two hands going down in a circle, forming a rainbow! LOL!).
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Hmmm...Lelouch of all people having that ablity? Yeah that'd be cool. With a wicked mind like his, who knows what he'd do with that power.

LOL I actually did the rainbow thing while saying Imagination. haha. I'm not good with story making!!!! You have to write it out for me cuz I really wanna know. Did you write out episode 1-9 yet? if you did you HAVE to tell me what happens!!
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Hmmm...Lelouch of all people having that ablity? Yeah that'd be cool. With a wicked mind like his, who knows what he'd do with that power.

LOL I actually did the rainbow thing while saying Imagination. haha. I'm not good with story making!!!! You have to write it out for me cuz I really wanna know. Did you write out episode 1-9 yet? if you did you HAVE to tell me what happens!!


It is kinda cool if lelouch did have that ability. But its way more likely that its for the bad guy... That ability is quite sinister if you think about it.

A bit of randomness in this post: Rainbows are fun.

Hmm...As for the self-written 'episodes', it'll take some time for me to type it out cause its all on paper ( I like to write instead of typing it out, its fun....). But even if I do type it out, I won't post it on a forum ( learnt my lesson sometime back with a different anime, on a diff web site.... got criticised like nuts!!!). If you want it, I'll send it thru mail when I'm done typing.


A little excerpt of episode 10...( I finally had an idea!)
from the START!

"Live on my king....live on." ( This is part of the story... not the title...)



The night was plagued with distant claps of thunder. When Lelouch came to, he realised that he was looking into a beautiful starry sky. A starry sky he once shared with Nunnally and once more with his beloved C.C . And then it dawned upon him...

"Where am I? .... Why do I still remember who I am?"

He thought very hard for an answer. However, before he could come to a conclusion, he smelt the putrid stench of blood. Quickly, he looked around and ended staring back at the garments that covered his physique. Or rather...

"WHY ARE MY CLOTHES COVERED IN BLOOD?!"

He sprung up in shock. He had been unconscious ever since Charles had used his geass on him in C's world. But for some strange reason, he was somewhere else, retaining the memories which were supposedly stolen from him. So many questions filled his thoughts in a brief moment, but he couldn't answer any one of them. Until he realised where he was...

" The temperate climate, vegetation, smell of cherry blossoms, it can't be....."

-----------( cut scene)------

... I'll continue some other time. You definitely should know where he is now....
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Summoner_sheena wrote:

Hmmm...Lelouch of all people having that ablity? Yeah that'd be cool. With a wicked mind like his, who knows what he'd do with that power.

LOL I actually did the rainbow thing while saying Imagination. haha. I'm not good with story making!!!! You have to write it out for me cuz I really wanna know. Did you write out episode 1-9 yet? if you did you HAVE to tell me what happens!!


It is kinda cool if lelouch did have that ability. But its way more likely that its for the bad guy... That ability is quite sinister if you think about it.

A bit of randomness in this post: Rainbows are fun.

Hmm...As for the self-written 'episodes', it'll take some time for me to type it out cause its all on paper ( I like to write instead of typing it out, its fun....). But even if I do type it out, I won't post it on a forum ( learnt my lesson sometime back with a different anime, on a diff web site.... got criticised like nuts!!!). If you want it, I'll send it thru mail when I'm done typing.


A little excerpt of episode 10...( I finally had an idea!)
from the START!

"Live on my king....live on." ( This is part of the story... not the title...)



The night was plagued with distant claps of thunder. When Lelouch came to, he realised that he was looking into a beautiful starry sky. A starry sky he once shared with Nunnally and once more with his beloved C.C . And then it dawned upon him...

"Where am I? .... Why do I still remember who I am?"

He thought very hard for an answer. However, before he could come to a conclusion, he smelt the putrid stench of blood. Quickly, he looked around and ended staring back at the garments that covered his physique. Or rather...

"WHY ARE MY CLOTHES COVERED IN BLOOD?!"

He sprung up in shock. He had been unconscious ever since Charles had used his geass on him in C's world. But for some strange reason, he was somewhere else, retaining the memories which were supposedly stolen from him. So many questions filled his thoughts in a brief moment, but he couldn't answer any one of them. Until he realised where he was...

" The temperate climate, vegetation, smell of cherry blossoms, it can't be....."

-----------( cut scene)------

... I'll continue some other time. You definitely should know where he is now....



Yeah. Bad guys always got the good stuff...

Haha you're so random.

I won't criticize you. I'm nice Besides, its more than likely better than anything I could do.

You know that you're your worst critic


Oh wow. You had to keep cutting me off at the good parts. It seems like I'm reading a real manga but with no pictures. ^^ You're really good to me

Yeah I knows where he is. The question is...how did he get there? hee-hee
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Yeah. Bad guys always got the good stuff...

Haha you're so random.

I won't criticize you. I'm nice Besides, its more than likely better than anything I could do.

You know that you're your worst critic


Oh wow. You had to keep cutting me off at the good parts. It seems like I'm reading a real manga but with no pictures. ^^ You're really good to me

Yeah I knows where he is. The question is...how did he get there? hee-hee


Randomness always keeps life interesting. It spices up one's day. Just imagine a life in which everyone uniformly does the same boring thing over and over again...Now THAT is just pure evil.

haiz, and the good always has to work around the bad guy's cool and awesome powers. And for some reason, they almost always do!

Hmmm.... its not you I'm worried abt for criticism. Its some others who read my posts and tend to ridicule my ideas without giving their own way to improve it. Thats what I despise and why I don't place my work on the internet.

And Lol, manga always likes to keep their readers in suspense. In my case, its the same thing.
Heh, I don't think I'm really treating you gd...keeping you in the dark all the time.. heh-heh!

.... But here's another part of 'episode' 10 as a token of my gratitude.

(Continued from cut-scene)

" Find him!" Charles screamed his order." Find that ungrateful ingrate of a son!!! I won't let him get away that easily!"

"Yes, your Highness! All hail Britannia!" And his loyal servants scrambled in all directions in their search for lelouch.

Gem, who still stood next to Charles, asked "Forgive me for asking your highness, but why do you wish for his survival? After all, he did destroy you and your plans at the final stage of ragnarok. I awaited for your orders to silence the boy before he could stop you in C's world, but you ordered me against it. Why?" She was quite perplexed ever since that day, the day she saw her master die . She had bore witness from the shadows just in time to see her master, who still had an ace up his sleeve, disintegrate into the very particles that made C's world.

The emperor gave a big sigh. He didn't want to lie, it was against his morals, his whole reason for living. He didn't want to reveal his plans to the person he trusted the most, other than...

"Marianne, has she been retrieved as well?" Charles asked anxiously, but quickly masking any form of unnecessary expression.

Gem had immediately seemed to grow less excited of the conversation, "Yes, your highness. However, unlike your holiness, she.."

"She what?"

" She was the 1st to be brought back. However,...." She became very cautious of what she said.

"However what?" said Charles impatiently.

"We had a bit of an accident when we tried to do so."

"WHAT!? What happened to her?" His impatience started to turn into frustration.

Just then, a servant girl walked into the chamber. "Master, your feast has been prepared for..."

"I DON'T CARE ABOUT MY FEAST! LEAVE ME!"

"Y-Y-Ye-e-Yes your majesty!" The black-haired britannian servant girl quickly got up and ran out the chamber. Gem did not all too pleased at all.

-----(cut-scene)-----


Yet again, I've run out of time.... Sayonara til then.

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Summoner_sheena wrote:

Yeah. Bad guys always got the good stuff...

Haha you're so random.

I won't criticize you. I'm nice Besides, its more than likely better than anything I could do.

You know that you're your worst critic


Oh wow. You had to keep cutting me off at the good parts. It seems like I'm reading a real manga but with no pictures. ^^ You're really good to me

Yeah I knows where he is. The question is...how did he get there? hee-hee


Randomness always keeps life interesting. It spices up one's day. Just imagine a life in which everyone uniformly does the same boring thing over and over again...Now THAT is just pure evil.

haiz, and the good always has to work around the bad guy's cool and awesome powers. And for some reason, they almost always do!

Hmmm.... its not you I'm worried abt for criticism. Its some others who read my posts and tend to ridicule my ideas without giving their own way to improve it. Thats what I despise and why I don't place my work on the internet.

And Lol, manga always likes to keep their readers in suspense. In my case, its the same thing.
Heh, I don't think I'm really treating you gd...keeping you in the dark all the time.. heh-heh!

.... But here's another part of 'episode' 10 as a token of my gratitude.

(Continued from cut-scene)

" Find him!" Charles screamed his order." Find that ungrateful ingrate of a son!!! I won't let him get away that easily!"

"Yes, your Highness! All hail Britannia!" And his loyal servants scrambled in all directions in their search for lelouch.

Gem, who still stood next to Charles, asked "Forgive me for asking your highness, but why do you wish for his survival? After all, he did destroy you and your plans at the final stage of ragnarok. I awaited for your orders to silence the boy before he could stop you in C's world, but you ordered me against it. Why?" She was quite perplexed ever since that day, the day she saw her master die . She had bore witness from the shadows just in time to see her master, who still had an ace up his sleeve, disintegrate into the very particles that made C's world.

The emperor gave a big sigh. He didn't want to lie, it was against his morals, his whole reason for living. He didn't want to reveal his plans to the person he trusted the most, other than...

"Marianne, has she been retrieved as well?" Charles asked anxiously, but quickly masking any form of unnecessary expression.

Gem had immediately seemed to grow less excited of the conversation, "Yes, your highness. However, unlike your holiness, she.."

"She what?"

" She was the 1st to be brought back. However,...." She became very cautious of what she said.

"However what?" said Charles impatiently.

"We had a bit of an accident when we tried to do so."

"WHAT!? What happened to her?" His impatience started to turn into frustration.

Just then, a servant girl walked into the chamber. "Master, your feast has been prepared for..."

"I DON'T CARE ABOUT MY FEAST! LEAVE ME!"

"Y-Y-Ye-e-Yes your majesty!" The black-haired britannian servant girl quickly got up and ran out the chamber. Gem did not all too pleased at all.

-----(cut-scene)-----


Yet again, I've run out of time.... Sayonara til then.



NO YOU'RE NOT TREATING ME GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO MARIANNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't think of anything random to say?

I like the way you did that though. You switched it from a scene that I really wanted to see and went on to other scene with more suspence. Its just like Manga AND the soap shows on tv. hahaha

I like ramen noodles!!!!

Just been alittle random

O yeah whos the Gem guy. I forgot

What happens next? GO BACK TO LELOUCH!!!!!!!

hee-hee.

I'm a ninja

I been wanting to do that for a while now.

Poor servant girl. Getting yelled at like that. I can imagine whats she's going through.

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NO YOU'RE NOT TREATING ME GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO MARIANNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't think of anything random to say?

I like the way you did that though. You switched it from a scene that I really wanted to see and went on to other scene with more suspence. Its just like Manga AND the soap shows on tv. hahaha

I like ramen noodles!!!!

Just been alittle random

O yeah whos the Gem guy. I forgot

What happens next? GO BACK TO LELOUCH!!!!!!!

hee-hee.

I'm a ninja

I been wanting to do that for a while now.

Poor servant girl. Getting yelled at like that. I can imagine whats she's going through.



Awww.... And I thought you couldn't be random. Anime is meant to be enjoyed bit by bit...
So I give it to you BIT BY BIT!!!

Gem is a new character in my version of CG3. Gemillia Granger.
She is supposed to be a notorious mass murderer who is known to have killed high-ranking officials for no reason, cause she is seen to have no gain in killing them (shown and explained a few episodes b4....). Nothing was known about her until episode 9.
As you know from episode 9, it was revealed that she was loyal to Charles and under that eye-patch of hers was a geass power to bring the dead back to life, but the disadvantages of the geass has not been said ....yet.

And while you wait for me to type the previous episodes ( I'll take forever btw...), here is another part of episode 10....

Right after a random comment....and commercial breaks.

Here's one, no... two ninjas .... but wait? wasn't that 3?
No! The 1st one didn't count, he forgot to wear his pants!

Lol... that was a random splurt of randomness...

And here's....

Another ninja!

I've been so good to you that I feel I must add fillers to the show now! HaHa!



Just kidding!

(continued from episode 10 cut-scene 2)

" This can't be ..... is this really... Japan?"

Lelouch scanned his surroundings and felt quite nostalgic. It seemed like it had been a millennium since he came back to Japan, the place where he sacrificed everything to end the world of hate. Everything in the world left him, except for....

BOOM!

However, not long after , he heard an explosion not too distant from him accompanied by sounds of gunfire. And whatever made that sound was approaching fast.
Lelouch quickly hid himself in some nearby bushes and waited for the squad to pass by.

"You men, search there! The rest of you come with me!" said the squad leader.

"Yes, my lord! ALL HAIL BRITANNIA!"

He quickly rushed to top of a nearby hill, making sure no one had followed him. He was shocked to see what awaited below.

"Wait, that crest? The Britannian army?....Why is Britannia here? Japan doesn't belong to Britannia anymore? Why is...? " Lelouch thought hard. "It can't be.... The Emperor has already taken over Britannia!? They're searching for me!? "
"No, highly unlikely. The people would not believe that a man would still exist from a century ago and besides he still has no political standing in the new world except with terrorists. But..."

"FREEZE! Hands behind your head, you terrorist!!"

A Britannian soldier had snuck behind Lelouch. Lelouch defiantly responded " I'm not a terrorist!!"

"THEN WHY ARE YOU COVERED IN BLOOD! DON'T LIE YOU FILTH!"

Lelouch felt insulted and turned around to face the guard, only for the soldier to raise his gun to Lelouch's forehead. As the guard was about to open fire,

"Lelouch vi Britannia commands you to...!"

However, before he could finish the order, something slid down the soldier's face, covering the entire face.

"OH NO! It's shielding his eyes! GEASS WON'T WORK NOW!" Lelouch couldn't think of any other way to escape from this finale. "Will this be my finally awaited end? Alone?

"You, YOU!!!!....DIE YOU FILTHY GEASS USER!"

BANG! A gun sounded.

---Episode end----

One of the shortest episodes I made!
Oh well, enjoy this for now... For I have run out of ideas again. It'll take me a while to continue this...





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lord_chaos_doom wrote:


Summoner_sheena wrote:

NO YOU'RE NOT TREATING ME GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENED TO MARIANNE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't think of anything random to say?

I like the way you did that though. You switched it from a scene that I really wanted to see and went on to other scene with more suspence. Its just like Manga AND the soap shows on tv. hahaha

I like ramen noodles!!!!

Just been alittle random

O yeah whos the Gem guy. I forgot

What happens next? GO BACK TO LELOUCH!!!!!!!

hee-hee.

I'm a ninja

I been wanting to do that for a while now.

Poor servant girl. Getting yelled at like that. I can imagine whats she's going through.



Awww.... And I thought you couldn't be random. Anime is meant to be enjoyed bit by bit...
So I give it to you BIT BY BIT!!!

Gem is a new character in my version of CG3. Gemillia Granger.
She is supposed to be a notorious mass murderer who is known to have killed high-ranking officials for no reason, cause she is seen to have no gain in killing them (shown and explained a few episodes b4....). Nothing was known about her until episode 9.
As you know from episode 9, it was revealed that she was loyal to Charles and under that eye-patch of hers was a geass power to bring the dead back to life, but the disadvantages of the geass has not been said ....yet.

And while you wait for me to type the previous episodes ( I'll take forever btw...), here is another part of episode 10....

Right after a random comment....and commercial breaks.

Here's one, no... two ninjas .... but wait? wasn't that 3?
No! The 1st one didn't count, he forgot to wear his pants!

Lol... that was a random splurt of randomness...

And here's....

Another ninja!

I've been so good to you that I feel I must add fillers to the show now! HaHa!



Just kidding!

(continued from episode 10 cut-scene 2)

" This can't be ..... is this really... Japan?"

Lelouch scanned his surroundings and felt quite nostalgic. It seemed like it had been a millennium since he came back to Japan, the place where he sacrificed everything to end the world of hate. Everything in the world left him, except for....

BOOM!

However, not long after , he heard an explosion not too distant from him accompanied by sounds of gunfire. And whatever made that sound was approaching fast.
Lelouch quickly hid himself in some nearby bushes and waited for the squad to pass by.

"You men, search there! The rest of you come with me!" said the squad leader.

"Yes, my lord! ALL HAIL BRITANNIA!"

He quickly rushed to top of a nearby hill, making sure no one had followed him. He was shocked to see what awaited below.

"Wait, that crest? The Britannian army?....Why is Britannia here? Japan doesn't belong to Britannia anymore? Why is...? " Lelouch thought hard. "It can't be.... The Emperor has already taken over Britannia!? They're searching for me!? "
"No, highly unlikely. The people would not believe that a man would still exist from a century ago and besides he still has no political standing in the new world except with terrorists. But..."

"FREEZE! Hands behind your head, you terrorist!!"

A Britannian soldier had snuck behind Lelouch. Lelouch defiantly responded " I'm not a terrorist!!"

"THEN WHY ARE YOU COVERED IN BLOOD! DON'T LIE YOU FILTH!"

Lelouch felt insulted and turned around to face the guard, only for the soldier to raise his gun to Lelouch's forehead. As the guard was about to open fire,

"Lelouch vi Britannia commands you to...!"

However, before he could finish the order, something slid down the soldier's face, covering the entire face.

"OH NO! It's shielding his eyes! GEASS WON'T WORK NOW!" Lelouch couldn't think of any other way to escape from this finale. "Will this be my finally awaited end? Alone?

"You, YOU!!!!....DIE YOU FILTHY GEASS USER!"

BANG! A gun sounded.

---Episode end----

One of the shortest episodes I made!
Oh well, enjoy this for now... For I have run out of ideas again. It'll take me a while to continue this...









ARGH I don't like it like the reall anime. GIVE IT ALL TO ME!!!!

Nice new Gem character. I wish you would tell me her ablity already You always gotta make me wait for stuff. If I gave u a cookie would you tell me????

HAHA that made me laugh. You have fillers, random comments, commercial breaks, and -to be continues- thats not fair!!!! Its like a real anime show.



Yes. very short but yet very gowd!!!! Keep thinking these things up. I love all your ideas.
You can't leave me hanging again!!!!!!

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The reason he choose to "die" was because of their plan
As you all know "Zero Requiem", where he puts everyone's anger and frustration upon him and he will drag it down for everyone's sake. If he can do that, as what Kallen says at the very end, the world is at peace because of that. Their wouldn't be a chance for him to just become their Emperor because at the moment he stood out as a Tyrant.
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The second, and final season, is out on Anime Fever, it's called Code Geas R2.

SPOILER

I don't get why Lulouch has to sacrifice himself in the end to creat this "new world", why coundn't he just settle for being the empror of Braitnia.

Anyway, I hope there will be other volums of Code Geass, where C.C. gives someone else the power of geass, and create a new Anime/magna series. Code Geass is way too short for how good it is.


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ARGH I don't like it like the reall anime. GIVE IT ALL TO ME!!!!

Nice new Gem character. I wish you would tell me her ablity already You always gotta make me wait for stuff. If I gave u a cookie would you tell me????

HAHA that made me laugh. You have fillers, random comments, commercial breaks, and -to be continues- thats not fair!!!! Its like a real anime show.

Yes. very short but yet very gowd!!!! Keep thinking these things up. I love all your ideas.
You can't leave me hanging again!!!!!!



Hmmmm..... Well,if its any consolation, I don't like the way real anime works either. But somehow, it keeps the thrill and suspense goin for all. Since it seems to be doin its magic (You seemed sadistically enthu for every bit! YIKES!), I shall continue releasing it in BITS!

But unfortunately, I need to get the brain juices following and think of newer ideas that won't tarnish our memories of geass as well. So expect the next one to come out in.....


The Distant FUTURE!

*Looks stunned but can't see thru the mask*


Oh, a cookie, you say? What flavour would it be? How big would it be?

And would it be accompanied with a nice cup of tea? In a nice seaside resort with a great view of the ocean and its different shades of blue?

It depends I guess....

I would tell you everything about the show without thinking...


But then, I would have not thought about the entire series, and the entire thing would ruined and maybe even be flushed down the toilet!

Anyways, the only thing I can assure you is that there are more new characters coming up (dispensable and indispensable alike!)

Well, keep Laughing hard, it keeps you alive!

Hmmm... And If I'm right the true CG will come out around these few months! (cause 2009's summer season is around this time and sunrise said if CG has something, its coming out in summer 09)

*cross fingers*
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ARGH I don't like it like the reall anime. GIVE IT ALL TO ME!!!!

Nice new Gem character. I wish you would tell me her ablity already You always gotta make me wait for stuff. If I gave u a cookie would you tell me????

HAHA that made me laugh. You have fillers, random comments, commercial breaks, and -to be continues- thats not fair!!!! Its like a real anime show.



Yes. very short but yet very gowd!!!! Keep thinking these things up. I love all your ideas.
You can't leave me hanging again!!!!!!



hmm... I'm Back!.... With fresh new ideas (that AREN'T RIPPED OFF FROM SOME OTHER FAN FIC! ~~~~~I have no idea why i said that! )

But from today , I'll just be slowly starting to rewrite the 1st 8 episodes and the remaining part of the 9th. ( In view of how corny it looked like when compared to other Fan fic) For those who have read my stuff before episode 9..... ITS A DIFFERENT VERSION from the earlier one! DON'T DISMISS IT ON SIGHT! (do notice that the time frame has been shifted for all episodes I intend to shift episodes 10 onwards to the same timeframe as well.... However, the storyline is the same)

***Prologue***** ( Oooo... It feels like the movie is about to start!...Imagine C.C. giving the intro)

The year is 2038. It has been 20 years since the death of the 99th Emperor of Britannia. In the eyes of the world, it was the death of tyranny and end to the seemingly endless cycle of hatred. Peace has reigned over the world under the rule of Empress Nunnally vi Britannia alongside the world's greatest hero, Zero. A Peace that was brought about by the very Emperor all but a few have forgotten.

****Episode 1 - Introductions*****

*Switch*

" Always drink Isotonic 100! The Best...!!"

*Switch*

"We are now watching "Famous Triumphs of Zero"...."

*Switch*

Newscaster: "We will bring you live to the grand opening ceremony of the World Age of Reconstruction centre. The 100th Empress Nunnally vi Britannia while arrive shortly to start off the ceremony. The opening of the World Age of Reconstruction centre in Japan, a project personally initiated by the Empress, will symbolise the Empress's dreams and aspirations of the everlasting peace across the globe. It is to symbolise her will to change the world to solve all of the world's issues such as famine, terrorism, and the end of research pertaining to weapons of mass destruction. Also,...... Wait, it seems that something's approaching the ceremonial venue with a knightmare frame! Jimmy, get a close up on that thing!"

A violet knightmare frame which bore energy wings appeared from the bright, sunny skies. It wore the Britannian coat of arms on its head. It held a gold lance in one hand and in the other was a fully grown woman, a beautiful brunette.

Newscaster: "Unbelievable, what a spectacular entrance by none other than the 100th Empress Nunnally vi Britannia, sitting in the hands of a modified gloucester!! Simply astounding!! And wait, the cockpit of the gloucester is opening....Its none other than...!!!"

The crowds at the ceremony went wild! They all started chanting...

"ALL HAIL BRITANNIA! ALL HAIL THE EMPRESS!! ALL HAIL ZERO!!....zero!!zero!! ZERO!! ZERO!! ZERO!!"

"Isn't this great Suzaku. Everyone seems so happy!" shouted Nunnally to the pilot of the Gloucester as the winds blew through her dazzling hair .

"Yes it definitely is!" Suzaku replied " By the way, how did you figure out it was me who was Zero all these years?"

"Oh Suzaku, don't ruin the moment!" But the question did take its toll on her.

"Fine fine, your highness!" Suzaku responded playfully.

"Suzaku, I told you not to refer to me as that. We're..."

Suddenly, both legs of the Gloucester exploded and fell off! The crowds below were stunned.

"AHH! What was that, Suzaku!?" Nunnally panicked.

"Wait Nunnally, something seems to be wrong. Wait there while I check." Suzaku responded with an unusual calm. Nunnally was still shocked, but noticed Suzaku's tone.

Before she could ask, a number of rockets streamed upwards from the detached-legged parts. Nunnally didn't notice and thought they were being attacked and screamed. The rockets however, just whizzed by, and blew up high above the Knightmare into different colours and spectacular shapes.

"April Fools Nunnally!" Suzaku shouted and burst into laughter "They're fireworks for the festival.... That's for putting itching powder in my costume a few days back!"

Nunnally looked at Suzaku, relieved it wasn't an attack but irritated due to the prank. But Nunnally didn't mind when she saw the cheerful expressions of the people below her. She giggled at the thought of Zero scratching himself silly while trying one of his speeches.

As the gloucester landed, Zero escorted his wheel-chair bound Empress through the massive crowd of reporters. Zero held Nunnally's soft hand at the right-arm of the chair as they made their way to the pedestal. She smiled to herself but silently wished that her brother could be here with her.

"People of Britannia, the 100th Empress of the Holy Britannian Empire, Nunnally vi Britannia wishes to address the audience." One of her guards announced and escorted Nunnally to the pedestal.

"Thank you, Elric. I am here today to announce the opening World Age of Reconstruction centre, the hope and dreams of people across the globe for the creation of a much brighter future. However, we must first acknowledge the events that have led us to this new era of peace and tranquility. From our dark past, we learn that we must not fight one another for it only causes pain,death and sorrow. It does not end the cycle of hate but fuels it further. Therefore, we must not fight or cause one to hate for no reason. At the present, we stand united shoulder to shoulder, be it Britannian, Japanese,Chinese or any other nationality. We see each other as not different entities but one giant entity capable of achieving anything! And the future is what is symbolised the World Age of Reconstruction centre, the one of the world's greatest feats thought to be impossible to create. Let us commence the opening ceremony of not only the centre, but our future as a united world."

Newscaster: "Empress Nunnally will now cut the symbolic ribbon to indicate the start of the ceremony."

"Initiate Operation 031....Prepare for Phase 1."

Nunnally approached the ribbon and was handed a pair of scissors. The crowd counted in anticipation.

"5....4....3....2...1...!"

*Snip* The ribbon was cut. Suddenly,....

*BOOM!* BOOM!* .... Multiple explosions were heard! But where?

And then, "Look up! World Age of Reconstruction centre.... It collapsing!"

" Phase 1 start! Move out !"

" For the One true Messiah!!"

At least 4 to 5 Knightmares emerged from the sky and started shooting at the crowds. The crowds were thrown into a panic as they tried to flee the seen.

"Here Empress Nunnally, lets leave. " Zero said. Nunnally could not stop him from saving her. She wanted to make sure everyone was alright but she seemed to have no choice. Zero carried her off somewhere else, somewhere nearby...

"Those things the terrorists are using looks like old greyish Glasglows" Zero thought. For now, he would have to escort Nunnally to safety He could not reach the gloucester that was on the other side of the terrorist Knightmares. He could not help to stop the falling pieces of the World Age of Reconstruction centre from destroying Tokyo. He felt so helpless... " Why would they resort to such terrorism ....?"

"Lord Zero, there's a transmission coming from an unknown source. Its being broadcasted across the globe and we can't stop the transmission!"

"Greetings people of Britannia, and especially you Empress Nunnally..." Nunnally was shocked to hear her name called by the woman with an eye-patch over her right eye. " I am Lord Gemilia Granger, a defender of Justice! And Justice calls upon the destruction of all that is corrupt and evil. No doubt, the World Age of Reconstruction centre would have be the symbol of the people's power united as one! However, it would be only fake symbolism as its construction was also tainted by corruption within the governments across the globe who have sinned heavily to attain their power and status. Realize that nothing has changed over the past 20 years. Famine and poverty, war and terrorism, all still exist across the globe! The false peace obtained for the past 20 years has been a ruse to cover up a Britannian plot to rule this world with an iron fist! As such, Justice has called for the destruction of the World Age of Reconstruction centre and the death of all the sinful politicians of this world!..."

"Liars! Even if you believed that, you didn't need to involve the thousands of lives who died today!" Suzaku shouted angrily at the screen.

"Starting today, the Order of the Giulio Exquisite Aria Secret Society, will eliminate the corrupt politicians who created this false peace. Since Empress Nunnally has cowered in fear for her life, I'll just have to kill another in her place. Bring forth the filthy rat!"

A woman with purple hair was brought out on screen, gagged and wearing a stray jacket.

"No!....It can't be... !" Nunnally shouted.

"As you can see, this wretched politician is none other than Princess Cornelia vi Britannia. Don't worry, I make pay for sins. It will be as painful as the sins she carried. If you didn't sin at all, it would be as painless and you would be free to go." She smiled.

"MMMM!!MMM!!!" struggled Cornelia on worldwide television.

Slowly Gemilia's men injected in some purple coloured liquid into Cornelia's wrist. At that moment, she was ungagged and forced down onto a chair facing the camera.

She writhed in agony, trying to be strong and not break in front of television. As she fought on, her past memories slowly encompassed her. The faces of the people she murdered in the past appeared. It was as if she could feel their pain of being shot, over and over again.
The sorrow they felt, being unable to see their families ever again... All coursed through her mind and body.

Finally, "I'm sorry!....I'm sorry for causing all those deaths...."She broke down. Cornelia started crying in pain and the sorrow she felt. After a short while, she slowly lost conciousness to the horrors she witnessed.

"CORNELIA!!!!" Nunnally screamed, tears rolling endlessly down her cheeks.

" Ta-ta!"
*The monitors Switched off*

"All is going according to plan." Gemilia said to her associates. "If this continues on, we would have no problems achieving our next objective."

"Pardon me for asking, my Lord. But what is our next priority on the agenda?" one of her associates asked.

"Is it to capture another of the royal family? Or is it...?"

"Relax, Oscillus. Everything will reveal itself in due time." Gemilia replied. " For now, let us just have some fun with the chaos we've caused. Its seldom that the greatest nation in the world would be effectively leaderless."

" Rest well, my friends. Your deaths will not be in vain." Gemilia thought as she looked at a picture filled with children.

"For I am the messiah to lead the world to the dawn of a New Era! "

~~To be continued~~~

****1st episode end****

I'm going a little of style by showing the entire episode in one shot... But, the 1st episode doesn't work in parts... Oh well.

I wonder how episode 2 is gonna work out?... ... The prologue to the next episode is in this post!


***Prologue*****

The year is 2038. Peace has reigned over the world under the rule of Empress Nunnally vi Britannia alongside the world's greatest hero, Zero. A Peace that was brought about by the very Emperor all but a few have forgotten.

However, all good things must come to a close. As time wanes, the world creates an evil to bring the world to an equilibrium. And it would be from the sins of man that this evil would have come to arise.

**************



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ARGH I don't like it like the reall anime. GIVE IT ALL TO ME!!!!

Nice new Gem character. I wish you would tell me her ablity already You always gotta make me wait for stuff. If I gave u a cookie would you tell me????

HAHA that made me laugh. You have fillers, random comments, commercial breaks, and -to be continues- thats not fair!!!! Its like a real anime show.



Yes. very short but yet very gowd!!!! Keep thinking these things up. I love all your ideas.
You can't leave me hanging again!!!!!!



hmm... I'm Back!.... With fresh new ideas (that AREN'T RIPPED OFF FROM SOME OTHER FAN FIC! ~~~~~I have no idea why i said that! )

But from today , I'll just be slowly starting to rewrite the 1st 8 episodes and the remaining part of the 9th. ( In view of how corny it looked like when compared to other Fan fic) For those who have read my stuff before episode 9..... ITS A DIFFERENT VERSION from the earlier one! DON'T DISMISS IT ON SIGHT! (do notice that the time frame has been shifted for all episodes I intend to shift episodes 10 onwards to the same timeframe as well.... However, the storyline is the same)

***Prologue***** ( Oooo... It feels like the movie is about to start!...Imagine C.C. giving the intro)

The year is 2038. It has been 20 years since the death of the 99th Emperor of Britannia. In the eyes of the world, it was the death of tyranny and end to the seemingly endless cycle of hatred. Peace has reigned over the world under the rule of Empress Nunnally vi Britannia alongside the world's greatest hero, Zero. A Peace that was brought about by the very Emperor all but a few have forgotten.

****Episode 1 - Introductions*****

*Switch*

" Always drink Isotonic 100! The Best...!!"

*Switch*

"We are now watching "Famous Triumphs of Zero"...."

*Switch*

Newscaster: "We will bring you live to the grand opening ceremony of the World Age of Reconstruction centre. The 100th Empress Nunnally vi Britannia while arrive shortly to start off the ceremony. The opening of the World Age of Reconstruction centre in Japan, a project personally initiated by the Empress, will symbolise the Empress's dreams and aspirations of the everlasting peace across the globe. It is to symbolise her will to change the world to solve all of the world's issues such as famine, terrorism, and the end of research pertaining to weapons of mass destruction. Also,...... Wait, it seems that something's approaching the ceremonial venue with a knightmare frame! Jimmy, get a close up on that thing!"

A violet knightmare frame which bore energy wings appeared from the bright, sunny skies. It wore the Britannian coat of arms on its head. It held a gold lance in one hand and in the other was a fully grown woman, a beautiful brunette.

Newscaster: "Unbelievable, what a spectacular entrance by none other than the 100th Empress Nunnally vi Britannia, sitting in the hands of a modified gloucester!! Simply astounding!! And wait, the cockpit of the gloucester is opening....Its none other than...!!!"

The crowds at the ceremony went wild! They all started chanting...

"ALL HAIL BRITANNIA! ALL HAIL THE EMPRESS!! ALL HAIL ZERO!!....zero!!zero!! ZERO!! ZERO!! ZERO!!"

"Isn't this great Suzaku. Everyone seems so happy!" shouted Nunnally to the pilot of the Gloucester as the winds blew through her dazzling hair .

"Yes it definitely is!" Suzaku replied " By the way, how did you figure out it was me who was Zero all these years?"

"Oh Suzaku, don't ruin the moment!" But the question did take its toll on her.

"Fine fine, your highness!" Suzaku responded playfully.

"Suzaku, I told you not to refer to me as that. We're..."

Suddenly, both legs of the Gloucester exploded and fell off! The crowds below were stunned.

"AHH! What was that, Suzaku!?" Nunnally panicked.

"Wait Nunnally, something seems to be wrong. Wait there while I check." Suzaku responded with an unusual calm. Nunnally was still shocked, but noticed Suzaku's tone.

Before she could ask, a number of rockets streamed upwards from the detached-legged parts. Nunnally didn't notice and thought they were being attacked and screamed. The rockets however, just whizzed by, and blew up high above the Knightmare into different colours and spectacular shapes.

"April Fools Nunnally!" Suzaku shouted and burst into laughter "They're fireworks for the festival.... That's for putting itching powder in my costume a few days back!"

Nunnally looked at Suzaku, relieved it wasn't an attack but irritated due to the prank. But Nunnally didn't mind when she saw the cheerful expressions of the people below her. She giggled at the thought of Zero scratching himself silly while trying one of his speeches.

As the gloucester landed, Zero escorted his wheel-chair bound Empress through the massive crowd of reporters. Zero held Nunnally's soft hand at the right-arm of the chair as they made their way to the pedestal. She smiled to herself but silently wished that her brother could be here with her.

"People of Britannia, the 100th Empress of the Holy Britannian Empire, Nunnally vi Britannia wishes to address the audience." One of her guards announced and escorted Nunnally to the pedestal.

"Thank you, Elric. I am here today to announce the opening World Age of Reconstruction centre, the hope and dreams of people across the globe for the creation of a much brighter future. However, we must first acknowledge the events that have led us to this new era of peace and tranquility. From our dark past, we learn that we must not fight one another for it only causes pain,death and sorrow. It does not end the cycle of hate but fuels it further. Therefore, we must not fight or cause one to hate for no reason. At the present, we stand united shoulder to shoulder, be it Britannian, Japanese,Chinese or any other nationality. We see each other as not different entities but one giant entity capable of achieving anything! And the future is what is symbolised the World Age of Reconstruction centre, the one of the world's greatest feats thought to be impossible to create. Let us commence the opening ceremony of not only the centre, but our future as a united world."

Newscaster: "Empress Nunnally will now cut the symbolic ribbon to indicate the start of the ceremony."

"Initiate Operation 031....Prepare for Phase 1."

Nunnally approached the ribbon and was handed a pair of scissors. The crowd counted in anticipation.

"5....4....3....2...1...!"

*Snip* The ribbon was cut. Suddenly,....

*BOOM!* BOOM!* .... Multiple explosions were heard! But where?

And then, "Look up! World Age of Reconstruction centre.... It collapsing!"

" Phase 1 start! Move out !"

" For the One true Messiah!!"

At least 4 to 5 Knightmares emerged from the sky and started shooting at the crowds. The crowds were thrown into a panic as they tried to flee the seen.

"Here Empress Nunnally, lets leave. " Zero said. Nunnally could not stop him from saving her. She wanted to make sure everyone was alright but she seemed to have no choice. Zero carried her off somewhere else, somewhere nearby...

"Those things the terrorists are using looks like old greyish Glasglows" Zero thought. For now, he would have to escort Nunnally to safety He could not reach the gloucester that was on the other side of the terrorist Knightmares. He could not help to stop the falling pieces of the World Age of Reconstruction centre from destroying Tokyo. He felt so helpless... " Why would they resort to such terrorism ....?"

"Lord Zero, there's a transmission coming from an unknown source. Its being broadcasted across the globe and we can't stop the transmission!"

"Greetings people of Britannia, and especially you Empress Nunnally..." Nunnally was shocked to hear her name called by the woman with an eye-patch over her right eye. " I am Lord Gemilia Granger, a defender of Justice! And Justice calls upon the destruction of all that is corrupt and evil. No doubt, the World Age of Reconstruction centre would have be the symbol of the people's power united as one! However, it would be only fake symbolism as its construction was also tainted by corruption within the governments across the globe who have sinned heavily to attain their power and status. Realize that nothing has changed over the past 20 years. Famine and poverty, war and terrorism, all still exist across the globe! The false peace obtained for the past 20 years has been a ruse to cover up a Britannian plot to rule this world with an iron fist! As such, Justice has called for the destruction of the World Age of Reconstruction centre and the death of all the sinful politicians of this world!..."

"Liars! Even if you believed that, you didn't need to involve the thousands of lives who died today!" Suzaku shouted angrily at the screen.

"Starting today, the Order of the Giulio Exquisite Aria Secret Society, will eliminate the corrupt politicians who created this false peace. Since Empress Nunnally has cowered in fear for her life, I'll just have to kill another in her place. Bring forth the filthy rat!"

A woman with purple hair was brought out on screen, gagged and wearing a stray jacket.

"No!....It can't be... !" Nunnally shouted.

"As you can see, this wretched politician is none other than Princess Cornelia vi Britannia. Don't worry, I make pay for sins. It will be as painful as the sins she carried. If you didn't sin at all, it would be as painless and you would be free to go." She smiled.

"MMMM!!MMM!!!" struggled Cornelia on worldwide television.

Slowly Gemilia's men injected in some purple coloured liquid into Cornelia's wrist. At that moment, she was ungagged and forced down onto a chair facing the camera.

She writhed in agony, trying to be strong and not break in front of television. As she fought on, her past memories slowly encompassed her. The faces of the people she murdered in the past appeared. It was as if she could feel their pain of being shot, over and over again.
The sorrow they felt, being unable to see their families ever again... All coursed through her mind and body.

Finally, "I'm sorry!....I'm sorry for causing all those deaths...."She broke down. Cornelia started crying in pain and the sorrow she felt. After a short while, she slowly lost conciousness to the horrors she witnessed.

"CORNELIA!!!!" Nunnally screamed, tears rolling endlessly down her cheeks.

" Ta-ta!"
*The monitors Switched off*

"All is going according to plan." Gemilia said to her associates. "If this continues on, we would have no problems achieving our next objective."

"Pardon me for asking, my Lord. But what is our next priority on the agenda?" one of her associates asked.

"Is it to capture another of the royal family? Or is it...?"

"Relax, Oscillus. Everything will reveal itself in due time." Gemilia replied. " For now, let us just have some fun with the chaos we've caused. Its seldom that the greatest nation in the world would be effectively leaderless."

" Rest well, my friends. Your deaths will not be in vain." Gemilia thought as she looked at a picture filled with children.

"For I am the messiah to lead the world to the dawn of a New Era! "

~~To be continued~~~

****1st episode end****

I'm going a little of style by showing the entire episode in one shot... But, the 1st episode doesn't work in parts... Oh well.

I wonder how episode 2 is gonna work out?... ... The prologue to the next episode is in this post!


***Prologue*****

The year is 2038. Peace has reigned over the world under the rule of Empress Nunnally vi Britannia alongside the world's greatest hero, Zero. A Peace that was brought about by the very Emperor all but a few have forgotten.

However, all good things must come to a close. As time wanes, the world creates an evil to bring the world to an equilibrium. And it would be from the sins of man that this evil would have come to arise.

**************






Oh so this is episode 1 huh? Nice!!!!!!!!!! I like it. You are extremely good at makin up this stuff. I wish I could do that. This was really gowd You have such a great sense of imagination and creativity and that makes it really seem like I'm reading the actual series. When I read it I can picture the whole show which is awesome! lol.

Yeah I like the prologues. Its just like the anime.

You need to write more!!!
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HaHa....
I just hope sunrise does a better job than I do.

But, you can make up a nice story too if you wanted to. Just try it! Its fun.

Man, I wish I could put up episode 2 sooner, but I realised I just left an entire portion of the plot in ep2 blank!!

Will release by nxt week!


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So in ep 12... is Nina doing what I think she's doing with that magazine of Euphemia?
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