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Hello guys!
Here is a place where we can create a story plot
and have fun
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Rules:
1-make sure your story follows the one on top of you
2-make your story as long as mine (the second post) or longer than that
3-the main charaters here are


Miko Chioas - Main Charater
Sani Hanais- Miko's best friend
Sano Vio- a boy from their class
Right now they are all in 5th grade going to 6th

4-make sure to check this post, since it may change or edit since more charater will come in place.......

EDITED:
Kaito La Pointa - Miko's first love in 1st grade, but soon moved
Niki - Miko's oldest sister
Kiyo - Miko's brother (2nd oldest)
Sandi - Miko's sister (3rd oldest)
Nole - the "strange boy" (to Sano), the "beautiful boy" (to Miko)

more and more charaters are coming in....^^
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THE RULES ARE SIMPLE, YOU JUST COUNTINUE MY STORY! ^^
MAKE SURE TO MAKE IS AS LONG AS MINE! ^^
OR LONGER! ^^
GOOD LUCK AND HAVE FUN!


On a bright sunny day a girl with a white dress and blond hair walks out of Creation Elementry School
"Ah! Thank god! Today is the last day of school! Finally summer is here!" she shouted happliy
"Miko! Wait up!" shouted a girl with a blue dress and long dark hair.
"Geez Sani, your always this slow, how are you going to catch a boyfriend?" Miko joked around
Suddenly Miko was beening pulled by Sano, while a whole gang of classmate followed
"What's your problem? Is it that your upsad about the fact we are not gonna see each other for few month?" smerked Miko
"O-of course not! I would rather care about Sani than you!" as he blushed
"Whatever, well the bus is here, see yaz! Have a great summer you guys" Miko waves as she drag Sani up the bus.

"Sani, what's your problem? If you like Sano, you should have told him! "
"But then......everyone in the school knows that he likes you...."
"Oh come on, it's just a rumor, believe me....."
"You guys seem so close everytime tho"
"We are best friends since we were little, so that couldn't be helped....we are more like siblings than friends..."
"Really?" she smiled and countinued " Maybe I will confess next year! Ayy...." as she blushed
(NOTE:: THEY ARE IN 5TH GRADE)


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*Saturday*
*morning, at 6: 00 a.m.*
RING!!!!!!
Drowsily, Sani got up and picked up the phone.
"Hello?" sani mumbled.
"Hey sani!!!!" miko greeted. "Want to go shopping with me today?"
sani looked at the clock and groaned.
"Awwww, come one!!! it'll be fun!!! what happen to your spirit?"
"Miko.... it's barely 6:00!!!!"
"so?"
"sooooo..... that means i'm still sleeping!!!"
"hm..... what about this. we are going to shopping so YOU can catch Sano's attention?"
*sani nearly choked*
"hm? what do you say?" miko cooed.
"................ ok, you won me" sani was now full awake.
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*Saturday*
*morning, at 6: 00 a.m.*
RING!!!!!!
Drowsily, Sani got up and picked up the phone.
"Hello?" sani mumbled.
"Hey sani!!!!" miko greeted. "Want to go shopping with me today?"
sani looked at the clock and groaned.
"Awwww, come one!!! it'll be fun!!! what happen to your spirit?"
"Miko.... it's barely 6:00!!!!"
"so?"
"sooooo..... that means i'm still sleeping!!!"
"hm..... what about this. we are going to shopping so YOU can catch Sano's attention?"
*sani nearly choked*
"hm? what do you say?" miko cooed.
"................ ok, you won me" sani was now full awake.


"So where do we meet?" wondered Sani
"Um...how about the train station next to that BBQ place?" recommanded Miko
"kayy! see you then! bye!"
"byE!" as they hanged up
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
soon miko decided to call Sano to see what he's up to
ring ring ring
"ah....h..hello?" replied Sano half asleep
"oh Sano! Are you avaliable to go shopping today?"
"sure......."
"oh come on, normall you should be more energetic than me!"
"IT'S 6 O'CLOCK! WHO DO YOU EXPECT TO BE ENERGETIC THIS EARLY!?!?!?" SHOTED SANO
"oh there, see! your energy is back!! Well, let's meet up at the train statino near that BBQ place! bye~" as she hanged up happliy
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Humm what should i wear so i can get miko's attetion?" as he tries on varieties of clothing
and on the other side, Sani was doing the same thing but try to impress Sano
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
*at the train station*
"geez! they are both late!!! but thats what makes them a good couple~" Miko thought

"ahhh! i am lat----" Sani shouted and bump into a boy
"ahh, i am so sorr---" as she glare up and saw sano
"hi sani! i see tht your late too!"
"yea, pretty much, i thought i was going to be the last one! but i am glad" as she blushed
and they started to walk towards miko
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"hurry up you two!!!" miko impatiently pushed them into the mall.
*for the next few mintues, they walked around in the mall, until miko started*
"oohhhhh!!!!! wow!!!! a new perfume is being sold. can you guys give me a moment please? i won't take long," miko waved and ran off. She smiled when she walked into a perfume store thinking, "Good luck Sani. it's all up to you now."

meanwhile..........

Sani and Sano were standing by the balcony of the mall.
"um... uno..." sani began and blushed. She peaked at sano and blushed even more when sano returned her look. "um..... do you like shopping?" what is she saying?!!! couldn't she have started a better topic than shopping?!!!!! sani cursed herself for being so foolish. however, sano just shrugged and said. "it's not so bad."
"really?!" sani bursted, but quickly redeemed herself and blushed once again. "i ..... i mean that's cool."
"yeah, i guess."
sani closed her eyes and prayed for a topic.

meanwhile............

what is she doing?!!!! miko thought as she peaked through the window to get a better view of them. in all the things she have to say she had to mention shopping. this is not going as she had hoped. Miko thought that she must do something about this, she must get them started.
"Sheesh, " she said to herself softly, "it takes one person, one friend to start a lover's relationship
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"hurry up you two!!!" miko impatiently pushed them into the mall.
*for the next few mintues, they walked around in the mall, until miko started*
"oohhhhh!!!!! wow!!!! a new perfume is being sold. can you guys give me a moment please? i won't take long," miko waved and ran off. She smiled when she walked into a perfume store thinking, "Good luck Sani. it's all up to you now."

meanwhile..........

Sani and Sano were standing by the balcony of the mall.
"um... uno..." sani began and blushed. She peaked at sano and blushed even more when sano returned her look. "um..... do you like shopping?" what is she saying?!!! couldn't she have started a better topic than shopping?!!!!! sani cursed herself for being so foolish. however, sano just shrugged and said. "it's not so bad."
"really?!" sani bursted, but quickly redeemed herself and blushed once again. "i ..... i mean that's cool."
"yeah, i guess."
sani closed her eyes and prayed for a topic.

meanwhile............

what is she doing?!!!! miko thought as she peaked through the window to get a better view of them. in all the things she have to say she had to mention shopping. this is not going as she had hoped. Miko thought that she must do something about this, she must get them started.
"Sheesh, " she said to herself softly, "it takes one person, one friend to start a lover's relationship


Suddenly as she was peaking, she bumped into the manager and they both felt
the broken glass scattered as Miko started to bleed
"Ahhhh~~~" shouted Miko

without second thought Sano ran into the store and saw her hurt,
"Miko!" Sano lifted her up and carried her to the nearest first aid and told Sani to go home first.

While they are in the first aid center
"You dont have to stay her you know? You can---owwww" as the nurse pulls the glass out one by one and put on medication
"Miko, no matter what happens, i wont leave you behind, i dont feel secure when your still hurt."
"But----oww!!!"
"i will go get you some drinks to cool you off, wait here , i will be back soon!" suddenly Sano dash off.

Soon the Miko's cell phone rang
"hello hello?"
"ummm....Miko?"
"Sani! where are----oww!!!"
"oh, are you ok....i am pretty worried about you"
"its fine, Sano went to get me some drinks..."
"yea, Sano....." Miko realized Sani's tone changed and hurry changed the subject
"so, do you have any plans for your birthday next week?"
"Oh! That's right....umm....i was thinking about going to the pool."
"but you dont know how to swim that well...you might---"
"I WILL LEARN! I..I WANT SANO TO SEE ME IN SWIMMING SUIT!!!" miko was surprised that Sani actually speak up for her self for once.
"haha, talking to you sure make me lighter! " both started to laugh
"oh miko, someone's calling, i will talk to you later then..."
"kay...bye!" as they hanged up

A cold pair of hand suddenly covered Miko's eyes
"Guess who,"
"=.=" the ugliest guy on earth!!!!"
"oh come on, at least i got you some drinks..." handing the drink to Miko
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Airlock_Hua wrote:

"hurry up you two!!!" miko impatiently pushed them into the mall.
*for the next few mintues, they walked around in the mall, until miko started*
"oohhhhh!!!!! wow!!!! a new perfume is being sold. can you guys give me a moment please? i won't take long," miko waved and ran off. She smiled when she walked into a perfume store thinking, "Good luck Sani. it's all up to you now."

meanwhile..........

Sani and Sano were standing by the balcony of the mall.
"um... uno..." sani began and blushed. She peaked at sano and blushed even more when sano returned her look. "um..... do you like shopping?" what is she saying?!!! couldn't she have started a better topic than shopping?!!!!! sani cursed herself for being so foolish. however, sano just shrugged and said. "it's not so bad."
"really?!" sani bursted, but quickly redeemed herself and blushed once again. "i ..... i mean that's cool."
"yeah, i guess."
sani closed her eyes and prayed for a topic.

meanwhile............

what is she doing?!!!! miko thought as she peaked through the window to get a better view of them. in all the things she have to say she had to mention shopping. this is not going as she had hoped. Miko thought that she must do something about this, she must get them started.
"Sheesh, " she said to herself softly, "it takes one person, one friend to start a lover's relationship


Suddenly as she was peaking, she bumped into the manager and they both felt
the broken glass scattered as Miko started to bleed
"Ahhhh~~~" shouted Miko

without second thought Sano ran into the store and saw her hurt,
"Miko!" Sano lifted her up and carried her to the nearest first aid and told Sani to go home first.

While they are in the first aid center
"You dont have to stay her you know? You can---owwww" as the nurse pulls the glass out one by one and put on medication
"Miko, no matter what happens, i wont leave you behind, i dont feel secure when your still hurt."
"But----oww!!!"
"i will go get you some drinks to cool you off, wait here , i will be back soon!" suddenly Sano dash off.

Soon the Miko's cell phone rang
"hello hello?"
"ummm....Miko?"
"Sani! where are----oww!!!"
"oh, are you ok....i am pretty worried about you"
"its fine, Sano went to get me some drinks..."
"yea, Sano....." Miko realized Sani's tone changed and hurry changed the subject
"so, do you have any plans for your birthday next week?"
"Oh! That's right....umm....i was thinking about going to the pool."
"but you dont know how to swim that well...you might---"
"I WILL LEARN! I..I WANT SANO TO SEE ME IN SWIMMING SUIT!!!" miko was surprised that Sani actually speak up for her self for once.
"haha, talking to you sure make me lighter! " both started to laugh
"oh miko, someone's calling, i will talk to you later then..."
"kay...bye!" as they hanged up

A cold pair of hand suddenly covered Miko's eyes
"Guess who,"
"=.=" the ugliest guy on earth!!!!"
"oh come on, at least i got you some drinks..." handing the drink to Miko


While Miko is drinking Sano asked
"Miko, if one day, just one day, i confess to you, would you accept me?" blushed Sano
"Why, why so sudden?" thought Miko
"i Dont know......but we are best friends right? and forever best buddies right?" Miko forced a smile even tho its hard
"I want us to be more than best friends, i......i like you Miko...." as they both blushed
Miko's heart pounded hard, "Sano, i....i dont know about my own feelings for you....--"
"Its alright, if we are still friends, but i will make you realize how much i love you and how painful i am without you..."
"Sano......"Miko knew she shouldn't hav said stuff like that to hurt Sano in the first place but yet its for their own good.
"and plus, Sani likes Sano, i can't just take him away, i would feel horrible...." thought Miko
few minutes of slince.....
"ok, its all done, when you get home make sure to use this medicine" the nurse gave her a bag with medicines and its instruction.

"well, Sano, i guess this is it, and please dont tell others that...you confessed to me already..."
"i...i wont , if that makes you happy, then i wont"
Miko blushed more and knew if they dont apart, she's going to break....
Then suddenly Miko felt the warmth of wide arms around her wase
"San---"
"Shhhh, let this be our last hug until your decision"
Miko knew better, so she hugged him for a while
"hey Sano, lets pretend nothing happened today, and live our life like the way it is ok?" as the tears were about to come out... she countinued "and Sani's birthday party is coming up soon, so we deicde to meet next week saturaday at the city pool...see you then.."
as soon as she finished her last word, she ran with tears falling off
"what does this mean? i mean he belongs to sani, not me....i souldn't cry, its it because i knew i broke his heart? what is this strange feelig inside me...why do i feel like brust a bunch of tears out?" Miko thought about it while running with tears.

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While Miko is drinking Sano asked
"Miko, if one day, just one day, i confess to you, would you accept me?" blushed Sano
"Why, why so sudden?" thought Miko
"i Dont know......but we are best friends right? and forever best buddies right?" Miko forced a smile even tho its hard
"I want us to be more than best friends, i......i like you Miko...." as they both blushed
Miko's heart pounded hard, "Sano, i....i dont know about my own feelings for you....--"
"Its alright, if we are still friends, but i will make you realize how much i love you and how painful i am without you..."
"Sano......"Miko knew she shouldn't hav said stuff like that to hurt Sano in the first place but yet its for their own good.
"and plus, Sani likes Sano, i can't just take him away, i would feel horrible...." thought Miko
few minutes of slince.....
"ok, its all done, when you get home make sure to use this medicine" the nurse gave her a bag with medicines and its instruction.

"well, Sano, i guess this is it, and please dont tell others that...you confessed to me already..."
"i...i wont , if that makes you happy, then i wont"
Miko blushed more and knew if they dont apart, she's going to break....
Then suddenly Miko felt the warmth of wide arms around her wase
"San---"
"Shhhh, let this be our last hug until your decision"
Miko knew better, so she hugged him for a while
"hey Sano, lets pretend nothing happened today, and live our life like the way it is ok?" as the tears were about to come out... she countinued "and Sani's birthday party is coming up soon, so we deicde to meet next week saturaday at the city pool...see you then.."
as soon as she finished her last word, she ran with tears falling off
"what does this mean? i mean he belongs to sani, not me....i souldn't cry, its it because i knew i broke his heart? what is this strange feelig inside me...why do i feel like brust a bunch of tears out?" Miko thought about it while running with tears.



Right after Miko avrrive home, she heard the phone rang and hurried to pick it up
"hello hello?"
"umm....Miko, so did you tell Sano yet?"
"Sani? is that you?" as Miko wiped her tears out
"yea, what happened? i heard sniffing..."
"oh...i think i caught ....a cold..."
"wel...hope you feel better.....by the way...did you tell sano yet? about the party?"
"yea, i did......"
"oh yay! what kind of swimming suit should i wear for him...? help me...i can't decide!!!"
"sure.....tell me the choices.."
"well....i got a pokeadotted one, a stripe one, a plain one, one with cartoons, and lots more....help me!!!"
" ....................."
suddenely Miko remembered something from her childhood,
Miko's POV
It was during the swimming class in 1st grade
everyone in my class wear swimming suits with lots of designs
i was the only one that was wearing a plain blue swimming suit
most of the boys were laughing at me, half of the girls were laughing too
but soon a boy came up and said
"WHAT IS SO BAD ABOUT PLAIN? YOU WANNA SEE SOMETHING PLAIN? LOOK, THE POOL WE SWIM IN ITS SO PLAIN TOO! I DONT SEE YOU GUYS COMPAINING TO THE MAYOR!!!! SO SHUT UP!"
the most quite boy in the class that all boys look up to and all girls loved
Sano Richoido,
Out of everyone, he decided to save me, from then on everyone became to like me
saying that i have a good sense of fashion...
all thanks to Sano
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"hello? Miko, are you still there?"
"oh...sorry, what were you saying?"
"i was saying ... which swimming suit should i wear?"
"why dont you wear a plain one then?"
"noooo! Miko....if you dont have a sense of fashion,,,then you wouldn't become attractive..."
"well....suit yourself then...i am gonna go...bye" Miko hanged up and lay on her bed.
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Miko, laying on her bed, cried for the second time...

Dream......

"Miko..... how could you..." cried sani. Miko desperately tried to comfort her, but sani pushed her away. "GO AWAY FROM ME!!!
Of all the people, I just had to ask YOU to help me, but I guess i was wrong about you!!!!! You were probably pretending to help me
so YOU can WIN OVER Sano!!!!" and ran off crying.
Miko gasped. I was..... pretending? Did i really did that for myself? She thought about this with wide eyes. Suddenly her background changed into
a blur. After a moment, the background calmed down and Miko found herself standing among a wide field, fulled with color and flowers.
Miko, absentminded, began to walk straight until she saw two small figures running around.
"Heyy!! Bet you can't catch me!!' the first child said.
"Oh yeah? Try me then!!" the second child replyed with a giggle.
Miko gasped. That was sani and herself when they were little, when all the problems in the world does not exsist in their lifes. When
the only thing that is important is each other's friendship......
"Hey miko!!" the little sani called, " I'm IT!!!"
the little miko laughed and ran off, but soon slipped, and found herself toppling over a small cliff. she heard a strange buzzing sound, then
a familiar voice.
"MIKO!!!!!........"
everything was blurry...... when suddenly, the little miko felt warm hands surrounding her
"Miko!! Miko!! can you hear me? Miko!! oh please oh please wake up," the little sani cried. "I... I can't live without you!!!"
suddenly, the present Miko, who was watching this, gasped.


"What have I done?"
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Miko, laying on her bed, cried for the second time...

Dream......

"Miko..... how could you..." cried sani. Miko desperately tried to comfort her, but sani pushed her away. "GO AWAY FROM ME!!!
Of all the people, I just had to ask YOU to help me, but I guess i was wrong about you!!!!! You were probably pretending to help me
so YOU can WIN OVER Sano!!!!" and ran off crying.
Miko gasped. I was..... pretending? Did i really did that for myself? She thought about this with wide eyes. Suddenly her background changed into
a blur. After a moment, the background calmed down and Miko found herself standing among a wide field, fulled with color and flowers.
Miko, absentminded, began to walk straight until she saw two small figures running around.
"Heyy!! Bet you can't catch me!!' the first child said.
"Oh yeah? Try me then!!" the second child replyed with a giggle.
Miko gasped. That was sani and herself when they were little, when all the problems in the world does not exsist in their lifes. When
the only thing that is important is each other's friendship......
"Hey miko!!" the little sani called, " I'm IT!!!"
the little miko laughed and ran off, but soon slipped, and found herself toppling over a small cliff. she heard a strange buzzing sound, then
a familiar voice.
"MIKO!!!!!........"
everything was blurry...... when suddenly, the little miko felt warm hands surrounding her
"Miko!! Miko!! can you hear me? Miko!! oh please oh please wake up," the little sani cried. "I... I can't live without you!!!"
suddenly, the present Miko, who was watching this, gasped.


"What have I done?"


***woke up***
Blinked few times and got up
"i am glad it was a dream.....but the problem isn't solved yet now is it..."
She checked the bookshelf for her year book in 1st grade
and looked thru all the picture and suddenly stopped at a page
on that page, it contains Miko,sani, Kaito, and Sano's group picture before Kaito moved.
"Kaito, he was my first love......"as teardrops falls onto the page

"SLEEPY HEAD! TIME FOR BREAKFAST!!!" a sound of a teenage boy shouted
"yea yea, whatever, i am coming.....stupid big headed brother..." miko replied
miko's parent are always busy with work, so miko have to eat with her two sisters and a brother.

"say miko, anything happened with you and that sano boy yet?" asked the oldest sister Sandi
"no-oo....what makes you guys think that, i mean were just best buddies..." miko started to stuff bread in her mouth
"we all know that sano liked you since 1st grade....its been 5 years...havent he confess?" the second oldest sister niki asked
"guy-ys....if he confessed....i would have tell you guys already, and plus, sani likes him...."miko replied with a suddeen depress tone
"love cant be forced, if he doesnt like her, than he doesnt, but for you its different....well...i gotta go shop with my girlfriend...see ya" replied kiyo the 2nd oldest in the family, her brother
"well, we better get going too....bye miko!" as sandi grabbed niki and left

"different huh?........"as she stare at the plates
soon she decided to start on her summer homework so she dont have to worry at the last moment...
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meanwhile...........

Sani was reading Inkheart. Getting tired, she threw the book to the floor
and reached out for her yearbook. Flipping through the page, she looked
at the picture of sano at the beach for a field trip. She sighed and threw the
yearbook to the floor. Stupid, stupid sani, she thought. How stupider can you
get?
She lay back down on her bed and thought over all that had happened at Saturday.
She remembered hearing and seeing the window crash. She saw Sano's pale face, thin
lips. He then ran over to miko, holding her as protective as a mother would protect her
child.......
what's this? sani placed her hand to her cheeks and felt a wet liquid. she quickly wiped it away
and sighed.
don't think about the negative, sani, think about the coming birthday party and maybe by
then, everything will be back to normal............
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meanwhile...........

Sani was reading Inkheart. Getting tired, she threw the book to the floor
and reached out for her yearbook. Flipping through the page, she looked
at the picture of sano at the beach for a field trip. She sighed and threw the
yearbook to the floor. Stupid, stupid sani, she thought. How stupider can you
get?
She lay back down on her bed and thought over all that had happened at Saturday.
She remembered hearing and seeing the window crash. She saw Sano's pale face, thin
lips. He then ran over to miko, holding her as protective as a mother would protect her
child.......
what's this? sani placed her hand to her cheeks and felt a wet liquid. she quickly wiped it away
and sighed.
don't think about the negative, sani, think about the coming birthday party and maybe by
then, everything will be back to normal............


(o.o you changed point of view....your not suppose to...unless you forget about "she thought")
**afternoon**
Miko knew that she might burn the kitchen, she she decided to go out and eat
As she walked by, she saw a boy like her age crying in the middle of the street
she knew better, she knew she shouldnt talk to him, but her kind hearted personallity never changes
Soon she pushed into the crowd and saw a beautiful blond hair boy,
it looked like someone she knew, but she couldnt remember who
She handed a tissue and said "boys arent suppose to cry, that's girl's job, now get up and be a boy!"
the boy lifted up his head, the boy's eyes were beautiful sea blue eyes,
Miko have never seen such a amazingly beutiful boy in her life,
its almost like if he puts on a wig, there would be millions of people gathering for engagment thought Miko
she started laughing hard imagining him as a girl

"why.....why out of everyone who watched me, your the one who stopped me from my pain?" ask the boy
"wha--a?i stopped you fro-om pain?" surprised Miko
"in my house, when i cry everyone would just ignore me and tell me that i belong on the street and kick me out till i stop crying, and others just watch me cry on the street like i was such a entertainment.....but you..."
"WHAT?!?! HOW CAN THEY DO SUCH A THING! ARE THEY REALLY YOUR FAMILY?" shouted miko and completely forgot she was in the public
soon she notice everyone was staring at her and grabbed the boy
"let's go eat lunch and talk while at it, i dont want to be a werido.." as she started to run...
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(hey, once and a while, it's good to change points of view because you need to know the other's side
to lift up the story)

Miko and the beautiful boy finally reached their destination, quickly bought their lunch, and found a place to sit.
"Please continue," Miko said as she took her first bite. The boy stared at his food and shook his head. Impatiently, Miko sighed.
"You're my guest, now eat it. Crying sucks out your energy."
the boy stared at the food again, picked it up delicately, and chewed.
"You see," the boy began, "my family.....er..... well, let's just say that I was adapted."
Miko narrowed her eyes. The boy continued.
"And... and... at first, they seemed to really love me. I was an orphan since i can remember. One day,
out of the blue, a couple came. We orphaner were told to line up and as they examine each one of us, they
decided to choose me."
The boy took a sip.
"It was the happiest thing that had ever happened to me and I thought for once, my life as found its purpose. After
since they took me in, they treated me like i was their own child. Life was perfect."
He breathed and shook his head.
"That's what i THOUGHT until few months later, i started school and everyone laughed and bullied me. I ran home
crying, hoping for my new parents to confort me. When i told them what happened, it is not pity or confort they gave me, it was
a look of disproval, disappointment, and frustration.
"My father said, "You're a boy. Boy do not cry, they fight back!!"
"I was shocked at what he said. At my orphan home, I was taught to never fight back because it wasn't a right thing to do, that fighting
was not the solution to anything, but to make a conflict worse."
The beautiful boy shivered. "I looked at my mother for support, but all she did was shrugged and mumured, "I have a bad taste."
"I then ran to my room, shut the door, and cried for the entire night. When i ran out of tears, i got up to go to the kitchen since i was thirsty.
On my way there, i past by my parent's room and i heard them talking. Leaning against the wall, this is what i heard......
Mom: We got ourselve a wrong child. I have never heard boys cry.
dad: It seem so. Well, now that we do have him, we may as well teach him a lesson and make him grow up
mom: He's just sooo sensitive. How can anything get into his head other than insults?
dad: You do know why we got him in the first place now do you?
mom: of course i do. we need a boy that will grow up and to take over your company. someone who is responsible and eager to do that. but
this boy.....
dad: Hush, it'll be alright
mom: oh if only I can have my own, dear child
dad: I know, honey, I know
mom: oh! it's all that wretch's boy fault!! When i first lay my eyes on him, i saw nothing in there, but thought to take a shot. now what are we going to do?
dad: we'll think of something

The boy sat there gloomily. Miko had stopped eating.
"WHAT!!!!" Miko banged the table. "ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT YOUR SO-CALL PARENTS ONLY GET YOU SO YOU CAN WORK FOR THEM?!!!! ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT THEY HAVE NEVER THOUGHT OF LOVING YOU, RAISING YOU, THINKING ABOUT STARTING A
FAMILY,?!!!!"
The boy's eyes grew wide.
"Noo!! That's not what i mean...."
"Then what DO you mean?" Miko went on.
"no...... they said take over their company...." the boy hesitated.
"ok, let me get this straight, " miko breathed. "either they are using you or you're just not telling the story right. there is a weird flaw in the story,
and it's not making sense!!!"
The boy said nothing
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(hey, once and a while, it's good to change points of view because you need to know the other's side
to lift up the story)

Miko and the beautiful boy finally reached their destination, quickly bought their lunch, and found a place to sit.
"Please continue," Miko said as she took her first bite. The boy stared at his food and shook his head. Impatiently, Miko sighed.
"You're my guest, now eat it. Crying sucks out your energy."
the boy stared at the food again, picked it up delicately, and chewed.
"You see," the boy began, "my family.....er..... well, let's just say that I was adapted."
Miko narrowed her eyes. The boy continued.
"And... and... at first, they seemed to really love me. I was an orphan since i can remember. One day,
out of the blue, a couple came. We orphaner were told to line up and as they examine each one of us, they
decided to choose me."
The boy took a sip.
"It was the happiest thing that had ever happened to me and I thought for once, my life as found its purpose. After
since they took me in, they treated me like i was their own child. Life was perfect."
He breathed and shook his head.
"That's what i THOUGHT until few months later, i started school and everyone laughed and bullied me. I ran home
crying, hoping for my new parents to confort me. When i told them what happened, it is not pity or confort they gave me, it was
a look of disproval, disappointment, and frustration.
"My father said, "You're a boy. Boy do not cry, they fight back!!"
"I was shocked at what he said. At my orphan home, I was taught to never fight back because it wasn't a right thing to do, that fighting
was not the solution to anything, but to make a conflict worse."
The beautiful boy shivered. "I looked at my mother for support, but all she did was shrugged and mumured, "I have a bad taste."
"I then ran to my room, shut the door, and cried for the entire night. When i ran out of tears, i got up to go to the kitchen since i was thirsty.
On my way there, i past by my parent's room and i heard them talking. Leaning against the wall, this is what i heard......
Mom: We got ourselve a wrong child. I have never heard boys cry.
dad: It seem so. Well, now that we do have him, we may as well teach him a lesson and make him grow up
mom: He's just sooo sensitive. How can anything get into his head other than insults?
dad: You do know why we got him in the first place now do you?
mom: of course i do. we need a boy that will grow up and to take over your company. someone who is responsible and eager to do that. but
this boy.....
dad: Hush, it'll be alright
mom: oh if only I can have my own, dear child
dad: I know, honey, I know
mom: oh! it's all that wretch's boy fault!! When i first lay my eyes on him, i saw nothing in there, but thought to take a shot. now what are we going to do?
dad: we'll think of something

The boy sat there gloomily. Miko had stopped eating.
"WHAT!!!!" Miko banged the table. "ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT YOUR SO-CALL PARENTS ONLY GET YOU SO YOU CAN WORK FOR THEM?!!!! ARE YOU TELLING ME THAT THEY HAVE NEVER THOUGHT OF LOVING YOU, RAISING YOU, THINKING ABOUT STARTING A
FAMILY,?!!!!"
The boy's eyes grew wide.
"Noo!! That's not what i mean...."
"Then what DO you mean?" Miko went on.
"no...... they said take over their company...." the boy hesitated.
"ok, let me get this straight, " miko breathed. "either they are using you or you're just not telling the story right. there is a weird flaw in the story,
and it's not making sense!!!"
The boy said nothing


"Ok, to began with, can you at least give me a name, i dont want to call you hey, or kid, or something like adopted boy...you know what i mean?"Miko said it impationly
"oh, my name is Nole, sorry about that.."
"ok, Nole, keep on going with your story, before i misunderstand again"
"well, my parent loved me, after they adopted me it was the greatest part of my life, i found the exit to the darkness i was trap in, but something happened..."
"what? what? WHAT?" as miko puts her food aside and jumped up and down
"umm....calm down first though, i dont want others to think we are werid..." he tries to pull her down
"oh sorry about that, " then she sat down looking around to see who's staring
"during me second year of being adopted, my mother finally had a child, we were all happy about that, but my grandma doesnt want to take any risk of having a daughter, because once there's a daughter in the family it brings bad luck to the house..."
"WHAT? oh sorry, i mean what? what bad luck? i am a daughter myself!!"miko's tone changed madly
"well, its different, because long ago there was a wizard, he was paid by the hater of my grand-grand........-grandpa to curse the family to never have daughters, if we do it would be end of our family, so everyone who have our blood in it will instendly die"
"wow....thats scary...." as her eyes opened wide and surprisingly
"and during one night my grandma used sissor to kill the baby, even though we dont know the gender nor the look, from then on my parent thinks its my falut that my grandma hated children..."as his face turn sad

***few hours of chatting***

suddenly as Sano passed by, he saw miko talking to a starnge boy or as he thought.
he was filled with jealousy,he knew he couldnt compare his beauty with that boy

Sano's P.O.V

Who in the world do he think he is, talking to Miko and laughing liek they actually enjoys it
The last time miko laughed with me was a year ago, i guess stuff really did happen around us,
humm...i wonder if there's a way to get in without her notice and eardrop...
~~~~~~~~~~~`
Soon sano went to the clothing store next door and bought sunglasses and stuff also went to get a hair cut,
now he have spiky cute hair with a cool glasses and wears those really popular clothing and knowing that no one would find out who he is and decided to go in
In the store, a lot of girls were staring at her like if they felt in love with him, but he doesnt seem to notice, after all he's main goal it to eardrop miko's conversation

"Hello sir, may i help you?" asked the waitor
"oh, can i sit on that table right there?" asked Sano
"umm, sure...and here's the menu" as the watior handed the manu with a gift for the store's grand opening




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"um.. thanx, can you come back later when i finish choosing my food?"
The waitor frown, but left. Instead of looking at the menu, he peeked over at miko and the stranger

"....... and the whole class just blew up!!" the stranger said and spread out his arm, with a silly grin on his face. Miko laughed.
"Woow! I never knew your volcano projects was THAT successful!" Miko said, while laughing. The stranger smiled and Sano did not
like the way the stranger was staring at Miko.
Feeling uncomfortable and irritated, he tried to move in a little closer.
"So then what happen?" Miko asked. The boy thought for a moment.
"Hm... well, and then the teacher, who was still in shock, fainted. The whole class was in a big uproar and you should've seen the looks on everyone's face!"
"Woooooooow, wish I have something that interesting happening at my school. *sighed* but sadly just the same old, same old." Miko said, then took a bite. She was barely halfway through her food.
Sano did not like this one bit, not at all. How can a stranger boy make her laugh so much? Why does he have to be the type for Miko?
Sano edged even closer to the table, but accidentally bump into a person walking by and slammed right on top of Miko's table.
"ooo....ahhh..."Sano groaned in pain. When he looked up, he saw Miko's face, only a reachable distance away......
"ahhh...."Miko said and she was surprised. "Are... are you ok?"
sano blushed and pushed himself off the table.
"Um... yeah...yeah, i guess so." he murmured, but regretted it.Now what? now that he had interferred them two, he may as well take this chance to steal miko away.
"You know, I heard that it isn't good for you to wear wet clothes, that it will make you sick. I brought an extra clothes, want to borrow them?" the stranger said.
"NOOO!!!" Sano bursted, but stopped. "I...i mean, no thanx..."
"But...."
"WHAT IS IT THAT YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND?!!" Sano bursted again. Now he was really mad and he doesn't even notice a crowd beginnnig to gather around them. The boy, dumbfounded and shock, got up, bowed, waved goody-bye to miko, and ran off.
"Serve him right." Sano mumbled and stopped. Miko, still sitting at her chair, had an angry look on her face.
"Oh shoot...."
Miko got up and slapped his face. Stunned, Sano reached out to his face and touched the red blob that was forming from the slap.
"WHAT WAS THAT FOR HUH?!!!! HE WAS KIND ENOUGH TO OFFER YOU AN EXTRA PAIR OF CLOTHES SO YOU WON'T LOOK LIKE AN IDIOT IN FRONT OF THE CROWD AND WHAT DID HE GET IN RETURN?!!!" Miko yelled. Sano smiled depressly.
"I guess you're right." Sano said, and walked off.
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