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uhmm....*inhale, exhale* uhmm.... this is my 1st fanfic here. uhmm...i'm really nervous while typing right now,
'coz.... i don't know!!! i'm just scared!!! i'm really pale right know!!! uhm...this is suppose to be my 2nd fic but ate chi said that i should post it, ASAP!!!! Well, this fanfic is inspired by a short story forwarded (on my cell phone) by my friend and I thought that the characters really suited her and her crush, Ryuutaro Morimoto. Hehe. I hope that you’ll enjoy my fanfic! ^_^

*I'm still an amateur when it comes to these kind of stuff, so it's still not that good, esp. my english!! this fic is
composed of 5 chaps. ^_^

Main Characters:

Ryuutaro Morimoto (in this fiction Ryuutaro will be an ordinary guy)
– 14 yrs. old
– A middle school student
– Cool, calm but kinda bashful

Chii Miyazaki (blood_15)
– 20 yrs. old
– An architecture student at Meiji University
– Friendly, energetic, and kind

Kei Inoo
– 19 yrs. old
– Schoolmate of Chii at Meiji Univ.
– Smart, funny and cool

Jin Yamagishi (k-pop)
– 17 yrs. old
– The hyperactive friend and roommate
of Chii who’s a big fan of YamaPi
– Energetic, cute and nice

Ayano Fujisawa
– 14 yrs. old
– Classmate and childhood friend of Ryuutaro
– Pretty, poised and soft-spoken


Legend:

Ryuutaro’s POV – Blue
Chii’s POV – Red
Flashback – Purple
The present & conversations – Green




Ate Chii, I wasn’t able to live up to your expectations so, gomenasai!! *bows* T_T Demo, I’ll work hard for the remaining chaps!! ^-^

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Oh you posted the new one already.
You should have wait for me to changed the title for you.
Hehe, but its okay.
Then we got no other option rather than.. lock the other one?
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CHIBI LUV
CHAPTER 1: First Encounter

A 3 year old boy asked me,
“Have you ever been in love?”
I said:
“Uhm... not really ‘coz I want
to find someone who’s
willing to love me ‘till
my last breath.”
He smiled and said:
“Then could you wait
for me, nee-chan?”


11 years ago, I saw a kid being bullied by 3 older kids in a carnival. Worried, I came up to his aid and helped him. Here’s what happened:

~~~~====++++****++++====~~~~
Flashback: Year 1998
@ the carnival

Ryuutaro: Yamete!!! Itai!! *crying*
Chii: Oi!! Kimi-tachi!! What do think you’re doing?!
Boy 1: Ah!! Yabai! Ikou!!! *the boys began to run*
Chii: Hmmpf!! Anou kodomo-tachi!! *approached Ryuutaro* Ne chibi, Daijoubu? Eeto,
o namae wa nandesu ka?
Ryuutaro: *sniff* R-Ry-Ryuutaro Morimoto desu! *sniff*
Chii: Sou ka. Watashi wa Chii Miyazaki desu! Yoroshiku ne! Eeto, you can call me
Chii-neechan if you want. *smiles* Hai, kore! *hands her handkerchief to Ryuutaro*
Use this to wipe your tears. *smiles*
Ryuutaro: A – arigatou!! *wipes his tears*
Chii: *smiles* Eeto, where’s your parents? *looking around*
Ryuutaro: I – I’m alone. *looks down*
Chii: Egh?? *shocked* E - eto, how old are you?*worried*
Ryuutaro: Three *almost a whisper*
Chii: Maji?? Eeto,--
Ryuutaro: *on the verge of crying again**sniff* Mama, doesn’t want to come here with me,
that’s why I came here alone.*drops of tears now slowly streaming down his cute
little face** All I want is to ride that!! *points at the merry go round while pulling his jumper shorts up**sniff*
Chii: ah..eh..eeto..wakatta!! I’ll let you ride that, but after, you should go home okay??
*helps him with his jumper shorts*
Ryuutaro:*rubs his nose* Haaii!! *beams*


At that time, seeing Ryuu-chan on the merry go round with a very cheerful face makes me so relieved. Though his clothes were a mess, I can’t hide the fact that he’s super duper cute!!! ^_^ Since then, I was so attached to him, and I really don’t know why. Maybe it’s because of his oozing angel-like aura. And to think that it’s the very first time we’ve met. Oh, how I wish I could stare into his puppy eyes for a long time, pinch his marshmallow-like cheeks, and brush his super soft hair. *sigh* And how dazzling can his smile get? *deep sigh* And to think that he’s just 3 years old. Ooh!!! Why does he have to be 6 years younger than me??? T_T And why am I thinking like that?? *deep sigh again*

[After riding the merry go round, Chii decided to take Ryuutaro to his home.]
@ the front gate of Ryuutaro’s house


Ryuutaro: *smiles* It was really fun, nee-chan!! *still pulling his jumper shorts up*
Chii: Yokatta! *smiles* I’m glad you had fun!!
Ryuutaro: Mochiron!! Eeto, can I ask you something nee-chan?
Chii: Eh? Nani?
Ryuutaro: Have you ever been in love?
Chii: Uhm… not really coz I want to find someone who’s willing to love me ‘till my last
breath.
Ryuutaro: *serious* Then, could you wait for me nee-chan? *smiles*
Chii: *shocked and speechless* eegghh??? *laughs nervously* Wha - what are you saying
Ryuu-chan?? You silly kid!! *conscious*
Ryuutaro: *giggles* Ja Chii-neechan!! Oyasuminasai!! *waves at her*

~~~~====++++****++++====~~~~


Honestly, I was really shocked by his remark, “Then, could you wait for me nee-chan?” That’s what he said. Even though I just laughed at him, I can’t hide the fact that it really bugged me, for 11 years, and for no particular reason. He seems serious that time. But how can a 3 year old kid ask such question? A few days after that encounter, they left, for reasons I don’t know. 11 years has passed, and still, no signs of that kid. I do miss him ‘coz he’s like a brother to me now but still, that kid’s remark bugged me, until this day…

Jin: Ooooooooooiiiiiiiii!!!!!!! Chii!!!! You’re spacing out again!!!!! Doo shitan desu ka?
Chii: Ah!! Gomen!! Be – betsuni!! Nandemonai!!
Jin: Dakara, hayaku!! You’re class’s starting!
Chii: Un! *sigh* [Will I ever see him again? I really miss him.] *on her mind*
=============================================================

Back when I was 3 years old, I was bullied by 3 older kids. Back then, I can’t fight back, but then an older girl came to my aid and helped me…

~~~~====++++****++++====~~~~
Flashback: Year 1998
@ the carnival

Ryuutaro: Yamete!!! Itai!! *crying*
Chii: Oi!! Kimi-tachi!! What do think you’re doing?!
Boy 1: Ah!! Yabai! Ikou!!! *the boys began to run*
Chii: Hmmpf!! Anou kodomo-tachi!! *approached Ryuutaro* Ne chibi, Daijoubu? Eeto,
o namae wa nandesu ka?
Ryuutaro: *sniff* R-Ry-Ryuutaro Morimoto desu! *sniff*
Chii: Sou ka. Watashi wa Chii Miyazaki desu! Yoroshiku ne! Eeto, you can call me
Chii-neechan if you want. *smiles* Hai, kore! *hands her handkerchief to Ryuutaro*
Use this to wipe your tears. *smiles*
Ryuutaro: A – arigatou!! *wipes his tears*
Chii: *smiles* Eeto, where’s your parents? *looking around*
Ryuutaro: I – I’m alone. *looks down*
Chii: Egh?? *shocked* E - eto, how old are you?*worried*
Ryuutaro: Three *almost a whisper*
Chii: Maji?? Eeto,--
Ryuutaro: *on the verge of crying again**sniff* Mama, doesn’t want to come here with me,
that’s why I came here alone.*drops of tears now slowly streaming down his cute
little face** All I want is to ride that!! *points at the merry go round while pulling his jumper shorts up**sniff*
Chii: ah...eh...eeto...wakatta!! I’ll let you ride that, but after, you should go home okay??
*helps him with his jumper shorts*
Ryuutaro:*rubs his nose* Haaii!! *beams*


At that time, Chii-neechan was really caring to me. I was really thankful I crossed paths with her. She’s so friendly, and generous. She even paid the fee for the merry go round. Even though we barely new each other, she treated me like his own brother. She was really fragile. She even helped me with my jumper shorts. Even though she was older than me, at that time, i kinda had a crush on her. Well, it’s just a simple admiration to an onee-chan though. I’m only an otooto to her. *sigh* Why does she have to be 6 years older than me?? T_T And why am I thinking like that?? *sigh*

[After riding the merry go round, Chii decided to take Ryuutaro to his home.]
@ the front gate of Ryuutaro’s house


Ryuutaro: *smiles* It was really fun, nee-chan!! *still pulling his jumper shorts up*
Chii: Yokatta! *smiles* I’m glad you had fun!!
Ryuutaro: Mochiron!! Eeto, can I ask you something nee-chan?
Chii: Egh? Nani?
Ryuutaro: Have you ever been in love?
Chii: Uhm… not really coz I want to find someone who’s willing to love me ‘till my last
breath.
Ryuutaro: *serious* Then, could you wait for me nee-chan? *smiles*
Chii: *shocked and speechless* eegghh??? *laughs nervously* Wha - what are you saying
Ryuu-chan?? You silly kid!! *conscious*
Ryuutaro: *giggles* Ja Chii-neechan!! Oyasuminasai!! *waves at her*

~~~~====++++****++++====~~~~

*sigh* “Then could you wait for me. nee-chan?” Did I really say that?? Honestly, I was serious when I said that, demo, she only took it as a joke. Well, I couldn’t blame her, I was just 3 years old back then, so how can she possibly believe my words? That’s the last time that I’ve seen her. A few days after that encounter, we left to transfer to a new home. I wasn’t able to say goodbye to Chii-neechan back then, but I hope she’s doing great wherever she is right know.


Ayano: A – anou… Ryuu-kun, sensei’s calling you. Better stop spacing out.
Ryuutaro: *finally came back to his senses* Agh!!! Yabai!!
Sensei: Spacing out again are you, Morimoto-san? Better stop that hobby of yours ‘coz
you’re getting your self into a lot of trouble. That’ll be put on your record,
Morimoto-san.
Ryuutaro: *embarrassed* Gomen... [Will I ever see her again? I really miss her.] *on his mind*

~~~~END OF CHAPTER 1~~~~




it really sucks neh??? hehe. i know!!!!!
i totally fail in writing....
how pathetic of me....
honto ni gomenasai ate chii!!!!!!!
you shouldn't have trusted me....
i know i let u down...hehe
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vanialestari wrote:

Oh you posted the new one already.
You should have wait for me to changed the title for you.
Hehe, but its okay.
Then we got no other option rather than.. lock the other one?


hai!!!!! honto ni gomen!!!!!
demo, arigatou!!!!!!!!!
this fanfic of mine doesn't deserve to be red. T_T
GOMEN!!!!
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hahaha kawai~
it's good~
not bad =D
keep it up!
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vanialestari wrote:

Oh you posted the new one already.
You should have wait for me to changed the title for you.
Hehe, but its okay.
Then we got no other option rather than.. lock the other one?


hai!!!!! honto ni gomen!!!!!
demo, arigatou!!!!!!!!!
this fanfic of mine doesn't deserve to be red. T_T
GOMEN!!!!


Its okayyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
But i dont think im going to lock it now since i need the approval from the Creator &&Other Moderators too.
So wait till the decision is made okay? :)
Nice fanfic anyway.
Waiting for the update. :33
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deen22 wrote:

hahaha kawai~
it's good~
not bad =D
keep it up!


hehe. honto??
i know it's not good but tnx for
commenting anyway!!!!
hehe.
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omg tis is nice(: hehe sister-brother love..rare..but excitin(:
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uwaaa~this is soo sweet!
this shows age doesn't matter!!!
it was soo cute how morimoto cried in that story!
it's soo pitiful!
good job for your first time!!!it's great!
can't wait for more!
Posted 5/9/09
oh meccha kawai ne:D why do you love fanfics with ryu? !!! I think I stuck ryu but it is all of chie's(blood_15) fault not me!!!:D:D:D
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Wow!!
this is drama-like!!
flashbacks keep coming!!
I luff it!!
This is not like a first-timer's fic at all..
better be a little more confident because you're good at writing!! ^^
btw..I miss ate chii!!
she's always the one motivating me when we used to chat a lot!!
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

omg tis is nice(: hehe sister-brother love..rare..but excitin(:


anou...honto ni arigatou gozaimasu!!!!!!!!!
i really apprciate ur comments!!!!!!!!
tnx again!!!
even though my fanfic's not that gud.....
hope that u'll patiently w8 4 the next chaps!!!!
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Geh-san wrote:

uwaaa~this is soo sweet!
this shows age doesn't matter!!!
it was soo cute how morimoto cried in that story!
it's soo pitiful!
good job for your first time!!!it's great!
can't wait for more!


hontou ni arigatoou for reading my fic
gin-senpai!!!! still remember me????
hehe...
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SEVgi wrote:

oh meccha kawai ne:D why do you love fanfics with ryu? !!! I think I stuck ryu but it is all of chie's(blood_15) fault not me!!!:D:D:D


hehe...me too!!!!! i've become a Ryuutaro fangirl bcoz
of her and her super magnificent fanfic.!!!! hehe...
hope u'll rread the next chaps!!!!
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hsj9392 wrote:

Wow!!
this is drama-like!!
flashbacks keep coming!!
I luff it!!
This is not like a first-timer's fic at all..
better be a little more confident because you're good at writing!! ^^
btw..I miss ate chii!!
she's always the one motivating me when we used to chat a lot!!


hehe..... honto ni arigatou gozaimasu ate jesse!!!!!
i'm really delighted by ur comments!!!!
super, grabe, overwhelming!!!!
tnk u tlga.
yeah, tama ka tlga. she's also the one who's been pushing me to continue this fic.
hehe. xur aq, miss kna rin nya.
aq nga rin eh, miss q na xa.
mtgal na xaang di ngte.txt.
bc cguro. anyway, may new chap na ang H.S.????
nkakabitin kc eh!! hehe....
tnx agen. hope u'll read the nxt chap!!!!
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