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see?? i told you everything's fine..
and you excelled much than what i expected from you...
you're a gifted writer roanne.. hehehe...
sineryoso mo talga yung part na kelangan ako yung bida!!nyahahaha
but anyways...hontou ni arigatou gozaimasu!!(tama bah?)
i'd love having kid sisters like everyone around here..
keep it up!!! i'll be waiting for the next chappies..
and pplease....
stop adoring me here...nyaahah!!!(conceited)
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CHAPTER 2: Second Encounter


@ the girls’ dormitory

Jin: Oi!!!! Chii!!! Wake up!!! It’s almost 8:00 and you’re still in your pajamas!!!
Chii: *moaning* 10 more minutes!!!!
Jin: 10 more minutes?? What do you think of this place, your house?? Wake up,
sleepyhead!! *throws a pillow at Chii*
Chii: *rubbing her head* Itai!! It hurts, you know!!! And please stop acting like my mom,
it really gives me the creeps!!! *shivers*
Jin: Hmpft! Well, sorry!! It’s just because you’re acting like a pre school kid who has to be
waked up by her mom!! *sticks out her tongue* Oh! I forgot to tell you. *excited*
You know what? Last night, I dreamed about YamaPiiii!! Kyaaaa~!! *screams like a
fangirl*
Chii: Wooow!! Shocking!!! *imitates a shocked face* [Here she goes again]*on her mind*
Jin: *giggly* And do you know what he did in my dream?? He conf -- *saw Chii
leaving* Heeyy!!! Where are you going?? Aren’t you gonna listen to my dream!!!!
Chii: It is really shocking dear!!! No matter how much I wanted to listen, I can’t! I’m in a
hurry, remember?? Ja na!! *waves at her, smiling*
Jin: egh?? *scratches her head* what’s with her?

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@ the architecture class


Chii, seated beside the window, couldn’t help but admire the beauty of nature. It is indeed very captivating. The sun shines brightly. Soft rays of sunshine were beaming from the window pane and streaming her puffy cheeks. Birds were happily chirping outside and the flowery meadow sways perfectly with the wind, as if in a chorus. This has become a daily routine to Chii. Every time she’ll be seated to a chair near the window, all she does is stare at the sky and sleep. And sometimes dream about the kid she met 11 years ago…

Break time:
Student 1: *staring at Chii**sigh* The sleepyhead president is on her job again, sleeping.
*some student burst out laughing*
Student 2: *laughing* Hahaha! Baka! Mochiron! She won’t be labeled as “sleepyhead” if
she’s fully awake, ne?
Student 1: ma…
Just then, a scream was heard along the corridors, shouting the name “Chii”. And then a young man, with an effeminate and dazzling appearance appeared to the door of the classroom. Some girls screamed with delight after seeing this man, and some guys can’t avoid but be astounded by the young man’s oozing charisma. He entered the room, panting…

Kei: *shouted* Chiiiii!!!!!!!!!! *stopped after seeing the students staring at him* Ah! Gomen!
E-eeto, may I know where Chii Miyazaki-san is seated? *puppy eyes*
Student 1: *gazing at Kei* Ka-wa-ii!!
Student 2: *disgusted with him* Are you a homo?
Student 1: *regained his consciousness* Chi-chigaimasu!!! Eeto, there. *points at Chii
who’s sleeping soundly beside the window*
Kei: Sankyuu *approached Chii* Kono obachan! Sleeping again! Oi, Chii!! Wake up!!!
You’re supposed to be teaching me english right now!! Wake up!!!
Chii: *moaning* Urusai! *lazily* *yawns and stretches her hands up high* Hai, hai. Ja, ikou.
Kei: *while walking* mattaku!!! You know what, up to this point, I still don’t know why your
classmates chose you to become the class representative when all you do is sleep.
*asks innocently like a child* And you know what you kinda resemble Snorelax from Pokemon. Hahaha!
Chii: *pissed but not in the mood to argue* Urusai!!!

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@ the school cafeteria


Chii, Kei and Jin were on the cafeteria for Kei’s english session. Though the two of them, Chii and Jin, doesn’t really see the point in teaching him english since it doesn’t really have any big relations with his course, they still taught him anyway ‘coz the poor kid’s really desperate in knowing the subject. But what seemed to be a peaceful session at first ends up into a chaotic one.

Chii: So, you already know what’s the difference between a phrase and a clause right?
Kei: hmm… ma… tabun.
Chii: Oi!! Are you really serious about this?
Kei: Egh?? Mochi!!! Are you in doubt of my determination?? *stares intently at Chii* Well,
for your information, I can use the two of them into a sentence. *smirk*
Chii: Ok! *unconvinced* But I really don’t want to hear your lame joke right now,
wakarimasu ka?
Kei: Hmpft!! Ah! I almost forgot! Are you two free, after class?
Jin: Hmm… yeah. Naze?
Kei: I want you to meet my younger brother.
Chii: *shocked* Egh? You have an otooto?
Kei: ma… tabun. Jitsuwa ne, he’s not actually my brother, demo I treat him as one. He is a
very dear friend to me, even though he’s 5 years younger than me. That kid still
has a special place in my heart. *sentimental*
Jin: wow!!!! I didn’t know your type of specie can be sentimental too! *teasing mode*
Kei: Urusai!!!! So, after our classes, ne? I really want you to meet him ‘coz he’s so
KA-WA-II!!!! *dreamy*
Chii: homo!!
Kei: nani??!
Chii: betsuni!!


~~~~====++++****++++====~~~~

@ Aoshima Gakuen’s cafeteria (fictional ^_^)


Ryuutaro is seated in a table, alone, facing his laptop. Girls of all year level wanted to approach this lonely guy just so they could be friends with him. Well, who wouldn’t? He stands out among the students in his year level and he towers amongst all of them. Some senpais were even jealous of him and of the popularity he’s gaining. Everything he has become is truly God’s gift, ‘coz when God handed out good looks here on earth, probably, he’s the first one in line. Well, Ryuutaro’s not the typical loner guy, but for some reason, he wanted to be alone at that time. He just wanted to indulge himself into composing songs. It already became one of his hobbies ‘coz for him that’s the only way he can express his emotions. Standing in the corner of the cafeteria is Ayano Fujisawa, Ryuutaro’s childhood friend and classmate. She’s really worried about her friend’s behavior that’s why she courageously came up to him…

Ayano: *sits on the chair opposite to Ryuutaro* Ne. *waves her hand in front of his face*
Ryuutaro: *finally removed his eyes off his laptop* Ah! Ayano-chan! Doshita no?
Ayano: Ne Ryuutaro, why don’t you mingle with the other students? Look at those girls
there, they seemed to be interested in you.
Ryuutaro: Gomen ne, Aya-chan. I’m just not interested in getting to now them.
Ayano: Hidoi, Ryuu-chan!!
Ryuutaro: *shocked**glares at Ayano* What did you just call me?? *cold*
Ayano: *shocked* Eh?? * scared of Ryuu’s expression**looks down* Go – gomen!
Ryuutaro: *seemed to notice the scared look of Ayano* Go – gomen Aya-chan!! Honto ni
gomen!! I – it’s just that… I only wanted one person to call me by that. *looks down*
Ayano: Ah… eh… Iie!! Da – Daijoubu!! I – it’s my fault anyway!
Ryuutaro: Gomen.

*ring, ring* Just then, Ryuutaro’s cell phone rang. The sign “1 message received” appeared on the screen. The message was from Inoo. It said:

+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
“Oi, chibi!! After your class, come here
at our school immediately. I want u too meet my
friends, and… have some bonding time too.
We haven’t done it for quite a while, ne?

Love,
Your aniki, Inoo

P.S. If you’ll not come, I’ll TORTURE your hamster. ^_^”
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Ryuu: Eh?? *teary-eyed* Not my dear Hamsiie!!!! Nooo!!!!!

After their own respective classes, Kei and Jin headed straight to their “so-called” headquarters, aside form the school cafeteria, McDonald’s. The two of them is seated beside the door so as too see Chii immediately. Chii’s still at the campus attending a meeting for class representatives but she promised to catch up with them later.

Kei: *impatient* Ano obachan’s really slow!!!!
Jin: *indulging herself with some chocolate sundae* Baka! Patience is a virtue you know!!
Let’s just wait for her. Can I have that? *points at his burger*

Just when Kei is about to reply, Jin immediately snatched his burger and unwrapped it. And just when she is about to have her first bite, Kei noticed something on her face…

Kei: *slowly caresses Jin’s face to wipe a pinch of sundae sticking at the side of her
mouth* Baka! You’re so cute and yet you eat like a glutton! Grow up, will you?
Jin: *uneasy* ah… wa - warui!! *hides her blushing face* [I didn’t know he could be this
sweet!! ^_^] *on her mind*

@ Aoshima Gakuen
After knowing that his beloved Hamsiie will be tortured if he will not follow Inoo, Ryuutaro hurriedly went to the parking lot, and parked there is his red Ferrari. At such a young age of 14, Ryuutaro already has a driver’s license. And now, he is using this privilege to go to school on his own and to go wherever he wants to. Girls went berserk after seeing him went inside his car in a prince-like manner. Ryuutaro immediately started his engine and went at a full speed.

++++++++++++++++++++++++
After the class representatives’ meeting, Chii headed straight at McDonald’s…

Chii: Yabai!! *looks at her watch* Ano homo will be really angry at me for arriving late!!!

++++++++++++++++++++++++
(Ryuutaro, on his car, at a full speed…)

Ryuutaro: Hamsiie, wait for me!!!!

++++++++++++++++++++++++
But just when Chii’s about to cross the road, a red Ferrari is fast approaching and it’s only 3 feet away from her. Chii froze in the middle of the road, unable to move because of fear. Thankfully the car stopped immediately but it hit Chii’s left knee. Chii fell down, clutching her left knee while moaning in pain. After hearing a loud screech of a car, Kei and Jin immediately went outside to check on the happenings. The guy hurriedly went out the car to check on the victim.

Ryuutaro: Yabai!!! *approaching Chii* Uhm… miss? Ho – Honto ni gomenasai!! A - are you
alright?? Ca – can I do something for you?? *panicking* Yabai! Yabai! Yabai!
Chii: *looking down still clutching her wounded knee* I – I – Itai!!!! *furious* Well,
obviously I am not okay!!! Are you blind?! Don’t you know that this is the
pedestrian lane?! And why are you even speeding up?!? Do you want the two of us
to die?! Baka!!
Ryuutaro: *pissed**smirking* Why didn’t you even move when you saw my car?! You’re
the baka here!!!
Chii: *looks up* Nan-

Chii was taken aback after seeing a very dazzling young guy in front of him and Ryuutaro froze after seeing the cute, familiar face of the lady. But when both of them had a clear view of each other, they were astounded to see each other’s faces.

Both: *wide-eyed* ANATA!!!!!!!! *pointing at each other’s face*


~~~~END OF CHAPTER 2~~~~




long and boring neh????
gomen!!!! *bows*
demo, i hope u'll read the next chap!!!!
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kyaaa!!!!!!!! that was so....*speechless* cute and so cool... im so excited for the other parts.... please, i want more...i really really want more......
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i am speechless...ANATA....omg they met each other again(:
i cant wait for the next one(:
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Student 2: *disgusted with him* Are you a homo? <---i'll really whack this girl's head... until it shatters!!!
Chii: homo!! <--- i'd like to... but i won't!!!
Chii: Yabai!! *looks at her watch* Ano homo will be really angry at me for arriving late!!! <--- inoo-sama wa homo ja nai!!! uwaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!!



anyways... it's so cute!!! and so funny like an anime or something!
which reminds me... i'm so lucky i'm not 6 years older... wahehehe...
next chapter please!!!
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Wuaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!
hahaha~
ne ne ne
sorry for my super late comment ne?
nyahaha~
Ryutaro kawai~
i can imagine him in that red ferrari!
haha More~ ^_^
i luuff iit!
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omg!!!
nice ayo xa!!! nyahahaa!!!
comment lang ko sunod!!!
la na ko time...hehe...gomen...
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uwaa~ i love it!
they've seen each other again!
i wonder how it goes like on the next chapter!
i can't wait for more...
but too bad for morimoto, chii senpai calls him homo in here!
and i'm pretty sure, morimoto looks dazzling riding that ferrari!
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kyaaa!!!!!!!! that was so....*speechless* cute and so cool... im so excited for the other parts.... please, i want more...i really really want more......


honto ni arigatou!!!! even though i'm still not good when it comes to these stuffs, i'm really
thankful that there are people hu still appreciate my works!!! hehe... i'm getting emotional now.!!
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honto ni arigatou!!!! even though i'm still not good when it comes to these stuffs, i'm really
thankful that there are people hu still appreciate my works!!! hehe... i'm getting emotional now.!!

It's really worth reading it, you know...
i want the other parts.... i'm so looking forward to it!!!!!!!!

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Posted 5/15/09 , edited 5/15/09
hahaha...maka-jollibee kaya ako...hmmppft!!
bitaw... hehehe...
that was sweet....

sweetie, typo lang yan...wag na masyadong
mag-worry..

everyone's loving your fic na...so smile..

everything about chii reminds me of myself
back in higschool...nag research ka bah???

o did i accidentally told you when we're on phone???

hahahaha.... nice one!

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Posted 5/16/09 , edited 5/16/09
konnichiwa!!!!!!
hehe. i just wanted to thank all the people who've red my fic. though it's
still not good, i really appreciate all your comments!!!! HONTO NI
ARIGATOU GOZAIMASU!!!! *bows* no words can describe how happy
i am today. ^_^ i'm getting corny now!!!! hehe. i'm still hoping that you'll read the
next chaps.
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Posted 5/21/09 , edited 5/21/09
konnichiwa!!!!
for those people who've been patiently waiting
for the next chap, here it is!!!
hope you'll like it!!!
pardon my english!!!!




long and boring???
hehe. i know!!!
demo, i'm still hoping that you'll
read the remaining chaps.
pls. do leave a comment!
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it is nice...i want them to confess now!!!
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i was shot to the heart...
inoo, don't confess or i'll do my harakiri!

hehehehe...
but seriously...



ne, i don't get why we can't become buddies!
every time i add you, i can't!
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