"NO!" -chapter 1
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-I hate bullies-<Chapter 1
Kaeda: WHAT THE F*** IS WRONG WITH YOU KONACHI!
Konachi: SHUT UP KAEDA! (-gasp- OMG! It's Konachi from "Mixed up feelinds- chapter 1! :O)
Kaeda: NO! YOUR SUCH A JERK!
Teacher: *arrives* Now, now Konachi and Kaeda why dont you go in your seats?
Konachi: Fine
Kaeda: I hope he dies in an accident...B**** Whatever *rolls eyes*
(AFTER CLASS)
Kaeda: Chris! How the heck did you deal with him in middle school Max?
Max: Well *has a flash back* (its just what was on chapter 2 shes flashing about) *grins* Me and Jo beat the crap out of him and he backed off (AND OMG! MAX IS HERE TOO! XD haha)
Kaeda: JO DID!? (lolz...even Jo is here XD)
Max: Yeah...he did most of the work! Konachi was in the hospital for almost half a year! *starts laughing*
Kaeda: Dang, jo sounds scary *begins to laugh too*
Kaeda: *spots someone being bullied and beaten up* Hey, whats happening over there?
Max: I dont know but were going to be late for class!
Kaeda: Yeah, I'll catch up with you later k?
Max: Alright, bye! *leaves*
Kaeda: *runs up to the the bullies* "WHAT THE F*** ARE YOU DOING!? YOUR FROM THE FOOTBALL TEAM! WANT ME TO TELL ON YOU TO THE COACH!?
FB Dude 1: you wouldnt dare!
Kaeda: Oh, Yes! I WOULD! SO BACK THE F*** OFF!
FB Dude 1: tch! Whatever lets go guys
Kaeda: *notices he passed out* OH SHIT! HEY! DUDE YOU ALRIGHT! *Kaeda takes him to the nurses*
(NURSES OFFICE!)
Kaeda:Why the hell isnt a nurse here when you REALLY! need one *sighs and lays him on a bed and sits next to him patching his wounds*
????: *rolls over to side, facing Kaeda*
Kaeda: hey, your face looks familiar *realizes* OH HOLY SHIT! *backs up and bumps head and covers mouth* GOD! that hurt like hell *removes hand from mouth* He used to go to school with me in middle school and always got me stuff... *begins to cry tears of joy* TT~TT Man he was so F***ing nice. I still have the flower clip he gave me too! :D *the clip is in her hair RIGHT NOW! XD*
????" H-huh? *begins to wake up*
Kaeda: DAVE! Your finally awake!
Dave: Wah? *eyes widen* Kaeda-Sama?
Kaeda: The one and only! I cant believe those guys hurt you *puts fist up and is on fire* I'll kick there ass and send them to hell tommorow
Dave: AH! N-no its ok, really
Kaeda: NO THE F*** IT ISNT!
Dave: Could you please not...cuss?
Kaeda: SOrry, I do that when im pi-..I mean annoyed as heck
Dave: You've changed
Kaeda: DAMN RIGHT! Oh, sorry did it again XD
Dave: *smiles happily*
Kaeda: What?
Dave: You still have the clip i gave you~
Kaeda: YEP! and this *shows him my hand with the ring he gave me* and everything else you ever gave me!
Dave: Even the chips?
Kaeda: OH YEAH!
Dave:
Kaeda: Anyway if anyone ever messes with you again just give me a call *hands him an emergency beaper*
Dave: Kaeda?
Kaeda: yes?
Dave: Why do you have such a thing in your pocket?
Kaeda: Hmm *thinks* Now that you mention it...I have no freaking clue. ..*thinks* Oh yeah, now i rememebr. I was susposed to give it to him in middle school but never did..weird that i still have it with me
Dave: Kaeda is so funny
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WOOOAAAA AWESOMMEEE ( want to read more xD)
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WOOOAAAA AWESOMMEEE ( want to read more xD)


thanks, glad ya liekd it! :D
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NICEEEEEEEEEEEEE~
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NICEEEEEEEEEEEEE~


Glad ya liked it (you should look at my story Bordom (i just put it on there cause i was bored XD)
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xxtwins2 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:

NICEEEEEEEEEEEEE~


Glad ya liked it (you should look at my story Bordom (i just put it on there cause i was bored XD)


read it ~ you should make a story out of it ! ^^
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TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


xxtwins2 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:

NICEEEEEEEEEEEEE~


Glad ya liked it (you should look at my story Bordom (i just put it on there cause i was bored XD)


read it ~ you should make a story out of it ! ^^


The point of it is to see if the people reading my sotires really care...XD so if someone posted on there then I'd add more~ XD lolz causeim not sure much ppl read my stories on here XD
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xxtwins2 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:


xxtwins2 wrote:


TrueLoveMyGoddess wrote:

NICEEEEEEEEEEEEE~


Glad ya liked it (you should look at my story Bordom (i just put it on there cause i was bored XD)


read it ~ you should make a story out of it ! ^^


The point of it is to see if the people reading my sotires really care...XD so if someone posted on there then I'd add more~ XD lolz causeim not sure much ppl read my stories on here XD


Every one reed your storys their really good >< This one was so cute ^_^ can't wait for chapter 2
Posted 5/13/09
Lol INTERESTING xD!!!

update pwease!!! ^_^ yah i need to update something to *sweat dropped*
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Let me guess...these 2 friends fall in love??? Kaeda and Dave apparently? Sweet story~!! ^^
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

Let me guess...these 2 friends fall in love??? Kaeda and Dave apparently? Sweet story~!! ^^


Yeah, XD i made is obvious but I'll add a twist in the story sooner or later *got an idea* OMG! HIKARU! THANKS TO U I HAVE A NEW IDEA *snickers* mwahahaha XD (lolz)
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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

Let me guess...these 2 friends fall in love??? Kaeda and Dave apparently? Sweet story~!! ^^


Yeah, XD i made is obvious but I'll add a twist in the story sooner or later *got an idea* OMG! HIKARU! THANKS TO U I HAVE A NEW IDEA *snickers* mwahahaha XD (lolz)


Glad I could help ya~!! Can't wait~!! ^^
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