Post Reply I'm sorry
Posted 12/24/07
I’m sorry for the way I acted
I’m sorry for the things I’ve done
I’m sorry I neglected you
You were my only one

I know you can’t forgive me
And so I don’t ask that of you
I only ask that you be happy
Cause my love for you is true

I’ve given you my heart before
And I think I stole yours away
For I was not meant to have it
I’m sorry and for that I will pay

For all the pain I’ve caused you
For leaving you all alone
For not saying things I was meant too
I’m sorry I should have known

So I know I shouldn’t ask you this
But please just understand
My heart is yours, so take it
But don’t break it, it's in your hands

Another poem I wrote
I tend to write them when I'm bored...anyways so what do u think
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Posted 12/27/07
OH my gods!!! It's really good!! If you doubt yourself at all, you shouldn't >< I could just hear this poem as a song going through my head (sorry, I usually turn everything I read into a song =P)
It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted 12/27/07

moonwarrior485 wrote:

OH my gods!!! It's really good!! If you doubt yourself at all, you shouldn't >< I could just hear this poem as a song going through my head (sorry, I usually turn everything I read into a song =P)
It was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!


Ya I do tend to doubt myself alot when I write poems thats why I posted some here to get some feed back but no one seems to read them that much so I was begining to think no one like them Thanx again!!!
Posted 12/28/07
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Posted 12/30/07
It's kinda hard to say but that was really good!!! It's really cool how you made this poem. I can see (or read lol)it has a lot of feelings into it.
Posted 12/30/07

crazyone wrote:

It's kinda hard to say but that was really good!!! It's really cool how you made this poem. I can see (or read lol)it has a lot of feelings into it. :D


thanx
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