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[OS]The Wandering
everything was perfect... till death do us part...





Characters:
Ikeda Reita
Yamada Ryosuke


Prologue:

To comprehend the value of one year,
just ask the students who failed the entrance exams.
To comprehend the value of one month,
just ask a mother who gave birth to a premature baby.
To comprehend the value of one week,
just ask the editor of a weekly newspaper.
To comprehend the value of one hour,
just ask the lovers who are waiting to meet.
To comprehend the value of one minute,
just ask the people who missed their stop on the train.
To comprehend the value of one second,
just ask the person who managed to avoid an accident just in time.
To comprehend the value of one tenth of a second,
just ask a person who ended up with a silver medal at the Olympics.

The hands of the clock will continue ticking.
Therefore, treasure every moment you have.
And treat today as the utmost gift you'll have.



Author's note:
I've always wanted to write something extra-ordinary. Though I think I'll fail in making this story a bit suspense to you readers. Anyway, I'll post the fiction as soon as I finish writing it. Maybe later. ^^


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The church bell is ringing as if another couple has officially been united. All faces were smiling when all of a sudden; black rose petals came falling down from the gloomy sky. Then suddenly, I heard sirens and caught a glimpse of a man coming towards me. The next thing I saw was a man touching my lips lying cold on the floor, all bloody. Flashes of light triggered my eyes until everything turned to darkness.


Reita: No! *screams*
Nanny: Ikeda-san, you’re dreaming! *wakes Reita up*
Reita: *shocked* *catches her breath* It felt so real! *sighs*
Nanny: What is it about miss?
Reita: It’s… *thinks* I forgot. But one thing’s for sure. It’s a nightmare!
Nanny: Ne, Ikeda-san.
Reita: Hai?
Nanny: You better fix yourself now. You’re soon going to be Mrs. Yamada, remember?
Reita: Ah! *panics*


Right! Today I’m getting married with Ryosuke. The moment we’ve been waiting for so long has finally arrived! I hope everything goes smooth for the both of us. Everything is set so I have nothing to worry about, ne? The marriage is going to be perfect so, I must calm down and just enjoy.

“Please sit down.”

The stylist worked hard to get me the right make-up. I’m a person who looks better off without blush and gloss. We’ve had trials before this day, and I was surprised how she made me look so perfect today. Nothing regular was endowed to me. Of course, Ryosuke wanted everything to be special for our wedding.

“Please be careful, it might ruin your make-up and hairdo.”

I cautiously wore my wedding gown. It looks so pretty and I consider it as the best wedding gown I’ve ever seen. I love it. It fits me perfectly. And yes indeed, it’s unbelievably expensive. And when I finally wore the last piece of accessory to get me ready… Mom went in my room, teary eyed.


Mom: You’ve grown so beautiful Reita.
Reita: Oka-san, what’s with the gloomy face?
Mom: *wipes her tears* Nothing. It’s just that I can’t help but be emotional. You know, my only baby’s getting married. And right after this, you’re leaving us.
Reita: *hugs Mom* Oka-san! Stop it! Don’t make me cry too! *tears starts streaming down her face*
Mom: Hey! Don’t ruin your make-up!
Reita: You ruined it for me! *holds her tears*
Mom: Gomen ne! *giggles* Anyway, just enjoy the rest of the day. It’s all yours!


As I was on my way to the church, I kept thinking about the dream I just had. I don’t exactly remember what happened; I just can’t help but be bothered. Damn, I should just think about the wedding and nothing else!


Driver: What’s bothering you Miss Ikeda?
Reita: Oh it’s nothing. *fake smile*
Driver: You’re getting married. You must enjoy this once in a lifetime moment. When it’s over, it’s never going to happen again. Time is running fast. You better not waste each second of it. *smiles*
Reita: *eyes wide open* Hai. *keeps silent*


The man was right. This happens only once. I’ll treasure it, feel every second of it and finally, I can say I’ve got the confidence. Finally, the limousine stopped and when I was about to get down, I felt my knees shaking. But when I saw Ryosuke’s eager eyes staring at me from afar, I smiled and somehow got my so-called confidence back. As I was walking on the red carpet on the centre aisle, I saw beautiful flowers filling the metal placed on each edge of the seats. It was so beautiful. I also saw all the people staring at me with bright smiling faces. There were photographers everywhere that made me feel like a superstar. And when I reached the altar, Ryosuke smiled at me and he offered me his hand to help me out in stepping up the small stairs, I felt a pinch in my heart as if I’ve fallen in love for the first time again. Now we’re settled, I can tell. Everything is perfect…


Priest: Do you Ryosuke, take Reita, to be your wife
Ryosuke: I do
Priest: Do you Reita, take Ryosuke, to be your husband
Reita: I do
Ryosuke: I, Ryosuke, take you, Reita, to be my wife; To have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, Till death do us part. *smiles*
Reita: I, Reita, take you, Ryosuke, to be my husband; To have and to hold, from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, Till death do us part. *teary eyed*
Ryosuke: In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit, take and wear this ring as sign of my love and faithfulness. *puts the ring on Reita’s finger*
Reita: In the name of the Father, the Son, and the Holy Spirit, take and wear this ring as sign of my love and faithfulness. *puts the ring on Ryosuke’s finger*
Priest: Now that Ryosuke and Reita have given themselves to each other by solemn vows, with the joining of hands and the giving and receiving of a ring, I now pronounce you wife and husband, in the name of the Father, and of the Son, and of the Holy Spirit. Those, whom God has joined together, let no one put asunder. You may now kiss the bride!
Ryosuke: *kisses Reita*
Reita: *gives in*


The ceremony just ended. The church bell rang and while I was walking on the aisle with my love, Yamada Ryosuke, they showered petals on us on our way out. They showed their full smiles while reciting their best wishes for the two of us. All I felt was peace when suddenly, the rain fell so hard. Because of the angry sky, we’ve decided to postpone our wedding reception. While we were in the car, because of our delight, we kissed torridly not letting our lips move apart. It felt as if we’re kissing for the very last time. When suddenly…

“Somebody help!”

I felt the rain dropping on me then I heard sirens getting louder and louder. At first, everything was unclear. Then the next thing I saw was Ryosuke touching my lips lying cold on the floor, all bloody. Flashes of light triggered my eyes until everything turned to darkness. When I woke up, I saw the once perfect gown I’m wearing torn apart. But I didn’t mind it. I ran out as if nothing had happened to me. But I was blown away seeing my mom and the rest crying. I went near them then I saw Ryosuke inside the emergency room fighting for his life. I want to be with him at that moment but the sheer glass has bounded me to get in. I cried and cried until I lost my consciousness.

“Why did you leave me?”

Louder cries woke me up. What’s happening? I saw my mom looking so helpless and crying a lot. I turned my head to where she was looking and I saw someone covered with white cloth. Familiar faces started whining and that scene made me decide to space out.

“That’s not Ryosuke. That can’t be Ryosuke! We’re just making out a while ago. I must’ve just fallen asleep. Yes, I’m dreaming. This is just a dream. In any moment I’m waking up!”

I said trying to paint a smile on my face. But no matter how much I tried to smile, I just can’t. My face went numb down to my whole body. Until I can no longer move. Again, the darkness dominated until I couldn’t see anything anymore.


Reita: No! *screams*
Nanny: Ikeda-san, you’re dreaming! *wakes Reita up*
Reita: *shocked* *catches her breath* It felt so real! *sighs*
Nanny: What is it about miss?
Reita: It’s… *thinks* I forgot. But one thing’s for sure. It’s a nightmare!
Nanny: Ne, Ikeda-san.
Reita: Hai?
Nanny: You better fix yourself now. You’re soon going to be Yamada-san, remember?
Reita: Ah! *panics* *pauses*


I was deeply shocked when I saw my wedding gown torn apart covered with blood. I looked in the mirror but I saw myself injured by a deep cut on my forehead. All I felt was fright after seeing that. I went out the room and to my surprise; I saw the figure of Ryosuke standing erect, holding a black rose.

“Ryosuke! You’re alive!”

I called him but he doesn’t seem to hear me. Therefore, I ran towards him. I was about to hug him but my world stopped when I found myself on the ground. I tried to touch him once again but I can’t! The dark sky started to rain while Ryosuke went near a… a coffin?


Reita: Who’s dead?
Ryosuke: Reita! *cries*
Mom: Why does it have to be Reita? Why didn’t you take me instead? *mourns*
Reita: Wait, oka-san, I’m here! *tries to touch her mom* What’s… what’s wrong with me?
Ryosuke: *hugs the coffin* I love you!


I was so glad to see Ryosuke alive. All the while I thought I lost him. But I guess it’s me they’ve been losing. It’s me they’ve been grieving about. It’s me they’ve been longing to hug. It’s me they’ve been missing. And it’s me lying cold and pale in that coffin, lifeless. Then suddenly, a bright light flashed my eyes. I could see nothing because of its brightness. I somehow felt relief being flashed by that bright light. It must be heaven’s call ne?

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wuaaaaaa!!!!!
it looks CREEPY
foe ReaL
hahaha~
its like.. EMO?
nyahahahaha~

I will be soooo WAITING for this ONE SHOT
of yours~
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erm..is this goin to be something that...
i am waiting for so far???

i tink it is gonna be great..don worry...
I'LL SUPPORT THIS FIC(:
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deen22 wrote:

wuaaaaaa!!!!!
it looks CREEPY
foe ReaL
hahaha~
its like.. EMO?
nyahahahaha~

I will be soooo WAITING for this ONE SHOT
of yours~





xiaoqian94 wrote:

erm..is this goin to be something that...
i am waiting for so far???

i tink it is gonna be great..don worry...
I'LL SUPPORT THIS FIC(:





HELLO!!
I've just posted the whole fic ^^
thank you for the comments btw!!
hope you'll keep supporting it ^^
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This fic was creepy at first

I like it

It's really sad that Reita died...

I didn't want her to die..

But it's still a thumbs up
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waaah!!!

i'm so sad for ryosuke...
they were just making out a few seconds ago...


but it's so beautiful... beautiful...
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ah...i knew it...

ryosuke have to hang in there...
i wanted it to be a dream!!!

such a wonderful fic..hontou ni sugoii(:
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WOOOOOWW!!!

this was creepy and i also thought it was gothic!
but it was nicely written! i love how the way you wrote this.

Too bad, it's Reita who died...but then i feel sorry
for yamachan for losing his one and only love.
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

ah...i knew it...

ryosuke have to hang in there...
i wanted it to be a dream!!!

such a wonderful fic..hontou ni sugoii(:



LoL!!
I wanted it to be a dream too!! haha..
but I've work hard to make her wander..so I killed her in the end.. xDD
thanks for the support!!
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Matsujun_arashi_lover wrote:

This fic was creepy at first

I like it

It's really sad that Reita died...

I didn't want her to die..

But it's still a thumbs up




wee!!
glad you thought it's creepy..haha
I wanted it to be creepy xDD
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triccian wrote:

waaah!!!

i'm so sad for ryosuke...
they were just making out a few seconds ago...


but it's so beautiful... beautiful...




LoL!!
I laughed so hard when you said..

they were just making out a few seconds ago...

hahaha ^^
they must at least experience a hot scene before one of them dies!! xDD

anyway.. THANK YOU!!
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Geh-san wrote:

WOOOOOWW!!!

this was creepy and i also thought it was gothic!
but it was nicely written! i love how the way you wrote this.

Too bad, it's Reita who died...but then i feel sorry
for yamachan for losing his one and only love.




thank youuu!! ^^
I watched creepy film last night..
which inspired me to write sumthing like this..hehe
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Geh-san wrote:

WOOOOOWW!!!

this was creepy and i also thought it was gothic!
but it was nicely written! i love how the way you wrote this.

Too bad, it's Reita who died...but then i feel sorry
for yamachan for losing his one and only love.




thank youuu!! ^^
I watched creepy film last night..
which inspired me to write sumthing like this..hehe


np desu~!

eeh?..what creepy film is that?
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Geh-san wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

WOOOOOWW!!!

this was creepy and i also thought it was gothic!
but it was nicely written! i love how the way you wrote this.

Too bad, it's Reita who died...but then i feel sorry
for yamachan for losing his one and only love.




thank youuu!! ^^
I watched creepy film last night..
which inspired me to write sumthing like this..hehe


np desu~!

eeh?..what creepy film is that?



it's a Thai film..gomen I forgot the title..
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hsj9392 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:


Geh-san wrote:

WOOOOOWW!!!

this was creepy and i also thought it was gothic!
but it was nicely written! i love how the way you wrote this.

Too bad, it's Reita who died...but then i feel sorry
for yamachan for losing his one and only love.




thank youuu!! ^^
I watched creepy film last night..
which inspired me to write sumthing like this..hehe


np desu~!

eeh?..what creepy film is that?



it's a Thai film..gomen I forgot the title..


oooh a thai film...is it shutter?..haha
that's the only thai film i know...
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