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Posted 5/18/09 , edited 5/18/09
::PLEASE READ::



::CHAPTER 1:: Meet The Idols




“空を飛んでも!君と一生じゃないとだめよ!(Sora o tondemo! Kimi to isho jynai to dame yo)”

The ten girls sang loudly and up high at the end of their song. Their voices merged together to become one powerful, loud voice that rang across the stage. A rush of applaud and cheering greeted the ten girls. They all smiled one after another before bowing simultaneously. The five younger girls were wearing white miniskirts and the five older girls were wearing white shorts. They all had a pink hoodie on top that had a V shape at the neck line to show a white tank top underneath. Their hoodies were short enough to show their belly. A few had jeweleries on different places of their body.

“Arigatou minna! (Thank you everyone!)” The oldest one spoke so calmly through the microphone that it was hard to tell that she was exhausted. 綺里 小柴 (Kiri Koshiba) watched with content at the crowd that 天子メイディン (Tenshi Maiden) had managed to attract for this weeks Music Station. It was more than last time and she hoped that Tenshi Maiden’s fan amount would continue to increase. They had managed to place second on Oricon(more info at bottom). It was so close to first!

With that final word, all ten members of Tenshi Maiden left the stage. They had to quickly rush back to their seats as the next artists advertise their new songs. They couldn’t run and couldn’t be to slow or it was a hindrance to the show. Tenshi Maiden’s company Avex Trax hated flaws. Their senpai (what you call higher level than you in company or school etc.) Koda Kumi had been banned to go to Music Station to advertise her song because she had apparently made a comment that insulted women 35 year old and above.

“Today was fun ne?” 三宅 鳥 (Miyake Tori) spoke to her fellow band mate 森 林 (Mori Lyn) in a very cheerful voice. They had just finished Music Station and all six girls were in the two rooms. One for changing and one for resting. It was easy to tell that Tori still had energy to sing a few more times. Lyn looked a lot more tired compared to Tori.

“It was fun but I’m a little bit tired Tori so can you stop bouncing from chair to chair? You’re making the whole table shake every time you put your hand down to land,” Lyn complained a little annoyed that Tori was spilling water from her cup while she was trying to grab her iPod. Tori immediately stopped. But being the little ball of energy she was she had now started bouncing around on the sofa.

“Ma~ she’s a little ball of energy you can’t expect her to calm down Lyn,” 酒組 ミチエ (Sakagumi Michie) spoke across from Lyn. Michie was tapping her foot to the song she was listening to and not paying attention much to the situation around her.

“Without Tori life will be boring anyway,” 鮎川真理 (Ayukawa Mari) stated. “So let her be.”

“If you take Tori’s side then I’ll take Lyn’s side!” 中山 海苔(Nakayama Nori) stated while eating her favourite food, a lollipop. “It’s not fair to Lyn that it’s three against one.”

“Instead of taking sides, maybe we should just drop this subject?” 橋本 薫 (Hashimoto Kaoru) suggested. “Manager would kill us if she saw us right now.”

“Ahh, so true,” Mari replied. The other girls nodded except Tori who was still bouncing around not caring anymore that the argument was because of her. She needed to move around!

“Tori! Let’s go run around the building! How about a race?” 原 桜 (Bara Sakura) called to Tori from where she entered the room after finishing changing her cloth. All the girls in Tenshi Maiden were usually very active but it seemed that their new song 世界と君 (Sekai to kimi or the World and You) which involved many advanced dance steps had left everyone tired.

“Manager-san told us not to leave the two rooms Sakura. As much as you two may most likely destroy this room soon, Tori and Sakura have to stay here,” 相葉奈々子 (Aiba Nanako) spoke as she also entered the room right after Sakura made her statement. She watched the two girls’ face droop at the thought of being non-active.

“But Nana-chan!” Tori looked at Nanako with pleading eyes. Nanako sighed. She wasn’t going to let them out running through the whole building while other idols were there. It would be a huge embarrassment to Avex Trax and Tenshi Maiden. Also, the oldest of this band Koshiba, had stated that nobody was to leave this room until she finished talking with their manager. Although Koshiba usually acted younger than her age. During work she was still respectful if somewhat annoying.

“Shii-chan had stated no Tori. Be like Sakura and sit down on the chair, I’m sure once she is done talking you can run around,” Nanako tried to compromise with Tori.

“Tori, I’d listen if I was you,”吉田恵美 (Yoshida Megumi) stated quietly to Tori. “It’s for the good of Tenshi Maiden.”

Megumi was always a little bit quieter than the rest of the band but it didn’t matter much. She acted all bubbly on television. It was just with them that she was quieter. It was a success and although Tori grumbled back to a chair she had listened to what Nanako had stated with Megumi’s light push.

Finally, the room is a little bit quieter, Nanako thought as all the other bandmates not including Koshiba were calm. Michie and Lyn were both listening to music although by their tapping it was easy to tell the songs had the same beat. Sakura was reading a magazine that stated the latest fashion among young girls and Tori was…well Tori was drawing something. Her hands were quite active that was for sure.

Nanako finally settled herself down on one of the chairs. She might as well read a magazine to see if there was anything she could buy next time she went shopping. The room was only quiet for a few more seconds before Koshiba stormed in with a bright smile on her face. Her whole face was glowing with happiness.

“Minna (Everyone) guess what!” Koshiba yelled. Little did she know it but she had just annoyed almost all the girls in the room but Tori who was still thinking of running around the building. Tori took this as a good way to get permission later on.

All the girls but Michie looked up. Michie was still listening to her music. Her eyes were closed and she seemed to be in deep concentration. Koshiba stared at Michie who was still oblivious.

“Michi! Michi!” Nanako called to Michie. She finally looked up. Michie was a little bit embarrassed by what just happened as she quickly took her earphones out of her ears and looked at Koshiba.

“Ok. Now that everybody is listening. Manager-san has found a way to get our popularity even more up! I’m very excited for it!” Koshiba squealed a little as she spoke. “She was thinking of a contest against a boy band! I thought it was a great idea since our motto is to show we are better than boys! Who’s up for it?”

“Me!” Tori immediately spoke.

“I’m obviously in!” Sakura asked.

“Who is the band?” Michie asked forgetting about her previous embarrassment.

“Count me in!” Nanako agreed.

“I think you know my answer already!” Nori spoke with a happy smile.

“Sure! But who is the band?” Kaoru asked.

“Doesn’t matter what band. I’m in!” Mari stated with excitement.

“I will answer once I know the band. Right now it’s a yes,” Lyn replied.

“The band is,”


TO BE CONTINUED!!!

::TRANSLATION::
空を飛んでも!君と一生じゃないとだめよ!=Even if I fly in the sky! I have to be with you or it won’t work!

Oricon it's a site where people can get the most popular song ranking each day. When Hey! Say! JUMP’s new song comes out click on this..,!! >w<

ENJOY READING!!!!
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can i be wif yuto? btw ur chapt 1 is good(:
Posted 5/18/09

xiaoqian94 wrote:

can i be wif yuto? btw ur chapt 1 is good(:


hai hai..,
sure sure..,
^__^..,
demo..,
which one..,??
there are 2 people for each JUMP member..,
please choose one..,
btw..,
doumo arigatou gozaimashita~..,!!♥♥
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can I be Mori Lyn???

Ur chappie 1 is a thumbs up!!!

Can't wait for the rest
Posted 5/18/09

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can I be Mori Lyn???

Ur chappie 1 is a thumbs up!!!

Can't wait for the rest


Don't worry..,
I'm already writing the rest..,
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xiaoqian94 wrote:

can i be wif yuto? btw ur chapt 1 is good(:


hai hai..,
sure sure..,
^__^..,
demo..,
which one..,??
there are 2 people for each JUMP member..,
please choose one..,
btw..,
doumo arigatou gozaimashita~..,!!♥♥


miyake tori pls(: hehe
Posted 5/18/09

xiaoqian94 wrote:


zashnie wrote:


xiaoqian94 wrote:

can i be wif yuto? btw ur chapt 1 is good(:


hai hai..,
sure sure..,
^__^..,
demo..,
which one..,??
there are 2 people for each JUMP member..,
please choose one..,
btw..,
doumo arigatou gozaimashita~..,!!♥♥


miyake tori pls(: hehe


DONE and DONE!!
XD..,

arigatou..,
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uwaaa~ good job zashnie chan!!!
it was well written and I do love reading
each and every detail of your story!

this means i can't wait for the next!
what a wonderful start for my day! xDD
anyway, may i be, yoshida megumi kudasai?plss...
Posted 5/18/09 , edited 5/18/09

Geh-san wrote:

uwaaa~ good job zashnie chan!!!
it was well written and I do love reading
each and every detail of your story!

this means i can't wait for the next!
what a wonderful start for my day! xDD
anyway, may i be, yoshida megumi kudasai?plss...


doumo..,
**gently bows**
I'm really glad that minna-san likes my first chapter..,
please wait for more, ne..,??

hai hai..,
please just check the intro..,
^^
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whoa...
Are you sure it's your first time writing a fanfic?!

OMG, shnie-chan, YOU'RE SO GOOD~!!!
The 1st chapter was definitely a success~~
The details, the actions, it's perfect~!

You got me as one of your supporters for your fic~!
Posted 5/20/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

whoa...
Are you sure it's your first time writing a fanfic?!

OMG, shnie-chan, YOU'RE SO GOOD~!!!
The 1st chapter was definitely a success~~
The details, the actions, it's perfect~!

You got me as one of your supporters for your fic~!


it's my first time ALONE..,
without any help..,
XDD..,
I'm glad you like it, Shie-chan..,
^__^..,
Posted 5/20/09 , edited 5/20/09
KAKKOI FIC!! I <3 it meooow!! >w< SUUUPEEERR LOVE IT!! >w<
anooo... can i be michie-san?? ^^~
Posted 5/20/09

anime_delish wrote:

KAKKOI FIC!! I <3 it meooow!! >w< SUUUPEEERR LOVE IT!! >w<
anooo... can i be michie-san?? ^^~


HAI..,
no worries..,
I'll edit the list right away..,
Posted 5/20/09
::CHAPTER 2:: Classmates...Schoolmates...




Should I wake up the boy beside me or not? This was the first thing that popped into 朽木 ナキト (Kuchiki Nakito)’s brain as she looked at the sleeping boy beside her. Nakito knew he probably did not have enough sleep being an idol and all, but that wasn’t a reason for him to sleep. Especially during Language Arts where their teacher loved to pick on unsuspecting students. Sleeping students would be a good example to pick on.

Nakito poked Yamada. No reaction. Nakito gave a slight nudge. He gave no movement she pushed him a little bit more and harder. Still no reaction.

“Nakito what are you doing?” Nakito spun around to see her friend 今村アザミ(Imamura Azami) looking at her.

“I was trying to wake him up?” Nakito answered.

“If you are going to wake him up try harder,” Azami suggested. “Kick him or something.”

“Kick him? Isn’t that harsh?” Nakito asked.

“Well how else can you wake him up? Your pushing sure helped a lot,” Azami replied with a little bit of poison on her tongue. Nakito sighed. She turned back quickly before the Language Arts teacher would notice anymore. When the teacher turned her head to face the chalkboard Nakito gave Yamada a hard kick.

Instead of just normally waking up and looking around like Nakito and Azami expected. Yamada woke up, and because of Nakito’s kick, got unbalanced and fell. Nakito watched with wide eyes as he hit the ground with a thud. She gasped along with Azami as the rest of the class turned towards the commotion. The teacher glared and opened her mouth, taking a deep breath she yelled…
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春樹 ナナ(Haruki Nana) stared outside the window as the bell rang. Class was finally finished giving her a chance to relax. She wanted to go home as quickly as possible to tend the black roses in her garden. Nana wanted to finish as quick as possible seeing that it was April and the sun was too bright today for her. She did not like seeing such bright sunlight as much as her other friends.

The only person who could understand that was her closest friend 秋本 凛 (Akimoto Rin). They just both had the habit of being cold. It wasn’t like they were purposely doing it, things just happened.

“Nana,” Nana looked at where her friend was calling her. Her calm facial expression did not change. “Do you want to go to karaoke with us?”

“No, I think I’ll head home for today,” Nana replied as she stood up from her seat while grabbing her bag.

“Nana, why don’t you go to karaoke with us just once?” Her friend tried once more to persuade Nana. Nana had not once gone to sing. It wasn’t that she didn’t like to, but she didn’t want to sing in front of people. Nana stopped putting stuff in her bag for a few seconds as she answered.

“You shouldn’t really force Nana to go with you,” Nana was a little bit relieved as she heard the cool voice of Rin. Rin scared everyone in her class but Nana with her stares. They had become friends by staring at each other. Nana could feel her friends getting nervous under the stare.

“If…you…insist so Nana,” With that Nana heard the clatter as her friends quickly left.

“Arigatou Rin,” Nana replied with a slight smile as she cleaned her desk up.

“No problem. Well you owe me ice cream once more,” Rin replied with a calm voice. Unlike Nana she never smiled. Rin always asked Nana for ice cream every time Rin helped Nana. It was more like paying for help but Nana didn’t mind. At least there was someone who knew her well enough.

“I will. Hope you have fun with ghosts,” Nana replied. Rin didn’t believe things she could see. So she believed in ghosts and stuff. Nana liked ghosts but she wouldn’t say she believed in them. With that the conversation ended as Nana left the classroom.

Today she had a doctor’s appointment at 4:30pm and juku (extra school) starting at 5:30pm, there was no time to do much else if she had to finish her homework by tomorrow. Nana wanted to have at least enough time to take care of her black roses.

As Nana ran along in a hurry, she quickly checked her cellphone and did not notice a bunch of people were walking in front of her. She crashed into one of them.

“Ah, gomen (sorry),” Nana spoke as she looked up from her cellphone. It wasn’t her intention to bump into him out of all the people. She hoped he wasn’t like how she imagined him to be.
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鈴木 真由子 (Suzuki Mayuko) was running like her life depended on it. Which her life did technically depend on this run. She had forgotten her Science textbook back at school and there was a Unit Test tomorrow. Mayuko wanted to at least get as high of a mark as possible. She didn’t know if she would make it before the school closed. There was no after school club today so the school wouldn’t open long.

She was panting like mad and her lungs were screaming for air. Mayuko ignored everything and continued running. She needed those marks! Mayuko ran even faster as she saw her school’s faint outline come into view. She was almost there! The school did not seem to be closed. Mayuko’s classroom still had its light open. For what reason Mayuko could not guess, but the light was there and that was all she needed.

As Mayuko finally got to school grounds, she slowed to a walk and let out a huge sigh while panting. The door was open. It slid easily under Mayuko’s fingers as she entered the building. She hated quiet places, and right now, her school was silent and Mayuko did not like it one bit.

“It’s because it is after school that it’s quiet,” Mayuko tried to comfort herself as she continued walking in the hallway. Her classroom was on the second floor and the silence was killing. At least there would be someone in her classroom.

As Mayuko finally reached the door. She tried her best to open it, only to find out it was locked. The light however was inside. Mayuko tried knocking. There was no answer from inside. She knocked again. Still no answer. Mayuko decided to try pushing at the door again, for some reason this time it worked and Mayuko who was unprepared fell down right into the classroom,

“Ahhhh!” Mayuko crashed straight into the room as she landed face flat onto the ground.

"Ow..." Mayuko cried to herself as she tried to stand up. There was a boy in her room. A classmate that was for sure. And he looked very scared.
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"Dekinai (I can't do this)," 加藤 美雪 (Kato Miyuki) complained. Since she was usually quiet and it was after school, Miyuki was not really expecting anyone to listen to her. So she was surprised when someone talked back to her.

"When were you here?" A question arose out of the blue. Miyuki hadn't known that someone else was in the classroom with her.

In surprised, Miyuki looked around. There was her, the teacher, and a boy. She assumed it was the boy speaking. Her teacher always let her stay after school.

"Um, well, urmm, from the begining," Miyuki replied a little flustered that she was caught unnoticed. It was usually the other way around. Miyuki was soft spoken that half the time; her friends would not realize she was there. Soon they just assumed she was. Which was true.

“Hmm didn’t notice you here,” The boy answered. That was no surprise. It was the usual thing anyway. Miyuki didn’t answer to it. She was embarrassed that her thoughts had spoken out loud and in front of a stranger no less.

“So what brings you here?” The boy seemed oblivious to her being nervous.

“I…always stay here,” Miyuki replied.

“So you are in afterschool help too?” The boy spoke as if it was an obvious thing. “Your English is very bad.”
Miyuki immediately hid her English homework that she was working on. It was embarrassing for someone to see her mistakes. And this boy sounded like he was good in English.

“You go an apple not a apple,” The boy immediately corrected.

“Arigatou, tasukette kurete,(Thank you for helping me)"Miyuki quietly replied still hiding her homework.

“The part where you don’t get, all the person is asking is the age. So you just write 13 because the girl said so,” The boy continued correcting.

“Mata arigatou (Once more thank you),” Miyuki replied once more. She didn’t understand why this boy was helping her.

“Ano, why are you helping me? Who are you?” Miyuki asked. Her voice had gotten even quieter and she doubted the boy heard. However, he did.

“Gomen. I guess I shouldn’t randomly just say stuff. My name is-”
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“Stupid juku class, why do I have to have it tonight?” 村上 春樹 (Murakami Haruki) complained. “I really wanted to go out shopping with my friends tonight.”

In juku the teacher didn’t care about her studies. It was extra class and Haruki was quite positive that the teacher’s didn’t want to be teaching a bunch of students at night. So she could sketch stuff. That was the good thing. The bad thing was that in her juku class there was an idol, named Hikaru Yaotome. Haruki was a quiet person and usually just sat down and once class started immediately started sketching. Once class finished, she left.

The girls in her juku had other plans. For example following him around as he left, or literally stalking him. They called her cold and quiet person who didn’t deserve to be in this class. The only reply Haruki had was sorry. She never said much else in juku but sorry.

“What are you drawing?” Haruki turned around to meet face to face with Hikaru who was looking at her drawing. Juku hadn’t started yet.

“…” She didn’t answer for a while. “Something.”
Hikaru just gave a slight grin. “Well what is the something?” It was like he was trying to pry a little toy from a baby. Very hard, but once the right spot is found, it would be easy.

“…something,” Haruki replied once more.

“Something isn’t very descriptive you know,” Hikaru replied.

“Sorry,” Haruki replied once more. Hikaru was interrupting her sketching, and she didn’t find it amusing.
“Is it part of nature?” Hikaru tried a different approach this time.

“...no,” Haruki replied. She decided to continue sketching. In fact, she was sketching this classroom and it was quite evident but Haruki guessed that Hikaru was just trying to talk to her. He had his fans in this classroom, she wasn’t needed. So why was he not leaving?
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Baka! You are smart but you sure aren’t good at dancing!” 桜井 らいな (Sakurai Raina) was whacked in the back by her teacher.

“Make yourself straighter Sakurai-san! No! Just your back! Your knees have to stay bent!” Raina sighed as her teacher scolded her on her posture once more.

“Hai,” Raina answered in a loud voice.

“This sucks,” Rina muttered in a quieter voice. She was skilled at hip hop and usually had hip hop classes. But then her mom had decided to transfer her to foreign dancing. Foreign dancing! It was much harder than it looked.

Raina for instance never knew that you had to bend your knees for these dances. She also didn’t know that the dance was supposed to symbolize nature. Raina always thought all you had to do was move your body to the flow. She never knew some part meant the sea and some meant the sky.

“Sakurai-san! You have to look more natural! You look so rigid right now!” The teacher once more scolded. “Show your freedom in this dance! Your pride!”

Raina sighed again as she tried to make herself seem more natural. It wasn’t her fault that hip hop was rigid!

“Urusai (Noisy),” Raina muttered as she tried again. She would be so glad when class was over!

Raina literally skipped as she left the dance studio. She hummed a tune to herself as she walked on the bridge that crossed the river to get to her house. Raina noticed someone there. Someone she recognized very well.

Raina skipped over to him. She didn’t know why he was here, since he lived far away from her place. It was nice to see him though. She couldn’t disagree on that.

“Hey-“




Posted 5/20/09

zashnie wrote:


anime_delish wrote:

KAKKOI FIC!! I <3 it meooow!! >w< SUUUPEEERR LOVE IT!! >w<
anooo... can i be michie-san?? ^^~


HAI..,
no worries..,
I'll edit the list right away..,


arigatou!! >w<
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