Short Story Contest
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Posted 5/18/09 , edited 5/18/09
Please write a short story at least 2 paragraphs long with something about the voclaoids in it. Like a little fantasy story of them etc. u can even make them.....Mermaids! It doesnt matter as long as only vocalodis are in the story and its 2 paragraphs long! :D
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okie im basing this of off Rin's video for kokoro, so yeah here it is...by Sarah Weber (me the evil squirrel)


Hotai Kagamine was a professer...and..he was lonely with no one else in the world but
him and few others. He had dedicated his life to finding his daughter Rin after the storm
..but after 10 years of searching he hadn't found her..still..he never gave up....but..he needed
someone around him, so he created a robot that looked exactly like his daughter.
Every feature was correct and she was almost a perfect human...but..one thing was
missing..her heart...
Hotai worked all his life making it for her until the end...he told her never to open the program because it may have been to much for her, and..when Rin was checking the system after the
death of her professer, she opened the program and obtained kokoro...It was a miracle..she
felt all of her feelings flow into her all at once, happiness for what Hotai had done for her,
sadness for his death, and many other feelings for everything around her....she sang all of her feelings after that..but it only lasted for a moment because the kokoro was much.. too big for her, and she couldn't stand it...but at the last moment she still had a smile on her face...
Arigato...Father


hehe so yeah theres my story tell me what you peoples think
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ZatsuneMiku wrote:

okie im basing this of off Rin's video for kokoro, so yeah here it is...by Sarah Weber (me the evil squirrel)


Hotai Kagamine was a professer...and..he was lonely with no one else in the world but
him and few others. He had dedicated his life to finding his daughter Rin after the storm
..but after 10 years of searching he hadn't found her..still..he never gave up....but..he needed
someone around him, so he created a robot that looked exactly like his daughter.
Every feature was correct and she was almost a perfect human...but..one thing was
missing..her heart...
Hotai worked all his life making it for her until the end...he told her never to open the program because it may have been to much for her, and..when Rin was checking the system after the
death of her professer, she opened the program and obtained kokoro...It was a miracle..she
felt all of her feelings flow into her all at once, happiness for what Hotai had done for her,
sadness for his death, and many other feelings for everything around her....she sang all of her feelings after that..but it only lasted for a moment because the kokoro was much.. too big for her, and she couldn't stand it...but at the last moment she still had a smile on her face...
Arigato...Father


hehe so yeah theres my story tell me what you peoples think :D


hmm not bad defentily a short story xD lol :P
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