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Lets make together a manga
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Posted 12/25/07
My idea of how the power should works
-all humans haf the ability to haf strong power since their born
-but humans forget how to use the power as days go on
-powers are reactivated when he/she experienced something strong like tragedy or ..?
-power gets stronger when one wants to protect something important strong emotion or focusing?
-different will haf different form of power?
-the strongest form of the energy comes out when the person is truely desperate or something? strong emotions like love? (abit like a bankai form or ???)
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I donno because it was the original people that said the mouse thing because it was original so they would probably want to keep that idea since almost no anime has it over cats,dog etc
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yea that is right like Shibuya Kazuya from Ghost Hunt and Nagato Yuki from The melancholy of haruhi suzumiya
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lldarkanimell wrote:

-zell is in high school
-the school is mysterious and the principal is somehow connected to his past
-zell is popular even though he is not talking to other people much
-more like a silent type
is this good?


yea that is right like Shibuya Kazuya from Ghost Hunt and Nagato Yuki from The melancholy of haruhi suzumiya
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Posted 12/25/07
more ideas
-zell meets a girl hu is not realli popular
-the girl helps him get his memory
-he slowly falls in love wif the girl
-they found out dat their ancestor were enemies
-they fought for their rites to be together
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Posted 12/25/07
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

lemme think of another plotting
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25 / M / philippines
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Posted 12/25/07
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

lemme think of another plotting
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Posted 12/25/07
wouldnt that be breaking the wholeeeee 16 pages of the forum but yah u can try it out
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25 / M / philippines
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Posted 12/25/07
yay Finally someone agreed
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Posted 12/25/07

kohhj1993more ideas
-zell meets a girl hu is not realli popular
-the girl helps him get his memory
-he slowly falls in love wif the girl
-they found out dat their ancestor were enemies
-they fought for their rites to be together
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25 / M / philippines
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Posted 12/25/07
hmmm maybe remove the ancestor thingy XD
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Posted 12/25/07

lldarkanimell wrote:

-zell is in high school
-the school is mysterious and the principal is somehow connected to his past
-zell is popular even though he is not talking to other people much
-more like a silent type
is this good?


no.. ur still including the detail on the backbone plot.. should be like

-zell is in high school
-the school is mysterious and the principal is somehow connected to his past
-zell finds out more about the principal
-zell resolves the mystery of his past
-end of manga
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Posted 12/25/07
ah thx
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why dont we make the principle his master after a while
like he was watching him all this time just waiting to slap on the truth about zells past like so ghes mature enought to handle it
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Posted 12/25/07

kohhj1993 wrote:

more ideas
-zell meets a girl hu is not realli popular
-the girl helps him get his memory
-he slowly falls in love wif the girl
-they found out dat their ancestor were enemies
-they fought for their rites to be together


this one is almost getting the point..

should be more like this though:

-zell meets a girl hu is not realli popular
-the girl helps him get his memory
-he slowly falls in love wif the girl
-they found out dat their ancestor were enemies
-they fought for their rites to be together
-they end up together/not end up together
-end

try to only include on things that HAPPENED through the whole story. Characters/personality/powers/whatever << leave this out.. this is so we know what the story is ultimately about.. and if it's workable or not
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