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Lets make together a manga
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and the earlier story deals with him surviving on the streets, being a small thief at first, then rise to the top of the street politics because of the advantage of his power. Then as he become an important figure, he starts to unravel more and more about his past. The organization that kidnapped him when he was a kid. Their sinister plan and whatnot.
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well angeltakaiX .....i hve my own version of story...its like a detective type story w/some
supernatural and mystery....more killings and revealing...dis story im going to make is really great.....the char in the story dunno the killer(s) and also the readers must invvestigate to recognize the killer(S).....u must hve the abilities of a detective to solve thecase............wat can u say or react angeltakaiX?.....
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Needs guns of course!
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AHA SWEET
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supermalv wrote:

reckon = think.. hehe sorry it's a slang thing here on new zealand

ok how about this, guys...

When zell was about 6, he came home from a normal day of school, and find that his parents are murdered. before the reality sink in though, he felt somebody grabbed him from behind and chloroformed him.

Then, the story begins from this point. he suddenly wake up. in the middle of the street. confused and hungry, it was raining hard, but he didn't even feel cold. He starts to search for his house, but the area is very unfamiliar to him. At this point, fear is beginning to drive him insane. He didn't sleep that night, he kept running and running, asking people along the way where his house might be.. But nobody even turned and give him a second glance. He kept running until he feels his stomach is killing him. He tried to beg for food in the nearast food place (bakery, fast food/whatever you guys choose). But they told him to piss off. Every single shop told him to piss off. He falls off from exhaustion in a pile of bag of trashes in a random alleyway.

A wild disowned city dogs creeped closer on his sleeping body. It was a large ass doberman looking for food. A pack of them. without a warning one of them bit zell on the ankle. after groggilly wake up to a sudden realization he is about to die, his power manifest for the first time...


wow thats good...
Well this can also be one reason why he hates showing up in public becasue of his childhood life in the streets..

**continuation

When his power first came the power goes crazy but he doesn't understand what was going on but becasue of the power the city dogs run off. Then he stumbles in an abdoned (sorry about my spelling...its not one my my strengths >.<) house and thats when he summons Adrian out of his sadness
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can we add in a bit of romance? =D
hmmm it could be his first ever monster creation ever.. but it failed and turned into a girl/woman, and she sticks to him because he's her creator? hehe
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oh btw.. what country is this thing happening though?
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moronskie wrote:

well angeltakaiX .....i hve my own version of story...its like a detective type story w/some
supernatural and mystery....more killings and revealing...dis story im going to make is really great.....the char in the story dunno the killer(s) and also the readers must invvestigate to recognize the killer(S).....u must hve the abilities of a detective to solve thecase............wat can u say or react angeltakaiX?.....



well actually we could make that a filler even through if could be the main story aswell

but it seems we all already chose to make something else
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TheFullEclipse wrote:


supermalv wrote:

reckon = think.. hehe sorry it's a slang thing here on new zealand

ok how about this, guys...

When zell was about 6, he came home from a normal day of school, and find that his parents are murdered. before the reality sink in though, he felt somebody grabbed him from behind and chloroformed him.

Then, the story begins from this point. he suddenly wake up. in the middle of the street. confused and hungry, it was raining hard, but he didn't even feel cold. He starts to search for his house, but the area is very unfamiliar to him. At this point, fear is beginning to drive him insane. He didn't sleep that night, he kept running and running, asking people along the way where his house might be.. But nobody even turned and give him a second glance. He kept running until he feels his stomach is killing him. He tried to beg for food in the nearast food place (bakery, fast food/whatever you guys choose). But they told him to piss off. Every single shop told him to piss off. He falls off from exhaustion in a pile of bag of trashes in a random alleyway.

A wild disowned city dogs creeped closer on his sleeping body. It was a large ass doberman looking for food. A pack of them. without a warning one of them bit zell on the ankle. after groggilly wake up to a sudden realization he is about to die, his power manifest for the first time...


wow thats good...
Well this can also be one reason why he hates showing up in public becasue of his childhood life in the streets..

**continuation

When his power first came the power goes crazy but he doesn't understand what was going on but becasue of the power the city dogs run off. Then he stumbles in an abdoned (sorry about my spelling...its not one my my strengths >.<) house and thats when he summons Adrian out of his sadness


or

**continuation

and Adrian a mouse appears and tell zell to run he will take care of the dog

Zell runs away but after a while he stopps and looks back

when he searchs for the mouse and the dog he cant find them

Suddenly Adrian talks to him from his shoulder
"where are you looking at?"

Zell scared falls on his bottom

... and so on
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darn...which one should we use? o.o

supermalv also had an ending to that too...
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no, sorry it doesn't make sense because like.. if the girl comes from his power, that'll be like.. a part of himself.. and i don't think it's possible for you to fall in love with yourself.. that'll be creepy hehehehe

but i'm a sucker for romance.. i'd say yeah! definetely gonna have to add sweet moments in the story...

btw.. i actually just realize.. i really likeee the name zell.. i think it's catchy : D
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Try to think of ur Main Story before focusing on other stuff and nice story
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Needs guns of course!


Maybe the guns could be used by the ''normal'' people without
the powers the others have...
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you know.. this is starting to take shape.. just more details on the setting and characters.. then we can go straight to scripting.. then after that the drawing stage.. then inking etc etc...

who here can draw?? i can do it.. but it'll take ages with me.. but i think i can do a good job at page layouts with photoshops
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AngelTakaiX wrote:

waths a reckon?

lazy is good ... yeah he should be lazy .... even through he hasnt the time ... its perfect lol

and he should have problems with girls
mostly with girls sometimes with womans (if the woman looks yung)



how bouts h has problems with boys?? (just to mix it up...not trying to make him gay...)
so then he has lots of friends who are girls but not a lot of boys...


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