Chapter 1 part 1 -Changes-
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Where am I? It’s dark. All I can see is pure blackness. Wait, I think I see a girl…. she’s…..

A voice called out, “Hime-sama, hime-sama, wake up.” “Huh? It was just a dream,” thinks Princess Hikaru to herself. Opening her eyes, Hikaru saw that she was in the study with tons of paper in front of her. She stared at the paper in front of her and gave a gasp. The voice said, “Finally, you woke up. How long are you going to take with the paperwork? Really.” Hikaru replied expressionless, “Luchia. It’s boring.” “Hai, hai. I knew you would say that. Just finish what you can in an hour. Then proceed to the training grounds. I still have preparations to make. I’ll be taking my leave.” Hikaru gave a nod as courtesy. Luchia left the room. Behind the closed doors, Luchia was thinking to herself that Hikaru should have more emotions like she did when she was younger.

Hikaru managed to finish the paperwork in an hour and proceeded to the training grounds. When she got there it was empty. So she got decided to do her training by herself. She got a sword and began swinging it. This continued until she got tired. She decided to rest in the grassy field nearby. The wind was rustling as the afternoon sun was shining. Hikaru remembered the dream in the morning. “I wonder what that dream was about….”

As she was lost in thought, someone was moving towards her. *clash* Two swords hit each other. A man’s voice called out, “Eh, I’m amazed you noticed me. You’re getting better with the sword.” Hikaru replied, “You have to do better than that, General Travas.” “Oh, we’ll see about that.” They exchanged a few blows. Then Hikaru started to thrust the sword but General Travas, had quick maneuvers to evade the attacks. Hikaru decided to put a good amount of her strength into the sword but General Travas saw through the move. He blocked the sword which sent Hikaru’s sword flying into the sky. He caught the sword while he pointed his own sword at Hikaru’s neck. He said, “Game over. I think that’s enough for today. Good job with training. You better get going, it’s almost time for their departure.” Hikaru gave her thanks and left. While Hikaru was walking away, General Travas began reminiscing. He missed the times when Hikaru was younger and called him master. He thought to himself, “She’s become so distant…”

The sun was setting by the time Hikaru reached the gates. “Father, Mother…” The queen interrupted, “Sorry Hikaru, we’re busy. Maybe another time.” Hikaru’s head drooped slightly while she replied, “Of course, Your Majesty. I’m sorry to disturb you. Have a safe trip.” She waved at the carriage, as they left for the next kingdom. After that she entered the dining hall. She ate her meal all alone. Then she went to her room for an early sleep. She took a quick bath and laid on her bed.

On her bed, Hikaru gave a sighed, “The same as always, alone in this big castle. Another ordinary day. The repetitive cycle of days that brings nothing but emptiness…. I wonder if anything will change……

End of chapter 1 part 1.
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*Hime-sama -princess
*Hai –yes
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Peasant
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Posted 5/23/09
WOW! sugoi! as expected from the princess
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Posted 5/23/09
The story is really good, hime-sama
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Posted 5/24/09
WOW!!!~
COOL!!!!~
gambatte for the next part!!!
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Posted 5/24/09
I thank you all of your wonderful comments but it's alright to post things which needs improvement. That way I know how to make the story better. If you want to know, Chapter 1 part 2 is already finished. But of course, you need to wait the next month before you can read it.
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Posted 5/26/09
i can't wait for the next update! ^_^
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Posted 5/29/09
eh~ >.<
the story can only come out monthly!!!?
>.<
i am too excited to read it....mo~ XD
Posted 6/1/09
Oh Hime-sama... it's really getting interesting. Don't let s wait so long.
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Posted 6/3/09
aw.. ): poor hime-sama, T-T STEKIDESUWA!! :3
love it! x3 so awesome!! OH!! can't wait for next one! ^o^
Gambatte! and don't work too hard Princess! >O
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Posted 6/13/09
wow... what a story... reminds me of Saber from Fate/Stay Night when Hikaru is in the training ground... she's so cool <3

ganbatte ne, hime-sama =3
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