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Posted 5/22/09 , edited 7/19/09
There's a traitor among us...who is it? It can't be...IT IS!



Let me first introduce myself, I am Kana May. I belong in the Special Abilities class. A class in our school whom learn to harness they're special abilities from God. We were born with it...

There is a traitor among us...

That stayed hidden for a long, long period of time, without realization of this...

Watching us...observing our unique abilities...and just for what? So you can take our gifts from us?

Why did you leave me with mine only?

Am I special or something?

I'll find you get back every bodies power, to they're rightful owners!!

I swear this. . .










"MeiOh...YOUR SUCH A RETARDED FREAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!" I threw my desk at our class president/leader. "WTH DID I DO!?!?" He screamed at me, with a desk print on his face. "Damn it, that hurt!" He muttered loudly, breathing heavily. "This is how Kana-chan deals with her anger problems." Said a friend. "Yup, get used to it. You've never seen her mad like this!" Said another friend. "Haha! Kana looks like the incredible hulk! With the way she's acting, and how furious she looks." Said a retard. "SHUTUPPP! YOU THINK IT'S FUNNY THAT YOU GUYS DON'T HAVE YOUR GIFTS ANY LONGER!?" I shouted at them all, growling. "Not your fault, KANA-CHAAAAAANNN!" Said a friend. We had about 20 people in the special abilities class. Now, they're all without they're powers...just the class president has a tad left. And I have all mine. I control EARTH... Meaning I can pretty much lift up rocks with my mind, and do all that fun rock stuff. Use em to my advantage..."CHHHIIIIICKKKKKEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!" A voice from outside the window yelled, scratching the window with her finger nails. "Oh gooddd~ It's Eli." Said a friend. "OWW! I HATE THAT NOISEE!" I shouted irritated, opening the window, causing Eli to fall. "OOPS! YOU ALRIGHT DOWN THERE???!" I asked, she landed on the bushes. "I'M OKAY!" She shouted with her finger pointing up. I sweat dropped. "I'm bored. I WANT ICE CREME!" I demanded, walking away from the window, Eli climbing into the classroom window, grunting in effort. The ice creme truck was heard. "OOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMGGGGGGG ICE CREMEEEEEE MAAAAAAAN~!!!" I shouted turning into the incredible hulk again, GOING CRAZY JUMPING OUT OF THE WINDOW AND RUNNING TOWARD THE ICE CREME TRUCK. "Ice creme is her one and only desire...it seems..." Said a completely RIGHT friend. Kana handed a dollar to the ice creme maaaan. "Here!" I smiled placing the dollar in his hand. "Hmm...I want....I want...THE INCREDIBLE HULK ICE CREME! XD"

[o_o....no wayXD]

"The IH Ice Creme sure was DELICIOUSSSSSS! I want...another." I mumbled to myself, enjoying the last bite of ice creme going down my throat now. "I think it's time you got serious, Kana-chan." A strangers voice appeared behind me. Or so that's what it seemed like at the time. I was still outside of class. "Who the HELL!?" I shouted alarmingly, turning around and witnessing the persons random appearance. "I think it's time you got serious, Kana-chan." He repeated annoyingly. "Yeah, uhh- you just said that!" I let out a forced laugh effortlessly. "About MeiOh." He pressed his lips, serious and stern. My eyes hateful and fists about ready to punch someone in the face. "MEIOH!? DON'T YOU DARE MENTION HIS NAME IN MY PRESENCE!" There was a sudden edge to my voice. An edge that was full of hate, hate that I never felt for any person EVER. Why did I always get mad when his name came up? "When will you admit it...you can't help those friends of yours." His voice change to a lighter tone, almost as if he just WANTED to piss me off.

[CHICKEN & BROCCOLI :D]

"E....excuse ME!??!" I hissed while my temper got the best of me, my fists still bawled up into fists of fury. The man lied on the ground, unconscious or so it seemed. He looked at peace and easy going. "Prove it...then. Meioh will be here." He whispered, I could hear those final words of his, he then went unconscious on me. "WHERE?!" I shouted bobbing my head down while he still lay. But it was too late, he vanished out of sight. I screamed at the top of my lungs, "WWWWWWWWWHHHHAAAAAAATTTTTT THHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEE!?" Then later, telling my classmates about what just occurred..."Are you serious, Kana-chan?" Asked a friend. "WHERE will he be though?!" Another friends question bothered me. I sighed. "I don't know...but...M-meiOh controlled fire at first...now he controls many more elements..." I really detested to admit that, AND speak his name out loud. "He is getting more powerful-" I talked over & interrupted my friend. "NAH! I BELIEVE I CAN STILL KICK HIS ASSSSSSSS!" I liedd, as I put on my determined face, that LIES! My friends didn't look too convinced, "What if...he has come back to take your gift Kana-chan?" The president asked with little terror in his voice. "NOT HAPPENING!" I frowned hugely, a little upset that they had no hope in me. I WOULD protect them. And get their powers back. FOR SURE. Somehow...BUT FIRST! BATHROOM BREAK! "Ima pee. Brb." The class stared and blinked at Kana retreating for the little girls room. "What the hell...is up with her?" The class president asked.

[POTATOES :D]


~end of chapter 1 o_O XDD~




A loud and obviously bothered child's sigh echoed in the room. "Bored-ness." She moaned, then whined as she threw herself into her backyard for some fun. [<3] "Time to practice up on my element, earth." She grinned, a combination of a smirk AND grin. The ground she had stood on rumbled, she reached out, both palms out, and commanded the rocks from her yard to rise. "Beautiful." She noted, raising her arms up higher and so the rocks followed higher as well- she smirked. "Now..." She whispered under her breath and grunted, her arms shaking and her ankles still bent to prevent from falling, she continued to command the larger rocks up from the earth. "RISE!" owo "I SAID RISE DAMN IT!" But no change, she had only been able with small rocks. Why can't I do it...I've been practicing! The ground shook, trembled. And she began to lose her balance, her arms still stretched out, "RIIISEEEEEE!" She shouted one more time, but only dirt rose this time, she coughed, "Oh damn it all!" I guess you have to be strong to lift up the large rocks...even with your mind...

[MICROWAVE SOME BREAD :D]

That person from yesterday...what was he saying? MeiOh being here... "I'm exhausted!" She gave in and fell against the grass. Moving her hand to lay on her head. Sleepy...might just...fall asleep...in grass... She yawned like a walrus? [o-o.. ] And quickly started snoring some ZzZZZZzzz's. Stupid...ants...get outta my hair! She motioned a 'shoo' command with her hand as she weakly swung in the air. Brushing her hair with her fingers, AWAY BEAST! She was too sleepy to open her eyes and actually get up.

[KAKAKAKAKA :D]

-Yawn- "I ish bored & tired." I just took a shower to get rid of all those pesky ants from embedding in my hair. D: eeewww. I'm going back to school now to see what's going on. MeiOh better be there. 'Cause I want to get everyone's powers back. If not, I think I'll go crazy. LALALAL. I skipped down the sidewalk occasionally moving my body to the sound of a tune up ahead. What is it? Who knows. I'll find out. OMG PARADE?! THAT WOULD BE AWESOMEE! The suns harmful ray hit my eyes, I covered with my left hand, "PARADEEEEEEEE!" I cheered on like some sort of freak. It was ACTUALLY a paradee! omg awesome. There were weird looking people with these hats, all lined up with trumpets and other musical instruments. "When did a parade get here anyway?" I blinked curiously. Then just joined the fun whooping! "WHOOOOOOO!" I hollered.

[PO :D]

There were some entertainers in the middle of the street, [hope they don't get run overr!] They were showing off their...SOME POWERS!? Fire, water, and wind. "Didn't know there were other people like us...with powers." I felt entitled to make a scene with my earth element. But should I really? I mean...it isn't as perfect as theirs. They probably train every waking minute. I swung my arms across the air going with the crowd. Meh... My arms started hurtin'. "AWESOME FIRE POWER DUUUUUUUDE!" I shouted at one of the entertainers, but they probably didn't even hear me. Too much noise around me. "I don't feel like going back to school now." I protested with a pout. Then saw a dark blur figure just walking into the crowd managing a dark smirk the entire time. "Hm?" I blinked and peered my eyes trying to identify the weirdo. I need glasses, I can't see crap's worth.

[OMG NEXT PART IS GONNA BE EPIC <333333]

The personie guy that I can't see because I'm too far away had his hands in his pockets, and stood discreet until the entertainers stopped to stare at him. "So your saying you think your better at FIRE SIR!?" .......I couldn't hear them. I could only see their lips moving but no sound. What are they saying? The incredible audience stood in awe. "Damn it all~ I needa get closer." I noted making my way threw the rough crowds, "EXCUSE ME, EXCUSE MEEE!" I pushed and shoved little kids, haha. They started crying for their mommies.

[AJRKLJELAKRUIOEUJDLKAJFKLDJ I CANT SPELL :D]

Once I pushed and pulled for a couple brief minutes I was finally close enough to see what was going on. And I could identify the person stupid enough to think he's better. My eyes were wide at the scene, it was..."MAYO!" [lmao MeiOh XD..OHHH! I'm GOOD X3] "So you think you got what it takes to take me on kid?" The entertainer with fiery red hair tested Mayo. [I'll just call him Mayo from now on o-o] "BOOO! YOU SUUCK! GET OFF THEEEE STAAAAGE!" I boo'd motioning my thumb down. I can't believe it was him RIGHT THERE! The entertainer ignored me and kept his glare put on Mayo. "We'll see who's more skilled." Mayo provoked him. And teased while he conjured fierce fire balls from both palms. OH ITCH! I GOTTA STOP THIS MADNESS! The fire burned intensity into Mayo's eyes. He snickered and bombarded the fireballs flying immensely fast at it's target, the entertainer who also controls fire conjured some of his own from his breath, he breathed as he opened up his mouth and fire came out of his mouth like a wave. The wave just added in Mayo's fire balls that he threw, making the wave fiercer with wild fire spreading. Holy...sand castle. it blew Mayo's way the audience backed up in a panic. Fire beckoned in both their eyes. Is it getting hot here or is it just me? I noticed I stood alone close range to their showdown, "Uh." I turned around 180 degrees and noticed the crowds watching from A FAR. "You guys are chickens!"

[DORA DORAA DORA THE EXPLORERRRRRR :D]

Mayo got burned a little within seconds, but it didn't matter. He was immune. A little close combat occurred as I watched wide eyed. Mayo decided to get the first blow, Mayo made a punching motion in the air, and a ball of flame went flying toward the entertainer hitting him directing in his chest. "This is why I'm better." He mused and jerked his head in my line of sight. So full of himself and cocky. I stood mute and silent. Really just plain speechless. Why can't I move...this is my chance...to finally get him back for everything he's done!! His posture was negative, and he stood bored wondering if that's all his opponent had to offer.

[UH OH :D]


~end of chapter 2 OWO~





[WELCOME BACK FELLOW READERS OF TAIW :D]

Mayo commuted forward to see what had become of his weak opponent. "That's it? Disappointing." He frowned then chuckled. The entertainer stayed down, the ball of fire seemed to have almost went threw his chest and into his heart. He could have died! "THAT WAS A CHEAP SHOT!" I wailed with a pissed off face. "No one said they'll be any rules." He whispered to himself, looking down to his opponent with a grin. Hands in pockets. "Time to finish you off."

[DUN DUN DUN D:]

I gasped, "YOU BAKA!" Growling as I lunged myself in front of the entertainer, protecting him. No hesitation at all. "You wanna go!? WE'LL GO! AND I'LL MAKE YOU PAY FOR TAKING MY FRIENDS POWERS FROM THEM!" It was just me and Mayo, everything around me wasn't important. I tilted my head to the side but didn't completely jerk it around, "Hey, entertainer! GET OUTTA HERE!" I warned hushly, my eyes still locked on Mayo's threateningly. He nodded quickly and drifted away from us. "Good...now." I squinted my eyes and prepared my fists. Mayo stared at me sharply, waiting for me to attack first. And so I did.

[POT ROASTT :D]

"For everything you've done...you'll pay for it NOW!" My anger pumped every few seconds, I put my fists out and the ground reacted to the sudden change in the earth, rocks became forming with one another, creating an even bigger rock. The tiny rocks I put to the side, I didn't need them. I lunged my arms in motion and the rocks followed my every command. The earth trembled but neither of us fell. It seemed like my mind was working quite like I wanted it to, bigger rocks...bigger rocks... The surface erupted, but it was just me and Mayo. That's all I had to think about. Neither of us even flinched, the people around us didn't matter. They all probably fled about now. I squeezed my fists and few large rocks hurdled toward Mayo. He was just standing there, speculating. Or something. Did I get him? No. When my eyes re-opened to witness what damage I've done, Mayo had built a protective fire wall around him, my rocks slowly disintegrating into little pieces of rock. It's fire against rock...It's obvious who would win. Crap. I still had my fists forward and ready, I don't know what I'll do next. That fire wall is going to be hard to get around.

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OOOOOOOOOOOO LOOKS AWESHUM KOKO-CHAANNN!!! >w<
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Posted 5/22/09 , edited 5/22/09
NEW STORY FANIC~ i thought you were a grimmjaw W/E fanic o;

btw looks kool *-*
Posted 5/23/09
grimmjaww?
XDDDDD
lmaoo~ itsz grimmJOW ;]
[ima updatee thisz soon].
NOW I FEEL LIKE UPDATIN MEH GRIMMJOW STOWY~
Posted 5/23/09
LMFAOOO XD
i thought this would be serious....but NEVER MIND xDDD
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Posted 5/23/09 , edited 5/23/09
lol I should have known not to expect something serious from Can-chan-san-kun-GRIMMMJJJOOOWWWWWWWWW-Maannn xD
lol I LOVEEEE how you used, "said a friend" all over the place, and then a random "said a retard" xD
Posted 5/23/09
LMAO xDDDD
that was awesomee <3

EHHH!?
it'll get serious sooooon...
LOLLL embie-chan-grimmjowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww-awesomeeeeeeeeee-kun-typhoon o.o''''
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Posted 5/23/09 , edited 5/23/09
LOL I just noticed the HUUG typo I made xD that LOCEEEE is supposed to be LOVEEE O___O lol xD

It's gonna get SERIOUS soon??!??!!? O__O
YAAAT >w< I MEAN YAAAYYY
Posted 5/23/09 , edited 5/23/09
LMAOOO XP
lol :3 FUNNNYYY!
meh other stori is serious-er-errr >_>....LOL XD
tha one; FEATURING; GRIMMJOW! XDD NYAAAAAA NYAA NYAAA >W<
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Posted 5/23/09 , edited 5/23/09
Which one features Grimmjow again?? I forgot .__.
EDIT :: NEVERMIND >:D
Posted 5/23/09
XD......
LOL ._.
-sweat drop- o__o;;
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Posted 5/23/09
lol sorry I was especially lazy-feeling when you first put up that story so I never read it xD Just read it now though :3
Posted 5/23/09
LOL XP
i sawwwwwwwwwww ^^ lmao
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looks good bit hard to understand alot things going on but very funny story thumbs up from me
Posted 5/28/09 , edited 5/28/09
LOLOL thanxs xD
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