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Posted 5/25/09 , edited 11/28/09



~ Chapter 1 ~


Back then the world to us used to me more simple, less deaths, less crime, less stress. We were kids. We had our very own Utopia. We had no worries like the adults. Those were simpler times. Better times. I remember so many memories. Christmas day, sitting under the tree, faith smiling on us. Both our parents were murdered in front of our very eyes, we visit the graveyard where they sleep for eternity almost every night. We sometimes fall asleep on they're grave stones. Me and Him. My name is Tru, and his is Nel.

One night, Nel said something to me that boiled my blood. "Maybe...Tru, we should stop coming here..." Nel said, both of us looking at our parents grave stones sadly. "WHY!?" I bursted out with a shout, my attention to him now. Not the gravestone any longer. "It pains both of us each day we come...and we should move on, I think..." He requested. My mind couldn't accept to that thought. "NO!" I rejected. Sobbing as my head leaned onto the gravestone of my mother. There was no longer our Utopia. These days, I could sense Nel drifting away from me, but I couldn't do anything about it. He was like a butterfly, and he flew farther and farther from me. I noticed this days after our parents deaths. The one I had spent my whole entire child hood with, drifting away from me? I couldn't bear it.
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Posted 5/25/09 , edited 5/25/09
AWWWW D:
That's so sad T^T

And yet even in this sadness my weird little mind comes up with a reason for why their parents died at the same time =_=
Anyone wanna hear it?
Posted 5/25/09
o_O lmao x3
gooo ahhheadd :3
lemme hear yur THEORYYY :]
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Posted 5/25/09
lol well there are two xD

1... His parents and her parents were secret agents and were partners together and they all died on the same mission, where the bad guys finally won D: They were really good friends, but never introduced their children because they would be put in grave danger because if they were together the bad guys would want to go after them because they were so cute and such easy targets o___o

2... lol this one was the first thing I thought xD THEY'RE THE SAME PEOPLE!!!
Their parents lead double lives >:D On some days (or like during the day) they were HER parents and on other days (or like at nights) they were HIS >:D And they had two names too, so there are two graves for each of them to keep their double identities secret >:D

lol my mind works in VERY ODD ways .__.
Posted 5/25/09
-steps away VERY VERYYYY slowly from ebie-
o_o'' omfg..
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Posted 5/25/09
I told yew .__.

ANYWAYYY :3
Aww, that's sad D: Nel thinks they shouldn't go back T.T
But they'll still meet up to comfort each other right?
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Posted 5/25/09
I can't wait to read more ^^ It's so sad but sooo good!!
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Posted 5/25/09

Lunar_Wolf-chan wrote:

I can't wait to read more ^^ It's so sad but sooo good!!


Seconded!
Posted 5/25/09
o o i feel kinda bad now D:
if yew guys like it, THEN I GOTTA STOP BEIN LAZY N WORK ON IT > <
jk O O;

but yea, THANXS >W<
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Posted 5/28/09
very sad but this very true i here load of these story in real life how old kids they sound around age just started school. and the poem at start keep making thing of the song because of you lol. but still very sad and a emotional story
Posted 5/28/09
yeeeaa teh songg influenced meh to write a sad stori like thissz
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Posted 6/3/09
by way there is a anime called true tears very sad anime and very confusing and very mixed up
Posted 6/3/09
really now? o:
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Posted 6/3/09
ages ago there was anime like few months ago. very sad anime end was bit emotions. very nice story line just hate who everyone end up with
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Posted 11/28/09
this is a sad story!!
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