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Posted 12/22/09
WAKKAKA! SPOOK MESSAGE.
Posted 12/22/09
UM i guess i should post here.
watermarked original ;D yes i watermarked it betch.


two versions my friends decided the second one is better so i will just post that one up
thar the same anyways just one has one different coloring layer.

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Posted 12/22/09 , edited 12/22/09
heres mine 8D ^^^
* notes i think elyse has got this in the bag for sure!


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Posted 12/23/09 , edited 12/23/09
I need help!

Posted 12/23/09



first avatar;
it is too plain , of course being plain is bad , but usually for avatars it's better not to be so plain.
i find the coloring a bit weird x: try making the red not so pink-ish burns my eyes a bit .
Your font is a bit boring X: try downloading more fonts at dafont.com ~

avatar two ;
the picture seems a bit stretched .The font for the copyright is a bit bold to me X; try using a pixel font in caps or
a simple font like arial per say.The scanlines make it look too rough , try lowering the opacity .
The polka-dot pattern behind the font looks a bit funny if your going to do something like that try a white color
and lower the opacity .The background to me dosen't match

avatar 3 ; again i don't know if it is a texture with scanlines or scanlines by itself it makes the picture a bit rough/sharpened.
again it is also a bit plain . Try giving it a dreamy effect maybe by some nice light textures like a soft blue to match the color
scheme or some nice cloud textures.HMM , having the font in the middle for that avatar seems a bit awkward try moving not so
in the middle and try using a font that matches the picture if your giving it a dreamy effect try a nice readable cursive font with maybe
a light outer glow.

avatar 4;okay so your avatars i notice look a bit too sharpened X:
like i said for the first avatar try different fonts out ! Don't be afraid to experiment .
i don't really like the blue texture you used for the bottom half of the avatar x: looks a bit weird
try adding stuff that matches the colors in the picture.

avatar 5;The background looks funny x: try a nice simple pattern or maybe a texture perhaps .
D18 looks funny in a corner . Fonts quite frankly do not match download some other font to spice
up the picture ;D

avatar 6;your scanlines are a bit bothering to me x:
the black part separating the two pictures look a bit weird since its a weird shape.
the way it will work if your going to do that is if the font is on top of it if not then a small
thin line going straight across will look good.The fonts are boring and a bit out of place i mean you have a big
space dividing up the picture.The patterns around the person on the front half look a bit oddly shaped x: might as
well not do it.The second picture the guy on the rights head is showing on top of the black line and i would erase it .
So its like two pictures , if your going to do something like that maybe instead of doing that color make it black and white
or that brown sephia or whatever color , or maybe just a nicer different colorization.


what program are you using by the way .

excuse me for my harsh comments x;
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Posted 12/23/09

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first avatar;
it is too plain , of course being plain is bad , but usually for avatars it's better not to be so plain.
i find the coloring a bit weird x: try making the red not so pink-ish burns my eyes a bit .
Your font is a bit boring X: try downloading more fonts at dafont.com ~

avatar two ;
the picture seems a bit stretched .The font for the copyright is a bit bold to me X; try using a pixel font in caps or
a simple font like arial per say.The scanlines make it look too rough , try lowering the opacity .
The polka-dot pattern behind the font looks a bit funny if your going to do something like that try a white color
and lower the opacity .The background to me dosen't match

avatar 3 ; again i don't know if it is a texture with scanlines or scanlines by itself it makes the picture a bit rough/sharpened.
again it is also a bit plain . Try giving it a dreamy effect maybe by some nice light textures like a soft blue to match the color
scheme or some nice cloud textures.HMM , having the font in the middle for that avatar seems a bit awkward try moving not so
in the middle and try using a font that matches the picture if your giving it a dreamy effect try a nice readable cursive font with maybe
a light outer glow.

avatar 4;okay so your avatars i notice look a bit too sharpened X:
like i said for the first avatar try different fonts out ! Don't be afraid to experiment .
i don't really like the blue texture you used for the bottom half of the avatar x: looks a bit weird
try adding stuff that matches the colors in the picture.

avatar 5;The background looks funny x: try a nice simple pattern or maybe a texture perhaps .
D18 looks funny in a corner . Fonts quite frankly do not match download some other font to spice
up the picture ;D

avatar 6;your scanlines are a bit bothering to me x:
the black part separating the two pictures look a bit weird since its a weird shape.
the way it will work if your going to do that is if the font is on top of it if not then a small
thin line going straight across will look good.The fonts are boring and a bit out of place i mean you have a big
space dividing up the picture.The patterns around the person on the front half look a bit oddly shaped x: might as
well not do it.The second picture the guy on the rights head is showing on top of the black line and i would erase it .
So its like two pictures , if your going to do something like that maybe instead of doing that color make it black and white
or that brown sephia or whatever color , or maybe just a nicer different colorization.


what program are you using by the way .

excuse me for my harsh comments x;


thanks so much!^_^ And yay!>_< I can never find the right fonts! I use adobe photoshop cs3 and cs4! you have any good font reccomendations? and textures and brushes and other stuff? It's okay if you don't! or just to lazy to post anymore! sorry for the trouble!>_<
Posted 12/23/09


:D i use ps3&4 tooooo !~~ , but now i use cs4 most . why yesss ummm do you have an instant messenger O;
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Posted 12/24/09 , edited 12/24/09

elysepham wrote:



:D i use ps3&4 tooooo !~~ , but now i use cs4 most . why yesss ummm do you have an instant messenger O;


If you mean msn than yes! [email protected] There is someone with the username [email protected]= not me! Thanks again!^_^ And I hope you don't mind that I changed my avi for christmas (I promised my Oni-chan to have twin avi's with him). I'll change it back after Christmas!^_^
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Posted 1/17/10
Criticize~~~ XDDDD
Note: i use Photoshop 6.0 LMAO XD

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Posted 1/29/10
uuuguuu~ only thing i can do =3=
(c) to DA for line-art


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Posted 1/29/10

fire_ball8653 wrote:

Criticize~~~ XDDDD
Note: i use Photoshop 6.0 LMAO XD



ur aviis are so good :o
i wanna do like that >3<
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animemusiklover wrote:

ur aviis are so good :o
i wanna do like that >3<


haha, thank u:)
i'm actually quite noob, i like ur coloring:)
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Posted 1/30/10

fire_ball8653 wrote:


animemusiklover wrote:

ur aviis are so good :o
i wanna do like that >3<


haha, thank u:)
i'm actually quite noob, i like ur coloring:)


but still better than me =3=
it takes me like 3 hours to color xD
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animemusiklover wrote:

but still better than me =3=
it takes me like 3 hours to color xD


well, i color easy things :33
so it takes me like an hour or 2 XD
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Posted 5/2/10
Heyy.. honestly i dont know if i should show off.. so actually can you critic this? and tell me what i should do to improve?

This is the original picture of lady gaga


This is my horrible edit > <


Yeaaa.. i know it breaks the windows > < but can u please tell me nicely what i should change and tell me what is good about it so i can keep that for other things i do? (:
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