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Post Reply you all think the ending is good or not???
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Posted 12/25/07
i think they should change d ending ....d ending muz be like dis ....saber go back her world after she destroy d holy grail ....den she reborn n becom human not warrior ...n shiro meet her den they end up 2gether in d end ^__^ ...u all think dis idea is good anot ????
Posted 12/27/07

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i think they should change d ending ....d ending muz be like dis ....saber go back her world after she destroy d holy grail ....den she reborn n becom human not warrior ...n shiro meet her den they end up 2gether in d end ^__^ ...u all think dis idea is good anot ????


No way .... the ending was totally awesome.... one of the best endings out there. everything was answered and it doesnt seem like theres gonna be a season 2.

although this ending wouldave been nice ... picture this:

---- They win the Holy Grail War and they figured out that the Holy Grail was nothing but a weapon. so they destroyed it and sent Saber back to the place whre servants come back to. then shirou dies become a hero and go to the same place Saber is and live happily ever after!! ----

xP i still loved the ending though
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Posted 12/28/07
There needs to be a cool ending not one of those wuss likes that "Me so horny me love you long time!"

Think of this- Shirou and Saber decides to destroy Holy grail like they were going to but it turns out that it was, like every grail before, a fake and it causes same kind of destruction to fuyuki city like the last one. Now Shirou, who has lost Saber and all the people he promised to save, is angry for himself and feels too sorry to bear so he sets on a journey to improve himself and not to let anything like this happen again. After a few years Shirou wanders to Great Britain, London and stumbles on Rin while she is studying in the Clock Tower and he said that he had become a great magi and even better warrior and then Shirou apologies to Rin about the thing that happened in the past and Rin forgives him. Then they decides to hunt down Vatican so things like these won't happen again... And so the story goes on :3
Posted 12/30/07
I think the ending was awesome!!! It really tells you that Shirou and Saber weren't really meant to be with each other from the very beginning. It was emotionally satisfying and besides, I don't really like happy endings.
Posted 12/30/07
The ending is superb, one of the best I've seen. Changing it would be to destroy the Anime
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Posted 12/31/07

2619677 wrote:

i think they should change d ending ....d ending muz be like dis ....saber go back her world after she destroy d holy grail ....den she reborn n becom human not warrior ...n shiro meet her den they end up 2gether in d end ^__^ ...u all think dis idea is good anot ????


aiya..............like drama la.......haha^^
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Posted 1/1/08
I think the ending was great. I cried. Lmao.
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The ending was great but not satisfying picture this

Shiro uses grail to revive Archer(future of Shiro) for Rin, Saber goes back to her own time. Shiro disappointed to the fact that Saber returned back to her time goes into a little "I need my own space for now Time".

Rin pities Shiro and tries to help him because Shiro helped her get back Archer by studying ways on how to get a servant back to their world, Rin found a spell that can Warp some1 back in time.

Rin tells herself : I can't do this! This is way too advance for me!!

After that she finds an item called the *Bleep* (NO!! me not posting the name of artifact cause I named it and if I posted it some1 might use the name!! so sorry I will not risk my "originals" I am referring to the name of the artifact Rin found in her books) that can help her do the spell.

Rin then sends Archer(future of Shiro) back to Saber's time without Saber knowing, Saber destroys grail, goes back to her world kills Mordred(Mordred is King Arthur's son as in from her flash back the one who looks exactly like her and the one she sliced in half and said "Father"), Just when Saber meets with Bediveere/Bediviere(Sir Bediviere actually betrays King Arthur for 3 times but ends up obeying him) and Bediviere does what she is told.

Archer appears, starts moving close to Saber and Bediviere and says: "It sure is hard to find you, the others maybe getting a little anxious right about now.", Bediviere draws her sword and raises it at Archer and asks: "Who are you and how did you follow us?", Archer ignores her drawn sword and walks right past her and replies: "I have my ways." Bediviere angered by Archer's reply fights him cause she/he(*Bediviere is like a woman in the Anime but is actually a Guy in the real novel*) thinks Archer is an enemy that has come to finish of Saber/King Arthur and charges at Archer but is knocked back cause Archer PWNS, Bediviere continuous the fight but loses (well duh).

(After the little battle)Saber says: "I am the one you want right? Leave her alone!", Archer replies: "Technically you are correct, but I am not here to kill you.". Saber astonished by his statement replies: "Then why are you here?". Archer replies: "I will explain later on, but first." *Archer heals both of them*

Archer tells Saber to go back with him to Rin and Shiro's world, Saber threatens Archer cause she don't know him yet and raises Bediviere's sword against him cause he wounded Bediviere, Archer shocked by Saber drawing a sword against him says: "Hey, I already told you I am not here to fight.". Saber then replies: "Yes you said that, but I cannot change the fact that even though you healed us both, you were the one who dealt Bediviere the wounds that you healed!", Archer surrenders without even saying a word to Saber.

(Time: Night Setting: the three of them are circling around a fire Archer made using reserve magic that came from Rin) Archer Explains to Saber who he is and why he is there but does not call Saber by the name Saber, Saber shocked by Archer's remarks does not believe and denies that she is a servant. Saber then says: "Forgive me but I do not believe you, let us now go to sleep, it is late."

(Time: Mid Day, Setting: backyard of Shiro's house.)Shiro and Rin get pissed and anxious cause Archer ain't back yet and goes to past, Saber, Archer and Bediviere get into trouble from surviving enemy soldiers. (Archer was just about to PWN them when suddenly Shiro appears) Shiro beats them with the Sword Skills he acquired from Saber and Rin helps using magic, Archer makes a *damn that was uncool!! I was getting ready to PWN them!!* face and just says: *sigh* "Couldn't you wait for at least 2 days?" and Rin replies: "You were taking too long so we decided to look for you."

Saber comments Shiro and Rin cause of their clothes and how they beat the enemy soldiers without Armor. Archer looks at Saber saying this is "Shiro and Rin the ones I've been telling you", Saber still not believing Archer cause she suspects he is lying and says: "Would you please stop saying that, Time travel is not possible and this future world of yours is nothing but a fantasy." and the group sets up camp cause it's getting late and when everything settled down.

(Time: Afternoon about 5-6 pm, Setting: Just outside of the camp of Shiro and others)Shiro then explains every single detail to Saber, and shows her the scabbard she lost namely Avilon. Saber almost slicing Shiro the first time she saw Avilon in Shiro's hand but Shiro is Smart and dodges from the training Saber gave him, Saber then continuously slashes and Shiro simultaneously tries to calm saber down while continuously dodging her attacks and this little act causes the others to go where they are.

Saber gets restrained by Archer who twists Saber's hand behind her back and says: "Just listen to him for a while, we may not look like trustable people but just listen.". Bediviere unsheats her sword and points it at Shiro, Shiro says to Archer: "Stop we are not here to do this! We are here to convince Saber to go back with us!", Saber clueless to the fact of whom Shiro is referring to, asks Archer: "who is this so called Saber?", Archer makes a very (-.-") face and tells Saber/King Arthur that she is Saber.

(Time: Night, Setting: Camp of Shiro and Others)Saber calms down and says: "Very well Shiro, I will listen to what you have to say." Shiro replies: "Saber, um.. How do I say this uh.." and re-explains everything to Saber. Saber then replies calmly: "The facts that you tell me are impossible and cannot happen".

Shiro then materializes two swords namely Caliburn, Saber shocked at seeing that Shiro materialized Caliburn asks him: "how did you get this?", Shiro replies: "That is not a real sword... only an imitation of your sword Caliburn.", "How did you know it's name is Caliburn?!" replies Saber, Shiro replies: "You told me it's name. Saber also one more thing" *Shiro Materializes another sword namely "Excalibur" and presents it to Saber, who ends up believing him cause he presented her with "Avilon, Caliburn and Excalibur", and they go back Rin and Shiro's world.

Saber studies at Shiro's school and yeah she wears a school Uniform!! yeah they live happily ever after as for Archer well he serves as the watcher of the house and Ilya's playmate when Shiro, Rin and Saber are gone. THE END

And YEAH I took the time to write this so you better READ IT AT THE VERY LEAST!! Thanks to the ppl who take their time at reading this message and please comment me if this "little Story of mine" has some faults so that I can fix it for future readers. Thank you!
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Posted 1/5/08

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for Rin, Rin sends Archer(future of Shiro) back to Saber's time without Saber knowing


Let me ask... If Saber destroys Grail then how they are going to call Archer back? Let's say that they just do it then how is Rin going to send Archer back in time? Since as far as I know there is no proper spell/magic for that. And if there is, I doubt Rin could use it.

But yeah... Kinda messy but overall it is ok.
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It's a little far fetched, definitely, ^^ but it's not impossible. If they were to decide to take a step into the Romance, Slice of Life, School Life genre. (Saber, Rin, Shirou, attending school, heheh).

Just look at Neon Genesis Evangelion, with the somewhat popular spin off Angelic Days. There was no way Rei, the completely introverted silent character, could have become the social, flirty personality of that series, but it happened ^^; Granted, it was a manga and not an anime, but it picked up popularity nonetheless. How it did happen though, was through a plot-devise or some sort of event, which would make it seem logical enough to us fans to be accepted. In Angelic Days, it was a dream sequence, which expanded itself (and fanservice, everyone's blind for fanservice xD).

What could happen in Fate? Countless things. "Ace in the holes", "Deux ex Machinas" you name it, we've all seen it happen before. Zelretch could have seemingly been observing from afar and intervened after Saber destroyed the grail, with one of his ridiculously overpowered artifacts. Give them a mission to accomplish, one of utter importance that would require the presence of Saber, Archer, or whoever else that tickles your fancy.

That alone would fulfill more than enough to accomplish feats such as time-travel and calling Archer back, which would probably require "True Magic".

Rambling aside, what I'd say is this by all means can happen, though it'd require some polish, and added elements to interest past fans and newcomers. A school life scenario with character development and "School Rumble-esque gags", tidbits to old fans of how things came to be in Fate, links to other Fate franchise stories, or even Tsukihime (Type-Moon's other incredibly popular series).

Come on admit it, you'd love to see Saber and Rin get into all sorts of hilarious hijinx ^_^

Would it be a showstopper? Probably not. But I don't see it impossible for a manga or doujin to develop a storyline like that. A doujin group could just decide to run with the story, and if it gained enough acclaim, who knows what would happen.

But sadly, I'm gonna have to ground this to reality. The likelihood of something like this happening is slim to none, given Type-Moon's love for serious and gripping stories, instead of the shoujo genre. Fan reception to something completely different might pulverize it's chances of growing popular or commercial enough to receive large scale popularity.

God, I have too much time on my hands ^^;

Anyway, for those who don't have the time to read all of that, I'll summarise. It can happen, similar cases have occurred, but I wouldn't hold my breath.
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Uhh Sir-Henri umm, for the 1st question of how they revive Archer is quoted in this : "Shiro uses grail to revive Archer(future of Shiro) for Rin, Rin sends Archer(futere of Shiro) back to Saber's time without Saber knowing, Saber destroys grail," so technicaly Shiro revives Archer 1st before Saber Smashes Holy Grail, and for the 2nd question of how they send Archer back is, well Saber went back without even a spell being cast and so give a little book of spells for Rin a little magical artifact to give here the "mana" she needs and then "TADAH" my story is done :)

:) And oh note that this is my story and I appreciate you asking questions about it and thanks for pointing out that Rin can't use advance magic, I will put that in the story(in my computer) for my personnal enjoyment if you find anymore odd things message me!! I'll be glad to study the story I made and fix the faults
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Yes... When Shirou makes the wish then the holy grail disapears. So there is no grail for Saber to destroy.
Saber went back because her job was done. Since the grail was no more there was no supporting power to keep her there. Remember that grail itself is the main source why there is even servants...

(Traye... That is way too long... I ain't gonna read it! )


That alone would fulfill more than enough to accomplish feats such as time-travel and calling Archer back, which would probably require "True Magic".

I am not sure that can even true magic do that. But the first one is dead and the fourth is yet unknown so it mignt be possible...
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Posted 1/6/08

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(Traye... That is way too long... I ain't gonna read it! )


Aww, you say that but you read it anyway, didn't you!

Anyway, Brakion, I reread it and I'd say its a pretty good effort, the revisions helped make it more viable. Although, still highly unlikely to ever happen, I'll give you points on creativity. And who knows, I may be wrong and it must just happen one day, maybe. ^^

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Posted 1/7/08
the ending was great but i wish it didnt end....
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err I kinda of wish they did what higurashi did, and reboot the story to the very beginning but cover different scenarios arcs like how Higurashi covered and focused on different characters. That's not to say that they way the combined all three arcs from the visual novels was horrible, but I believed that Unlimited blade words and heavens feel deserved to be just as indeptly covered as the as the regular fate route was. Then they could have concluded with an original arc of their own, somehow summing up why there are three different timeliness or paths of shiro.
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