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Posted 6/2/09 , edited 6/6/09
CHARACTERS:



SUMMARY:


PHOTO'S:


OPENING THEME:


by the way...this is REALLY SUPER REALLY like the story of "Atashinchi no Danshi"....please don't call me a copier? cuz i WILL change the story a bit..^^
and sorry for my very selfishness...*bows*

i will post chapters maybe this weekend..^^ be excited~~ :D
And i'll edit the profiles a bit~ i don't have time right now..

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Posted 6/2/09
uwaaa!!!
niiice~~
^^
hihihihi!
waiting 4 it~~
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Posted 6/3/09

deen22 wrote:

uwaaa!!!
niiice~~
^^
hihihihi!
waiting 4 it~~


lol~~ thnx ^^

I will DEFINITELY post it on saturday ^^
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Posted 6/3/09

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


deen22 wrote:

uwaaa!!!
niiice~~
^^
hihihihi!
waiting 4 it~~


lol~~ thnx ^^

I will DEFINITELY post it on saturday ^^


haii! ^_^ hehe matteimasuu!
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Posted 6/3/09
it's soo atashinchi no danshi ne? hahaha~
i was just watching it last night xD satoru iss chuuute hahaha~ [the one who doesnt go out of his room.. that's right ne?]
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Posted 6/3/09
this is really interesting!! ^^
can't wait for it!!
the 6 boys are so cool!! xDD
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Posted 6/4/09

hsj9392 wrote:

this is really interesting!! ^^
can't wait for it!!
the 6 boys are so cool!! xDD


lol~ i had a hard time picking...=__=
i knew that i wanted ohno,shintaro and ryosuke in it.....
buuuuuut~ the others..i just randomly chose xD

whee~~
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Posted 6/4/09

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


hsj9392 wrote:

this is really interesting!! ^^
can't wait for it!!
the 6 boys are so cool!! xDD


lol~ i had a hard time picking...=__=
i knew that i wanted ohno,shintaro and ryosuke in it.....
buuuuuut~ the others..i just randomly chose xD

whee~~



I see!!
I'm glad Keito's there too xDD
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Posted 6/4/09
whoa~~

Keito's in here~!
*wootz!*

I'm definitely reading this~

and don't worry,
we all know that this fic of yours would be unique with "Atashinchi no Danshi" as a storyline
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Posted 6/5/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

whoa~~

Keito's in here~!
*wootz!*

I'm definitely reading this~

and don't worry,
we all know that this fic of yours would be unique with "Atashinchi no Danshi" as a storyline


*sniff* thank you for understanding...T___T

ahaha~ and thanks for reading the summary/character stuff xD

i thought noone was reading..O__O except for deen and jima lol
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Posted 6/5/09
hey! count me in! i can't wait for yours as well!
the storyline captured my attention you know that..
and yours would be surely one of a kind..
can't wait for it again!
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Posted 6/5/09

Geh-san wrote:

hey! count me in! i can't wait for yours as well!
the storyline captured my attention you know that..
and yours would be surely one of a kind..
can't wait for it again!


eep~~~

gehhh-chan T__T thank u!!!

I will surely make this fanfic up to ur guy's potential(? is that what u say? lol)

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Posted 6/6/09

Yamada_Yuuki83 wrote:


shieLdembLem wrote:

whoa~~

Keito's in here~!
*wootz!*

I'm definitely reading this~

and don't worry,
we all know that this fic of yours would be unique with "Atashinchi no Danshi" as a storyline


*sniff* thank you for understanding...T___T

ahaha~ and thanks for reading the summary/character stuff xD

i thought noone was reading..O__O except for deen and jima lol


*I just read it late 'coz school's starting here already~~ (urgh.. school's back~~)

and don't worry, I'll read it everytime I have time~
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Chapter 1

Shiori: Urgh! Hikaru~ Put your laundry in the hamper!

Tokio and Kaito came out of the sauna room with only a towel around there waists. They sat down at the dining room table.

Shiori: WTH?! Put some clothes on before eating!

Shiori placed some plates on the table, and walked to the stairs and shouted up to the rest of the boys to come down to dinner.

Shiori: DINNER!!!!!!!!! YUU, FUMIYA, KOKI, HIKARU~!! Come down and eat!

The four came down and sat at there seat.

Hikaru: Great! I'm starving~

(The camera is still rolling)
Narration (Shiori): This is just a nice and warm family...aint it? My life wasn't this great. It just, became like this unexpectedly. How you say? A miracle? Well, yea.

Shiori: -glaring at Tokio and Kaito- Didn't I tell you guys to go put some clothes on?! GO! Or you won't get any food! -__-+

The two of them crossed there arms and went upstairs to change. They mumbled to themselves while walking up the stairs.

Shiori: I heard that!

The two came back shortly, dressed and took a seat at the table.

Tokio: Shall we dig in?
Hikaru: Yeah!
All: Itadakimasu~~~!
Kaito: Umeee!! Shiori's food is always great!
Shiori: Of course! It's cuz I AM great
Kaito: haha
Shiori: *smiles* Hikaru eat your peas. =__=
Hikaru: I don't like peas!
Shiori: *glares* 3.....2....1
Hikaru: *ate his peas when Shiori counted to 1* mmmm....delicious *sarcastic*

Narration [Shiori]: Like I said before...this happy family came to me miraculously.
[The camera is not in the dining room table, but a park. You see a girl running. She is running from debt collectors.]

Narration [Shiori]: See that? That was me, before I became a member of this VERY rich family.

Shiori: *running* GO AWAY!!!!!
Debt Collector 1: *running* You won't get away this time!
Debt Collector 2: *running* You still owe us 100 million yen that your father lent from us!

Shiori tripped. The debt collectors circled around Shiori. She was in big trouble...

??:Hey!
Debt Collector 1: *looked back* Who the hell are you?!
??: Can you please let her be? I'll pay the 100 million yen she owes you.
Debt Collector 2: Really? Where's the money?
??: *handed them a suitcase filled with money* You can count it here, if you don't trust me.
Debt Collector 1: *looked inside the suitcase* ...100, alright we'll be going now...

The two debt collectors left.

Shiori: *stared up at the man who had just helped her* Wh-who are you?
??: tch tch tch...no manners.
Shiori: Oh, sorry sir. *stood up and bowed* Thank you very much! How can I repay you?
??: Marry me...
Shiori: *wide eyed* ...EHHHH?!!!

OPENING THEME:


[It says "Chapter 1 : Marry Me? An Unexpected Proposal! From an Unknown Man!" at the bottom right screen in white.]

Shiori: Excuse me?
??: You asked how you can repay me...so I answered "Marry me".
Shiori: Uhm? I don't even know you...
??: Oh, I am sorry. My name is Kaneda Sou. I am a single father of 6 boys.
Shiori: *stared blankly at the man*
Inner Shiori: Uhhh...I didn't mean it by that way?
Shiori: Wow...I see, but can't you ask a normal favor? Mr. Kaneda..?
Kaneda: Please!? I need someone to take care of my boys! *goes on hands and knees* ONEGAISHIMASU!
Shiori: *scratches her head* ...uhm...I guess I could? Since you DID help me...
Kaneda: *shakes Shiori's hand* Thank you very much!!!

Narration (Shiori): That's how my life changed...from a hoeboe, to a wife of a millionaire. *sigh* After making myself all cleaned up, I had a wedding with him, and went to his mansion. To meet his sons.

The 6 boys: *all staring at Shiori*
Shiori: Uh...hi boys ^^;
Kaito: Dad! You're kidding me right?! You expect me to call this GIRL my mom? She's not even older than me! Heck, she's younger than Fumiya!
Kaneda: You WILL treat her as a mom...We got married already, so there's no turning back! And that is final! *he stomped upstairs*

The 6 boys watched their father go up the stairs, then stared at Shiori.

Shiori: ^^; So...you can all call me Shiori, cuz I know you probably don't want to call me mom, or something like that.
The 6 boys: *glared*
Shiori: Okay..? not a talkative bunch...Want to introduce yourself?
Fumiya: *rolled his eyes*
Yuu: *sighed*
Kaito: *crossed his arms*
Koki: *put his hands on his hips*
Hikaru: *yawned*
Tokio: *just stared at her*
Shiori: Uhhhm...okay? I guess not...

The 6 walked away and went upstairs to their rooms.

Shiori: WAIT!!

Everyone still went up the stairs without looking back, except for Kaito.
Kaito: Don't think that you will be accepted as a member of this family...cuz you won't.

Inner Shiori: Hmph! What a bunch of snobby boys!

Shiori went upstairs to where Mr. Kaneda's room was.

Shiori: *knocked*
Kaneda: Come in.
Shiori: *turned the knob* Excuse me...
Kaneda: So, have you and the boys gotten along?
Shiori: Sadly, not.
Kaneda: Oh...*sigh* they are usually not like this. They are all so very cute...I guess they are shocked..?
Shiori: I would feel the same way, if my father got married to someone younger that me...and so sudden.
Kaneda: I guess is was a lil too fast?
Inner Shiori: OF COURSE! I WAS EVEN SURPRISED!
Shiori: Maybe...a little?
Kaneda: Hmm...well, here are profile cards I wrote, so you can know about the boys, it has there name,birth date, picture and etc. *hands her the cards*
Shiori: Thank you very much...
Kaneda: Your room is down this hall and to the left, it is not soo big, but I think it will be perfect for you. I also put some clothes in the drawers. I will take a nap now, so please wake me up when dinner is ready.
Shiori: Thank you very much. Do I make the dinner?
Kaneda: Of course! I have wrote down on what to make on the kitchen counter. Good night. *he pulled the covers and gestured Shiori to leave the room*

Shiori left the room and went to her room.
Shiori: *opened the door and blinked when she looked at her room* Wow...
The room:


Shiori entered the bedroom, and sat on the bed.
Shiori: Wow, this is more than what I expected...*takes out the profile cards and reads it*

Kaneda Kaito:


Kaneda Yuu:


Kaneda Fumiya:


Kaneda Koki:


Kaneda Tokio:


Kaneda Hikaru:


Shiori: hmm..so his only blood related son is...Kaito. Hmm...Oh my gawsh! Koki is a johnnys! *drools* no wonder...he looked so hawt when I first saw him! *controls herself* No...Shiori, you can't hit on your son...that isn't right!

The clock chimed 4'oclock pm.
Shiori: I guess, I'll go to the kitchen and make some dinner...since I don't know what time Kaneda wants dinner.

Shiori went downstairs to make dinner. She spotted the piece of paper on the counter it read...

Please make some type of stew, my sons love stew. The ingredients are in the fridge. Use as much as you'd like.
-Kaneda Sou


Shiori: hmm..*opened the fridge* Alrighty! I'll make the best stew they'd ever tasted!

She made the stew, and at 6' oclock, she setted the tables and called down everyone for dinner.

Shiori: Dinner's Ready!! Come down!

They all came down, but when she smiled at them and gestured them to sit at the table, they took their plates and went back upstairs.

Shiori: Hey!
Kaneda: *sighs* It's okay...they always eat in their rooms...alone.
Shiori: That rule should change!
Kaneda: *shrugs then sipped the stew with a spoon* Mmmm, this stew is tastey!
Shiori: Thanks...*sat and ate her stew*

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Thanks for reading! how was it?? O__O lol
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awesome job!! yuuki!!!! love it!!!! very interesting!!!
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