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-enough to save her sisters?]

UPDATE! This story will change throughout the time I make this series maple-ized. Because, i'm an idiot. LOL.

~Awesome new opening : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NXxYumzGi5Y

Turned into a maple series since I have been THREATENED to by a friend XD [okay maybe now o-o...maybe lured by a kookie o_o...]

~Reminder; I made this introduction while thinking of hte video 'Kokoro' apparently. Its also a crossfusion of a few more maple[story] series on youtube. Dang! ;~; i'll just have to make mines more different D=<

Characters: Has changed their looks Look @ the new opening

Special Character: I put the character in the opening ;D I can chose between the dude getting stabbed or the dude stabbing the dude. LOL. Eitherway their both evil >] -points at later in the opening-

~Special~ {After Chapter 3~4? XD}

"Comee onnnn, Ro~chan!" Mika and Mina whined, pulling Ro-chan. Who's Ro-chan you may ask? Since the robot we met didn't have a name, Mika and Mina decided to nickname her 'Ro-chan' from 'Ro'bot. Ha ha, Mina, Mika. "Where are we going, little people?" Ro-chan asked with a confused look. "You'll see!" Mina exclaimed as Mika went behind Ro-chan and climbed onto her back. Her legs over her shoulders and her hands grabbed onto her head to keep her steady. Ro-chan shook a bit but regained her balance, still continued to being dragged somewhere.

{LAzii :3}

~{Chapter 1}~

"Mina, Mika, wake up." Temi said softly and gently shook them. "I'm tiredddddddddddd." They whined. "Fine, i'll keep these giant lollipops." Temi teased taking out two giant lollipops and began licking them. "MINEEEEEEEE!" Mina and Mika shouted jumping out of bed and jumped to grab them. "Nope! Brush and then change." Temi exclaimed, lifting the lollipops up high. "Fineee!" They whined and walked to the bathrooom. "Now...to hide the lollipops....." Temi mumbled running around the house to find a place to hide them. "We're doneee~!" Mina and Mika cheered running down the hallway. "....DID YOU BRUSH FOR TWO MINUTES?!" Temi shouted as she paniced through the living room. "YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!" Mika and Mina stated. "Really? It's only been 30 seconds!" Temi stated as she wrapped the lollipops on plastic and hid it under her bed, which was folded back up into a couch. "....fine!" They whined and the footsteps faded.

"So your saying a big, giant, monster, bird, thingy thats made out of jelly came out and ate or lollipops?" Mina whined. "Yep." Temi stated, swinging Mina and Mika's hands lightly. "Okay, we believe you." Mina and Mika said together.

Temi smiled at them as she dropped them off at school. "Have fun!" She called. "We will!" They replied. "I'll pick you up later." She reminded. "Okie, Temi!" They said. "Byee!" And went off into the school. "I'll see you later, Rex." She said, nuzzling her nose into the little brown dog. "Ruff!"

"Are you-" He dug a knife deep into the person's stomach and smirked. He licked the blood off his hand. "Guess this ones dead." He said, kicking the dead body deep into the woods. "Where is that girl?" He asked, smirking.

Temi froze just as she was about to pay for her grocerys. "Miss? Miss?" The cashier asked, trying to snap Temi out of it. "Someone's here..." Temi whispered and quickly paid for them. She grabbed the bags and ran out of the grocery, afraid of what was coming.

"Who's here?!" She shouted, turning to see no one. She looked back forward and took a few steps. She heard a few steps behind. 'Who's here...?' She wondered, slowly walking. "No use running." She couldn't tell if the voice was a boy nor girl. It had a...robot, metal like feel to it's tone. "Who....are you?" Temi asked, no daring to look back. "You." The person replied. "How is that even possible?" Temi asked, turning her head just a bit. "Just warning you, someone's after you." The person stated. Temi quickly turned around, only to see no one was there. "W-What...?" She stuttered. "Who's after me?"

~{End chapter 1 o_O SHORTNESS}~

~Chapter 2~

Its a whole new world we live in. Its a whole new way to see. Its a whole new place, with a brand new attitude. But you still gotta catch em' all. Be the best you can be. POKEMON JHOTO! [Who doesn't love pokemon?<33] Temi looked at her cellphone, tilting her head a bit. 'School' it said. She picked it up, "Hello?" "Hello, is this the parent of Mika and Mina Taki?" "Yes." "Your daughters, Mina and Mika, are sick with a very high fever and right now they have lost consiousness." "....Kay, i'll come pick them up." "Good~bye." "Mina and Mika...? What's wrong?" Temi muttered, running to their school, the grocerys already in her backpack.

"Sensei? Ms. Taki is here." "Ah, your sisters are currently sleeping, Ms. Taki." The nurse said, looking over at me. "It's just...Temi. Just, Temi." I replied and walked over to Mina and Mika. Just as she was 10 feet away from them, the room began spinning. Everything became black and white and imediantly Temi took a step back. Everything returning to normal. 'What's happening?' She asked, wide eyed. "I'll carry them." The same voice from before said. The nurse and I turned around to see the person. We could tell it was a girl, because, well, the person, the girl*, wore a cute pink dress. A pink bow ran at the side of her waist and a few pink frills near the end of her dress. She quietly walked against the cement floor, her footsteps were quiet. The gray laces on her shoes were the only sounds heard. She also wore a black hat like thing? [iuno how to explain ._. iuno if i have a pic somewhere D:] It covered her eyes and she looked at Mina and Mika. Temi just slowly nod as she walked over to Mina and Mika, putting Mina on her back and carrying Mika in her arms. "Let's go." She muttered and walked out the door, Temi shuffling behind.

"Who are you?" Temi asked, as they entered their house. She gently and carefully put Mina and Mika into bed, "Like a said, you." "Is that even possible?" "Nope." "Then-" "When the time comes I'll tell you. For now, I need to tell you something else." "That is?" "The robot is after you." "N-Nani?" "You heard what I said." With that, she walked out of the apartment. Temi looked at where she once was. "Teka!" Temi shouted, running to her door. "How do you know my name?"

~End chapter 2~ [owo i needa stop the short chapters XD]

~Chapter 3~ I'll start whenever :D

"How do you know my name"

"So your Teka." Temi said, looking at her. "Your from my dream..." She whispered. "Yume?" Teka asked, slowly walking back to Temi. "You were in a lab...along with someone else...named...Kazu..." Temi said slowly,trying to recall the dream.

[Storii block owo;;]
Posted 6/3/09 , edited 6/3/09
-HELLO, my name is -FIRST POSTTTTT :D-

wat tehh...JRSKLEJTKLSJTLSW O-O''
lmaoo wen i first read teh title i was like 'WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH THAAAAAAA?!'
Posted 6/3/09 , edited 6/3/09
-goes read story now- (:

EDIT: ooohh and AHHH >W< i like ittt~<3 ^^
btw, NAME HER CHICKENNN!!!!!!
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to late >]
its temi xD
I promise you O-o
it will change D=<
i just couldn't think and then BOOM robot and girl came in mind xD
Posted 6/3/09 , edited 6/3/09
mehhh O_O
D:
"more later?"
MORE nooooooowwwwwwwwwwww *0*
now. now. noowww.

EDIT: ahhahahah nice EDIT XD
"maybe lured by a kookie..."
xDD
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laterr D: i have school tmr and i need alot of sleep xD

and YES
i was lured by a kookie *-*

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I can't wait to read more!!!!!! I <3 it!
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Ahhh! I like this >:D
A robot and a girl <3
AWESOME idea :3
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Kinda reminds me of Chobits for some reason....................
Nicely done!
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o_o
thanks o; XD

now to start updating....>w<
Posted 6/4/09
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEEEEEEEEEE >W<
yesterday i was gon put meh Memories of Snowfall ETC in teh cr 'fanfiction' thingyy
CUSZ I WANTED MORE OPINIONS ON TEH STORY~ NYAA<33
now i got time to do that o_o
brb >w<
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lol~ XD k? XD
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>_<
kinda scared to see wha ppl think tho OO
cusz i read thisz one persons story a while ago..[OKAY LIKE 2 SENTENCES!!]
n they're were kinda harsh cmnts D:
but mostly honest~~~
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yAAAAAAY updated<333333333
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O-O atleast they WERER honest XD
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