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►....★....◄ Poem CONTEST! theme: Go Green!
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Posted 6/9/09 , edited 6/22/09



we're up with
literature people!
get those mellow
feelings up and
type them down
NOW!





third contest of this theme! use all those dramatic lines to WIN!
just a little bit tips and trick:
1. make sure your poem has a specific style to make it more entertaining for us to read~ eg: a-b-a-b.
2. STANZAS!! this one's important. its like the paragraphing in stories. too many words per stanza can make us lazy to read your work ><~


just be creative and original and i bet you could win this :P~



R.U.L.E.S:


[1] no copying ore referencing or anything that has to do with illegal copyrighting. BE ORIGINAL!

[2] remember the theme has to be related with Go Green! genres are up to you.

[3] you may only submit maximum TWO entries




there will be TWO winners in this contest.
the most original and creative will win and receive and award and badge of prove
non winners will get badge of prove.


be POETIC NOW XD!!



entries submition till:


Posted 6/23/09

trumpace wrote:




we're up with
literature people!
get those mellow
feelings up and
type them down
NOW!





third contest of this theme! use all those dramatic lines to WIN!
just a little bit tips and trick:
1. make sure your poem has a specific style to make it more entertaining for us to read~ eg: a-b-a-b.
2. STANZAS!! this one's important. its like the paragraphing in stories. too many words per stanza can make us lazy to read your work ><~


just be creative and original and i bet you could win this :P~



R.U.L.E.S:


[1] no copying ore referencing or anything that has to do with illegal copyrighting. BE ORIGINAL!

[2] remember the theme has to be related with Go Green! genres are up to you.

[3] you may only submit maximum TWO entries




there will be TWO winners in this contest.
the most original and creative will win and receive and award and badge of prove
non winners will get badge of prove.


be POETIC NOW XD!!



entries submition till:




QUESTION!!!!
where do i submit the poem?
here in this thread????
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Posted 6/23/09

bbbppphhh22 wrote:


trumpace wrote:




we're up with
literature people!
get those mellow
feelings up and
type them down
NOW!





third contest of this theme! use all those dramatic lines to WIN!
just a little bit tips and trick:
1. make sure your poem has a specific style to make it more entertaining for us to read~ eg: a-b-a-b.
2. STANZAS!! this one's important. its like the paragraphing in stories. too many words per stanza can make us lazy to read your work ><~


just be creative and original and i bet you could win this :P~



R.U.L.E.S:


[1] no copying ore referencing or anything that has to do with illegal copyrighting. BE ORIGINAL!

[2] remember the theme has to be related with Go Green! genres are up to you.

[3] you may only submit maximum TWO entries




there will be TWO winners in this contest.
the most original and creative will win and receive and award and badge of prove
non winners will get badge of prove.


be POETIC NOW XD!!



entries submition till:




QUESTION!!!!
where do i submit the poem?
here in this thread????


100 for you sir XD!!!

yeap you submit your poem in this thread n me n th mods will choose the winnah >3<

good luck XD~
Posted 6/23/09 , edited 6/23/09
mm...okkk this poem mite be crappy, but blah idc i was very bored and dont hav much to do, yet i had fun making this poem LoL XD
hahahahaha

This Beautiful yet Ugly World

Take glance at our home
Hidden bliss is out there
In this place we call home
Something is fading away

Blinding the shine of plants
Ending our earth's age slowly
As our home is slowly rotting
U are still reading this writting
Take a look at your garden
Is your garden green?
Fine then if it is
U may think its enough
Look now at the world

You as the citizen of earth
Environment is our castle
Take action, a holy act

Under the blue sky
Green has to be the color
Lately beauty is fading away
Yet some are planting trees, and saving energy

Wastes from our homes are to be cleaned
One act to go green is needed
Realize the value of the environment
Let the aliens be amazed by our earth
Destruction of our home must be stop

GO GREEN!!!! LOL
hahahahaah
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Posted 6/23/09


omg supah creative o_o n i lolled at the BEAUTIFUL part rofl XD!!

awesome poem >3<!! im so favin this one XD!!
Posted 6/23/09

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omg supah creative o_o n i lolled at the BEAUTIFUL part rofl XD!!

awesome poem >3<!! im so favin this one XD!!


aaah.... thank you lol XD~~~
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Posted 6/25/09


love it!

i tried to write many times but..

i really cant! haha
Posted 6/25/09

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love it!

i tried to write many times but..

i really cant! haha


haha boredom made this poem~
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Posted 6/25/09

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deadska wrote:



love it!

i tried to write many times but..

i really cant! haha


haha boredom made this poem~


haha,, but its nice
Posted 6/25/09

deadska wrote:


bbbppphhh22 wrote:


deadska wrote:



love it!

i tried to write many times but..

i really cant! haha


haha boredom made this poem~


haha,, but its nice


ThX ^_^~~~~~~~ well ive been wanting to make this poem w/ this title~haha
Posted 7/1/09


nice! poem .... i lov it.. ur good...
Posted 7/1/09

nickeyis wrote:



nice! poem .... i lov it.. ur good...


thx ^^
Posted 7/3/09
HELLO?!?!?! ANYONE ENTERING BESIDES ME?! ....
Posted 7/3/09

trumpace wrote:



omg supah creative o_o n i lolled at the BEAUTIFUL part rofl XD!!

awesome poem >3<!! im so favin this one XD!!


hey hey if no1's entering till the due date i'll be the winner ok
WHATS THE PRIZE FOR THE WINNER?
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Posted 7/6/09 , edited 7/6/09
this ish my poem~ i got 100% for it LOL

Sky
It was a vision of my palette, best amongst the others like a smile beneath the frowns. Its incomparable and precious like a sapphire

I pictured myself as an artist, imagining the deep blue sky like a blanket covering the whole sphere around.
The sky was an inspiration of blue and white, it looked free and calm

My paintbrush strokes colours on my canvas that was as rough as concrete.

Nevertheless, as the colours touched it, the concrete breathed life like the flowers in spiringtime.

I now reached the clouds, as fragile as glass, so perfect and discrete.

then i gently portrayed the tree, the caring long arms of a grandparent, rugged and old, swaying silently as a gossamer wind whispers.

my fingers danced on the leaves, unique like a flower.

Everything is different, as well as the trees.\

then we reached the end, of this neverending piece.

TA~DA ♥ GO GREEEN :)))) if u hvnt realised, evry 2nd line rhymes, arigaotu
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