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Posted 6/12/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

*woohoo!*

YUTO ALL THE WAY~!!!

I'm already thinking on who the characters I'd be irritated...
and so far it's only Yamada~

but I bet I would somehow hate the Tetsuka Maria in here~!
just the sound of her name makes me feel indifferent...

oh well!
I'll keep on reading it!

GAMBATTE NE
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Yuto is love ^^
haha Tetsuka Maria xDD
she's not yet present yet she already got your attention ^^
LooooooL
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Posted 6/13/09 , edited 6/13/09
I'm waiting for Inoo's part..

He sounded like one of those endangered male martyrs with the description you wrote...

ganbatte neh!?

i'm reading..
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Posted 6/13/09
Awww...Nakayan is so sweet~~ ^.^
Nyahaha, Yama-chan is so mean. Its kinda funny.
I can't wait to read more!
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blood_15 wrote:

I'm waiting for Inoo's part..

He sounded like one of those endangered male martyrs with the description you wrote...

ganbatte neh!?

i'm reading..




thankies for everything!! ^^
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KawaiiHeySayJump wrote:

Awww...Nakayan is so sweet~~ ^.^
Nyahaha, Yama-chan is so mean. Its kinda funny.
I can't wait to read more!



haha thank you thank you!! xD
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Posted 6/14/09
EEEEEEEEEE!
I <3 it so far!!!!
Ganbatte!!!! >W<
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blackrainbowbunny wrote:

EEEEEEEEEE!
I <3 it so far!!!!
Ganbatte!!!! >W<




yay!! thanks for the support ^^
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Posted 6/18/09
second chapie~!!!!!!!!
heheeh....^^
i love it^^
ur really a good writer~!!
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second chapie~!!!!!!!!
heheeh....^^
i love it^^
ur really a good writer~!!




gosh thank you for the comment!!
I'm posting the next chapter later.. ^^
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Chapter Two: Mood-Swings of a Confused Young Man

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Maid: Ohayo gozaimasu!
Akira: Where am I?
Maid: You’re at Saito-sama’s house!
Akira: What the? Who’s he?
Maid: Please get dressed. He’s waiting for you in the dining hall.
Akira: Uh? Where are my clothes?
Maid: Hmm? I don't know...
Akira: What the heck would I wear now?
Maid: Here you go. *opens a cabinet full of expensive clothes*
Akira: I’ll… choose there?
Maid: You can have all of it if you want. *grins*
Akira: *runs to the maid* Gyaaa! Tell me I’m not dreaming! *jumps*
Maid: You’re certainly not, miss. Visitors here must always be given special treatment. So here’s our treat for you. *smiles*


Akira picked the finest clothes to wear. She even decided put some of it on her bag. Her bag was too small for clothes to fit in; therefore, the maid thought it would be necessary to give her paper bags. As soon as she’s done fixing herself, Akira rushed to the dining hall.



Akira: Domo arigato gozaimasu! *bows*
Saito: Do you know what happened to you last night? *tough voice*
Akira: *nervous* Gomen, I don’t… *still bowing*
Saito: Have a seat and take your breakfast. I’ll tell you how much trouble you’ve caused me.
Akira: Sir… *looks at Saito* *shocked*
Saito: Eh?
Akira: *gulps* [Why didn’t anyone tell me he has this prince-like beauty?]
Saito: Saito desu.
Akira: Saito-san… *gulps* I appreciate your kindness but I can’t take much of it anymore. I’m giving back these clothes too. I just need my old clothes back. Again, I’m very sorry for the trouble.
Saito: You can’t.
Akira: Nande? *loud voice*
Saito: They already threw away your clothes.
Akira: Eeeeeeeeh?
Saito: And I won’t let you out of this house unless you pay for the damages you’ve caused. Now sit down and eat your breakfast.
Akira: *slouches* Hai… [This guy, he’s so pretty yet so cruel.]


Right after she was done eating, Saito ordered her to follow him. He showed a tough aura while Akira defencelessly followed. They walked through the corridors and Akira shows an amused face as if it’s her first time seeing such a massive house. They walked a pretty long way until they finally reached their destination.



Akira: Sugoii!
Saito: Get a hold of yourself. We’re going to talk about business here.
Akira: Ah ano… Why did you bring me here?
Saito: I just want to ask you stuffs.
Akira: Hai?
Saito: What happened to you last night?
Akira: Oh last night. I… I… How did I get here anyway?
Saito: Answer my question!
Akira: Ano… *teary eyed* Should I tell the whole story?
Saito: Yes. *hands a handkerchief*
Akira: *cries* My sister is sick. I mean really sick! *blows her nose* She’s dying and I feel so bad that I can’t do anything about it! *bluffs*
Saito: Is her name Yuki?
Akira: No… uh… I mean yes! How did you know her name? *lies again*
Saito: I heard you say that name when you were drunk.
Akira: I did? [Damn! I sleep-talked?]
Saito: I want to see her.
Akira: No.
Saito: Why, what’s wrong?
Akira: I mean… she doesn’t accept strangers as visitors.
Saito: Don’t worry. I don’t have to show myself. I can look at her from afar.
Akira: No way!
Saito: Why? *yells*
Akira: Eto…
Saito: Coz you lied to me, ne?
Akira: It’s not that…
Saito: Then what?
Akira: Fine, I’ll tell the truth! *clears her throat* There’s this friend of mine named Yukito. We’ve been together since we were kids and I’ve had a huge crush on him since then.
Saito: And?
Akira: And I’ve tried so hard to make him notice me. I wanted him to love me too…


**FLASHBACK**

Akira: Yuki-chan.
Yukito: Oi Aki-chan. What is it? *taps her back*
Akira: I’ve been wanting to tell you this a long time ago.
Yukito: Hai?
Akira: I think I’ve finally got the courage to do so.
Yukito: Ne, please make it fast…
Akira: I love you! Don't you love me too?
Yukito: Of course I do! You're like, the best-est friend I have!
Akira: Ano, that's not what I mean.
Yukito: Eh?
Akira: I think I'm in love with you! I just want to know if you feel the say way. Or is there any chance?
Yukito: *pats Akira’s head* Aki-chan… you can’t get me with that joke… besides, you know my type ne?
Akira: *covers her face* I have to go. *turns her back*
Yukito: Aki-chan? Hmp…weird.
Akira: *cries out loud* *runs away*

**End of FLASHBACK**


Akira: I wanted to forget about it. Now it became fresh in my memory again. Thanks to you! *cries*
Saito: It’s okay.
Akira: It’s not okay! It’s just too painful.
Saito: I understand how you feel.
Akira: *holds her tears* Now you got what you want! I have to go now. *stands up*
Saito: If you're desperate to have him, then I think I can help.
Akira: *pauses*


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Hideaki: CUT!
Yuto: Wow! That was a cool take!
Hideaki: Cherri-chan’s getting better and better ne? Yama-chan?
Ryosuke: I don’t know. *smirks*
Cherri: Arigato Takki-chan! *bows*
Yuto: Oi Yama-chan! What’s wrong with you?
Cherri: Yuto-kun… it’s okay. *fake smile* I know deep inside Mr. Grumpy likes me! *giggles*
Yuto: *laughs* I know!
Ryosuke: What the?
Cherri: I was kidding! *grins at Yamada*
Ryosuke: *avoids looking at Cherri*
Hideaki: Oh yeah I forgot to tell you. Tetsuka Maria will be coming later to meet you guys!
Yuto: Woah! Isn’t that cool Yama-chan?
Ryosuke: *rolls his eyes*
Cherri: Stop acting like you’re not happy. *fake smile*
Ryosuke: Why won’t you just shut up? You know nothing.
Cherri: *bows her head* *keeps silent*
Yuto: *grabs Cherri’s hand* Let’s go somewhere peaceful.
Ryosuke: *looks at Yuto’s hand holding Cherri’s*
Yuto: *looks at Yamada* You're being too cruel. *walks away holding Cherri’s hand*
Cherri: *gives in*


Cherri’s POV
Why am I feeling this way? Who cares if Yamada actually likes Maria? I can’t be jealous. There’s no way! It’s not like I’m still crushing on him. Ah, I like Yuto-kun a lot better! He’s much nicer and he’s so stunning! But Yamada… he’s weird yet I don’t know why, despite the fact the he hates me, I can’t hate him back. I just wonder how Yamada will treat Tetsuka Maria.


Cherri: Ne, Yuto-kun.
Yuto: Hai?
Cherri: Gomen! *bows*
Yuto: Stop saying that! *holds Cherri’s chin up* It’s not… *gulps*
Cherri: *stares at Yuto*
Yuto: not... *moves his face closer to Cherri’s*
Cherri: *heart beats fast* [My first kiss. I promised to give this to my first love. But why can’t I resist him?]
Yuto: * slowly moves forward*
Cherri: *closes her eyes* [Oh my gosh! I need to stop him from doing this now!]
Ryosuke: *sees Yuto and Cherri* *panics*
Yuto: *his lips are just an inch away from her lips*
Ryosuke: Cherri! *shouts*
Yuto: Ah! *scratches his head*
Cherri: Hai? [Phew. Thanks for calling me. I wasn’t ready to give my first kiss yet. Gosh that was close!]
Ryosuke: Ano. Takki-chan’s calling you.
Cherri: Okay, I’m coming. *runs*
Ryosuke: *comes near Yuto* What’s going on here?
Yuto: Did you call out Cherri just to interrupt us? What are you doing here anyway?
Ryosuke: I’m just here to warn you. Stay away from Cherri if you don’t want our friendship to end.
Yuto: Damn! Shouldn’t I be the one telling you that? *grabs Yamada’s collar*
Cherri: Guys! Tetsuka Maria-san is here!
Yuto: *lets Yamada go* *runs to Cherri*
Cherri: Mr. Grumpy! Aren’t you coming with us?
Ryosuke: I’ll follow later.


Ryosuke’s POV
What should I do now? What if she doesn’t like me back? If I will be nice to her, wouldn’t she be suspicious? Moreover, she might not believe me if I show my true kindness to her. I started really bad. What can I do to make her notice me?


Maria: Tetsuka Maria desu. Yoroshiku. *smiles*
Cherri: I’m Kaeda Cherri.*bows* You can call me Cherri.
Yuto: Yoroshiku! Nakajima Yuto desu! *grins*
Maria: Ne, where’s Yamada-san?
Yuto: He’s coming any moment now.
Cherri: I can’t believe you look a lot prettier in person! *smiles*
Maria: Ah thanks. You look pretty yourself.
Cherri: No, you didn’t have to say that. *giggles*
Ryosuke: *comes in*
Maria: Oh. *eyes wide open* Tetsuka Maria here.
Ryosuke: *smiles* Yamada Ryosuke desu.
Maria: I really hope to get to know you guys more. Mind if the four of us go out together?
Cherri: I think that’s a really cool idea! *grins*
Maria: Hai. What do you think Yamada-san?
Ryosuke: Call me Ryosuke.
Cherri: [Eh?] *silent*
Maria: Ryosuke. *sweet smile*
Ryosuke: I think it would be nice.
Cherri: *fake smile* [Why is he being so nice to her?]
Yuto: Oh yeah! Tomorrow is a free day. Let’s meet tomorrow.
Maria: Okay! I’ll cancel some meetings tomorrow. I’m expecting you to be there at Aragawa at around 6pm ne?
Ryosuke: I’ll be coming. *smiles*



The next day: At the Aragawa Restaurant
Cherri: *checks the time* Oh I guess I came here pretty early. *sits down*
Waiter: Waiting for someone, Kaeda-san?
Cherri: Ah hai! You know me? *smile*
Waiter: Of course I do! I’m a huge fan of yours. And I can’t wait for your first drama to be on-air!
Ryosuke: *comes in the restaurant*
Waiter: *sees Yamada* Oh I didn’t know you two are dating.
Cherri: Who?
Waiter: Yamada Ryosuke-san! *grins*
Cherri: It’s mistake. We’re not--.
Ryosuke: Oh Cherri! How long have you been waiting here?
Cherri: Just a few minutes.
Waiter: You two look so good together.
Ryosuke: Thank you. *smiles*
Waiter: *bows* I’m here to serve you for today.
Cherri: We’re still waiting for the others.
Ryosuke: *stares at Cherri*
Waiter: I see. *walks away*
Cherri: *check the time*
Maria: Hello guys! *sits beside Yamada* Ano, where’s Yuto?
Ryosuke: He can’t come today.
Cherri: He’s not coming? *shocked*
Ryosuke: *he had to attend the school meeting of his brother”
Maria: Oh too bad. So how are you?
Ryosuke: I’m good! How about you?
Maria: I’m good as well! *smiles*
Waiter: I believe this is for you, Kaeda-san. *hands a bouquet of flowers*
Cherri: Oh, thank you. But who is it from?
Waiter: A man riding a limousine handed this to the guard.
Maria: Oh cool! There’s a card! *reads the card* I’ve watched out for you ever since you debuted.
Ryosuke: It must be a stalker.
Maria: A man riding a limo, he must be filthy rich!
Cherri: I don’t know.
Ryosuke: But still, you must be careful. *stares at Cherri*
Maria: By the way, let’s go to the cinemas later!
Ryosuke: Cool! But for now let’s get something to eat.
Cherri:*out of place* Hey guys, I think I have to get going now.
Maria: Oh why is that?
Cherri: I don’t know. I just don’t feel well. I’m coming with you guys some other time. *stands up*
Ryosuke: Hold on. I’ll send you home.
Cherri: No, I’ll be fine.
Ryosuke: It’s already late. I can’t let you go alone!
Maria: Ryosuke, girls don’t like being forced. Just let her go. *looks at Cherri* *grins*
Cherri: Hai! I’ll just take a cab. *walks out*
Ryosuke: *worried*


Cherri’s POV
Up until now I don’t get this man. It’s really weird how he changes moods. He’s just so concern and over-protective now! Could it be… that he’s starting to like me? Ah no way! I know. He’s just trying to impress Tetsuka Maria. That’s right! Maria, she’s nice. But I really don’t feel comfortable with her. It’s as if she’s hiding something. Argh! I should stop thinking negative things about her. She’s a great person, okay?
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omg it is nice(: chapt 3 pls(: hehe(: i love hw yamada reats here!
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Ooooooh, it's getting good yo! >w<
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!
yamada was really cool here..~!
chapter 3~!!!!!^^
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omg it is nice(: chapt 3 pls(: hehe(: i love hw yamada reats here!



wah honto?? xDD
thankies!!
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Ooooooh, it's getting good yo! >w<




wee!! thank you so much!!
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