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Posted 8/23/09
Ryosuke: *whispers on her ears* I like someone else. And she’s a lot better than Maria.

ahhh ryo-chan~!! could it be cherri?

lol please continue!
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Posted 8/25/09

sukiry wrote:

nkakabitin~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!hahah...
i love the part when yamada whispers on cherri's ears..haha....

i wonder what should i do if that happens to me...OHMG~!!haahaha....more chapieszzz...!!

onegai~!!

am i late on reading this cute chapter?..hehe

sna mapost mo na agd ung nxt...
we're loving it...~!!heheh


more power~!!



TYSMooch!! ^^
I'll work on the next chapter after my finals xD
and don't worry..
it's better late than never!!
Thanks again!!
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Posted 8/25/09

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waaaaaaaaaaaa ANDAYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!


bakit gaun ko lang to nabaaaasaaa!! sheeeet!!

andayaa nmnn T_T huhuhuhuhuhuhuhu!!
ohh well~
hahaha at least nabasa!!!

xhhht! an bayan!!
more namaan! uuuuber kakakaka bitiin!


"ADIK MODE"

gosh!
cnu kea ugn secret admirerrr!
nakaka baliw haa!


keep it up anee chan!!!!



hahahaha
thanks deen!! ILY & IMY
hehe secret admirer??
di ko p lam kung kelan xa lalabas xDD
malay mo anjan lng sa paligid lawl
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Posted 8/25/09

pekyi94 wrote:

Ryosuke: *whispers on her ears* I like someone else. And she’s a lot better than Maria.

ahhh ryo-chan~!! could it be cherri?

lol please continue!




could it be cherri?? >.<
hmm..
thank you loads for the comment!!
btw. nice avii ^^
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Posted 9/6/09 , edited 9/6/09
Chapter Four: The Enticing Mask Taken Off

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Princess-like, Akira was doing nothing while waiting for her makeover session to be done. Though she’s completely aware that what they’re doing is something that would make her look better after the session, she can’t help but worry. She’s afraid she wouldn’t recognize herself afterwards. Moreover, she might not like how she’ll turn out.


@ the dressing room:
Akira: Uh, excuse me.
Maid: Yes Mizushima-san?
Akira: Do you know any way I could contact my parents?
Maid: Oh about that, you have nothing to worry about Mizushima-san.
Akira: What do you mean?
Maid: We’ve contacted them already.
Akira: But. How did you--?
Stuart: They know you’re doing great! No more worries.
Akira: Hai.*breathes deep*
Stuart: Just relax. You’re going to look great after this.
Akira: I trust you Mr. Phillips. *smiles*
Stuart: That’s nice to hear. *mixes something*
Akira: Erm, what’s that?
Stuart: This one?
Akira: Yes, mister.
Stuart: A cream wax.
Akira: A… wax?
Stuart: Be steady… 1, 2, 3! *pulls off the wax*
Akira: AHHHHHHHHHHH!


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Hideaki: Cut! *claps*
Cherri: Whew!
Hideaki: Keep it up Cherri. *taps her on the shoulder*
Cherri: Thanks Takki-chan!
Hideaki: Maria!
Maria: Hai?
Hideaki: Get ready; we’ll be shooting your POV soon.
Maria:Sure Hideaki-san. I always come in prepared.
Hideaki: Good to hear. *smiles*
Cherri: Am I done shooting?
Hideaki: Not quite. You’ll be shooting a short scene later on.
Cherri: Okay then. I’ll kill time in the bridge side.
Hideaki: Sure. Take a break.



@ Maria’s dressing room:
Chihiro: Maria-san!
Maria: What? Who are you?
Chihiro: I’m a huge fan of yours. I was wondering if I could get your autograph.
Maria: Fine. *signs*
Chihiro: Thank you so much! *hugs Maria*
Maria: Uh! Okay, you may go now. *fake smile*
Chihiro: *sighs* It’s been nice meeting you. *gloomy face*
Maria: Yeah right.
Chihiro: *walks out*
Maria: Guard!
Guard: Hai? Anything wrong?
Maria: Why would you let a fan enter my room?
Guard: I’m sorry Maria-san. We didn’t see it coming.
Maria: You better do your job well or else--!
Guard: Yes, Maria-san. I’m sorry.



@ the bridge:
Cherri: I just love this place. It’s so peaceful! *sights*
Chihiro: *runs to the bridge crying*
Cherri: Oh, young girl. What’s wrong?
Chihiro: *looking down* I hate her! She’s so mean!
Cherri: Who’s mean?
Chihiro: *looks up* Kaeda Cherri?
Cherri: I’m… mean?
Chihiro: *hugs Cherri*
Cherri: *hugs back* I thought you hate me? *smiles*
Chihiro: It’s not you. Tetsuka Maria… She’s such a witch!
Cherri: Oh, you must’ve misunderstood her.
Chihiro: I went here just to meet her! But she turned out so mean! By the way, thanks for being nice Kaeda-san!
Cherri: Hey, call me Cherri! *wipes off Chihiro’s tears*
Chihiro: Cherri-chan deshou! *smiles*
Cherri: Hai! You’re?
Chihiro: Chihiro desu!
Cherri: Yoroshiku Hiro-chan! *sweet smile*
Chihiro: Hiro?
Cherri: Why? Don’t you like me calling you that?
Chihiro: No, it’s just that. Only my nii calls me that.
Cherri: Oh okay, I’ll think of another nickname then.
Chihiro: No, I love it! I think you look good with my brother. Do you have a boyfriend?
Cherri: Silly Hiro-chan! *giggles*
Chihiro: Would you give my brother a chance?
Cherri: Hey, we haven’t even met!
Chihiro: But--!
Yuto: Oh, Chihiro? What are you doing here?
Cherri: You know this girl?
Yuto: Yeah she’s Ryos--!
Chihiro: Hush!
Yuto: What? Ryosuke’s little sister!
Cherri: You mean…
Chihiro: Ah! I warned you! Now nii’s going to kill me!
Cherri: *giggles* Why? What’s wrong with me knowing your identity?
Chihiro: He gave me a condition before going here. He didn’t want you girls to know who I really am.
Cherri: Why so?
Chihiro: No idea. But the more important thing is… Yuto-kun spoiled it! Now I’m dead!
Cherri: No worries. I’ll explain everything to your brother.
Chihiro: But you don’t know him. He doesn’t want it when his plans are ruined!
Ryosuke: What’s going on here?
Chihiro: Anou…
Cherri: Erm… It was accidental!
Ryosuke: I don’t know what you’re talking about.
Cherri: *giggles* Yuto accidentally told me that she’s your sister!
Ryosuke: I knew bringing you here wasn’t a good idea. *stares at Chihiro*
Cherri: Hey, don’t be mad at her. She didn’t mean to spoil her identity. And so what if I know she’s your sister?
Ryosuke: *silent*
Cherri: *pleads* Just forgive her, okay? I could be a great help keeping her identity, don’t worry about that.
Ryosuke: Fine. *walks away*
Chihiro: OMG! You were amazing!
Cherri: I was darn scared a while ago!
Chihiro: No, you did great! You shut him up!
Yuto: She’s right! You’ve saved Chihiro from Yama-chan!
Cherri: Though I personally think Maria has to know you’re Ryosuke’s sister.
Yuto: Why is that?
Chihiro: I agree! I wonder what would be her reaction.


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Tachibana Akihiko’s POV
I love him. I definitely want to marry him, grow old with him. I just can’t forget the dark past. I’m afraid he would kill me if he knew who I really am... afraid that his love for me would turn to hate if he finds out. How could my fate be so cruel? It wasn’t really my fault! I tried to forget them, I just can’t! That dark cold night they went out bringing with them their guns and goons. They left me alone clueless of what’s going to happen. I just found them arriving home having bloodstains on their clothes.

“What happened dad?” I innocently asked.

He uttered nothing to me yet ordered the workers to send me to my room. For a week I wasn’t allowed to watch television, read newspapers, nor even go out of the house. They must be hiding something from me, I thought. From that day on, I promised myself to search for the truth. Though I wish I have never searched for that truth if I knew I would feel this miserable. That truth had caused me to break up with him, my only love. He asked why, but of course I couldn’t tell him my reason. I just don’t know what to do now.

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Hideaki: Okay, cut!
Maria: How was it, director?
Hideaki: You’re great and I have nothing to comment!
Maria: Okay. *fake smiles* So, am I over for the day?
Hideaki: Certainly!
Ryosuke: Great job Maria.
Maria: You think so?
Ryosuke: I certainly do!
Maria: Thank you! *grins* By that way, are you available later?
Ryosuke: After shooting I guess I have nothing else to do.
Maria: Let's have dinner together then.
Ryosuke: Sure! *smiles*

Posted 9/6/09

Maria: Thank you! *grins* By that way, are you available later?
Ryosuke: After shooting I guess I have nothing else to do.
Maria: Let's have dinner together then.
Ryosuke: Sure! *smiles*



nooo! don't take ryo-chan away! u don't belong with him! lol
please continue, i want to know how maria reacts when she finds out that chihiro is ryo-chan's lil sis. lol
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Posted 9/6/09

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Maria: Thank you! *grins* By that way, are you available later?
Ryosuke: After shooting I guess I have nothing else to do.
Maria: Let's have dinner together then.
Ryosuke: Sure! *smiles*



nooo! don't take ryo-chan away! u don't belong with him! lol
please continue, i want to know how maria reacts when she finds out that chihiro is ryo-chan's lil sis. lol




thanks for being first to comment!!
hehehe.. ^^
Posted 9/7/09 , edited 9/7/09

Ryosuke: Great job Maria.
Maria: You think so?
Ryosuke: I certainly do!
Maria: Thank you! *grins* By that way, are you available later?
Ryosuke: After shooting I guess I have nothing else to do.
Maria: Let's have dinner together then.
Ryosuke: Sure! *smiles*


why praise her???she's evil and cruel to your sis! jk,,jk, ,

ohhh..tsk, they're g0ing 2 hav dinner,,
hahaha.,.,well, let's just see what happens next,!!
chap 5 0negaishimasu!!
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Posted 9/7/09
maria is just a *platic*

i think chihiro and cherri would be friends...
or more,like sisters..whahaha...

im still confuse,hu's the secret admirer if her.?
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Posted 9/7/09 , edited 9/7/09

sukiry wrote:

maria is just a *platic*

i think chihiro and cherri would be friends...
or more,like sisters..whahaha...

im still confuse,hu's the secret admirer if her.?


we'll get back to the admirer later on haha
he would play an important part after all xD
thanks sa comment!! ^^
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Posted 9/7/09

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Ryosuke: Great job Maria.
Maria: You think so?
Ryosuke: I certainly do!
Maria: Thank you! *grins* By that way, are you available later?
Ryosuke: After shooting I guess I have nothing else to do.
Maria: Let's have dinner together then.
Ryosuke: Sure! *smiles*


why praise her???she's evil and cruel to your sis! jk,,jk, ,

ohhh..tsk, they're g0ing 2 hav dinner,,
hahaha.,.,well, let's just see what happens next,!!
chap 5 0negaishimasu!!



wee!! ^^
thanks for the support!!
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Posted 9/13/09
Jesse~! *tackles&glomps&hugs you*

why didn't ya tell me there was already another chapter?!
*pouts*

oh well, good thing I happened to pass by here in crunchy~ XDD!

see see~!
I told ya Maria's a total fake~
what a loser she really is~

and Ryosuke is ever-oh-so cold yo~! (>__<)!
I vote for YUTO! XDD!
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Posted 9/17/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

Jesse~! *tackles&glomps&hugs you*

why didn't ya tell me there was already another chapter?!
*pouts*

oh well, good thing I happened to pass by here in crunchy~ XDD!

see see~!
I told ya Maria's a total fake~
what a loser she really is~

and Ryosuke is ever-oh-so cold yo~! (>__<)!
I vote for YUTO! XDD!



shieee!! ^^
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I really appreciate your comment..THANK YOU!!
sorry I didn't tell you that there's a new chappy available ^^
hahaha I still dunno who Cherri will end up with xP
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Posted 9/18/09
WALA PANG CHAPTER 5 !?

OMG. I FFREAKING LOVE YOUR STORYYYYYYY! ~~~ ♥♥
MAKE MORE ! MORE !
IM being greedy. :))

PLEASEEEE ~~~
I JUST LOVE ITT ♥♥


Yoroshiku Onegashimasu! !
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Posted 9/18/09
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!

IM ALWAYS LATE!! T_T

HUHUHUHUHU!!

anyway... gyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa grbii!!

hahahaha!!

MORE!

nakaka exciiite grabiii!

Post muuuuureee!!!!


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