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Posted 6/12/09 , edited 6/12/09


We were group of friends that will go to the beach. But before we went to the beach, 2 days before that, there was a hard storm and tragedies that hit our country. Many people died, many people lost their loved ones, and there were some who survived. And yes, luckily we survived… but, did us really…. Survived?

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..Yuichi Nakamaru..
..Tatsuya Ueda..
..Jin Akanishi..
..Kazuya kamenashi..
..Junnosuke Taguchi..
..Koki Tanaka..
..Takahisa Masuda..
..Tomohisa Yamashita..
..Ryo Nishikido..
..Yuya Tegoshi..
..Kato Shigaeki..
..Keichiro Koyama..


..Friendship..
..Bond..
..Faith..
..Trust..
..Hope..
..REALITY..

..FRIENDS may leave... but FRIENDSHIP remains..

From my weirdness dream~ comes to an OS... xD
i failed at making it creepy =((
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Weeee!!!~~~~
You post it already!!!!
Yatta!~~
Can't wait~~~ *winks*
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woow!!
another interesting OS from you..
can't wait ^^
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2 Days before the Beach trip…

Yuichi: [on the phone] urg~ can’t you make your voice louder Tatsuya? It’s raining very hard you know!

*sound of a heavy rain*

Tatsuya: [On the other line] I said YES! I will bring the car on Saturday I’ll drive okay!!??
Yuichi: Okay! Bye! I’m going to call them now! [hangs up the phone] gosh, I wish it won’t rain this Saturday or our trip will b e cancelled! [Phone rings] hello?
Takahisa: [on the other line] yo! It’s Taka!
Yuichi: oh Taka! So you’re in? on Saturday?
Takahisa: of course!
Yuichi: great! Because you’re going to bring lots of food!
Takahisa: hahaha crazy~ Anyway, I just want to tell you that I’ll come! Bye! [Hangs the phone] yes!

*a huge Lightning strikes at the houses and made the houses lit more light *

Takahisa: whoaa! Strange lightning… made the house more light than to be blacked out “O.o”

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Jin: [driving on the bridge] geez, too much fog and rain! what the-? [Stops the car]

*a huge lightning strikes at the middle on the bridge that made it broken. Other cars came crashing and fell on the river below the bridge*

Jin: oh my God… [Steps out of his car]

*sound of car’s loud horns were only heard with all of the fog*

Jin: am I… just lucky?

*sounds of sirens were heard*

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Yuya: whoa~ Mom you okay?
Mom: yea.
Yuya: geez, our house will be all over with flood~

*suddenly the water came flowing inside*

Yuya: Let’s go up mom!
Mom: okay.

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Ryo: [eating] why does it have to rain this hard..

*suddenly a landslide came and almost buried the house of his neighbor*


Ryo: mm? what was that? *went outside* Oh my-… should I be happy that my house wasn’t buried? Or…

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-Air Plane going to Japan-


Junnosuke: I’m excited to go back to Japan!
Tomohisa: me too!
Kazuya: yea and the Trip too! I can’t wait to see them!

*suddenly Lightning almost strikes at the air plane. But made it shake*

Junnosuke: aah!! That was close! Lucky we are~
Tomohisa: yeah..
Kazuya: I was surprised~

2 Days after… Saturday at Yuichi’s house

Takahisa: wow you have a big van! We can actually fit here!
Tatsuya: haha thanks
Yuichi: so, let’s see if we’re all set. Tatsuya?
Tatsuya: yes I’m here~
Yuichi: good because if you’re not here we don’t have a driver. Takahisa?
Takahisa: Present!
Yuichi: bought foods ne?
Takahisa: Yea~
Yuichi: Jin? Yuya? Ryo?
Jin, Yuya & Ryo: yes we’re here~
Yuichi: Kato? Keichiro? Koki?
Kato, Keichiro & Koki: Yes we’re here!
Yuichi: Tomohisa? Junnosuke? Kazuya?
Tomohisa, Junnosuke & Kazuya: yes here!
Yuichi: so we’re all set? Let’s go!


-Car seat-
Driver: Tatsuya
Front: Yuichi
1st row: Takahisa, Jin, Yuya
2nd row: Ryo, Kato, Keichiro, Koki
3rd row: Tomohisa, Junnosuke, Kazuya


Tatsuya: so you guys ready?
All exp. Tatsuya: Osu!
Tatsua: ikkuso! Beaaach!! [starts the engine] *sound of engine starting*

-While driving to the beach-

Yuichi: it’s getting dark again ne?
Kazuya: ma, well doesn’t mean we have to postpone the beach! [laughs]
Tomohisa: yea! Because we came back from America just to attend this one you know~
Ryo: yes~ didn’t even think I could left that house~
Junnosuke: nande?
Ryo: well, there was a landslide that almost buried the house of my neighbor. Well lucky me, because it’s not my house~
Kato: eh really? Good thing your house has a barrier…
All: [laughs]
Jin: ah, last 2 days, remember I was about to get our snacks?
Yuichi: un. Nande?
Jin: well, when I was driving through the bridge, a strong lightning strikes in the middle of the bridge and it actually collapsed!
And it was raining very hard there and all I can see is fog, all I can hear is sirens of cars~ which many had drowned under the bridge.
Didn’t even think that there’s actually nothing happened to me.
Keichiro: eh? Maji de? Gosh Jin, thank God nothing happened to you~
Jin: yeah thanks.
Koki: let’s just sing Yorokobi no uta~ haha! Since we’re going to a happy trip!
Yuichi: haha right~ [starts to beat box]
All: [starts to sing]

-After a minute… all became silent-

All: ……
Takahisa: ah~ just remembered~ [loud voice]
Kazuya: hahaha you surprised me Takahisa~
Takahisa: haha gomen~
Tatsuya: so what is it?
Takahisa: well, after I talked with Yuichi oh the phone, a Lighting strikes through our house…
but it’s strange…
Jin: dou? Why?
Takahisa: normally, the lights would be dead right? Or worst it would burst out.
Koki: yeah why?
Takahisa: well, because when the lightning struck,
our house Lit more light that made it so bright that I couldn’t actually see anymore because of the light.
Tatsuya: hahaha suge~ that was a nice lightning!
All: [laughs]
Yuya: oh! The first floor of our house was almost taken away by flood!
Kato: eh maji de?
Yuya: yeah, but my mom said I should still go here~
because~ well, a promise Is a promise ne? and this will only happen once in a blue moon right?
All: [laughs]
Yuichi: sou dayo!
Kazuya: ah, remember Tomo and Junno? On the plane?
Tomohisa & Junnosuke: ahh! Yea!
Ryo: nande? What happened?
Junnosuke: the lightning almost strikes in the plane!
Tomohisa: but I guess we were lucky too~
Kazuya: yeah~
Tatsuya: Whoaaa! [Stirs the steering wheel fast going to the right and stops it]
Yuichi: ah! What happened?
Tatsuya: [pants] t-t-there was a girl! Wait! [went outside the house]
All exp Tatsuya: [wonders]
Tatsuya: [outside the car] eh? [pants] doko? Onee-san are you there? [wonders]

*sound of a truck coming closer*

Ryo: Abunai Tatsuya!!!
Tatsuya: eh? [saw the truck and moves away] w-what was that…
Yuichi: are you alright?
Tatsuya: u-un… [went back inside the car] anyway let’s get going before it gets more darker. [starts the engine]

*sound of engine*

-while driving-

Yuichi: T-tatsuya! Your nose is bleeding!
Tatsuya & Others: eh?
Tatsuya: [holds his nose and saw a blood] ahaha~ it’s just blood~ I usually nosebleed when it’s getting cold~
Jin: but it’s hot.
Tomohisa: strange~ my body is getting cold…
Ryo: maji?
Tatsuya: maa…

-Mean while, Koki sings-

Koki: Life is too short so take the time and appreciate~~
[Nick Jonas’s Appreciate]
All: ….. [Silenced and stares at Koki]
Koki: ahahaha! Just kidding~ [did a peace sign]
Junnosuke: mou Koki what’s with you~
Koki: dunno~ hahaha.

*sound of heavy rain drops*

Jin: ah~ it rained~
Keichiro: well it’s fun to swim with rain too! [laughs]
Kato: sou! Sou!

-after a minute-

Tatsuya: [stops the car] eh? I really know this was the way to the beach but…
All: [looks at the road] cementery… [all shivers]

*wind blows*
*screen goes around showing the cemetery which is filled with thick fog and a gray sky*


Yuichi: n-n-nande? Why did we stop here? Aren’t there any other ways?
Jin: Or maybe the beach is on the other side of this cementery?

*screen widens to the top view/ but unfortunately, what they thought was wrong. It was all cemeteries*

All: [became silent]
Takahisa: nanka… kowai… [shivers]

*sound of a girl laughing dreadfully “ki-shishishishishi”*

Tomohisa: w-what was that?
All: [turns left and right to find who it was]
Girl: [appears with long hair covering her face] kishishishishi!

*stronger and colder wind blows harder*

Tatsuya: y-you’re that girl on the road! W-why are you here?
Girl: [laughs again] you guys are so dumb. [with a very high pitched voice she spoke]

*wind blows her hair. Her face was so pail and eyes were big and hazel like it was going to popped out*

All: [shocked and scared]
Keichiro: w-wha-what do you meant by t-that?
Girl: friendship promise.. [smirks] what a nonsense. [comes closer]
Koki: d-don’t come near us!
Girl: [smirks] Well, not bad~ [looks at the other side] see? [points at somewhere in the cemetery]

*screen shows on the other side which there were souls. And it's their souls which were wondering and floting*

Jin: t-that’s… me… [saw his soul wondering around]
Takahisa: b-boku mo.. [saw his soul wondering around but his ware filled with blood]
Tomohisa: w-why is our… souls? There…
Girl: [grins terrifyingly at them] nyahahaha! Mi-t-te… [Points at them]
All: [blood is coming out of their head]
Kato: w-what the-?
Girl: you’re all dead! [shows a scary face with a grin] ki-shishishishi!
All: HUH?
Ryo: h-how?
Girl: You, you were already buried in that landslide! But because you wanted to attend this precious trip of yours, your soul still came.
Takahisa: that’s nonsense!
Girl: are you crazy? Of course there won’t be any lighting that gives more power to electricity!
The brightness you saw, you were dead by that time!
The lights burst in your face! [laughs horribly] but you wanted to attend too~ so your soul attended.
Takahisa: uso…
Girl: you, [points at Jin] you were drowned by that bridge! Don’t you remember? [grins]
Jin: urg—[head hurts and remembers it] u-uso! T-that can’t be true!
Girl: and you! [points at Yuya] are you dumb? Or crazy? Since when did you had a second floor at your house? [laughs horribly] you drowned together with your mom!
Yuya: m-m-maji…?
Girl: also you, you and you! [points at Tomohisa, Junnosuke and Kazuya] aren’t you wondering how could an airplane dodge a lightning? [laughs] you’re so baka!
Junnosuke: uso…
Kazuya: how could this…
Tomohisa: it’s not right…
Yuichi: ja, how about us!? Huh? Me, Keichiro, Kato, Koki and Tatsuya?
Girl: you all died because of me! When Tatsuya saw me, he turned the stirring wheel around and you crashed.
Luckily Tatsuya survived, but the truck bumped into him! So did you get it? You’re all dead!
Kato: then why are you here!
Girl: [laughs] it’s because I’m your service… to the other world.!


[A music played and it was Appreciate by Nick Jonas]
*screen zoomed and faces to each one of them, who was filled with blood on their faces*


All: [shocked, all held their hands together… slowly they disappear in sight]
Girl: [horribly laughs lauder]Gyahahahahahaha!

*a loud voice of a girl screams were heard*

Sou… we didn’t survive. And our friendship… didn’t really end. Strong faith led us to meeting each other again. And yes, we still met… on the other world. Can you believe that? They’re dead but still, eagerness led them to still meet us. Friendship is indeed strong, that is what I wanted you to know…


Hoped you liked it~
^o^ comments are highly appreciated!
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Uwahh~
This is nice....\:D/
Hehehe...I hope you will make more deen-chan...

-Michi-chan \:D/
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yay!!
I guessd it right!!
they're dead!!
OMGosh!!
I luff it ^^
great job deen-chan!!
Posted 6/12/09
whohohohohoh~~~ nice niccceeee~~~

pero, as nice tagalog version LOL. :))
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Michiko_heysayjump wrote:

Uwahh~
This is nice....\:D/
Hehehe...I hope you will make more deen-chan...

-Michi-chan \:D/


thaaaanks Michii-chaan! xP


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yay!!
I guessd it right!!
they're dead!!
OMGosh!!
I luff it ^^
great job deen-chan!!


hahahaah! great job making them die? hahahaha!


izza00t wrote:

whohohohohoh~~~ nice niccceeee~~~

pero, as nice tagalog version LOL. :))


yeaaa~ esp You're Jin here,
Jesse is Masu,
Jhammy as Junno, Kazu and Tomo
Shie as Yuya~
ahhaha
weirdest dreaaam ahha!
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uwaa!i know they would be dead!
although i admit it's really a creepy OS of yours!
omedettou gozaimasu for making this kind of OS!
i was really freaked out!

poor jin and the others!
huhu!
and waah...i thought i should be jin in here!
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Geh-san wrote:

uwaa!i know they would be dead!
although i admit it's really a creepy OS of yours!
omedettou gozaimasu for making this kind of OS!
i was really freaked out!

poor jin and the others!
huhu!
and waah...i thought i should be jin in here!


haha gomen~
you, cyylover and todsen were supposed to be
Koki, Koyama and Shige here :D
anyway
wiii thanks anee-chan~
Posted 6/26/09
wow this fic is really exciting~!! deen , you are really good creative writer again woaahh~!! I cant wait next chapters
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SEVgi wrote:

wow this fic is really exciting~!! deen , you are really good creative writer again woaahh~!! I cant wait next chapters


wuaa! thank you!
gomen for the late quote~!
became suepr busy at school~
anyway thanks!!! xD
Posted 7/4/09
haha no problem for me I have free time 3 month so I can wait
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I love it^^
Ueda and Ryo on a trip???
Did Ryo really got buried on the landslide???
maybe not....
maybe he was the driver of the truck tht bumped Ueda

hahaha
just kidding
but poor poor Massu T_T
I really loved ur story
stories rather....
I've read ur other fanfics and it's really interesting
Keep them coming ne^^
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lopezleanne wrote:

I love it^^
Ueda and Ryo on a trip???
Did Ryo really got buried on the landslide???
maybe not....
maybe he was the driver of the truck tht bumped Ueda

hahaha
just kidding
but poor poor Massu T_T
I really loved ur story
stories rather....
I've read ur other fanfics and it's really interesting
Keep them coming ne^^


really??? you have?? awww

thankkkyoouuu!!!
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