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Posted 6/25/09

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more plz soon~~!!!And whens the new gauridan coming!?please make him as cool and cute as Kyo lol :D


lol wait and see!! cause i don't think it will be like that muhaha XD lol


hhmm interesting...lol ;P
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Posted 7/9/09

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Awww...I was hoping that Kyo-kun would risk his life to save Emi-chan from kidnappers, but it turned out to BE Kyo-kun who kidnapped her~!! >.< Promise me you'll do something like that??? Besides my wishful thinking, AWESOME!!!! Now some trainign to go around~!! Can't wait till Chapter 21~!! ^^


Of course!! i will thanks for reading!


U know I will always read them Ahlor-chan...ur a famous author to be~!! ^^


thanks soo much! but im not even close yet!! still got a million trillion steps ahead!!!
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Posted 7/28/09

ahlor wrote:


Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:


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Hikaru_Michi14 wrote:

Awww...I was hoping that Kyo-kun would risk his life to save Emi-chan from kidnappers, but it turned out to BE Kyo-kun who kidnapped her~!! >.< Promise me you'll do something like that??? Besides my wishful thinking, AWESOME!!!! Now some trainign to go around~!! Can't wait till Chapter 21~!! ^^


Of course!! i will thanks for reading!


U know I will always read them Ahlor-chan...ur a famous author to be~!! ^^


thanks soo much! but im not even close yet!! still got a million trillion steps ahead!!!


Hmmm...xD When is Chapter 21 coming??? I'm kinda impatient...>.< I know I am, but I really love this story~!! WAAHHH!!!! >.<
Posted 7/31/09
lol waiting
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ehehe~ i thought chiro really kissed her...that gave me a scare...
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Cliffy.....cliffy.....cliffy....(I think I'll call you ahlor-chan so as not to confuse people...^^"l"l)...ahlor-chan....why...T.T...I want....more.....(I sound desperate here^^'l"l...well...that's ahlor-chan's fault for being such a good writer ..)

And oh yeah...You spelt the Magical World wrong...^^"l"l...Is it "Kaimura" or "Kaimaru"?

BTW...I had hoped Kyo-chan would burst in and see them kissing--->lots of drama...BUAHAHAHAHA...^^'l"l....yeah...I think I need a doctor...^^'l"l...

The rating for this story is 3/5 cus 1: It feels a lil' rushed there...hmm...yeah...I felt it was progressing a lil' too fast...
2: Evil cliffy...^^'l"l...kidding...^^'l"l...It's cus of grammar and punctuation mistakes...but you DID improve from the last time I read your stories...the mistakes are not as much now!! Gambatte!!

(Please be prepared cus this time it's gonna be a lil' hard so take a deep breath before reading...'k??Pls remember that all critisms are just so that you can improve...ok....?

I'M REALLY SORRY FOR MAKING YOU READ IT!!!!...Pls dun cry... I really feel bad abt it but uhh...
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