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If you want some constructive criticism on your art so that you can get better at it, post it on here and our members will tell you what needs improvement.
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im good at drawing on paper and all but i dont have anything to copy it onto the computer.... i'll draw something on the computer and hope you guys can tell me what looks wrong cause my sisters are no help >_<
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im good at drawing on paper and all but i dont have anything to copy it onto the computer.... i'll draw something on the computer and hope you guys can tell me what looks wrong cause my sisters are no help >_<


Okay! we'll love to help
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Okay, here it is. I edited it over and over but it's still very blury and sloppy. Please note that this is a girl and I am not very good at drawing bodies I also added her face a couple more times and wrote my signature and the date it was finished.

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Sorrelfeather wrote:

Okay, here it is. I edited it over and over but it's still very blury and sloppy. Please note that this is a girl and I am not very good at drawing bodies I also added her face a couple more times and wrote my signature and the date it was finished.



Okay. I'm giving my first shot at this. Please don't be mad if this sounds mean in any way. I seriously don't mean it.

Hair:
-try to make the bangs flow more. like its more natural and less so well defined like it is in your picture right now
-this also goes with the whole hair. at the tips have it fan out more and not just in one or two strands.
-the highlights are pretty good. but make sure to keep it more consistent and look to where the light is supposed to go

Face:
-the structure of the face is a bit awkward but it think its mainly the eyes fault
-the eyes need a bit more depth. like just one color isn't usually enough to be a good eye. put in lots of different shades of greens. and the highlight needs to be smaller or colored in a bit more. leaving a large white space doesn't look nice
-the nose i my opinion seems fine
-the mouth needs to be a bit more defined. i almost couldn't even see it!

Body:
-the neck is a bit too thick near the face
-her chest isn't quite even. like just looking at it...i don't know how to explain! >___<
-the body is simple. try to learn more about body proportions
-the fingers need a bit more realistic look (but i really shouldn't be saying. i can't draw hand either! =____=''')

Clothes:
-there needs to bit more folds and lines and not just one solid line



Overall I think its pretty good for a starter! ^^ Keep on practicing and you'll get good in no time!
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Here are two please tell me what ya think-one of them you already know:




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Here are two please tell me what ya think-one of them you already know:





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Hmmm well flowers aren't really my thing but I'll take a shot at it.
-i guess the flower/petals itself is pretty good already but the leaves could use a bit more work
-that's about it. -___- i'm sorry maybe someone else can help with this!

The girl is actually super good (well as far as i can tell right now)
I don't know why but the belly bugs me a bit. maybe its the angle?

I'm sorry i'm like no help! >__<
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Amarate wrote:

Here are two please tell me what ya think-one of them you already know:





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Hmmm well flowers aren't really my thing but I'll take a shot at it.
-i guess the flower/petals itself is pretty good already but the leaves could use a bit more work
-that's about it. -___- i'm sorry maybe someone else can help with this!

The girl is actually super good (well as far as i can tell right now)
I don't know why but the belly bugs me a bit. maybe its the angle?

I'm sorry i'm like no help! >__<

>well, for the first pic i would try making the rose petals a bit softer for the texture. the stem of course should be drawn with a texture of waxy hardness, since when ever i feel the rose stem it feels so waxy....

>for the girl she's pretty good so i cant really complain on anything
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as i looked at it first it looked pretty fine but when i look closer i see the chest is a little bit too small and no offense but the left one looks weird. i wouldnt hide the characters neck but if u are then use looser wraps. also the sword shoud be shown in the bottom right hand corner because swords are usaully long, right? the handle for the sword looks a bit rushed and the colouring for the sword handle makes in blend too much in the bacground....

well, those are my tips. hope i helped a little
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Posted 7/20/09
heyy guys, here's another picture. this i draw in pencil and not on the computer.

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Posted 7/23/09

Sorrelfeather wrote:

heyy guys, here's another picture. this i draw in pencil and not on the computer.



paws are a bit too close to each other, the anatomy of the cat usually stays even though it's in anime style, but if it's in ur own unique style then it's fine the way it is
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heres another of my OC, gettin better with painter but im sure there's going to be flaws. the head is big cuz she's supposed to be a creepy lil girl :D

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heres another of my OC, gettin better with painter but im sure there's going to be flaws. the head is big cuz she's supposed to be a creepy lil girl :D



it's pretty good but i would fix the brow and the mouth a little. (brow higher up a little and the mouth a bit thinner) unless it's your style
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Posted 7/23/09 , edited 7/23/09
here's one in color paint and before i painted, tell me what you guys think


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cycrone wrote:

heres another of my OC, gettin better with painter but im sure there's going to be flaws. the head is big cuz she's supposed to be a creepy lil girl :D



I simply love your style and Im always amazed at the uniqueness of your pictures. This one is no exception. There is one thing standing out to me and Im terrible at anatomy so I might be wrong but there is something about her left shoulder (the right one looking at it) that seems out of place. I think it might be forwards just a tad bit too much or too big. That was the only thing that stood out to me. The coloring is really good. Nice work.
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