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Posted 7/23/09

Sorrelfeather wrote:

heyy guys, here's another picture. this i draw in pencil and not on the computer.



Aw what a cute cat! I think that the left paw (right one looking at the picture) should be turned more outwards. I tihnk its facing too inward. Other than that its a good picture.
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Posted 7/25/09 , edited 7/25/09
here's another cat i drew up
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Posted 7/26/09
Nee, Minna-sama... I want to know what you think...
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Posted 7/27/09

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Nee, Minna-sama... I want to know what you think...


I think you did a great job with this. I can't see anything wrong with it.
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Posted 7/27/09

elyon65616 wrote:

Nee, Minna-sama... I want to know what you think...


> this looks great. the next one you post up try to make it in color, i wanna see it in color lol
Posted 7/27/09
So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<
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Posted 7/27/09

hanahitotsu wrote:

So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<


Honestly I think you did a great job with him. I think you just made him look a little "softer" than he normally does. Im not a big Code Geass fan but from pictures ive seen of him I think normally his eyes arent so open like and I think usually they are more up on his head just a tad. But I like the way you drew him.
Posted 7/27/09

Mysticmom2 wrote:


hanahitotsu wrote:

So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<


Honestly I think you did a great job with him. I think you just made him look a little "softer" than he normally does. Im not a big Code Geass fan but from pictures ive seen of him I think normally his eyes arent so open like and I think usually they are more up on his head just a tad. But I like the way you drew him.


Lolz yeaa it was difficult to make him look the same as the real one xDD
Thanks for the help <3
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Posted 7/28/09

hanahitotsu wrote:

So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<


lelouche's face is aryt, it's the one wearing the helmet that is lacking in terms of how it looks, the helm is a bit oblongish, I've drawn the same thing in the past but yea. other than that it aint bad.
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heres something I put together today from an old sketch. I thought I'd play around with metal. The head and skirt armor is still in the fixing but I'd like to know what kind of vibe she gives out. Still getting used to painter so there's very limited stuff I can do. XD

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Posted 7/28/09

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heres something I put together today from an old sketch. I thought I'd play around with metal. The head and skirt armor is still in the fixing but I'd like to know what kind of vibe she gives out. Still getting used to painter so there's very limited stuff I can do. XD



I like her. Too me she seems worried or shocked. (I hope thats what you were asking.lol.) I love her armor and hair too. Ive learned when doing anything metal that it helps if you add a tad bit of a light purple and some dark green on some of the shading. Its gives it a nice realisic look.
Posted 7/28/09

cycrone wrote:


hanahitotsu wrote:

So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<


lelouche's face is aryt, it's the one wearing the helmet that is lacking in terms of how it looks, the helm is a bit oblongish, I've drawn the same thing in the past but yea. other than that it aint bad.


You're right xD The helmet was a FAILURE Dx
It doesn't look the same as the real one xD
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Posted 7/28/09

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cycrone wrote:

heres something I put together today from an old sketch. I thought I'd play around with metal. The head and skirt armor is still in the fixing but I'd like to know what kind of vibe she gives out. Still getting used to painter so there's very limited stuff I can do. XD



I like her. Too me she seems worried or shocked. (I hope thats what you were asking.lol.) I love her armor and hair too. Ive learned when doing anything metal that it helps if you add a tad bit of a light purple and some dark green on some of the shading. Its gives it a nice realisic look.


thanks alot i was looking for a better way to make the metal not so plain.
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Posted 7/31/09
Here's a picture i painted, he's one of my evil characters for one of my novels. well, other then the eyebrows tell me what i can do to improve painting or drawing technique
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Posted 8/1/09

hanahitotsu wrote:

So this is my first Code Geass fanart :O
I showed this to my friend and asked for a opinion,
and she told me that something's wrong with Lelouch (the one on the top) o_o
Please help me! >_<


hmm... honest i think lelouch is fine!
but i believe the mask/helmet thing is for his face (the glass or whatever part where he see's through it) is a little too small or imporportionate compared to what his face size but i know it can be different size so yeah!
oh i hate to do this because i can't draw like this
but i want you to get better so please bare with me!!

the level of his "frowning" is a little different than his eyes
hmmm... how to say this


his frown is more serious than his eyes
his eyes looks a little more carefree compared to his frown
which is why he might look a (like your friend said)
you can fix the eyes
OR fix the frown! (which is what i would do!)


otherwise nice job izumi-chan!!! amazing!! i could never draw lelouch that good
especially if its the first time!
*sigh* i need to get better!! ^-^
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