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Posted 8/18/09
a rough sketch of a style im trying. its UN-finished but tell me what you think?

(my signature is on his neck, AZ.)

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Posted 8/20/09
Heres mine =] I know its a little dodgy but I cant tell what >.<
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Posted 8/21/09

Kumo-Chan wrote:

a rough sketch of a style im trying. its UN-finished but tell me what you think?

(my signature is on his neck, AZ.)



Aw hes cute! I really like it. The only thing I can say is the shoulders seem a little too broad but thats about it. Nice coloring!
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Posted 8/21/09

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Heres mine =] I know its a little dodgy but I cant tell what >.<


Looks good! I love her expression and the way shes standing. A little work on anatomy is all ya need!
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Posted 8/21/09

ilike wrote:

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Cute drawing. I love the outfit. The coloring is nice. When using white, white is never just white. Or atleast thats what i do when i have something white. Same goes for black. There are always subtle hues to add in to bring it out more. (a light light blue or grey with white and usually a deep deep blue or green for black) Her boots could be more realistic by adding the tongue on the top and bringing the laces down farther and adding the tongue down more. Other than that I like it!
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Posted 8/21/09

Mysticmom2 wrote:


tsoukyun89 wrote:

Heres mine =] I know its a little dodgy but I cant tell what >.<


Looks good! I love her expression and the way shes standing. A little work on anatomy is all ya need!


Ok thanx =D

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Posted 8/22/09

Mysticmom2 wrote:


Kumo-Chan wrote:

a rough sketch of a style im trying. its UN-finished but tell me what you think?

(my signature is on his neck, AZ.)



Aw hes cute! I really like it. The only thing I can say is the shoulders seem a little too broad but thats about it. Nice coloring!


yeah, i cant rly draw the body lols... D: and thank you ^^
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Posted 8/23/09

tsoukyun89 wrote:

Heres mine =] I know its a little dodgy but I cant tell what >.<


errr.. i'm nt actually a pro, so i'm not gud @ commenting (dun even think i actually deserve to critisize) so, if sum of them r wrong or wierd, i'm really sorry
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Posted 8/23/09

chubbyhippo07 wrote:


tsoukyun89 wrote:

Heres mine =] I know its a little dodgy but I cant tell what >.<


errr.. i'm nt actually a pro, so i'm not gud @ commenting (dun even think i actually deserve to critisize) so, if sum of them r wrong or wierd, i'm really sorry


Its ok ^^ thanx for ur opinion i appreciate it
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Posted 8/27/09


can u have a critic on it?
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Posted 8/28/09 , edited 8/28/09

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can u have a critic on it?


Cute pic! The person on the right with the X on the shirt. The face is looking too long. I would suggest to bring down the eyes a bit and move up the mouth just a tad. Than you can bring the bangs down on the hair some.(make them longer) Or redraw the face and just make it shorter. Oh and another thing is the ears are too low. Put your pointer fingers on the corners of your eyes and reach over to the top of your ears with your thumbs. See how they line up? So the ears in your pictures should kind start at the tops of you eyes.
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Posted 9/1/09 , edited 9/1/09
Title: Optimus NAGATO

first time trying mecha like this
just tell me what you dont like about the picture.
any bias or personal opinion is fine too.


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http://renevatia.deviantart.com/art/Optimus-NAGATO-135511007
dA download for larger size, if anything is too blurry
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Posted 9/5/09

renevatia wrote:

Title: Optimus NAGATO

first time trying mecha like this
just tell me what you dont like about the picture.
any bias or personal opinion is fine too.


dA link
http://renevatia.deviantart.com/art/Optimus-NAGATO-135511007
dA download for larger size, if anything is too blurry


that is AWESOME. i was actually convinced (for a few minutes) that the girl was a figurine! :DD
totally realistic, maybe except for a few parts of the mecha, good job overall!! I LIKE IT.
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Posted 9/12/09 , edited 9/12/09
been workin on my perspective, lots of failure.. but I think this one came out alright. but mayb there are things I failed to see so I'll post it here so that you guys can point out what I did wrong.

PS: I cant paint guns lol

Revvy from Black Lagoon



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Posted 9/12/09

cycrone wrote:

been workin on my perspective, lots of failure.. but I think this one came out alright. but mayb there are things I failed to see so I'll post it here so that you guys can point out what I did wrong.

PS: I cant paint guns lol

Revvy from Black Lagoon





I really like your painting style. I dont see anything wrong with the picture itself. I think it looks great. Ive never tried to draw anyone from behind before so I might not be able to pick anything out. Nice work though.
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