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Post Reply FANFIC [MC]~ Kimi no Koto Wasurenaide.
Posted 7/24/09 , edited 11/17/09


okay so last night i suddenly had an inspiration.
so i wrote a new story, and decided to share.
details are as follows.
Kimi no koto wasurenaide.



Genre:
Romance, Tragedy

Characters:

Yamada Ryosuke.
- A sad boy, who seemed to cant forget someone. In the past, he made mistakes, mistakes that made him regret, mistakes that labeled him as a hypocrite, a liar, a betrayer.
Things weren't the same anymore, and his character had totally changed. From a carefree person to a person who knows mourn by himself in a lonely place.
Will things change for him?

Kaeru Shiki.
- Somehow, she can't trust that person anymore. Too heartbroken. Being in love in him would only hurt her.
Shiki is depressed, each day seemed to be years and ages for her, and she yearns to get out of all the problems bothering her.
She ended up meeting with an accident, and now, she never sees him anymore.
Never.
Gone just like that, running away.

Mizushima Sashi
- a cheerful bubbly girl who looks forward to each new day.
But then everyday, she always saw that boy by the fire escape stairs, that boy with that sad grave look in his eyes. She knew what happened, there were rumours everywhere about him.
Sometimes, she wonder... should she approach him?



A Prologue.


Darkness. I tried to open my eyes, but it was too heavy. Around me I heard voices, faint voices murmuring, I wondered who they are. What had happened? Why am I here?

And….

Who am I?

“She had it quite serious,” one voice said. “We need to do an operation, and hope she’ll be coming round soon.”

“Teenagers nowadays,” another voice interrupted. “Never looking out in the roads, got hit by a car, and it’s themselves getting hurt in the end.”

I got hit by a car? Suddenly I felt pain all over my body… my brain hurts as if it was swelling, the voices drifted away and I found myself entering the world of dreams.

Who am I?


***

Shikiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!
Shikiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!


I heard a voice of a boy. I saw him calling out to me, his voice echoing in my ears. I saw him raising his hands and try and catch me, but…

The car passed. Pain poking, piercing through my ribs, my legs, my hands, my head. A dizzy feeling… I saw his face peering over me with his mouth ajar, tears in his eyes as he continued shouting.

Shikiiiiiiiiiii!!!
Shikiiiiiiiiiii!!!!


Suddenly, the world felt quiet, a peaceful feeling despite the lights around me, the sirens and paramedics rushing to carry me. I saw his face getting further and further away and soon, naturally my eyes closed.
Silence. I cant hear anything, or see anything.

That silent feeling, it was somehow peaceful. I felt pain all over my body, but my heart was at peace. It was like… I had no problems anymore. Nothing to worry about. Nothing to care. Nothing mattered.

At that point of time, I don’t care,
I don’t care if I die.


Chapters.


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Posted 7/25/09 , edited 7/25/09
First to comment..Yatta!!!
Sounds so sad but cool..
Can't wait to read it..Ganbatte Ayu-chan^^
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Posted 7/26/09
uwaaaaa~!!!! NICE!!!!! can't wait for the chapters!!!! ur english grammar is so great!!!! gambatte!!!!
Posted 7/26/09

Matsujun_arashi_lover wrote:

First to comment..Yatta!!!
Sounds so sad but cool..
Can't wait to read it..Ganbatte Ayu-chan^^


waaaa!~~ youre backk! ^____^
hehee yep first comment ne! :DD
arigatouuu!~ i'll try my best and post my chappie one tomorrow
Posted 7/26/09

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uwaaaaa~!!!! NICE!!!!! can't wait for the chapters!!!! ur english grammar is so great!!!! gambatte!!!!


waaa!~ sankyuu! ^_____^
lol my english grammar is great? betsuni na!
and yup gambarimasu (: i'll try to post the first chapter tomorrow.
arigatouu ne!
Posted 7/28/09
Chapter One is up.
quite a short chapter ne.


Chapter One.

Konnichiwa. Hi, I’m Mizushima Sashi. An ordinary 16 year old who’s having her first year at high school.

Sugoii na! I’ve been waiting for ages to wear this high school uniform. And now… I cant believe I’m wearing it.
The cool tie. The cool blazer with matching skirts and blouse on.
It’s amazing, first day at a new school. Like a new fresh start.

I wanted to start this day with all smiles. But I saw him.

He’s still there. Sitting down under the porch near the fire escape stairs. That grave look of his, I could never forget it. Whenever I see him, I feel the pain he bore, the pain he never let out but keep inside.

Ever since that day he changed. Since that day.

His eyes could only show a glint of sorrow. The cheerful bubbly look of him gone. Gone just like that overnight.
And whenever I see him, it reminded me of her.

Where had she gone to?

What happened to her?

What happened to them?


He still smiled though. A forced smile. When people approached him, sometimes he just turned away.
The life living inside him, it’s dead.

Dead…. That word sends a chill to my bones. I shrugged it off and went away.


***


Shikiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!
Shikiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!


I cried, I cried with all my might. I can’t lose her, I just can’t.

Why had I been so stupid? What was wrong with me?

“Shikiiiiiiiiiii!! Gomen nasai! Gomen nasai! Please don’t go…” I cried out loud, chasing behind her.

She just continued running with those hurtful tears in her eyes. She ran and ran.

I shouldn’t have believed in you. Ryosuke, I shouldn’t have been in love with you, she said that, it’s still echoing repeatedly in my ears. Why was I so stupid?

I continued saying how sorry I really am.

But saying sorry won’t solve anything. Saying sorry won’t make any difference. It’s my whole fault anyway, I’m the one carrying the blame, I’m the one who was the player, betraying my love’s trust, hooking up with another girl.

I am the stupidest guy ever. EVER.

What was I doing? Betraying the trust of an important person in my life?
What was I doing with another person? Another stupid girl who has no meaning to me?
Why was I so stupid anyway?


We ran and turned at a corner, and suddenly….

TOOT! TOOT! TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I saw someone collapsed, got hit by a car. Around that person I saw blood flowing through from her veins, her arteries, her capillaries…

It cant be her! It cant be her! My heart continued shouting.

I went nearer to the place of the accident, and there I saw her lying down in a pool of blood.

Shikiiiiiiiiiii!
Shikiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!


She looked at me, she smiled. But a moment later, her eyes just closed.
My knees fell and hit the ground, and tears started to roll down to my cheeks.
I watched helplessly as I saw a number of paramedics carrying her out.

I was so stupid.
No, more than just stupid, I’m useless, a two-time player.

-To be continued.-

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Posted 7/28/09
finally... A NEW FIC!!!

lately, the group's been laying low...
good thing you created a new fic~ *hehe*

just make sure you'll finish it though~
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haha..first to comment again on chappie 1..yattta!!

The best grammar as always..haha

It sounds so sad and I can imagine ....

The depressing thing...people are dying by getting hit by a truck


Ganbatte ne~!!!
Posted 7/31/09

shieLdembLem wrote:

finally... A NEW FIC!!!

lately, the group's been laying low...
good thing you created a new fic~ *hehe*

just make sure you'll finish it though~


haha shie-channnn! ^O^

yeahh just one night i suddenly got this inspiration thingy *i dunno why* so yeah i make a new one :DD
haha yoshii!~ that's my aim too!~ to finish it! *haha*
Posted 7/31/09

Matsujun_arashi_lover wrote:

haha..first to comment again on chappie 1..yattta!!

The best grammar as always..haha

It sounds so sad and I can imagine ....

The depressing thing...people are dying by getting hit by a truck


Ganbatte ne~!!!



yepp yepp!~ first comment! *wow youre fast ne!*
yeah i know it's sad~ and i have a feeling it's gonna be sad for yamachan in chappie two too!~
*but let's hope for a happy ending ne!*

ARIGATOU!~ haha i will work hard to finish it up
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Posted 10/25/09
nice work ayu . luv it .
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Posted 11/7/09
Omedetto!!
The first chap was really intense!!
post the next chapter soon please?? ^^
Posted 11/10/09
Right on to Chapter 2.



Chapter 2

I woke up and saw light, it was so bright… where am I?
Slowly my eyes became clearer and I looked at myself.

Bandaged arms.
Bandaged legs.
Bandaged back.
Bandaged head.


Gosh! What a horrendous sight! Wires attached on every part of my body, and a bag of blood hanging by the bed.
What the hell has happened to me?

And it was then that I remembered…. Car accident. How awesome. Like there weren’t enough problems bothering my mind.
But wait… who am I?
What’s my name?

I looked up, and saw a lady smiling at me. Who is she anyway? Dare?

“Shiki! Yokatta na!” she said while holding my hand, squeezing it tight. “I’ve been so worried I’ll lose you forever!!”

My mind was in nothing but complete confusion. Shiki?

“Gomen ne, who are you?”

I don’t know why, but suddenly that question of mine seemed to take the wind out of her sails, her mouth suddenly gaped open and there her eyes glared,staring at me, like a goldfish.

“You don’t remember me?” She asked with a creased forehead. “Shiki, how could you not remember me? Are you dreaming?!!”

Who the hell is Shiki anyway? Is that my name? Shiki?

That lady cried. She bawled so loud, I was thinking she might go crazy any minute. Fortunately, a doctor came along with two nurses, and they tried to reconcile her. I can’t do much, I just stared at everything, at everyone. What havoc!

“She’s diagnosed with having amnesia. Apparently the accident had caused minor injuries on some parts of her brain.”

That’s what the doctor said to that lady. I just continued staring.

“WHATTT?!” The lady practically screamed her lungs off in the ward. “But this can’t be happening, I am her aunt you know! HER AUNT WHO’s BEEN TAKING CARE OF HER SINCE SHE WAS THREE! She can’t just forget me… DAMEEEEEE!!!!!”

The doctor just shook her head, giving her that sympathetic look.
.
“You are my aunt? Auntyy?” I managed a small utter.
“YES I AM YOUR AUNTY. You remembered me right right?” She asked me with those tears of hope brimming in her eyes.

I shook my head weakly.

“NANDA YOOOOOOO~,” she said while wiping her eyes. “Never mind then, just know that I’m your Aunty from now on ne, Shiki?”

I nodded. I can’t say much. My mouth still hurts.

“Oh yeah, Shiki, I have to tell you this,” she turned before leaving. “After you’re released from hospital tomorrow, we’ll be moving.”

“Where to?”

“New York.”

New York? The city with those super tall skyscrapers?

But somehow, I don’t feel anything weird about it. It felt serene, I felt so relaxed as if I’m being born as a whole new person again.
I closed my eyes, and imagined the Statue of Liberty.


*************************


“Yeah I know… she’s dead already isn’t she?”
“Oh wasn’t that his fault?”
“What a loser, he’s the one who caused her accident you know!”
“Hontou ka? Yamada-kun is like that, a player?”


Arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Allow me to shout again to express the vast incensed feeling that has been welling up inside me.
>>ARGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!<<

I just can bear to listen to those rumors anymore. Yamada-kun this, Yamada-kun that.
If only I could gnash their teeth into pieces.
It’s so irritating. I have to hear this like everyday. EVERYDAY.
Doesn’t he ever get sick of it?


I passed through the staircase. The staircase where he always was. I don’t know why, but somehow, I’ve always had this gut feeling telling me to speak to him, to just talk to him.

Should I approach him?

Just when I was about to leave the place,
“Who are you?” Ryosuke suddenly asked.

I jumped in surprise. That question gave me a chill on my spine, or rather the chill in his voice. He knew my presence here all along.
I turned around slowly, my heart pumping harder every second. “Eehhhhhhhhhhh? Me?”

“You are always here everyday don’t you?” he glared at me, and my stomach started to cringe by his stare. “What do you want from me?”

I retreated a few steps back, unexpected to hear that question escaping from his lips.
“Iieeee~ I mean you know….” I stuttered. “I’ve heard a lot about you, and stuff. Anddd….”

“And what? You wanna barge in into my problems? Just go away and mind your own business okay, I don’t need you here!”

“Nooo, noo…. I just wanna help you!”

“I don’t need your help okay? I don’t!”

I could not stand it anymore. People denying things that were bothering them, people denying help at a time they needed it most. It irritates me that people are pretending to be perfectly fine when it’s obvious that they are not. I grabbed his collar; and shoot a daggering stare at him, shaking his shoulders.

“What do you mean you don’t need help? THERE ARE PEOPLE OUT THERE BITCHING ABOUT YOU EVERYDAY AND YOU WERE HERE MOURNING EACH DAY, AND YET YOU SAY YOU DON’T NEED HELP? ARE YOU THAT SELFISH? ARE YOU THAT SELFISH YAMADA-KUN?!!!! (Author's note: Gomen for the CAPS! >w<)

An uncomfortable silence. His mouth was shut, his eyes staring down on the floor. And it was during that time that I saw, his fingers curled up into a fist, trying to contain his pain that had been overwhelming him. That pain he shouldered for almost 3 months now.
I felt guilty for shouting at him, uneasiness seemed to jab in my ribs.


“Gomen…,”I uttered, and got up to leave.

That boy is still there, that helpless boy staring at the grey concrete.
My fault, he whispered softly. It’s my fault she’s not here anymore.



Okay, that was quite... long deshou. >w< *coughcough*
(and Yamada was so cold = Scrap Teacher influenced?^^) Haha.

I would like to apologise for updating so late due to exams,
So since my exams are over for a while now, I'll try to update more often if possible

And comments are so much appreciated, thank you so much! ^O^
Posted 11/10/09

wiNky_twiNky wrote:

nice work ayu . luv it .


Heheee^^ Gomen, super late reply >w<
Arigatouuuuu! Thanks so much. :DD
I just posted Chappie 2. *haha*
Posted 11/10/09

hsj9392 wrote:

Omedetto!!
The first chap was really intense!!
post the next chapter soon please?? ^^


Arigatouuu!
Yeah it was kinda intense ne >w<
Lol, I just posted the next chapter. *heehee*
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