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Posted 7/24/09

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Demi nodded once, and turned to walk off. Well, Raven Cross, pray to your god that we do not meet again.



Raven: -bits her lips to keep from cracking up-...yeah...whatever...-chuckles-
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Posted 7/24/09 , edited 7/24/09

MoonLitNight132 wrote:


IvyOfDeath wrote:



Demi nodded once, and turned to walk off. Well, Raven Cross, pray to your god that we do not meet again.



Raven: -bits her lips to keep from cracking up-...yeah...whatever...-chuckles-


Demi smirked just as snkes surrounded Raven. I mean it, demon..
Posted 7/24/09

IvyOfDeath wrote:


MoonLitNight132 wrote:


IvyOfDeath wrote:



Demi nodded once, and turned to walk off. Well, Raven Cross, pray to your god that we do not meet again.



Raven: -bits her lips to keep from cracking up-...yeah...whatever...-chuckles-


Demi smirked just as snkes surrounded Raven. I mean it, demon..


Raven: -her grin fades as she swiftly pulled out a hidding dagger just lik the other one and raked it across ur sholder- and im serious about the Demon thing...
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Demi stopped, as well did the snakes. Her smile disappeared quickly. Are you sure you want to start this? she asked.

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Demi stopped, as well did the snakes. Her smile disappeared quickly. Are you sure you want to start this? she asked.



Raven: -glares at u calmly- are u sure you want to?
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Demi began to laugh.

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Demi began to laugh.



Raen: -scuffs her foot on the ground again and raises and eyebrow with intrest-
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The snakes wrapped themselves around Raven's legs, holding her down. Demi grabbed Raven's wrist and squeezed, trying to get her to let the dagger go.

Posted 7/24/09

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The snakes wrapped themselves around Raven's legs, holding her down. Demi grabbed Raven's wrist and squeezed, trying to get her to let the dagger go.



Raven: -twirled the dagger in her hand then tossed it to her other hand and pressed it agenst ur neck- i should tell u i love snakes...i had a pet one for a while...till attacked some one who was threating me then he had to get put down...
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Demi touched the dagger, sliding her finger across it. Blood slid down her hand. Then why did you join the Black Fire? she asked. I could recuit you right now, but i don't think your leader would like that. The snakes began bitting into Ravens legs.

Posted 7/24/09

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Demi touched the dagger, sliding her finger across it. Blood slid down her hand. Then why did you join the Black Fire? she asked. I could recuit you right now, but i don't think your leader would like that. The snakes began bitting into Ravens legs.



Raven: -flihed as the snakes fangs sank into her skin- because i control differnt creature...-grins- one that loves to eat snakes, or at least when they can -makes a long and loud whishing call then u the flatting of wing as bird take flight-
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Posted 7/24/09

MoonLitNight132 wrote:


IvyOfDeath wrote:



Demi touched the dagger, sliding her finger across it. Blood slid down her hand. Then why did you join the Black Fire? she asked. I could recuit you right now, but i don't think your leader would like that. The snakes began bitting into Ravens legs.



Raven: -flihed as the snakes fangs sank into her skin- because i control differnt creature...-grins- one that loves to eat snakes, or at least when they can -makes a long and loud whishing call then u the flatting of wing as bird take flight-


((sorry bout this, but you just lost me with "makes a long and loud whishing call then u the flatting of wing as bird take flight"))
Posted 7/24/09
(( umm ok ill rewrite it for u because i made a few mistakes..-i make a long and loud whisiling noise then u hear the flapping of wings as birds take flight-...is that better or do u want me to rephrase the sentence?))
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Posted 7/24/09

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(( umm ok ill rewrite it for u because i made a few mistakes..-i make a long and loud whisiling noise then u hear the flapping of wings as birds take flight-...is that better or do u want me to rephrase the sentence?))


((Alot better! ^^))

Demi smiled and released her own wings from her back, making you get pushed away. Poor Demon, If i were you, i would run.
Posted 7/24/09

IvyOfDeath wrote:


MoonLitNight132 wrote:

(( umm ok ill rewrite it for u because i made a few mistakes..-i make a long and loud whisiling noise then u hear the flapping of wings as birds take flight-...is that better or do u want me to rephrase the sentence?))


((Alot better! ^^))

Demi smiled and released her own wings from her back, making you get pushed away. Poor Demon, If i were you, i would run.


Raven: -chuckles and glances down at her legs at the snakes that where bitting her- umm..ya the snakes i kind of a problem wih that but i wouldnt anyways....u know why that call me Raven? -a bunch a big black bird (ravens) landed on the trees around staring at u making lots of noise and flapping there wings wildly-
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