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Posted 7/26/09 , edited 7/26/09
Ahhh....Ok....Uh? Well, I have just started writing poetry again because of some of the events in my life that happened recently. And I was hoping I expressed it in the right way. So please enjoy! And please comment if you want. ^_^

Oh! And I'm a little rusty from writing poetry. So, go easy on me with the comments....hehehe.....^_^;

And this my first time posting here....^_^;

As The Summer Breeze Blew

As the summer breeze blew
And remember again I knew
every day I'd wait for you
every hour I'd wait to hold you
every minute I'd wait to kiss you
Was because I once loved you

But If you knew me
Then let me see
How much you loved me
Don't show me with feel
Because is this for real
Because when you kiss me
You never touched me

And I realized that was then
And now I shall wait forever then
Knowing you never come again
Without knowing what you have token
As I felt so broken
Is something you will never know again

But if I could close my eyes
And dream again
I would hold my soul
And I would fight again
If I could feel my hands
I'd touch once again

But how can that be when I'm dreaming
So, I keep myself from falling
Knowing that my soul was slowly dying
So, If I hold my hands up high
And let my wings fly
I may never remember
This dark December

As the summer breeze blew
And remember again I knew
that I can never see this through
Was because I once loved you

The End

P.S. I more poetry on the way
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Posted 7/28/09
omg I love^^ its so adorable and it would make an amazing song! (but sounds alot like a song without a chorus) but its AMAZING!
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Posted 7/28/09

dattebayo_kawaii wrote:

omg I love^^ its so adorable and it would make an amazing song! (but sounds alot like a song without a chorus) but its AMAZING!


Oh thank you! ^_^ i guess then i like writing Lyrical Poems. it's fun for me to rhyme the words.
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