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Posted 8/1/09 , edited 8/17/09
This is something that I wrote from along time. I hope you like it ^^

In my life there's no one except you
You're the one who's brightening it
You're the breath that I take
I wanna share my life with you
I wanna share my love with you
Only you and no one else
Baby when I see your eyes
I can tell how much you care about me
I can't resist you my dear
I wanna hold you close in my arms
I don't mind if I died by your charm
And baby know this
No one can deny this love that I have inside
And I'll give it all to you
My love


Another poem

I loved him between me and myself
I didn't tell him what in my mind
I don't know what's happening to me when I see him
I don't know what to say to him
I don't know why I did hide it from him
I feel so weak when I'm near him or with him
All the love in my heart is for him
You're my dear and my soul is in you
If you were in front of me I'll still miss you
You're in my mind and you don't know what's happing to me because of you
The nights for me like a long years because you're not here
I'm still thinking of every word that you have said it to me
And everyday the eagerness is growing inside my heart for you
If the speech was expressing kindness and love
I would say to you that I love you from along time


Whenever I can I'll add more ^^
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Posted 8/1/09 , edited 8/1/09
It's lovely~
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Posted 8/1/09
I think it was good. Did you write this from your feelings (life) or did you just write it? xD
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Posted 8/1/09


thank u ^^ i really didn't notice that when i was writing it really thank you
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no it was from my hear and from my life ^^ and really glad that u liked it ^^
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Posted 8/1/09

Angel-flower wrote:



no it was from my hear and from my life ^^ and really glad that u liked it ^^


Cool x)

But I gotcha go, see ya later~
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Posted 8/1/09


okay bye bye hun ^^
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Posted 8/3/09
its good.
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Posted 8/3/09
Learn some pain, trust me, you'll like it.
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Posted 8/4/09
Nicceeeee
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Posted 8/4/09
wa SUGOI
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Posted 8/4/09
awww so romantic. reminds me of.....*daydreams*..uhhhhhh...nvm...
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Posted 8/4/09
Dang it's good
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thanx ^^
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Posted 8/4/09


i did lear and i'm already living in pain
also i did write about feeling pain and i will add it later
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