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Posted 8/13/09
i like it too...your poems r realli nice...imma put them in my MYSPACE BLOG en say that my friend made those poems...lol...if u dont mind
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new poem...made a poem about a sunset becuz i was watching spongebob ..not so good..but imma continue with this poem when i have time

Sunset with A Lovely Night

As you count when the sun goes down,
You see the flowers go to sleep
And the the stars starts to come
It gets darker and quieter...
That's what you call a Sunset.
When the sun is down, and the moon is up
You hear creepy noises
Just be sure to be with the one who can protect you from morning 'til night
That's what you call A Lovely Night.
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Posted 8/13/09 , edited 8/13/09
i run away from my ex, because he wants me bak
i tell him a lie, that im with someone else
he doesn't believe me until i can prove that im taken
so i run to my enemy[guy], en kiss him on the lips
when my ex sees that kiss, he tries to hit my enemy
i stop my ex en tell him to go away, cuz he's no longer the one i love
when my ex goes away, me en my enemy wiped our lips en say "eww "
my enemy's friends say "woah, she kissed u "
my enemy say "y "
i say "because", then i mumbled as i walk away,"i love u "


this is gonna be my story so yah
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Posted 8/13/09
I like the story
And the poem is also nice!! =D
And of course you can ^-^
I'd appreciant more comments on my poems! =D
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Posted 8/13/09
kk...lol...do u have a myspace?? jw
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Posted 8/14/09
Nope! =o
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Posted 8/14/09 , edited 8/14/09
kk...lol

here's my new poem for christians...the quoted/bold questions r from the book "What does the Bible Really Teach?"

Questions

"why is the sky blue"

why is there blue water

why is the grass green

why is there people

why is there animals

why do people lead to their deaths

"Does God Love Us?"

"Why/How Does The Bible Have The Answers?"
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Posted 8/15/09
Wow!! =D Thats a strong poem!! =D
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Posted 8/15/09
thank u
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Posted 8/16/09
as i see the path to my future
i see another path
one is bright en one is dark
i cant go which way
so i ask myself
"follow your heart'
i walk a step, i hear noises
i stopped again
asked the same question
then i walked en walk towards the darker path
where my love have been waiting for me

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Posted 8/18/09
I like that poem also! =D
Posting another poem~

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Posted 8/18/09
wow...i like it...its long like the lyrics of a song
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Posted 8/18/09
Thanks! And i no...>w>
I was trying to make it short as possible...
Since this was a first experience of a party xP
So i had so much to say,
Tho i wrote that much
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Posted 8/18/09
haha..but parties aren't my thing...anyway...keep up the good work
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Posted 8/19/09 , edited 8/19/09
Haha me neither
My friend forced me LOLz
Kk you too! =]
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