Hello! GE here again, Some of you here might remember my older fanfiction, (my very first one) Tiramisu With You! But Over the years I've become a better writer, I decided to create a Remake Version (Trying to re-write it better) I'll try to keep the characters the same but there will be quite a few changes. Sorry if theres any spelling errors. ^^;;;
Okay... Here we go!
Chapter 1- New Beginnings? Star Class's New Surprise!
I headed out the door of my house quickly chomping on the toast that was in my mouth. "Bye-bye Mama, Ami, Papa!" I yelled. "Bye Amu-chan!" "Bye-bye Onee-chan!" I herd my parents and my baby sister Ami shout after me.
"Tree minutes 'till school starts!" I thought frantically as my shugo charas tried to catch up beside me.
"Amu-chan, we told you to go to sleep earlier last night!" My chara Miki sighed.
"I know, but I had a lot of Summer homework last night and my alarm clock wasn't working this morning!"
"Amu-chan Hurry! Hurry!" My other chara Ran cheered. "In times like these it's time for a chara-change! HOP STEP JUMP!!"
I herd the ping of my X-clip change into a heart clip. I zoomed past crowds of people as I crossed some streets and entered the school grounds.
"Oh no! The gates gonna close!" I yelled.
"JUMPPPP~!" Ran yelled.
I flew up high an I jumped the gate. That's right. I friggin' JUMPED the school gate. After I was over the gate, Ran undid the chara-change. And I stood there with an 'OO' Expression on my face to what I just did.
"Amu-chan, hurry up desu~!" Su called, her and the other charas already ahead of me.
I ran inside, got to my usual spot by the window, I panted and gasped for air realizing I had made it just in time.
"Ahh~ Himamori-san, glad you could join us, and with 13 seconds to spear." Nikaido-sensei laughed.
"...Sure." I said with my "Cool n' Spicy" Tone.
"Now before we begin," Nikaido-sensei said to the class. "We have a new student coming to our class today."
Gasps were herd and whispers buzzed around the room like mad flies.
"Her name is Suzuki Grace, she's a foreigner from America but her parents got a job here in Japan, so now she will be studying here for the rest of the year. Her mother is also the fashion designer and creator of the clothing line "LolixPop" So you may know her for that too."
I gasped. "LolixPop" Was my favorite clothing brand. It was a punkish, cute fashion that is most popular with Teenage Girls right now. Most of my clothes are Lolixpop.
"Well, I was supposed to meet her at the principles office this morning but she never showed up." Nikaido-sensei added with a confused expression on his face.
Suddenly there was a huge crash right in front of me as a girl bust through window!!
I sat there in shock. Was she crazy or something!? And how did she get up to the 3rd floor!???
She skipped off the empty desk in front off me and ran to the front of the room where Nikaido-sensei was.
"NOOOOOO! Shut up! Shut up! I'm not late! I'm not late! Tell me I'm not late!" She yelled at Nikaido-sensei.
"Well... Your not late." Nikaido-sensei said simply.
"YAYYYY~! Oh, the names Grace Suzuki, foreigner from America, Nice to Meetcha'!"
She had long, straight layered dark brown hair that went at least halfway down her back with some caramel-colored streaks in it. She had chocolate brown eyes and peach skin that was only a little bit tanned. She also had on the Seiyo Academy Uniform but with dark navy blue skinny jeans that she wore under her skirt. I had to admit, she looked really pretty.
"Awesome! A daring, cool, amazing character!" The girls oohed and awed. The boys stared as hearts formed into their eyes.
"Well, choose a spot where you would like to sit Suzuki-san," Our Sensei sweat dropped.
"Alright... I want that seat!" She pointed at the seat right next to me. Her walk was like a model, and she looked like one! When she arrived to her seat, she sat down, put on some headphones, and turned up some music with the volume all the way to high.
The lyrics sounded like, "Chocolate Ido Disco~ Chocolate Ido Disco~" I could here the lyrics if I listened softly.
"Umm, hi! My name is Hinamori Amu, nice to meet you! I'm a big fan of your mothers work!"
She looked at me for a second, then flashed a sweet smile. "Thanks, I'll tell her that. Well, again, The names Grace. Nice to meetcha!"
I smiled back, she was crazy, but also pretty nice! Sensei started teaching the class.
She looked past me and stared weirdly. "Uhhh... Amu?" She asked.
"Yeah?" I looked at her. "Are those fairies following you?" She asked and pointed to Ran, Miki, Su, and Dia.
"Uhh- Hey what's that?!" I said and pointed the other way. She looked at me oddly and turned around to look.
I stuffed Ran, Miki, Su and Dia back into their eggs. Grace turned back to me and gave me a Ummm-theres-nothing-back-there look.
"Ah gomen gomen, it must be my imagination." I laughed nervously. "Riiiiight."
Before I knew it, class was already over. "Ah! Time for Home EC class! See ya Amu-chan!" Grace shouted quickly and ran out the door.
My shugo charas popped back out of their eggs. "Owwie~ Amu-chan that really hurt~" Dia groaned.
"Sorry, but why could Grace-chan see shugo charas?" I asked, confused.
"I sence powerful heart eggs from her Amu-chan," Miki said and nodded.
"Us too!" The other charas chirped.
"So, Grace-chan has shugo charas?"
Comments appreciated, but don't be mean! =_= Come back for chapter 2!
The song "Chocolate Disco" Belongs to the J-pop band Perfume.
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Its pretty good! i noticed some grammar errors like tree for three and spear for spare but it was good other than that. To make it more intesresting I would make some of the orginal characters come in as well. Other than that, keep writing id love to read more
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