is any of u good in poetry
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Posted 12/29/07 , edited 12/29/07
i am lol now lets see ill give you a couple good ones lol off my pg. a example of poetry such as something coming from the heart read this this is the most beautiful song at the end for now and ever i will keep this song to my heart as a burning flame that ignites my soul to live in the heavens light touch and become pure again which u see once again a light so pure when it reaches your soul u live again something so innocent to touch and play you feel the wind not when the devils touch down dark below when u feel ur soul in your heart which beats forever more the pure light of a savior who can touch deep without wasting hesitation breath deep as you are touched inside in feel the heavenly release of freeing a soul which was condemned this is beautiful this is called the "heavenly light"
by d.soulz for this is my heavenly light



and one more lol =) my clock no my heart stopper


NICE MAN FEEL THE HEART BEAT THAT SHALL AWAKEN FEEL YOUR PAIN THAT HAS BEEN FORSAKENED BUT REMEMBERED WHAT HAS BEEN GAINED IN THE NAME FORGIVE ME BUT NOW I SEE THE LIGHT SO SAVE ME OK NOW LETS GO DO THIS YE YES NOW I NEED TO DO THIS SO FEEL MY PAIN AND MY HEART THAT HAS BURNED FOR MORE THAN ETERNITY SAVE ME FOR TIME SHALL PASS WITH OUT WAITING NEVER STOP THAT CLOCK GOES LIKE CLIK CLOK TOCK NOW READ ME WILL TIME EVER STOP WILL IT DIE WITHER OR DISSAPPEAR WILL IT EVER STOP WILL IT GO FOR MILLINEUM NO ETERNITY CLICK CLOCK TOCK TIME WHEN WILL YOU STOP MY SOUL DIES AS TIME GOES WILL YOU SAVE ME FROM DYING OR IN MY DESPAIR NO MY PAIN BUT I SHALL LIVE TO SEE LIGHT IN A BRIGHT FUTURE I SHALL HAVE BUT SHALL THE CLOCK PASS VANISH DISSAPPEAR REAPPEAR PLEASE TIME BE NEAR MY PAIN INSIDE HERE YES MY HEART BUNP BUNP BUNP BUNP HEAR MY BEAT SHALL I DIE IN THIS PAIN TO THIS HEAT CAN TIME STOP RUNNING LIKE QUICK SAND CAN IT STOP BURNING ALL IN MY HAND CAN THE CLOCK STOP FOR ONE KNOCK BY:DRAGONS0ULZ "WILL THE CLOCK STOP" will it?
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Posted 12/29/07
I think this topic should be in the "general" section, but they already have this thread.

http://www.crunchyroll.com/showforumtopic?id=750
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yes...

this thread is complex
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Posted 12/29/07
creak


Your_Typical_Friend wrote:

yes...

this thread is complex
only beauitful minds here
dimwits need not reply


missed the last line by 1 syllable... ¬_¬;;

*goes back to lurk mode*
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Posted 12/29/07
Post your poem in the thread mentioned by 2anime4ever, and please, avoid typing in ALL CAPS. It gives the impression that you're screaming online.




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