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Posted 9/12/09 , edited 9/12/09
Hey!
Since this is a brand new topic.. I'd like to start off with my sketch attempt of the amuto scene (ep100)
ORIGINAL


AND

MY ATTEMPT


well what do you reckon??
(should I colour it.. etc)

x

(I forgot to add.. Thankyou )
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Posted 9/12/09
Hmm... not bad desu! ^^
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Posted 9/12/09
COLOR IT!!!!!! it's so cool! i wish i can draw like you
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Posted 9/12/09 , edited 9/12/09
Now for the next MANGA adaptation..

ORIGINAL (or REAL DEAL)



AND

MY SKETCH


Well What do you reckon??
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Posted 9/12/09
On the first one, the characters in the background are fine but,

1. Ikuto's chin is WAY to large.

2.. Amu looks like a boy.

The second one is better than the first one but,

1. The fingers on Amu's head look, honestly, like they were from a zombie.

2.(Not that big of a deal) Ikuto's sleve gets fatter as it gets to the edge of the page.


Seriously, they're fine but, you do need to work on some things.
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Posted 9/12/09 , edited 9/12/09

tomo_takino wrote:

On the first one, the characters in the background are fine but,

1. Ikuto's chin is WAY to large.

2.. Amu looks like a boy.

The second one is better than the first one but,

1. The fingers on Amu's head look, honestly, like they were from a zombie.

2.(Not that big of a deal) Ikuto's sleve gets fatter as it gets to the edge of the page.


Seriously, they're fine but, you do need to work on some things.


thanks for the advice.. i will fix 'em up
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Posted 9/13/09
Oh & my last adaptation (i will be posting) of shugo chara. Because i don't want to flood the net with imgs and plus this topic is not just for me but others too. :sweatingbullets:


ORIGiNAL



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MY ADAPTATiON


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I can't see any of the pics...
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No offense, they`re great but you need to work a lttle bit more... later I`m gonna do one and show it X3
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puppy-princess wrote:

No offense, they`re great but you need to work a lttle bit more... later I`m gonna do one and show it X3


Thanks, for your honesty
nobodys perfect XD

Posted 9/14/09

MzMorganx wrote:


puppy-princess wrote:

No offense, they`re great but you need to work a lttle bit more... later I`m gonna do one and show it X3


Thanks, for your honesty
nobodys perfect XD



Yeah, exactly and with more practice, you can even become a professional drawer

practice always do better !

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Posted 9/14/09 , edited 9/14/09

MzMorganx wrote:

Hey!
Since this is a brand new topic.. I'd like to start off with my sketch attempt of the amuto scene (ep100)
ORIGINAL


AND

MY ATTEMPT


well what do you reckon??
(should I colour it.. etc)

x

(I forgot to add.. Thankyou )




Kay so, hi there! Your drawing is pretty good, but Ikuto's chin kind of juts out a little more than normal, and Amu kind of looks a little manly there. Perhaps the eyes are a little large? Still, the backdrop turned out better than my try at this...

I took that screenshot and gave it a try. I did it digitally though so it turned out weird.
I don't like how the backdrop turned out, nor do I like how Ikuto turned out, he looks like a girl in this drawing. The only thing I like is the way Amu turned out, her closeup atleast. Let me know what you think if you want. I know it turned out quite ugly. >.>

Well anyway, here you go...



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Posted 9/15/09

puppy-princess wrote:


MzMorganx wrote:


puppy-princess wrote:

No offense, they`re great but you need to work a lttle bit more... later I`m gonna do one and show it X3


Thanks, for your honesty
nobodys perfect XD



Yeah, exactly and with more practice, you can even become a professional drawer

practice always do better !



Hey.
Your drawing is much better then mine.. im honest
Yeah.. since the time i put the pictures up untill now.. i have fixed it alot. Amu is hard to draw.. like really hard. Oh well i tried :sweatingbullets:
My friends reckon ikuto was amu and amu was ikuto
Hahaha.
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MzMorganx wrote:


puppy-princess wrote:


MzMorganx wrote:


puppy-princess wrote:

No offense, they`re great but you need to work a lttle bit more... later I`m gonna do one and show it X3


Thanks, for your honesty
nobodys perfect XD



Yeah, exactly and with more practice, you can even become a professional drawer

practice always do better !



Hey.
Your drawing is much better then mine.. im honest
Yeah.. since the time i put the pictures up untill now.. i have fixed it alot. Amu is hard to draw.. like really hard. Oh well i tried :sweatingbullets:
My friends reckon ikuto was amu and amu was ikuto
Hahaha.


I dunno if you were talking to me, but, anyway. I agree, she is. And Ikuto is harder, at least for me. I always draw him in transformation or chara change because I'm no good at drawing ears. XD Anyway, I still think your drawing is good, there's room for improvement(the second one, might I add a little suggestion to their eyes? Utau's and Ikuto's anyway. Notice in the picture, how his left(yes, his left, your right) gets smaller, and the opposite eye for Utau? Try making them a little smaller. The same for those characters turned to the side. Because from perspective, the eyes get "smaller" the farther they are from you. The way the drawing looks at the moment, the faces are fine, facing the other direction, while the eyes are flat and facing forward.), but, with mine, there was a lot of room for improvement as well. As long as you tried there's no reason to feel bad about it. I normally don't have the bravery to show people my artwork, fanart, or anything, simply because I'm afraid people won't like it. I'd love to see the revised version of your drawing by the way!

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