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Posted 12/30/07
I just can`t understand the ways
Of all the men and their mistakes,
You give them all your heart
And then they rip it all away...

You told me how much you loved me,
And how our love was meant to be.
And I believed in you,
I thought that you would set me free...


You should`ve just told me the truth,
That I wasn`t the girl for you...
Still I didn`t have a clue,
My heart depended on You...
Although I’ll say `I hate you` now,
Though I’ll shout and curse you out...
I`ll always have love for you,
Because I am a girl.

Been told a man will leave you cold,
Get sick of you and bored...
I know that it`s no lie,
I gave my all still I just cry.
Never again will I be fooled,
To give my all when nothing`s true...
I won`t be played again,
But I will fall in love again...

I loved you so...
Now you leave me in the cold
How could this be?
I thought that you`d only love me...
Into the night,
I will pray that you`re all right.
You hurt me so,
I just can`t let you go ---

You took advantage of my willingness
To do anything for love.
Now I’m the only one in pain...
Will you please take it all away…
Never thought born being a girl,
How I can love you and be burned...
And now I will build a wall,
To never get torn again.

Although I’ll say `I hate you` now,
Though I’ll shout and curse you out...
I`ll always have love for you,
Because I am a girl.



Posted 12/30/07
awww Onee-chan I love your poem!! It's so beautiful
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Posted 12/31/07
wow, thats really good! u are great
Posted 12/31/07
That is a great Poem ur have Talent ur sadness and hurt is what i felt when my Ex broke up with me because of another man
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Oh my gods!!!! This was absolutely killer amazing!!! DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!? K-I-L-L-E-R-A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely love this one!! It's soo true!!!
And it plays so easily through my head like a song.
Do you mind if I print this out and keep it??
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Posted 1/10/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

Oh my gods!!!! This was absolutely killer amazing!!! DO YOU HEAR ME?!?!?!? K-I-L-L-E-R-A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I absolutely love this one!! It's soo true!!!
And it plays so easily through my head like a song.
Do you mind if I print this out and keep it??


thank u very much.. and ok u can keep it.. just take care of it please

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Posted 1/19/08
Sugoi!!!(I think thats how you spell it xD) It's such a deep/good poem! It reminds me of this one dude I liked but then he didn't liked me back >.>''' *sigh* very sad ._.
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LeSLy77 wrote:

I just can`t understand the ways
Of all the men and their mistakes,
You give them all your heart
And then they rip it all away...

You told me how much you loved me,
And how our love was meant to be.
And I believed in you,
I thought that you would set me free...


You should`ve just told me the truth,
That I wasn`t the girl for you...
Still I didn`t have a clue,
My heart depended on You...
Although I’ll say `I hate you` now,
Though I’ll shout and curse you out...
I`ll always have love for you,
Because I am a girl.

Been told a man will leave you cold,
Get sick of you and bored...
I know that it`s no lie,
I gave my all still I just cry.
Never again will I be fooled,
To give my all when nothing`s true...
I won`t be played again,
But I will fall in love again...

I loved you so...
Now you leave me in the cold
How could this be?
I thought that you`d only love me...
Into the night,
I will pray that you`re all right.
You hurt me so,
I just can`t let you go ---

You took advantage of my willingness
To do anything for love.
Now I’m the only one in pain...
Will you please take it all away…
Never thought born being a girl,
How I can love you and be burned...
And now I will build a wall,
To never get torn again.

Although I’ll say `I hate you` now,
Though I’ll shout and curse you out...
I`ll always have love for you,
Because I am a girl.





Awesome poem as well!!!! these are really good!!! so deep and out of the blue, explaining the feelings deep within. great poem lesly!! i loves it!
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