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"Into my dream
I see the sun setting
With millions of beautiful shining stars
And on the night
I fall from the air, catching one star
In that star it held millions of dreams!
Anything you wouldn't have imagined, anything you wanted!
But then I realized
It was all a dream."
By: me(crazyone)

I don't know if the poem I made was good but, how was it?
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Posted 12/30/07

crazyone wrote:

"Into my dream
I see the sun setting
With millions of beautiful shining stars
And on the night
I fall from the air, catching one star
In that star it held millions of dreams!
Anything you wouldn't have imagined, anything you wanted!
But then I realized
It was all a dream."
By: me(crazyone)

I don't know if the poem I made was good but, how was it?


i like it very much
Posted 12/30/07

crazyone wrote:

"Into my dream
I see the sun setting
With millions of beautiful shining stars
And on the night
I fall from the air, catching one star
In that star it held millions of dreams!
Anything you wouldn't have imagined, anything you wanted!
But then I realized
It was all a dream."
By: me(crazyone)

I don't know if the poem I made was good but, how was it?


I liked it, it was really good, It gives you a picture in your mind while ur reading it
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Posted 12/30/07
thanks you guys!! ^_^
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crazyone wrote:

"Into my dream
I see the sun setting
With millions of beautiful shining stars
And on the night
I fall from the air, catching one star
In that star it held millions of dreams!
Anything you wouldn't have imagined, anything you wanted!
But then I realized
It was all a dream."
By: me(crazyone)

I don't know if the poem I made was good but, how was it?


Eeek >< I liked this one lots!! It reminded me of like painting a picture of the sky or something ^^ It's really good!!! =]
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