Post Reply It started with a smile
Posted 12/30/07 , edited 12/30/07
It started with a smile
A simple little gift
Yet just within a while
My heart began to lift

After my first loss
I thought I’d never forget
My heart, it paid the cost
For one of my biggest regrets

She was my first real crush
And I knew she felt the same
But within my panicked rush
I caused her lots of pain

I crossed her out my life
Without a single thought
I put her through such strife
Cause of fears she brought

I knew it wasn’t normal
And even looked down upon
It went against their “morals”
And because of that I became a pawn

I denied my true feelings
And pushed her far away’
Denial was my way of dealing
With the fact I might be gay

So because of that I lost her
Something I thought I’d never forget
But your smile it was the cure
You saved me from regret

So I just wanted to thank you
From the darkness to the light
You helped to pull me through
You have made my life so bright


ya..so wat do u guys think of it
Posted 12/30/07

It started with a smile
A simple little gift
Yet just within a while
My heart began to lift

After my first loss
I thought I’d never forget
My heart, it paid the cost
For one of my biggest regrets

She was my first real crush
And I knew she felt the same
But within my panicked rush
I caused her lots of pain

I crossed her out my life
Without a single thought
I put her through such strife
Cause of fears she brought

I knew it wasn’t normal
And even looked down upon
It went against their “morals”
And because of that I became a pawn

I denied my true feelings
And pushed her far away’
Denial was my way of dealing
With the fact I might be gay

So because of that I lost her
Something I thought I’d never forget
But your smile it was the cure
You saved me from regret

So I just wanted to thank you
From the darkness to the light
You helped to pull me through
You have made my life so bright

The sound of your laughter
The smile on your face
My heart you’ve come to master
I love you, my dearest Grace

<_< ya..so wat do u guys think of it


I love it is great u have got talent
Posted 12/30/07

tonyp19 wrote:It started with a smile
A simple little gift
Yet just within a while
My heart began to lift

After my first loss
I thought I’d never forget
My heart, it paid the cost
For one of my biggest regrets

She was my first real crush
And I knew she felt the same
But within my panicked rush
I caused her lots of pain

I crossed her out my life
Without a single thought
I put her through such strife
Cause of fears she brought

I knew it wasn’t normal
And even looked down upon
It went against their “morals”
And because of that I became a pawn

I denied my true feelings
And pushed her far away’
Denial was my way of dealing
With the fact I might be gay

So because of that I lost her
Something I thought I’d never forget
But your smile it was the cure
You saved me from regret

So I just wanted to thank you
From the darkness to the light
You helped to pull me through
You have made my life so bright

The sound of your laughter
The smile on your face
My heart you’ve come to master
I love you, my dearest Grace

<_< ya..so wat do u guys think of it [


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I love it is great u have got talent

Posted 1/1/08

chikane_dian3 wrote:


See?? I told you they'd like it


.... it was one comment and thats one of my friends too by the way lol X3..well at least u 2 like it
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Awwww, this is so sad T_T But it was really good!!
Hehe, you're really good at this! I can't rhyme for my life -.- Lol
Nice job =]
Oh, and I think this could become a song or something ^^
Posted 1/4/08

moonwarrior485 wrote:

Awwww, this is so sad T_T But it was really good!!
Hehe, you're really good at this! I can't rhyme for my life -.- Lol
Nice job =]
Oh, and I think this could become a song or something ^^


I agree with her great job ..kinda sad at first though T-T...glad to c it ahs a happy ending
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Posted 1/14/08

Rinako-chan wrote:

It started with a smile
A simple little gift
Yet just within a while
My heart began to lift

After my first loss
I thought I’d never forget
My heart, it paid the cost
For one of my biggest regrets

She was my first real crush
And I knew she felt the same
But within my panicked rush
I caused her lots of pain

I crossed her out my life
Without a single thought
I put her through such strife
Cause of fears she brought

I knew it wasn’t normal
And even looked down upon
It went against their “morals”
And because of that I became a pawn

I denied my true feelings
And pushed her far away’
Denial was my way of dealing
With the fact I might be gay

So because of that I lost her
Something I thought I’d never forget
But your smile it was the cure
You saved me from regret

So I just wanted to thank you
From the darkness to the light
You helped to pull me through
You have made my life so bright


ya..so wat do u guys think of it


Love it! its really good keep up the good work I agree it could fit to a song
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