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Posted 12/30/07
Tragic
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>>Tragic is life but yet we don't know why
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>>Please tell me the meaning of Tragic to u
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>>To me it's what lifes been yet I stand here not to cry
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>> but to tell u why life Has the Tragic or Magic endings I miss the meanin
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>>but yet I still need not with the meanin to what feelin I beleave in
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>>Life has two roads one is Tragic the other is just like Magic
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>>Which did I choose see it was not up to u but to me yet I plainly see the Magic with in me
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>>I just wish u could see what u've done u made me the one who could have fun
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>>When in adversity yet I still go through What u thought I could not what did u plot
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>>That Tragic day I did not know what the blow would be if I could be just not me for one minute
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>>I could show u Tragic Pain u made for me yet I came out of it with a mind made of Magic
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>>U had a World so Tragic u lost all the Magic yet u still thought u had it
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>>I pity u for why I still don't know why could it be that u once were plain
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>>Now u just feel pain that came from that one day u should have made me ur son
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>>But yet to u im not it's plain to see not what u've done
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>>I still see the Tragic day u made me feel the pain that did not stay at bay yet I met the one who Made me fun im not ur son but what a weapon shell which has fell
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Posted 1/4/08

tonyp19 wrote:

Tragic
>>
>>Tragic is life but yet we don't know why
>>
>>Please tell me the meaning of Tragic to u
>>
>>To me it's what lifes been yet I stand here not to cry
>>
>> but to tell u why life Has the Tragic or Magic endings I miss the meanin
>>
>>but yet I still need not with the meanin to what feelin I beleave in
>>
>>Life has two roads one is Tragic the other is just like Magic
>>
>>Which did I choose see it was not up to u but to me yet I plainly see the Magic with in me
>>
>>I just wish u could see what u've done u made me the one who could have fun
>>
>>When in adversity yet I still go through What u thought I could not what did u plot
>>
>>That Tragic day I did not know what the blow would be if I could be just not me for one minute
>>
>>I could show u Tragic Pain u made for me yet I came out of it with a mind made of Magic
>>
>>U had a World so Tragic u lost all the Magic yet u still thought u had it
>>
>>I pity u for why I still don't know why could it be that u once were plain
>>
>>Now u just feel pain that came from that one day u should have made me ur son
>>
>>But yet to u im not it's plain to see not what u've done
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>>I still see the Tragic day u made me feel the pain that did not stay at bay yet I met the one who Made me fun im not ur son but what a weapon shell which has fell


Wows....it was a little confusing at first, but after I read it a couple of times, it was really good and sorta deep. Nice job =]
Posted 1/4/08
Nice poem , glad to see more ppl writing
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Posted 1/5/08
wow that is really good.... there is alot of emotion in it
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Posted 1/19/08
God When I read the part, "Life has two roads one is Tragic the other is just like Magic" I was like thinking of a light and dark path for a second Really nice poem. keep it up!! ^_^
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