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Posted 9/24/09 , edited 9/25/09


I'll wait...10 years...


  • C h a r a c t e r s


  • // Kayu \\
    \\ Rune //
    // Tommy \\
    \\ Nicholas //
    // Cecelia \\
    \\ Will //
    \\ Quill //
    // Janette \\
    \\ Marlin \\
    // Monster \\




  • The Happily Ever After

    \\ End //







  • Part 20* ~ The Happily Ever After




    The cold tears formed into tiny puddles on this barren land, dropping on my shaking fists; did I really wait for 7 years just for this moment? One vague image of Rune, and he wasn't even happy. I couldn't understand how I could wait this long, it all seemed impossible to me at first, but even though there is 3 years left until the day- it feels like I'm just wasting my time... and it all hit me in one little second.

    I layed across the cold barren ground, I felt my whole body pain, I didn't think I could leave this spot until I turned 20. Suddenly, it all made sense to me. I'm a doubter. I've always been one. As much as I wanted to admit it, Mom was right... Rune and I were a thing in the past, if he truly wanted to be with me, HE COULD OF. And all I get was that look of his? All this waiting turned me into someone I didn't even recognize, I wasn't a sane person anymore.

    He was supposed to love me. Why would he make me wait this long anyway...? He never even told me, What would change after 10 years!? He would still be a Time Traveler and always leave me!

    All these thoughts seemed to pour inside my head as his expression pierced threw my heart, and realization dawned.

    Tommy's words didn't even cross my mind... 'Don't give up on us'. It all just seemed like an empty promise all of a sudden.

    My green long hair flowed in the wind, and my blouse whipped threw the air, I grew bigger, my legs grew longer, my arms did too, I was a grown women now.


    10 Years Have Finally Passed *


    Kayu was a young women, in her 20's. Tommy had got a full-time job as a Tutor. They haven't seen each other in years. Both they're lives were busy; and changed. Kayu's Mom had died before she turned 19, she got in a car crash early in the morning as she was getting late for work. Kayu's hopes withered just like the flowers at the Garden, and she was like a totally different person; she had always relied on her Mother back then, Kayu's hope for her Mother seeing Rune again burned intensely... but that flame had died out.

    "Dad, I'm going to buy some groceries, your okay with me taking the car right?" My parents had always sheltered me, and I grown accustomed to asking them for every little thing, even taking the car.

    Her Dad nodded timidly, he still hadn't gotten over it...

    Still, I had kept him alive, I did everything Mama used to do.

    A leisurely I couldn't have anymore, coming home to find Mom and Dad together. Dad was as lifeless as death itself; he just sat on the couch and watched TV until he either fell asleep, or I helped him off to bed.

    I frowned a lot lately, I don't think that would change anytime soon.

    People at the Grocery store had stared at me like I was the living dead, I was lifeless as well. My face always wore an un-emotional expression. It stayed there, and I became so used to it that even when I would smile a small smile, I still frowned on the inside.

    5 months have passed since I turned 20, Yeah, I been visiting the Garden... It was still as the same when I was 17, barren and ugly. I was just making it harder on myself visiting each day... just hoping for a miracle that would save me from this life.

    I also visited Tommy's parents frequently, they were still nice. And Tommy was gone from home most of the time, he left Monster here though. So I wouldn't be so bored all the time...

    It was late at night, around midnight that his parents let me stay the night. Me and Monster played in his backyard, and all I could do was think about the good old days with Tommy.

    Monster whimpered at the moon up in the sky, and I starred up at it while my ankles pulled up and my hands rested flat on them. Monster hadn't been as playful and youthful as before, he was getting old... and wasn't as much fun anymore. These days he just slept and ate, that's all he did.

    He kind of reminded me of myself in a way. .

    I started to doze off, yawning, then the dog ran speedy past me, I blinked bewilderingly, "Wait, Monster! Where are you going?!" Just like those many years ago, Monster had ran off to the Garden again...

    It was like destiny, Monster lead me threw all those memories, Lake Yuna. Quill's Farm, (He had died too.) The Meadow, and then came the Garden...

    Monster whimpered again and his tail stopped wagging, sitting against the tree in the center. It was always there. I trotted over to him very slowly, he raised his head up and met my hand, wanting me to pet him. "There there, don't run away anymore..."

    If a Dog could frown, than Monster just did. He layed there, on his stomach- paws out, he made me so sad looking like that...

    I fell to my knees and sighed with a look of being defeated, I couldn't hold it in any longer, this empty girl I hated to be.

    I wrapped my arms around my stomach, it started to pain all of a sudden, and I was forced to lay flat on the ground, breathing labored, palms out, chest pumping.

    "How could you do this to me... You broke the ultimate promise..." There was no tone in my voice, as my heart, it was dead as well.

    I don't want to go on living in this world without you...

    And then my eyes burned me more and more tears, each with a memory, a meaning, a thousand tears for a thousand memories. Monster whimpered loudly, barking all of a sudden.

    But I was in my own world of Hell, that I couldn't even hear Monster anymore- or anything at all.

    When Monster had licked my cheek without pause, my eyes struggled to open- a bright light just above Monster binded my attention.

    My hand was still laying on the ground, open, when another hand touched mine gently, the person was transparent- a familiar, yet lost feeling I haven't felt in ages... his fingers entwining between mine, tightly closed now.

    "I didn't plan on breaking my promise...Never." My sobs continued though, breathlessly, desperate for words.

    "Forever." Angelically spoken, as always.

    The Garden started to sprout with flowers again, all blossomed within a second of Rune's return. He layed there with me, as close by my side as possible.

    My eyes were full of moisture, so many old feelings, happy sobs, this angel looking at me was really there, "Forever." I promise this, for eternity.








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    I CAN NOT WAAAAIIITTT ZOMG!!!
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    HEH~ IT SHALL BE FULL OF EPIC-NESS
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    WEEEEE!!!
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    Posted 9/24/09
    Suuu wait, question =w=
    She's 17 now and she has the same bike she had when she was 10??
    Wouldn't it be too small?? XD
    Posted 9/24/09 , edited 9/24/09
    Lol...XD
    random un-important question but uh yea..owo
    she still fits....some way...
    OR SHE TRIED TO REALLY BAD? XD
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    Posted 9/24/09
    XDDD
    lolmmmkay then =w=
    Tis all I needed to know =w=

    I STILL LOVE THIS STORYYYYY!
    Posted 9/25/09
    O......M.......G T_T
    THATS SO BEAUTIFUL!! T^T
    "Forever" -
    AHH IM SPEECHLESS D:
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    Posted 9/25/09
    AWWWWWW!!!
    But wait... He's not actually an ANGEL as in Kayu's DEAD right??? T_____T
    Posted 9/25/09
    THATS teh part that leaves you wondering ;]
    AND KYAAAAAA I KNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW <3
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    WHAAAA T___T
    I'ma say NO HE'S NOT AN ANGEL AND SHE'S NOT DEAD T_______T
    That would make me so sad.............
    But it seems like the only logical solution T______________T
    Cuz she was all "ACK I'MA DIE WITHOUT HIM" and the garden suddenly sprouted again when it was barren.... and he was faded-y and stuff T___T
    Posted 9/25/09
    <3
    ;D
    MMM I DUNNO WEN IMA PUT UP TEH ALTERNATE ENDING O;
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    Posted 9/25/09
    Meaning the SAD-BUTT one ?? T___T
    Posted 9/26/09
    BUTT?
    ......O.o

    AND YEA TEH SAD ENDING X_x
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    Yeha I dunno =w=
    I HAS A COLD!
    It's getting to meh head T___T
    NUUU T__T

    Sad Endings are SADDD T___T
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