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By Bob Beeyobee




Standing in the center of the bloody transmutation circle, the very first fact that I understood was that I was not the one they wanted…

One: Moving Into the Neighborhood

Dodgson was a quiet, hard-working country town. People went about their normal business; always calling out cheerful greetings to whoever they passed by.

It was Wednesday. A good day for work. The sky was bright, the weather warm, but a cool breeze kept it comfortable.
On every block, there was at least one person sitting out, playing an instrument.

A lively and fresh, but not rushed, atmosphere hung over the small town of Dodgson. Nothing could possibly spoil this beautiful day!

… At least, hopefully nothing, Jeana, the town priest thought as she stared down the dusty road, at the two figures approaching from a distance.

An air of uncertainty crept to her expression.
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*claims own first post*

I have no idea for a title right now

as i write, feel free to make suggestions!
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Ha, I think this is the first time *that I've seen* you have a female character XD
Even all the townspeople in LoL were men, weren't they?
And I don't count that vampire lady since I started her out XD

Looks interesting so far >:3
I see there's going to be some alchemy in this!

Dodgson sounds almost like a Pleasantville-type place XD
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Posted 10/6/09
Sooo, Genre-wise, what would this be?
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I'm not sure yet...

Yea, i didnt have any ideas for women townsfolk in Briggs

Mining town, all i'm imaginig are men

expect to see a change of that pace in LoL too

I'll have to write further until i have a real idea of what to classify it as
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Mmmkay, for now I'll leave it in the 'unknown' section of the story list :3

And lol what about the miners' wives? XD
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They were there

they just... weren't mentioned... by... the narrator...
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Posted 10/7/09
Right, right ^^

lol anyways, just make sure you let me know when you have a genre and title so I can change the story list :3
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I readed a story about a girl that lived on a mounten and all of the ppl ther worked in the mines
Posted 10/7/09
i played GAMES wiff alchemist towns n stuff like that oWX

WOOO -HIGHFIVE- I READ IT SO FAR
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Talking about alchemy,I FOUND AN AWSOME SONG XDDDD

eng sub:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9g473HIbTHg&feature=quicklist

cool ver that i like most:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QRxn2o1vlu8&feature=quicklist

dance ver:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=akMIfSXJBes&feature=quicklist

ItS AWWW...................SOMMMmmmmmmmMMMMMMMMME
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