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Posted 10/17/09
and it just that you don’t know everything you are for me...

you don’t have any idea all that i’ll do for having you here...

but how to explain with words all that i’m feeling??

how to make you understand...

how fast my heart is beating??

and the most important thing...

how to make you feel…

the same for me??...






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Posted 3/22/10
hey is your poem cut off??? Makes me curious to know what's going on. It would be a wonderful idea as a narrative poem then ur readers would have an idea of what's happening
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Posted 4/7/10
yeahh i think u r right but i'm not so good creating longer stories ("n_n) this was just a frustated thought in my head that i want to take out
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