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Love, Loss and Friendship
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I'm still working on chapter 3 so it'll be up in a bit!
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yessss it is ^^

sorry for thee late reply. D:
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Me: Here's chapter 3 everybody!
The Chief: For once you were actually on time!
Me: I'm always on time, you just tell me to finish things like 3 weeks before I need to!
The Chief: That is so .....true.....
Me:
Maxy the kitty: ShugoCharaLovr doesn't own Shugo Chara or any of it's characters! ~meow~
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Chapter 3- Goodbyes:
[Amu's POV]
As I yelled the clock rung. Oh, no! It was 9:00 and the plane left in 20 minutes! "I have to go!" I said as I turned to leave but Ikuto grabbed my arm. He said "What's the big deal if you miss one or your friends leaving?" I chuckled without humor which surprised him. "Baka, I'm the one leaving! I'm moving to England because of Mama and Papa's jobs." I turned to leave again but Ikuto hugged me close to him. I felt the tears run down my cheeks. I swallowed at the lump in my throat and tried to get out of his arms. This was hard enough without him wanting me to stay here. I ripped myself out of his arms and pushed him away. My tears ran down stronger when I saw the crumpled and hurt expression on his face. I wanted so badly to touch his face and comfort him. He looked at me hopefully when I reached out my hand. "I-I'm sorry!" I kissed him on the cheek and l turned away from Ikuto, the person I really loved.
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Posted 10/24/09
This chapter is kinda short but chapter 4 will be pretty long!
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The book i wrote this in is lost at the moment so when I find it new chapter's will be up!
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Posted 11/14/09
be quick, kay? cuz I'm so eager to read it, ur story is so cool!!!
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Posted 12/3/09
i like it
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Posted 2/4/10
i love it LOL
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ShugoCharaLovr wrote:

The book i wrote this in is lost at the moment so when I find it new chapter's will be up!


You're story is good but aggravates me the chapters are short...
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it's good
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Horrible person here who never updated because I forgetfulness!
So~ I'm not going to lie, I had completely forgotten this story until today when I was looking through my attic and found the book I wrote this story in!

So~ I decided I will keep writing (even if I have sort of lost my "muse") because of the comments here!
Again terribly sorry for everything

Chrapter 4: Old Memories and Old Friends
[Amu's POV]

We were in the plane already and I was going insane! It was so boring! I quickly put on the earphones and began paying attention to the movie playing on the screen in front of me. When I focused my eyes to it, what I saw made my throat clench.
There was a girl that looked like well, me holding hands with a boy that looked ,sadly, like Ikuto.

I made the right choice! , I thought.

But even as I thought it, I noticed the hot tears rolling down my cheeks as I quickly turned away as Suu, Miki and Ran sat on my shoulders reassuringly.

I'm so lucky to have them I thought distractedly as I heard a pilot say we would be landing soon.

I put the headphones back on and watched the credits faded out and once we finally landed I stretched out and made my way over to my parents when I saw something that shocked me;

"H-Haruka-kun?!"
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A/N: I've noticed how terribly short they are and how that, frankly, pisses me off and am currently revising my next chapters and making more to come. But~ for this "chapter" (I'm using the term lightly because looking back, these are hardly even paragraphs in my honset opinion) I'm making it short so I can actually check back continually from now on and get feedback on whether or not people are still actually intesrested, otherwise I'll most likely trash this one and continue with my others. So, just review and let me know if you're still interested and critism is welcomed
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Posted 9/19/11
i love it! XD
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Posted 11/24/11
keep putting chapters up its really good and its my favourite couple in shugo chara which makes it even more interesting
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